TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 26

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jnawaz

Shabzzie!! main aagayi!! 😃...i loved...simply LOVED the encounter between Baji and Dutta...it was off the hook!! 👏👏👏/...you totally rocked it!! and dutta still smiling at Naku...aww!! 😳😳😳he's a gorgeous gadha here too 😉😉😉...shorts for aayi sahib 🤣 oh man...im trying so hard not to picture that image 🤣 and Kishore slaps Kaala...woot woot...thanks for the summary...confusion is gone...for now 😛😛😛

JAZ



Finally ur here too ...😛😛
Ooohh i m so glad dat u liked the face off scene ...
i waz kinda confused there ,,dat i didn't do justice to it ..


Yh ,,he is gorgeous gadha here too ....sahi pehchana ..

I had to get kala slapped ....wanted to get it out of my system ...she waz getting on my nerves ..
😡🤣

Ur welcum ...😳
& yaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy ,,,,finally sum 1 who's confusion is gon regarding the side story ....at least 4 nw ..!
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Thanx Sinak 4 ur appreciation ..!😳


Originally posted by: steffroc

loved that krishore slapped kala

would like to read more of Tasha
PS: sorry for late comments
i didnt have net for a week



Hey Rabi ....
where hav u been ,,,so glad to see u ..
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Its okkiee ...i understand ...
me too didn't hav net last week ..
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& thanx 4 liking it ...😳
More TaSha in the next update ..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
fabulous update......luvd it.....plz make datta and baji friends......i want datta and nakku scenes.....nywayz thanks 4 pm and update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Shabz, good that you gave a name, wo pal kab aega?😆
I think I need to read the side story again (from
the beginning to the end) then I will understand😆. Please post some pics na😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nabilamubeen

fabulous update......luvd it.....plz make datta and baji friends......i want datta and nakku scenes.....nywayz thanks 4 pm and update soon.



Tahnx Nabila ....😳
Welll ,,TaSha scenes in the next part ..
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will update soon ..!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Shabz, good that you gave a name, wo pal kab aega?😆
I think I need to read the side story again (from
the beginning to the end) then I will understand😆. Please post some pics na😳



Yh ,,,finally koi naam acchcha laga ,,otherwise i waz thinking of naming it after its end ..🤣
Kaun sa pal kab aayega ...clear karo ..😉

U also confused wid the side story ...nw me also confused ..


yh ..will defo post sum pix ...i waz thinking of doin it ..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
HEY!
So guess who finally caught up on your FF last night.. ALL four parts.. Guess! 🤣
I was soo sleepy last night though, that I read it and went to bed after that. So this comment here is purely out of memory.. Agar kuch bhool jaon toh maafi and it might not be in order either.. 😳
So Baji creeps Nakku out? Why do I get the feeling that he's going to be a "Shahrukh-from-Darr" like character? Obviously NOT to that extreme, but some what like it. So far he's been shown to "get" what he wants through whatever means necessary ( I am going to assume that the "disappearance" of that guy Dutta wanted to buy the land from is because of Baji) and he's stubborn need for possession reaches new heights when he realizes that Dutta wants the same thing as himself. So needless to say that Baji's going to give Dutta a strong fight for Nakku even if Nakku tells him that she'd pick Dutta. It's a matter of pride for him and at that point it won't be about "love" anymore. At least that's what I think.
Kala is "evil" here? *sigh* And she's not even ELEGANT in her approach! BLAH! I don't like this Kala.. My show wali Kala is better! *hmph* 🤣
And the flashback story, I am 90% sure that Bunty is Dutta and Chintu is Baji.. I am so so sure.. But I'll wait to find out for sure.. 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Frndzz ...😃
I know i m a little late with the next part ...but what to do ,,whenever i started writing my mind went blank ...but finally I managed to type it down ..😆
so widout any delay ,,here it is ...
& one more thing ...my side story is bak ....i thought i had done wid it but then i felt there were still sumthing that needed to b cleared ...i hope it doesn't confuse u anymore ..!
hope u all like it ....😳



Part 8

Dutta on reaching his office calls the shop at the mall , the shop owner picks it up ,,Dutta tells him the reason to call to which the shop owner replies that they had been w8ing 4 him return those bags which got switched …Dutta asks 4 the number of Naku to which the shop owner doesn't give ,,he asks him to come to the shop & he would also call her to come here with ur bags …Dutta agrees ,,he tells him that he would there at lunch time as he is free then ..The shop owner tells him that he would call her & fix up the meeting & then give him the call back ..Dutta gives him his number ..

U can see a lot of hustle bustle in Baaji 's office ,,,2day there is an interview session going on as there is a vacany in the accounts department ..the interview is being taken in the meetings rooml by 2 of Baaji employees ,,,Baaji is also there but he is seated a little further away 4rm them with his back to them working on his lappy ,,,but his ears are on them also ,,the questioning is done mostly by them only ,,only sumtimes in between he would ask a question or two ..

