..Pyar dosti aur mohabbat'MJHT FF'..Ep 6 pg 51 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: cuteangelgirl95

awesomeeeee intro ash

loved it to the core
continue asap
n thanx 4 the pm

hey dear i,m really glad that you liked the intro!!
thanks for the super duper comments yaar😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

Ash!!!!!!!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗
my jaanu ur a total sweetheart..........*blows a kiss*
I so love d concept and bhushan sisters rock!!!!!!!
do cont soon!

luv Adz!

Hi ADZ!!
tumhe psand aagaya that really counts!!
thanks for the shooo shweet comments yaar!!😳😳😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

i am glad you started a ff

i really love it
magical mayur, januable sajan, cute benia and sweet adhani
wow
looking forward to it
sounds exciting
great intro though
continue soon
and do pm me whenever you update
luv
mahima

hi Mahima OHH thanks for the lovey dovey comments!!😳😳
you are greattt yaar!!
and i,m really glad that you liked the intro!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Alini-mayur

lovely start.....

continue soon.....
and add me to u r pm list...plzzzzz

thank yuo very very very much buddy!!😃😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

hiii ash awesoooooooooome start dear
mindblowing
very interesting
loved it
plz continue soon

love
deepa

hi deepa!!
Thanks for the awesomeeeeeee comments yaar!!
i,m glad to hear that you liked the intro!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: cutekins

intro sahi tha

jaldi update karna dear
plzzzz
loved it to the core
plzzzzzz
thanx 4 d pm

hey thanks cutekins!!
i,m glad you liked it!!
And don,t worry jadli update kardoongi😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: unnatia

Love the concept! Add me to the pm list!

glad you liked the concept
Thanks for the comments yaar!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Pyaar,Dosti aur Mohabbat

