My Untouched Desire (Mayur) pt 18 pg 88

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Posted: 15 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: -afsha-
It was really senti abt Nups past
Hated her dad

Liked the way Adi Suhaani n Nups frndshp became so strng

Liked that Mayu was falling for Nups n was hatig that Nups didny looke at him but at sumone else

Loved it

Hop Mayu's plan fails or somthg happens

Liked Benji n Nups relation also

Everyone cares abt her a lotttttttttttttttttt

Liked Adi's Blue Mania n Ben Adi dostana

Loved the whole

Keep updating jaldi jalid plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

awwwwwww
i am so glad u updated the highlights
thanks for loving everything so much
i'll try updating soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

#122

hey really well girl...
i m so much falling in this ff,,,
conti soon and pm me too

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Pooja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Dpkavasudeva
hey really well girl...
i m so much falling in this ff,,,
conti soon and pm me too

thank u so much
i'll def pm u
i am glad u liked it so much

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Posted: 15 years ago

#124

IMPORTANT - Ok friends, here is the next part, but an important thing, i know you all want to have more of Mayank and Nupur scenes, and hopefully, there will be more of them from the next part. I had wanted the story to first settle down, which i think shall be completed in this part. The next part shall be promising with more of the couple scenes, i'll try my level best.

Part 4

Finally, it was the day of submitting the project reports to the professor. Nupur, Adhiraj and Suhaani were very happy with the outcome of the project. It had been an amazing one, n they were expecting top scores for it. The other lectures began and ended quickly, while the trio was excited for their submission. It was lunch time, Nupur had come to the canteen to get some coke n snacks for herself n her friends, who were waiting for her in the garden. She ordered the counter guy, n decided to write something, while her order got ready. She opened her laptop, n her mind n heart traveled to the other world, the world which belonged to her, the world of her imagination. Suddenly she heard her name, n she knew the order was ready. She kept her laptop in her bag, n collected her order. As soon as she turned, she bumped into a hard figure, and was abt to fall, which made her close her eyes. All her food fell down, but luckily, she was clinging to something, n was in mid-air. She immediately encircled her support, tightly with her arms. Thats when realisation hit her, it was someone, a guy, it was him, tht one unique guy, but her heart feared to name that guy.

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Mayank came to the canteen, he knew it was the time to execute his plan. He recalled his words to Vivek, who was hiding nearby.

"Vivek, remember, the file is red coloured, it is in her bag, yeah, i have seen it, thats the one, u need to be quick in taking it, while i distract her, i want no mistakes, otherwise u know me"

Mayank saw her sitting on tht table, she was writing something in her laptop, n she looked lost. Sometimes, unconsciously, she wud move her hand to tug behind a strand of her beautiful hair. She wud ocassionaly frown, or twitch her nose, or pout, or twist her mouth, n this made her look cute and adorable. It felt as if she was oblivious of everything around her, lost somewhere else, and she jerked all of a sudden, when her name was called. Mayank came out of his thoughts, signaled to Vived, and headed in her direction, only to hit into her as she turned. Mayank noticed she was about to fall, and involuntarily, his hands went to her waist to save her. The food fell from her hands, n due to the suddenness of the event, she closed her eyes, fear visible on her face, n immediately brought her hands forward to encircle around his neck. He felt a shock run down his body as soon as her arms came in contact with his neck. Then he felt a warm sensation around his body. Her skin felt smooth as he felt hers, n he inhaled in her deep scent.

The canteen was filled with just a few people, who ignored this scene, but Mayank, he felt flying in the heaven. He bent his face a little, only to feel her breath on his face. Being so close to her, he did not want to let go. The world had stopped for him right there. He smiled seeing her face from so close, the face which hadnt allowed him to sleep peacefully since the last few days, the face, which he knew was prettier, and more beautiful than God's any other creation. He observed her for a while, taking in the beauty of her eevry feature. Her twitched chin, her rosy lips, her cute nose, that sweet forhead, those pink cheeks, n finally, those eyes. He just wished she opened them once, so that he cud stare into them, from so close. Without amy barriers of all the materialistic things. Sudddnely, he saw her eyes move, n he focussed his gaze on them, so that he didnt miss anything. But to his bad luck, someone pushed past them, he lost his balance, n they both landed on the floor, side by side.

