QUE SERA SERA II Part 47 posted on pg149 (14/5/10) - Page 66

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: arluver15

Shardhaji

aap kab updat karogi..............i am dieing ot read more..............i have just finish readdin this from the very beganing...............yaar ab to updat kar do..........plz cont soon di will be waiting lods of love nruti



Hey nruti,
This is not fair. though I had said there will be 2 - 3 days delay, I delayed by only 1 day and the next part is not due till a few hours from now and it will be posted then. (You know I keep the timing of a new part every 48 hours.)
Patience child..ssh57
Edited by ssh57 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwww Shraddha di tht was so beautiful totally amazing Armaan is so so....
i dont hav the word
he didnt spoil Riddhima's surprise
the part was again rocking
especially weight wala thing
thanks for the pm
do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
thank u so much for the part it was awesome i love the way armaan tackled akshat's insecurity n made him busy so that akshat doesn't think once again about his mom's pregnancy n i loved the way armaan told he is becoming fat n ridzs making him agree to have food n especially loved the birthday celebration n one more thanxss as u rite all the parts so wonderfully 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ssh57



Hey nruti,
This is not fair. though I had said there will be 23 days delay, I delayed by only 1 day and the next part is not due till a few hours from now and it will be posted then. (You know I keep the timing of a new part every 48 hours.)
Patience child..ssh57

😆😆😆
Patience.......what is that???i dont know it😆 just kidding but ur FF is gr8 that i cant w8 for long time....thats y i just posted that coment
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 23

When they were back in their room, Riddhima went to the restroom while Armaan sat on the bed admiring the watch. He then pulled out the note and began reading it. It read '

Dearest Armaan,

WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY AND MANY MORE HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY!!

If I could erase the past, in one heartbeat I'd do it - I'd do it for you. There are many lessons in life that only time can teach you, like how much you love someone. It's nearly impossible to know that, until you spend your days without them. But all that you truly love is worth waiting for, no matter how long the time in-between may be.

I cannot show you how much I love you. Only time will tell you. In time all things grow old and weak, but my love for you only grows stronger and deeper with every second of every day.Time could never dim my love for you, because with every beat of my heart, I only want you more. I'll love you when your hair turns grey. I'll still want you even if you gain a little weight. The way I feel for you will always be the same, just as long as your love doesn't change. Time with you, I wish would never stop, because any time with you just can't be topped! When I am with you, I feel like time has completely stopped; all my cares in the world have vanished, and all that is left is us.

Yours till eternity,

Riddhima.

When Riddhima came out she saw him reading the note. She went and sat next to him. When he turned to her, teary eyed, she turned the watch around to show the inscription she had got engraved on it. "The only thing that lasts longer than time is, TRUE LOVE."

He pulled her onto his lap and kissed her as if to say '

Bahut Shukriya Badi Meherbaani,
Meri Zindagi Mein Huzur Aap Aaye,
Kadam Chumlun Yaa, Ke Aankhen Bichadun,
Karun Kya Yeh Meri, Samaj Mein Na Aaye,
Bahut Shukriya...
Karun Pesh Tum Ko,
Nazarana Dil Kaa,
Nazarana Dil Kaa..
Ke Ban Jaaye Koyi.. Afasana Dil Kaa,
Khuda Jaane Aisi Suhani Ghadi phir,
Khuda Jaane Aisi Suhani Ghadi Phir,
Meri Zindagi Mein Palat Ke Na Aaye,

Bahut Shukriya...


Mujeh Dar Hai Mujh Mein, Gurur Aana Jaaye,

Lagun Jhoomne Mein, Surur Aa Na Jaaye,
Surur Aa Na Jaaye,
Kahin Dil Na Mera, Yeh Taarif Sun Kar,
Kahin Dil Na Mera, Yeh Taarif Sun Kar,
Tumhare Bane Aur Mujeh Bhool Jaaye,


Bahut Shukriya Badi Meherbaani,
Meri Zindagi Mein Huzur Aap Aaye,

Kadam Chumlun Yaa,
Ke Aankhen Bichadun,
Karun Kya Yeh Meri,
Samaj Mein Na Aaye,
Bahut Shukriya...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=obMpiVW9_7k

R: Armaan I don't usually pour my heart out to you. But today I wanted to let you know what I exactly felt for you. I'm not good at voicing my feelings, so I put it on paper. I just want you to know that you are the most precious thing to me in my life.