One by one the candidates come & go ,,,they discuss in between about them …the next one to cum is a girl ,,she is a simple girl but a very pretty girl ,,,she is wearing a simple shalwar kameez with dupatta on her shoulders in a proper way ..she doesn't look a bit nervous ,,,she looks around the room & comes towards them confidently ….she greets the two men & notices the 3rd man seated a little further ,,she couldn't see his face but she could feel that he waz sum1 important ….she hands out to the interviewers her files ..they see her bio-data & certificates & are impressed ,,they start questioning her & her replies oozed confidence …suddenly Baaji revolves his chair , gets up & comes 4ward .. he asks her a question " You would come to the office in this attire only ,,pointing to her dress .." she gets puzzled by this strange & silly question ,,she looks up at him & her expression freezes ..she can see his face clearly now ..her face goes pale ,,,she just stares at him …so many memories hit her at that moment ,,,Its Baaji ,,she waz seeing after so many years ,,she couldn't believe her eyes …he hadn't recognized her ,,,he luked the same but then no ,,he had become more handsome , masculine 4rm the time she last saw him ,,..the same hazel brown eyes which sparkled & were as sharp as b4 looking keenly at her ..he snaps his fingers in front of eyes " agar aap sapno ki duniya se waapis aaa gayi hain to mere sawalon ka jawan de dein .."

She comes out of her trance ,, his voice had become more manly ,,but she could feel the mock in it …she felt her confidence loosing ,,,she just wished that she hadn't come here 4 the job ,,if only she knew ..

Baaji places a glass of water in front of her ,,she looks up at him again ,,he waz now sitting in front of her & looking at her w8ing 4 her answer ,,she could feel his eyes laughing at her …she takes hold of herself & replies " mere dress ka mere kaam se koi matlab nahi …main kya pehnoon ya na pehnoon use kya farq padta hai ,,,aur rahi baat kaam ki to mujhe apne aap par bharosa hai …"

Baaji looks at her " agar aap ko apne aap par itne bharosa hai to aapko safarish ki kya zaroorat thi ,,,aapko to merit par job mil jaati .."

At that point she looks up at Baaji ,,their eyes making contact ,,, she never leaving his eyes replies bak " Aapne sahi kaha ,, jab mujhe apna aap par itna bharosa hai to mujhe to apne merit par job mil jayegi … mujhse galti ho gayi."

She gets up 4rm her seat ,,taking the files 4rm their hands she sayz sorry to have wasted their time & leaves ..when she reached the door she heard him say " Miss Rano apna appointment letter bahar reception se lete huye jaeeye ga .."

She turns back ,,their eyes making contact again ..

Baaji feels sumthing ,,those eyes were saying sumthing ..he is not sure ..

Outside the cabin Pari lost in her thoughts moves towards the exit ….the secretary calls her from behind to take the appointment letter but she doesn't hear ..suddenly the manager cums & puts a hand on her shoulder ,,,she cums out of her daze ,,he asks her wat happened to her ,,the secretary is calling out to u to take ur appointment letter ,,where r u lost ..she just nods her head & luks at him ..


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Dutta in his office w8ing impatiently for the call ,,,,just then his cell rings ,,its the shopkeeper …he tells Dutta that he had contacted her & asks him to cum at the given time ..Dutta checks his watch …there is still an hour to go …he wished the time would pass fast …after half an hr he leaves his office to go to the mall …he reaches there in 15 mins ,, even at the shop he keeps checking his watch ,,,he scolds himself 4 his teenage behavior …Just then he sees her coming ,,he quickly runs his fingers through his hair ..

He just stares at her ,,,she is luking absolutely gorgeous in a simple pink shalwar suit wid her hair open ..she finally notices him ,,her expressions change into anger …she walks fast towards him & sayz : Tum apne aap ko samajhte kya ho ..

Dutta : Maine kya kiya ..

Naku : Ek to tum mere bags le gaye ,,aur itne dino waapis karne ka khayal nahi aaya …& above all yesterday I followed u like crazy but u just ignored me ..

Dutta in shock : Wo tum thi …kal rickshaw pe ..wo maine socha k ..

Naku cuts him : Kya socha ..mujhe pata hai u ignored me intentionally ..

Dutta : No no …..maine sach mein socha k wo tum tum nahi thi …

Naku : Kya ,,main main nahi thi …

Dutta : haan ,,nahin ,,wo ..