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The moment which Nupur had been wishing for came suddenly, just when she was about to open her eyes. They both landed on the floor, as someone pushed them. She immediately left him, grabbed her bag, n went running away, without giving one glance in his direction.

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The way she ran out, confused Mayank to the core, n he was about to call her, when he saw Vivek going out of the canteen, giving him a thums-up, and now did Mayank recall his plan, Vivek had managed to get the file, n immediately putting it in his bag, he had gone off, he was not supposed to meet Mayank, until college got over. Mayank shook away the disturbing thoughts he had been having about Nupur, and smirked thinking about his plan.

"Suhu, you're in for a big loss. I am sorry, but Mayank Sharma hates losing, n u shud've known that. Now this is what i call, 'ek teer se do nishane'. You're doomed Nupur Bhushan, better luck next time".

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The class started, and everyone's project was read on the spot by the professor. He was quite impressed by some students, but kept saying that none of them had been to the level where he had expected them to be. Mayank sat their enjoying the time (seniors were also present as they were involved too) Nupur's group was the last one, but Mayank knew patience always paid off. Soon, the professor called out to Nupur, n Adhiraj n Suhaani mutterd good wishes to her. On her way to the professsor, Nupur put a hand in her bag, n she was shocked. She was shocked beyond limit. Mayank was waiting for just this one look, n he high-fived with the rest of his friends sitting there. He knew the drama wud begin now,

"Haan, Miss Nupur Bhushan, please present ur project file?", the professor said,

"Uh, wo, wo sir, wo file...", Nupur stuttered, while Adhiraj and Suhaani exchanged worried looks, the whole class started whispering,

"CLASS, SILENCE! Miss Bhushan, do u have the file with u?", the professor asked with certain anger,

Nupur glanced at Mayank, with a blank face, and then she saw Adhiraj and Suhaani with tension visible on her face, then she lowered her head, n finally spoke to the professor,

"I am sorry sir, but i dont have the file, and i cant submit the project",

The professor got real angry at this sentence,

"Miss Bhushan, do u know what are u speaking. The score marking of this project is so important for ur final results, and u do not have the file, did u even make a project?",

Nupur only nodded with her head still down,

"Then its highly irresponsible of u not to have brought it. Do u realise what effect will this have on the scoring of ur groupmates who worked so hard for it, i am sue u dont, otherwise u wud have been little responsible. But i cant let the others suffer because of u, Mr Adhiraj, Miss Suhaani, and Mayank my boy, u three are given two extra days for the project, u will be scored on that basis. And as for Miss Nupur, she will be given a fail. I dont know whats up wid u children these days, u have no focus on ur goals. Make-up, fashion, boys, these are all u girls thing about. I had thought of u as an exception, from what the principal said, but it looks like u too are one of them Miss Bhushan. Talk about comparing yourself to ur brother, his reputaion is not gonna earn u any score, u r not even 1% like him Miss Bhushan, not even a single percent. I wonder if u really are his sister"

Nupur had heard every word with patience in her heart, but the last words, made her flinch. A lone tear escaped her eye, as she rushed out of the classroom. This was why she always feared of being comapred to Uday Bhai, because someday, she might not live upto the expectation, n it wud arise the same question, was she really his sister? Did she have even a single gene like his? Being cut off from Uday Bhai was what hurt her more, coz she had always considered him as an essential part of her life, without whom, her survival was in danger. After coming here 7 years back, leaving her old home, n trying to forget the painful past, Uday's love was what helped her survive. She still doesnt know why, but she knows the fact that she had always loved Uday more than Diya, even though they both had offered her the same thing, love, but still, she felt more secure with Uday Bhai's love. The professor's words pierced her, they made her realsie that she wasnt Uday's real sister, n this hurt her like hell.

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As soon as Nupur rushed out of the class, Adhiraj and Suhaani's anger was beyond limit. They immediately went to the professor,

"Sir, we both wud like to be failed along wid Nupur, u can score Mayank for the assignment", Adhiraj said angrily as he too left the class,

"Yes sir, please put a fail to me too, anyways it wont matter, since this is the grade i am used to, so now if u wud excuse me", saying this, Suhaani gave an angry and accusing glance in Mayank's direction, and went away.