A: Riddhima you don't have to spell out everything. I know you love me very much. I can feel it in each little act of yours. I never ever thought anyone would love me so much. All my yearning for love from my childhood has been fulfilled by you. Now I don't want anything more, only our life to go on as it is today, treasuring each other's love. This has been my best birthday ever.

"It aint over yet" she thought in her mind as he pulled her close and started covering her with kisses to which she responded as eagerly.

The next morning when he came out from his bath he saw that Riddhima had laid out a new shirt for him.

A: Nahi Riddhima, yeh shirt nahi pehanunga. Sab log poochenge to batana padega ki birthday hai. Aaj tak maine apna birthday kabhi nahi manaya'


R: Theek hai, ek shart par.

A: Kya?

R: Hum aaj dinner ke liye bahar jayenge aur tab tum tab yeh shirt pehenoge..

A: Ok, fine.
When she kissed him goodbye that morning she said "Have a wonderful day."

A: Without you? No way.. Yes but we'll have a wonderful evening, no doubt.

That evening Ridhhima was debating whether she should wear salwar-kameez so that her stomach was properly covered or one of the designer sarees which Armaan had bought from Kochi. She usually preferred to wear a saree because she loved the feeling when his palms carressed her waist. Finally she wore the sari and was turning around and looking at herself in the mirror when he came and hugged her from the back, kissed her neck and asked "Kya apne aapko admire kar rahi ho?"


Riddhina slapped his arm playfully and said "I was checking to make sure that the saree is draped properly. It shouldn't look indecent with my bulging stomach.

A: Riddhima, a pregnant woman can never look indecent. She only looks cute. Lekin tum itni jaldi kyon tayyar ho gayi?

R: Armaan lets go early so that I don't get indigestion.

A: OK give me 10 mins I'll be ready. By the way kahan jaana hai?


R: Don't worry about that, I've already made the reservations.

They reached the hotel by 7. Akka and Kaka also accompanied them. The other guests were to come only at 7.30. Riddhima made an excuse of going to the restroom and went to check with the manager whether everything was set. When Riddhima came back they were served with some fresh fruit juice. When Armaaan looked surprised Riddhima told him that she had selected the menu before hand. He didn't think anything amiss as he felt she would have given specific instructions according to her cravings.


Just as they finished their juice, the lights went out.


A: Arrey yeh lights ko kya hua? He got up to go and see when he saw a spotlight being focussed on him. He stopped to see what was happening when he heard the birthday song tune being played and the next minute there was a chorus singing the birthday song and simultaneously the lights came on. He saw his colleagues walk in and a cake was being wheeled in along with them. He turned towards their table and saw all of them walking towards him, smiling and singing.

Riddhima came up to him, kissed his cheek and said "Happy Birthday Armaan. Did you like the surprise?" He hugged her and said "yes, of course!"
The cake was shaped like a stethescope and on it was written "Happy Birthday Doc". This was from his colleagues. For the second time that day he made a wish, blew the candle and cut the cake. When he put a piece of cake in riddhima's mouth all of them made him take a bite of that piece from her mouth. He hesitated seeing Riddhima blush, but they weren't spared. Photos were clicked with them holding the piece with their mouths.

Nikki and Abhi entered right then. Sheena burst a balloon above their head and they were showered with confetti followed by a thunderous applause. It was then Riddhima noticed Abhi and Nikki and went to welcome them.


R: Aayiye Abhi, welcome Nikki..

Armaan thanked his colleagues and was surprised to see Abhi there and so were the MSHC staff, and even more so when he introduced Nikki to all of them.

There was music and the birthday boy was asked to lead with his lady love. As he led her to the dance the DJ started playing '


Jogi nachle ..

Rang rachde ..

Jogi nachle ..

Rang rachde ..

Lehraake balkhake tu, duniya bhula ke naach

Dil ko ae gunguna le, gaane tu gaa ke naach

Rangeeleon mein to kho ja, pee ke peela ke naach

Matt bhare naino se tu, naina mila ke naach

Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move

Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove

Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you

Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move

Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove

Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you

Sun le sahiba ..