Episode 1
Finally the Sun rose on the streets of Mumbai.People are getting ready to get out of their homes and rush to their offices but our coolest Kids of Mumbai are getting ready for their another fun and enjoying day at their very own college that is The Excel College.First we will check the house of the hero of the Excel college and it looks like someone is snoring in his bad.Ok his clock is going to ring and finally it rang and the guy who was continously snoring had finally woke up.Guys his face is still not shown.
"OH GOD!!AAj to main gaya agar time se nahi phoncha!!sirf pandra minute reh gaye hain aur main abhi tak bed pe parha hoon i should hurry"says that Guy and so he rushed towards his washroom and took a shower and finally he has dressed up and god he is looking his charming face in the mirror!!Now we can finally see his face and that guy is none other than the charming,the handsome and the cool dude of Excel!!
Samrat Shergill!!
"Wow Dude!!tu hamesha ki tarah charming lag raha hai bas ye januable smile hamesha mere chehre pe rahe!!"idea!!mumma ko kehta hoon mujhe nazar ka teeka lagadain taake phir mujhe kisi bhi ki nazar nahi lage gi"Says Samrat with his cute smile.
He went downstairs towards his parents and then..
"Waah mera beta kitna pyaara lag raha hai!!tujhe ksi ki nazar na lage!!"says Mr,s shergill.
Agar aap chahti hain ke aapke bete ko kisi ki bhi nazar na lage to jaldi se woh nazar waala teeka lagadain mom warna saari ladkiyaan mujhe dekhti hi rehjaayaingi"says Samrat with a wide grin.
"haan haan barkhudaar!!hamesha un ladkiyon ke peeche hi bhaaga karo isse acha tum parhaayi pe dhyaan dete to aak kahan phonch jaate"Says Mr shergill in an angry tone.
Looks like Samrat,s father was not satisfied with his habbits but Samrat was always stubborn and would never give up his habbits just for the sake of his father.
"Papa don,t be so rude to me you know that my bike,basketball and fame is all that matters to me.I just can,t stay away from these things"Says Samrat.
"Kaash.Kaash teri life main koi aisa aajaye jo tujhe jeene ke asal maine.life ki asal meaning batade"Says his father with a worrying thought.
"Oh Dad!!Don,t worry wo jo bhi hai jahan bhi hai jaldi aayegi.Mujhe hamesha uska intezaar rahe ga aur jiss din wo aayegi meri life ek naya track,ek naya mour le legi and she will just change my life.Uske aane se i,m sure ke meri life aur achi hojaayegi kyunke wo ek ladki nahi balke usse bhi zyada hogi.Bilkul ek Angel ki tarah"Says Sam
And just Sam was speaking we can finally see a girl coming out of her college and suddenly her friend called her from behind "Gunjan, Gunjan!! tum apni book bhool gayi ho"and so she turned around.So guys this girl was none other than the sweet, the innocent and the shy Gunjan Bhushion!!
"aray Thanks Kanji agar main book bhool jaati to apna assignment complete nahi kar paati Thanks!"said Gunjan with her bright Smile.
Gunjan start walking towards the streets of Morena,A small town where she lived with her sister.Usually this town was very quiet as there were not much people here and Gunjan was usually alone in her thoughts,thinking about her future,thinking about her sister and as she was thinking she suddenly rememberred that
"OH NO!!main to bhool hi gayi aaj Di ka play tha aur wo khatam hone waal hoga.Oh no,I missed it.Di ko kitna bura lag raha hoga mujhe wahan abhi jaana chahiye"And so Gunjan rushed towards the area where The play was going on but when she reached there,she found out that the last scene was still going on.
In this scene of the play,we can see a girl who is running towards her hero and finally she hugged him.The girl is fully dressed in Indain bride,s clothes and she is looking too much beautiful.After hugging she finally turned around and now we can finally see that beautiful hgeroine of the play who was none other than Nupur Bhushan!!
"Aur iss tarah Raj aur Simran mil jaate hain"the narrator said this as Nupur turns around.Finally the play ended and everyone clapped and hooted for Nupur.Nupur was, however,searching for her little sister in the big audience and when her eyes spotted her,she rushed towards Gunjan and hugged her tightly."Gunjannnnn!!Tu nahi jaanti ke aaj main kitni khush hoon!!"Says the gorgeous Nupur
"di di di!! main jaanti hoon ke tum kitni khush ho kyunke tumhaare chehre pe wo khushi saaf saaf dikhaayi de rahi hai.Aur aaj to tum aasmaan se utri hui koi Pari lag rahi ho.Tumhe kisi ki nazar na lage"says Gunjan.
"pata hai Gunjan aaj jaise play main Main Raj ke saath apni Dunya basaane chali gayi thi waise hi mujhe apni iss life main Apne Real Raj ka intezaar rahe ga.Gunjan jab wo aayegana main usse jhaat se pakarloongi taake wo kabhi mere haath se na chutt paaye😆😆"says the excited Nupur.
"DEkhna di tumhari ye khuwaish zaroor poori hogi tumhara Raj kumaar tumhe zaroor mile ga"Says Gunjan."Aur dekhna Gunjan tere liye bhi koi chun ke Raj kumaar aaye ga.Hawa ke jhoke ki tarah tujhe apne saath uraa ke jaaye ga"Says Nupur teasingly😉😉.
After saying this both the bhusion sisters were drown in thier own world,thinking about their own prince whether they will come or not.
OK guys ye thi aaj ki update.I hope you all liked it and really sorry ke iss update main mayank ki entry nahi ho paayi but promise that mayank,s entry will be "dhamaakedaar".Ok guys tata.take care.Hope to see you tomorrow and please press the like button if you liked the update.Love Ash
Precap:Mayank,s Entry and a song sequence on both the couples😉
Edited by ash_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
that was really really nice
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Ash Sweetie, yeh part bohot hi cute tha!!
It is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!!!!
loved Sajan in this!!!!
cannot wait to see mayanks entry!!!
bohut acha hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ab jaldi jaldi next part ki tayari karo!! hehe

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