Mayank sat their motionless, shock all over his fave. He hadnt expected this, the profession's reaction was not what Mayank had planned. He remembered Adhiraj's and Suhaani's anger, he knew Suhaani wasnt angry for losing the bet. There was more to it, and Riddima, the tear that had come out from her eyes, didnt escape his notice, n as it flowed down, it felt as if his heart was being pierced by a sword. Mayank felt as if he had been slapped hard in the face, he turned to look to his friends. While Anny and Chako showed him a thumbs up, he smiled a little. But when he saw Sumit and Simran, Sumit gave him a disgusted look, and turned away his face, and Simran too had shaked her haed at him. Mayank felt the burden of the mistake he had done, and first time in life, he wasnt happt after winning a bet, but he cudnt figure out the reason of it.

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Adhiraj and Suhaani reached the place where they knew Nupur wud be, the fountain in the garden. It was situated at a distance in the garden, n they knew she loved the peace n beauty of that place. They went there, and saw her sitting, with her head in her knees. They knew she had beencrying, their heart just knew it. They went to her, and sensing someone near her, she looked up. Her eyes were red and swollen due to the amount of crying. They just moved forward, and hugged her from either side. Nupur kept her head on Adhiraj's shoulders as she too hugged both of them. Adhiraj and Suhaani were shocked at the amount she had been crying, they knew she was hurt, due to the humiliation, due to the mention of her brother, but why did it hurt her over the limit, was beyond their thinking. Little did they know the actual reason. They sat in the same position for about some time, and now that Nupur was composed a little, did she wipe her tears and suggested they move on. No words were used, no speeches spoken, they just understood each other. Adhiraj and Nupur got up, but Suhaani lay down instead, and tried pulling Nupur down with her bag. Adhiraj and Nupur both glared at her, while she just gave her cute smile, and opening her both arms wide. So both of them moved to each side, and tried getting her up, pulling her one hand each. They managed easily, but as Suhaani got up, there was a loss of balance, and she fell down taking Nupur's bag down wid her.

'PLOP'

Along wid Suhaani falling down, came out something else from Nupur's bag, which caught the trio's eyes. Adhiraj moved forward and picked it, and showed it to Nupur, with the same questioning look that Suhaani had.

Nupur was shocked to see Adhiraj holding the red file of their project.

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Mayank came out of the class, and was immediately pulled by Vivek into an empty classroom.

"Look Vivek, thank u very much, the plan went quite well, and here's ur payment but...", Mayank started to speak, but was cut in by Vivek,

"Mayank, i am very sorry, plz forgive me, i didnt know how it happened, it was just... the plan was going perfect, but at the last moment, everything changed, and i didnt see it because i immediately put it in my bag, but trust me, it wasnt my fault, i did exactly like u said, but please forgive me Mayank, plz, i wont ever do a mistake again, but plz forgive me this time..."

"What are u talking about?", Mayank asked,

"This (Vivek took out something, and handed it to Mayank), i got her laptop instead of the file, the mistake was due to the red colour, sorry Mayank, so sorry", Vivek was literally crying,

Mayank was shocked beyond his imagination, this was Nupur's laptop here, not her file. Then where was the file, if it was with Riddima, then why didnt she give it to the professor, what was happening here, he was confused, n he knew where to find the answers. He told Vivek to go, and he himself rushed outside, and met a staff of the college,

"Shambhu Kaka, have u seen Suhu, or Adhiraj, or..... Nupur?"

"Areh Mayank Baba, i dont know about Suhaani beti or Adhiraj beta, but Nupur bitiya, i saw her running towards the garden, she seemed in quite hurry", Shambhu informed him,

"Thank u KaKa", Mayank also went towards the garden.