Tu hai ik nasha ..

Hosh hai mera ..

Saara kho gaya ..

Hosh gawa deewane, hosh gawa ke naach

Paas tu aa deewane, paas tu aake naach

Dil mein hai armaan jitne, saare jaga ke naach

Tann mein badan mein jaise aag laga ke naach

Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move

Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove

Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you

Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move

Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove

Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you

Dekh ke bhi nahi ho yakeen

Itni kyun hai btaa tu haseen

Tere husn se zindagi haseen

Tere husn ke aagey koi haseena kujh bhi nahi

Aankhon mein mere saare sapne saja ke naach

Mujhko tu dil mein rakh le, dil ko dhalka ke naach

Pyaar agar hai mujhse, pyaar jaga ke naach

Jaan o dil hai jo teri, mujhpe luta ke naach

Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move

Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove

Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you

Uff teri adaa, I like the way you move

Uff tera badan, I like to see you groove

Uff teri nazar, it says I wanna dance with you


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l5KdQyvdsaQ



They both looked so beautiful together, gazing lovingly into each other's eyes. Akka made a mental note that she had to 'uthrao their nazar' first thing on reaching home. Soon all the couples joined in. The hotel staff took the kids outside to play some games.


As it was a weekday and all had to go for work the next morning, dinner was served early. Dr. Mohan came up to Armaan and said "I have a wonderful gift for you."


R: Sir I had specifically told everyone, no gifts..

Dr.M: Oh no Mrs. Mallik. This is a gift you just won't be able to refuse. The foreign doctors who had come from London want one doctor from MSHC to go over to their hospital for 2 months and one doctor from their hospital will be coming here. A sort of exchange program..

Before he could say anything further Armaan intervened and said "Let's have dinner Dr. Mohan. We can discuss about it tomorrow at the hospital."

All of them had dinner and by 10 they began to move out. Armaan asked Abhi and Nikki to stay at their house but they already had rooms reserved in the same hotel. They promised to drop by the next day. Akka fulfilled her wish and 'uthraoed their nazar' at the doorstep itself, by twirling a fistful of salt around them. She stayed back at their house that night.


When the birthday boy and his love went into their room, after putting their darling son to sleep, he latched the door and pulled her into his arms and kissed her thoroughly. "Thankyou so much for making this day so wonderful and memorable for me. I've never had such a wonderful birthday ever before," he confided.

R: You are most welcome Dr. Mallik. It was my pleasure. Everytime you are the one giving everybody pleasant surprises. For a change I thought of giving you one and I'm pleased you liked it.

He then carried her to the bed and the birthday celebrations continued.

Edited by ssh57 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG!!! Totally LOVED the chapter, esp Riddhima's note and their little moments!
Sorry about the short comment, but I'm at school and need to get to my class.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey,
I don't remember wen i last commented here.....but i have read each n every part of ur fic......n m totaly in love with ur story.....all of it seems so real u cn actually relate to all tht u narrate.....i love Armaan's caring n loving nature such a darling husband he is......n Riddhima the ever so perfect wife for him love her pair......n the most adorable Akshat, he's jst so cute n a kid ny one wld want so loving n understanding.......
Awesome story......n ur writting style is amazing, the narration n all r very nicely written.....the way u united AR was very nice the understanding u showed btw thm during tht phase was superb......every relation is been given equal importance in ur fic n tht's wat i like the most......ok now coming to this part.....awwww i loved the whole letter thing n thn ther cute little moment.......but i soooo wish tht Armaan doesn't goes away frm Riddhima, not even for 2 mnths......
thnx alot for all the pm's u have sent.......continue soon..... :)
Edited by crazy_4_karan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lilymay

OMG!!! Totally LOVED the chapter, esp Riddhima's note and their little moments!

Sorry about the short comment, but I'm at school and need to get to my class.



Very lucky that you get to read ffs in school. thanks for taking time to comment immediately. love, ssh57
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Posted: 15 years ago
love the part
very well written letter so sweet
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part di....
ohh god i hope armaan is not going.......poor ridhima wud be like statue for that time....lovedthe part very much.......
cont soon
thnaks for the pm
nruti

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