MayUr FF: Rishtey Part 13 @ Page 143 - Page 22

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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok I am updating soon........maybe tomorrow morning or earlier
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Posted: 15 years ago
yipee! Does earlier mean tonight?
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ak12

yipee! Does earlier mean tonight?

maybe coz I am typing it
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Posted: 15 years ago
v.nice update
add me in your pm list
waiting for next part
do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=12wndGyldfY[/YOUTUBE]
Nupur was dazed by the banging of the door and she stood still looking at the close door.......

She felt very bad when Mayank left the house without telling anything to Nupur.......she was not expecting much but she was his wife and expected that at least he should tell her that where he is going.......

Nupur sat on the chair and was thinking.....

"Kya wo mujhe itna bhi nahin bata sakte ki kahaan jaa rahe hain...... jab dekho bina bataaye chale jaate hain..... kal raat ko bhi....aaj subah bhi...... kisi ki nayi nayi shaadi hui ho aur dulhan ko akele ghar mein chod jaao..... aaj jab waapas aayenge toh main keh doongi haan.....mujhse theek se baat bhi nahin karte.....maana busy rehte hain par main unki biwi hoon....unhein mujhe bataana hi padega"

Nupur was angry with Mayank's behaviour towards her.....

Mayank and Samrat reached to a sea shore.....very quiet place....they saw a person standing there....wearing big goggles and beard covering most of his face....wearing a black cap.....

Samrat & Mayank: Salaam Aslam Bhai......

Aslam: Hmm....maal ko sahi thikaane par pohonchaana hai.....ye raha pata.....

M: Kaam ho jaayega bhai......

A: Theek hai.......isske baad shaam ko meri jagah par milna.....

M & S: Theek hai bhai......

After taking the slip of address........they took the truck under their custody and left........

In the evening........Nupur in kitchen.........

She was cooking food.......angry......

"Mujhe kya padi hai.......aur mujhe koi kuch bataye to.......office se kab tak aayenge.....koi fark nahin padta......ghar mein akele hoon subah se......khud toh kehke chale gaye.....darwaaza band rakhna.....ye koi gunde ka ghar hai ki police pakad ke le jaayegi.......hadd hoti hai"

Nupur bought the pan down from the gas.....She looked up at the ceiling and took a deep breath......and then again started doing her work........

Mayank and Samrat reached to the red light area....... a place where Aslam Bhai comes usually......

Crowded place......drunk people roaming here and there....call girls wearing a lot of makeup......

Mayank and Samrat reached to a small room......

M & S: Salaam Aslam Bhai......

A: Aao baitho.......ae daaru le kar aa (to another person).....boss ka phone aaya tha......humaare saare log apni apni jagah par pohonch gayye hain.......kuch hi mahino mein hum apna plan shuru karenge.....tum log poori tayaari karke rakhna...... kuch aur khabar aayegi toh main ittelah kar doonga......

M: Theek hai bhai apun sab log toh ek dam tayaar hain......jaisa kaha hai waisa hi hoga......

Then the person brings glasses and bottle of alcohol......

Aslam starts pouring alcohol into the glass........

A: Aur suna Mayank......kal teri shaadi thi......gharwaali theek hai teri......

M: Theek hi hogi.....mere ko kya karne ka hai......

A: Zyaada par mat khulne diyo......warna sab kuch bahar aa jayega.....

M: Jaanta hoon bhai....... seedhi saadhi hai..... chup hi rehti hai

Then after talking Mayank and Samrat came out of the room........

A girl wearing red lipstick.....fully makeuped.....ill dressed stopped Mayank......

She said "Kya be....... bohot dino se aaya nahin haan"

Mayank removed her hand and started moving further......

She again stopped Mayank "Suna.....kisi aur ko le aaya hai tu shaadi karke......mere se mann bhar gaya tera"

Mayank then jerked her hand "Hat saali......dimag kharab kar rahi hai.....tujhe kya... main kisi ko bhi laaun......kisi se bhi shaadi karun"

"Abe saala......tu.....aur shaadi.....bhagwaan bhala kare uss ladki ka jiski zindagi toone barbaad kardi..........apun ka kya hai.....apun toh hai hi iss gandi naali ka keeda.......tu kabhi kisi aurat ko samajh nahin sakta...... kabhi nahin" saying this she went murmuring.......

"Hat saali randi" Mayank left from there.......Samrat also followed him.....

There was RV standing there who heard their conversation...... once he used to lead the gang members but now Mayank is leading them that's why he never liked him......

He thought something and left from there........

It was very late in the night.....Nupur slept with her down on the table itself.....waiting for Mayank.....

Mayank opened the door and came inside......he saw Nupur sleeping on the chair.......her hairs were coming over her face because of the breeze.....

Mayank closed the door and came to Nupur......purity was reflecting from her face which attracted Mayank..... she was completely different from the people by which Mayank was surrounded.....

Mayank stepped forward towards Nupur.......he touched Nupur's forehead.....and Nupur got up.....

Nupur stood up "Aap aa gayye......baithiye main khaana lagati hoon"

Although Nupur was angry with Mayank whole day but seeing Mayank infront of her she forgot all her anger......

Mayank quietly sat on the chair.......Nupur served him the dinner.....then she sat on the chair beside Mayank......

N: Aap ko roz itni der ho jaati hai ?

M: Hmm...

N: Aap mujhe subah kuch batakar bhi nahin gayye.....

Mayank was in no mood to answer any of her question.....

N: Aap.......

Mayank looked at Nupur with his furious eyes.....

M: Chup hogi....tabse bad bad kare ja rahi hai......

Mayank slided the plate in anger and got up from the table......

Tears rolled down from Nupur's eyes hearing such harsh words from Mayank's mouth...... Mayank went to his room....

Nupur was quiet....... tears were rolling down and down.....she cleaned the table and summed up her work and came back to the room........

Mayank was sitting on the bed........ he was doing his work on laptop.....

Nupur entered from the door.....tears were still coming out of her eyes.....she looked at Mayank.....

Mayank looked up at Nupur......

As Mayank looked up.....Nupur looked down and started wiping her tears.....

Ok so updating it after one month or so.....long time but now I will regularly update means once a week....... Do tell me how you liked the part......hating mayank or not.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update....
hope mayank and nupur make up!
wonder why mayank's so rude....contineu soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome update daksha!

I was so waiting for this to continue...

So..Nupur was angry...And then mayank made her cry....

I really really wanted to read further..(I know i am being greedy..but can't help)

Once again, it was awesome...

COntinue soon..pls...

And yeah! about hating Mayank...ahan, not yet, girl.....Mayank ko hate karna is a little difficult you see...

Love,
Akansha
Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Amaazziing Part...
Loved It...
Hope Mayank Will Be Soft Soon...
Poor Nupsi...
Cont Soon..
Thnnxx For PM..
*Sana*😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update daksha i was eagerly waiting for you to update .................... loved it ...........yes i am hating mayank but i am sure they ll make up soon ....... do continue soon ........loved the update lots .............
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome
thanx 4 d p m

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