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Nupur's face turned pale as she saw the file in Adhiraj's hand. She looked up to see the question in Adhiraj's and Suhaani's eyes. She knew it was time to answer,

"Uh, wo, Adhiraj, Suhu, actually, i'll tell u the truth. Suhu, remember our conversation that day when we were going back home, (Nupur started to narrate it to Adhiraj, not mentioning the part about Adhiraj),

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FLASHBACK:

"Ok Nupur, we'll talk abt it later, n i'll think hard abt it, promise, but atleast listen to something....", Suhaani said,

"Haan Suhaani, bol na", Nupur said,

"See Nupsi, this might come as a shock to u, but... Mayank Sharma is my brother, my elder brother"

Nupur was surprised,

"Suhu, i am surprised, i didnt know about it, but there is nothing to be shocked about this", Nupur smiled,

"But Nupsi, there is more to it. I want to tell u that, and i hope u dont hate me after knowing this. See, your entry in the college was unique, on ur first day here, u beat Mayu, the star of Divine College, who had never leart to lose, he lost, to you. This made you really special, for me, not because you defeated my bro, but because you were different, and unique. I know that my brother is the best, but still you managed to beat him, and that was when i really wanted to be your friend, coz i knew you were special. But things started in the wrong way, and ultimately, i landed myself in a bet with Mayu. He wanted to harm you, and i wanted to protect you, and that was it. I had already wanted to become your friend, and this bet gave me one more motive to be with you. And so our friendship started, but slowly and gradually, i started liking ur presence with me, u became a part of my routine. I hope my sexuality doesnt come in danger after saying this, i mean i cant risk my straightness, but, but, ok Suhaani, speak it, but i like.... fell in love with you. And now, after this horrible incident, i realised how much your trust means to me, and to you. I realised its importance, and hence, i am telling u the truth, before someone else tells about it to u. I dont want to lose you Nupur, please can you forgive me"

"Suhaani, i will be your friend, always, no matter what happens, nothing can come between us, i promise", Nupur said,

"Thanks Nupur, i am glad ur heart is so big, that i can fit here even if i grow more fat, and then also, it will still have lots of space for tht fatty Adhiraj, n the rest of the world. Haan, one more thing Nupur, Mayu has been keeping silent for recently, and i fear he plans something big, so please take care of yourself, please do", Suhaani said,

"Dont worry Suhaani, he wont harm me, i am sure it'll be some small prank"

FLASHBACK ENDS

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Adhiraj looked angry, Suhaani saw his anger and she shivered. Nupur guessed the situation, and she thought she needed to handle it. Nupur remembered how Suhaani had come the next Suhaani had come jumping and hopping, saying yes, she did love Adhiraj. Nupur had promised to help let her know, if Adhiraj also loved her. And to her joy, Nupur had noticed Adhiraj getting jealous when Suhaani got close with any guy of the class, but he was happy other times, coz Suhaani was always with both of them. But Nupur needed to be sure before she rose Suhaani's hope for this relation, and she was thinking of some good plan for this. Anyways, coming to now, Nupur needed to control Adhiraj's anger.

"Suhu, i wanted to tell u one thing, mujhse kaha to theek hai, but avoid saying i love you to any other girl, verna teri straightness ko main nahi bacha paoongi, and haan dont say it to any other guy also, verna uski straightness ko Adhiraj se koi nahi bacha payega, kyun, sahi kaha na?", Nupur laughed loudly at her own comment. Suhaani blushed furiously and lowered her head, while Adhiraj tried to hide his blush under anger.

"Nupur, dont change the topic, and give us answers about this file", Adhiraj said, with fake anger, while Nupur smiled at his attempts to hide his blush,

"The story continues like this, today morning, in the canteen, your brother met me, n he distracted me, while one of his friends tried to take away the file from me. I came out of the canteen and saw my laptop missing. I knew something was fishy, and your brother's plan hit my mind. If he did not think twice about his and Suhaani's score in order to win his bet, then what he could do next if his this plan backfired, scared me to hell. I realised that it did not matter to him that how many people are getting hurt, while he wins his bet. So, after thinking a lot, i finally decided to let him win this one. And ultimately, i did not submit the project to the professor", Nupur ended,

"Nupsi, i am so sorry, i hate myself for all this, and i hate my brother even more for this act. Not even in my dreams had i thought that he would take such a step, i am sorry, Nupsi, Adhiraj, please forgive me", Suhaani said,