Thye were both standing there arguing when 2-3 children who r playing & running around bump into Dutta & pushes him forward …Dutta getting off balance kinda falls on Naku pushing her behind like a hug ..their bags falling 4rm their hands ..Naku gets more furious & pushes him back ….she points her finger at him telling dat u did this intentionally...She pointingly moves forward & trips on the bags & falling forward in Dutta arms & making him fall back ….he falls on his back wid Naku on top of him ..

they both r in a shock,,, her hair is all over his face …with one hand on her waist he removes it 4rm the other hand …he is luking deeply in her eyes ..they can feel each other breaths on their faces ,,,their heart pounding fast against their chests .. Dutta hands go around her waist to steady her …a strange sensation goes through Naku body …they share a very sweet eye lock …

There is a song playing in the nearby shop ..

(Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai

Kuchh Duriyaan Najdikiyaan, Kuchh Hans Padi Tanhaayiyaan

Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai

Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

Kya Yeh Bahaar Hai, Kya Intjaar Hai

Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad)

looking deep in each other eyes ..they r so lost in each other almost unaware of their surroundings .. suddenly they hear giggling sound …it's the children ,,who r looking at them & laughing …Naku hurriedly gets up & so does Dutta ,,his hands still on her waist ,,,she pulls apart 4rm him but then wid a small shriek goes near him again ,,,her hair is struck on his shirt button …she tries to untangle it wid her fingers ,,her fingers r shivering a little wid nervousness …Dutta is staring at her face enjoying her expressions ..She looks up to him ,,their eyes meet ..not meeting up wid his intense look she lowers her gaze ,,,her eyes trembling wid shyness …lips shivering ..she is feeling so embarrassed her cheeks getting all flushed …she tries to pull break her hair but Dutta puts his hands on her fingers ,,she feels current passing through her & she quickly takes back her hand out of his grasp …Dutta slowly untangles the hair out of his shirt button ..after doin this he removes a strand of her which is coming on her face & thrusts its behind her ears ..he brings his face closer to her & sayz " Ur so beautiful.."Naku is taken aback ,,,she tries to get out of his hold ,,Dutta removes his hand 4rm her waist ,,,he is still staring at her ..she picks up the bags & almost runs to the exit door.. Dutta picks up his bag & runs after her …& starts walking wid her ..

He calls out to her : Suno ,,tumne bataya nahi ..

Naku looks at him while walking : Kya ,,,nahi bataya ..

Dutta : Tumhara naam kya hai ..waise mera naam Dutta Patil hai ,,,suna hoga ..

Naku stares at him …Dutta smiles at her …she just walks past him widout replying ..

Dutta calls 4rm bhind : Achcha ye to batao k hamari agli takkar kab hogi..

But Naku leaves …Dutta looks around then suddenly goes inside the mall to the shop & after much coaxing gets her phone number 4rm the shopkeeper..!

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Chintu is on his way back home after spending sum time at Antara's place ..he gets a call that Kishore has met with a accident ..he rushes to the hospital …Kishore is still in the OT ..Kala & Sups r there too …he asks her what & how it happened …she tells that she doesn't know ..she also got a call about Kishore accident …After w8ing 4 some time in the lobby …the doctor comes & sayz that Kishore condition is critical & he has very less chances to survive & that he has asked to see Chintu ..

Chintu goes inside …he almost breaks down seeing his father in this condition but gets hold of himself ..He goes near & calls out to him in a slow voice ….Kishore slowly opens his eyes & faintly smiles at him ,,tears r streaming down 4rm his eyes …he wants to say sumthing to Chintu but is not able to ..Chintu takes his hand in his ..Just then Kala & Sups also enter the room ..Kishore sees Kala ,,he points 2wards Kala & Sups & tries to say sumthing to Chintu ..Chintu who is holding bak his tears tries to understand wat he wants to say ….Kala hurriedly cum 4wards to the other side of Kishore ..with tears in her eyes she sayz wat do u want to say Kishore ,,tell me …Kishore stares at her & is now breathing with difficulty …Kala takes his hand & asks what r uu trying to say ..Kishore looks at Chintu & then at Kala & Sups …suddenly his hand falls lifeless 4rm Chintu hands …the life machine show a straight line ..Chintu calls the doctor ,,who cums & after examining sayz that he is no more ..!


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So dats all 4 nw..

Plzz do comment ..

Thanx..😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
omg omg shabzzzzzz😆👏👏👏👏afta agessss u updated and i luved it all da scenes of dutta and naku omg😍u r just 22222 gud but mujhe pata hain u r gnna update afta a week or sooo😡😭but plzzzzz update asap😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
GR8 update. Dutta got Naku's no. Naku is going to be shocked n most probably annoyed
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Posted: 15 years ago
ye bacche bhi na.....
hey dear perfect song selection.
plz iss baar jaldi update karo na........... plz
kya kabhi baji jaan payega "miss Rano" ki asliyat?????????
to wo kya react karega?
aur jab usse pata chelega ki dutta uski pari se pyaar karata hai to??????????

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