"Suhu, i have nothing against you, trust me, i still love you like i used to before. Nothing has changed for me, sachi. And please dont hate your brother for such a silly reason, after seeing the professor's reaction, i think your brother knew what he was doing. He knew the professor would spare you three, and i would be the only one suffering. My guess is that his motive was only to get me a fail, but the professor went over the board, and said all that in the class. I dont think your brother should be blamed here. Just relax, and forget everything, because i have forgiven him, so should you, and lets go n chill out, ok. And Suhu, please dont ever mention all this to him, please, for me", Nupur smiled, Suhaani nodded and forced a smile, and the three of them moved out of there.

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Mayank stood shocked behind the bushes, he had come there, only to find the file in Adhiraj's hand, and Nupur telling them,

"The story continues like this, ..............................................., i did not submit the project"

His whole body had gone numb, and his face was pale. So Nupur already knew about my plan, i am sure then that she knew about the bet too. And Suhu, Suhu has totally turned herself over to Nupur. Suhu said, she sais she hates me. How can you Suhu, how can u hate Mayu, your own brother, you also hate me Suhu, like Sumit and Simran, and... and.. like Nupur. I know Nupur asked you not to hate me, and i am even sure she herself hates me to the core. But, even then, how can she forgive me so easily, how? Nupur Bhushan, what are you made up of, i have been trying to make your life worse than hell, right from the first day, but you, you just walk away, forgiving me, in a few seconds. You go with my sister, as if nothing ever happened, how can you be so strange Nupur, how? Why doesnt my presence effect you like it effects others, why? Infact, things are just the reverse of what they should be, instead of your life becoming a hell, i am living in hell. Instead of you being effected by me, i am worse effected by you. Why Nupur, why doesnt your thought leave my mind even for a fraction of second? Just when i think i managed to push out of my mind, you come in front of my eyes, and the same thing all over again? You have changed my life Nupur, but how can you do that, you dont even notice me, you dont even think of taking my name while talking about me, you refer to me as Suhaani's brother [ refer to Nupur's words when she asks Suhaani not to hate Mayank, oopsies, i mean, not to hate her brother ;-) ], dont i deserve even a little of your attention, am i so useless? I go crazy watching you, just to stare in those beautiful eyes once again, and i get restless, when you dont even give a look in my direction. I've seen you chat happily to Sumit, heck, even Simran has been talking to you, so why not me Nupur? Why do you always ignore me? (Waise, come to think of it, you have never even talked to Anny and Chako, infact, you dont talk to anyone, except Adhiraj and Suhaani, you havent talked to any other guy or girl, even if they try to talk to you, Suhu and Adhiraj do the talking part, but this makes me happy, Sumit to already booked hai, and Adhiraj, i can handle him easily, oh sorry guys, socha thoda break le loon, but now i'll get back to my self-pitying mode, tada) Where was i, ummmm, haan! Why am i saying all this, when i know you are not listening, because i want an answers to all these questions. I want answers, so that i can stay in peace, why do you effect me so much Nupur?

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Mayank had shouted a lot on himself (The last paragarph was what he shouted n screamed, thankfully, he had the sense of not pulling his hair, and beating himself. Areh, mere hero ki looks kharab ho jati, to no one wud've even noticed him, heroine ke pass already reserved side hero hai, wo bhaag jati, uski behen bhi kisi ko dhoond hee leti, and then, is gham mein hero ban jaata devdas number ...., ummm, lemme think,
devdas no 1 - woh original book wala,
devdas no 2 - some great actor who played the role in purani devdas, i dont know his name, sorry,
devdas no 3 - apna Shahrukh Khan, SRK, what a movie man, loved it, hehehe?
devdas no 4 - dev d, modern devdas, abhay deol, i hated tht one, sorry

this finally gets us to Mayank, who will be the devdas no 5, lucky i guess, but u see,
mera ff to gaya na paani mein, hero devdas, heroine running champion, and baki sab side actors will increase their fees, bachao mujhe)

AUTHOR'S NOTE- Guys, all this Devdas thing, it was just from a fun angle, i hope i've hurt no one, coz i never intended too. Still, i am very sorry if any one was offended, and i just hope u all take it as a funny part and enjoy reading it.

Finally, our Devdas no 5, the Mayank Sharma, after having shouted at himself, was walking in the empty corridoors of the college (chhutti time tha, everyone had gone home), just when he bumped into someone. He cudnt balance himself, and fell down, along with the other figure. He managed to sit down, and was quite frustrated on that person n was about to shout in anger, when he saw the other person. Nupur was sitting next to him, wincing in pain, a rubbing her arms and head.

"Nupur, are u alright?", he asked with worry all over his face, and was just about to move forward to see if she was hurt, when she immediately backed off n got up.

"Huh, i am sorry for coming like that, and i am ok, actually, i just wanted to ask... ki... if i can have my laptop back, please?", she said it all in one go, not even looking at him.

Mayank was amazed at her,

"But why do you think i have your laptop?", Mayank questioned her,

Nupur was caught off gurard, she hadnt thought about this, and was trapped.

"Uh... wo... wo na... wo actually... haan, wo Suhaani saw it with you", Nupur said,

Mayank wasnt surprised by her answer, but even if he hadnt known the truth, he cud still bet that this girl did not know how to lie, and this interested him. He was sure anyone cud see through her lies, she was too innocent to speak a lie with ease. Anyways, he knew it wud be better if he gave back her laptop, coz consequences would be bad if he lead this conversation forward. She mutterd a small thanks, and walked hurriedly, giving a sigh of relief.

Mayank saw her retreating back, and said to himself,

"Nupur Bhushan, i am sorry for what all i did to you, but now, no more mistakes, you are someone i need to know now, and trust me, i wont rest until i know you. You cant escape me, i promise"

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URGENT - Friends, i have a request, plz pray for two of our friends on IF, Habs (princess52), and Lovy (lovy2u). They both are in hospital. You may not know them, but plz, still do pray for their life, they mean a lot to us, and are an important part of IF. Your one prayer cud help them, so plz, do pray. Please pray that they recover soon and are back to us.

finally, please press the like tab, or comment,
pooja

Edited by kweetrockstar - 15 years ago

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#125

It was jus fab

Professor really crosse hi slimits

I really wish to kill him😡😡

I was actually confused ki wat wat Mayu thking that Devdas n all

It was really confusing😆😆

Liked that Nups atleat spoke to him

It will Fun that Mayu will be back of Nups now

Good Nups made Adhi Suhu realise their love for each other

Loved that she forgave him n asked Suhu to do the same

Hop Suhu helps his bro to get Nups

Loved it

Plz sum more Mayur moments next tim

N update jalsi

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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kulsumd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#126

haey pooja..
Just got 2 know abt ua ff...
I just read d charcter sketch...its nyc.
Wil read all d 4 parts of ua ff n wil comment on each part aftr readng each ...thanx 4 d pm.

Kulsum

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: farrda01
awesome update soon

thank u so much

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: -afsha-
It was jus fab
Professor really crosse hi slimits

I really wish to kill him😡😡

I was actually confused ki wat wat Mayu thking that Devdas n all

It was really confusing😆😆

Liked that Nups atleat spoke to him

It will Fun that Mayu will be back of Nups now

Good Nups made Adhi Suhu realise their love for each other

Loved that she forgave him n asked Suhu to do the same

Hop Suhu helps his bro to get Nups

Loved it

Plz sum more Mayur moments next tim

N update jalsi

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

wow
thanks so much for the amazing comment
i too wish to kill the professor
but kya karoon, jail nahi jaana na
anyways, i'll try updating soon

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: kulsumd
haey pooja..
Just got 2 know abt ua ff...
I just read d charcter sketch...its nyc.
Wil read all d 4 parts of ua ff n wil comment on each part aftr readng each ...thanx 4 d pm.

Kulsum

hey Kulsum
i am glad u liked the cs
i'll await ur comment
thanks
pooja

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

wow
thanks so much for the amazing comment
i too wish to kill the professor
but kya karoon, jail nahi jaana na
anyways, i'll try updating soon

U kill the professor ill hide u frm police wat say😆😆

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