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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks ...Glad you liked it😳😳😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: newt2007

wonderful👏 expressed each feelings

but why Prem left 😭 Heer like this

please update soon.

Thanks ...Glad you liked it😳😳😃..Youll get to know about it in next update!!do read and comment😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey mehak
dunt get this much angry dear ............
i m afraid of ur guys scoldings😆...........
yeah i will update soon
as i m trying to write
but mood ni ban raha .............😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetanu2314

the precap clears some things though........ 😳😳

poor prem how much must he be going through..........
do continue soon.......thanks for the pm........Thanks ...Glad you liked it😳😳😃
meher is a true sister always sees through her sisters pain........
hope meher and preet become one.........They will soon but for that you need to keep reading😃
so no one knows why prem left?..not even sanjana di?..........No...Only Heer's Dad😆
some one must know right?except balraj?......
thank god that u will clear all misunderstandings between premeer in the next update or i would go crazy........Lol I knew it...that is why I am clearing it😆
poor guy yug let him have his vrinda man before heer and yug really marries or something even worse happens........Haha this is not the Vrinda wala Yug😆..so dont feel bad about him😆
atleast he is not forcing things on heer for gods sake.........
i really feel bad for him..........
and prem what does he think just come back after one year and say soooooo sorry and leave?????
that guy freaking out of his mind??........😆
if u wouldn't have posted the precap also u would have got into trouble girl..........
but in the end they became one right?...Yeah...😆
so not much of a preblem...........
wonder what problem does balraj has with prem.........

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: meeshti.

hey mehak

dunt get this much angry dear ............
i m afraid of ur guys scoldings😆...........
yeah i will update soon
as i m trying to write
but mood ni ban raha .............😉

Lol..alrite take your time but not another month😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

omgggggg....

so it was heer's father who asked prem to leave her????
thank god it wasn't prem.....
i can't believe her dad can be so cruel.....
continue soon!
waitingggggg eagerly.....

Thanks ...Glad you liked it😳😳😃
Edited by --pie-- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: --pie--

Lol..alrite take your time but not another month😆

well i m think of updating my ff in april
because i have boards in march
that will end on 31st march
how u knew that i will take a another month😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Okay guys....Here I am with another update!! So finally the truth is going to be out.."Sigh"..Actuallly I myself wanted to end it since I get bored witing the sad parts😆...This Part is dedicated to all my readers for coping with me and maintining your patience level😆...Thankyou soo much🤗
Comin to the updtae, You won't like the reasoning I've given for Prem leaving😕...it's kind ov stuupid but still I am expecting good and long comments😕😆...Alright now I wont waste your time!!😃...Here's the nxt chapter😃
Chapter 16
As the days of wedding came closer, I found myself dying and going into a deeper hole filled with darkness. Somehow, my heart sank at the thought the he left me again. Preet did come but very rarely. Ash and Meher were engrossed into selecting best dresses, Delicate jewellery for me. Afterall, according to them, I was getting married to a rich, engineer.

"Does this match with the dress Heer?", Ash nudged me, her voice louder than the usual.

Coming back to my senses, I forced a smile, "Yeah..its fine Ash"

"Where are you Heer...I literally asked you thrice and you're not even responding", She placed her hand on mine and gave it a light squeeze, " What did I ask you Heer?"

I shifted my gaze from Ash to the wall, "I mmet him Ash",my voice was heavy with emotion.

"Whoo?", As she said, that, I looked at her with tears spurting in my eyes.

"Prem??When? But how did you know he is here?"

A gasp gusted out of my mouth, " I dont know...I just met him...thats it", my tone became a little louder.

Ash rolled her eyes, "Okay..relaxx..now what?"

I looked at her, furrowing my eyebrows together, " What Ash?? Why did he even come back? to make my life more difficult? To slowly torture me to death?". As I said, that, she rocked my arms slowly, "Sshh..dont say that Heer..Why do you even care about him now? He left you..You are moving on in your life. Does his presence or his existense make any difference to you?"

Within no second, I let out my feelings fighting inside, "It does Ash..I loved him..He didnot give a reason to leave." my breath hitched as I continued between sobs, " Why? What made him leave me..We were happy, we were getting married..Why??"

Immediately, she embraced me into a hug and stroked my hair genty, " Why do you even care about a person who doesnot care about you"

Wiping my tears away, I broke apart and reluctantly asked, " Has he left?". I could see a sudden change in her expressions, her eyes shifting here and there in confusion. " I asked somethign Ash?".

"I I dont know..Lets go we are getting late, others might be waiting for us". How easily she refused to reply me to the question that hardened my breathe after that day.

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Finally the day of wedding came. The wedding was supposed to be held at my house. It was beautifully adorned with a combination of white and pink chunris, draped flowing down flawlessly and sets of purple tulips bedecked in several places. Since it was a small wedding, there was less noise of people rushing here and there to make sure that the wedding in the end turns out to be successful. Each corner of the house echoed with laughters, music, claps and greetings.

The only room, silent was my room. I sat on the bed, clad in bride's maroon and peach dress, and a heavy jewellery. The room was completely decorated and the bundle of red bouquets was giving it more beautiful glow. My wedding came, the day I had dreamt of. The day when I would be dressed in a beautiful red bride's dress and waiting to become only his, his wife and I would proudly say I am Mrs Prem Juneja. But nothing was same. I hated the name, 'wedding' now. My eyes ached with pain and refused to let more tears roll down. How could he let me marry another man?As i wondered, my thoughts went in the past.

*Flashback*

It was the last day of our four years of college and we were coming back from a grand farewell. I wore a black pishwaas, with long tight sleeves that were transparent. Bening one of my favorite dress, it had a sprinkle of white beads on the entire suit with a lining of silver ribbon on duppatta.

I sat in the car inspecting the beautifully designed mehndhi on my hands…I didn't usually wear it, but Sanjana Dee had forced me…My expression became thoughtful as I remembered how Sanjana Dee had said that the lady's whose mehndhi came out the darkest, it meant that her husband would love her the most…a small smile flickered across my face as I knew that it was true. I was so engrossed into my thoughts that I didnt notice when Prem sat on the front seat and for how long was he staring at me.

"I know I was looking extremely handsome today that you're so lost into my thoughts", I was jerked out of my thoughts as he said that. His lips edged into a meschevious smile. Recalling what had happened at the party, my eyebrows twiched into a slight anger, " Yaa I could see that Prem...how she was going head over heals for you?", I shifted my gaze from him to the other side.

" Oh..so yo're angry at Maya...", his voice had a slight naughtiness.

"Noo..I should be sharing a good laughter with her", I looked at him ironically.

Giving out a small chuckle, he said, " Heer..s she just asked for a dance, infact I would ne-", before he continued, I interrupted, " Ohh..and you refused? wow!!I am impressed! and the way you refused?", I raised my eyebrow, " Extremely sorry Maya, I cannot", I imitated him.

While I took out my frustration, he just giggles. "Hass kia rahe ho? Mein joke suna rahe hun kia?"

"What should have I said then? Run away? Heer will kill me even if I look at you?", his voice was rich with sarcasm

I curled my eyebrows together in confusion, " You should have said that you're dancing with me and she should know that? and now dont say that she doesnt know we're together and getting engaged"

He leaned his back on the seat and smirked, "Jealous Haan?"

"Jealous?!" I looked at him raising my eyebrow "You have got to be kidding" I said seriously as I looked into his eyes to make my meaning more sincere. Oh God, it is so obvious right now. He probably knows! And worse! He knows I know he knows!

"Accept the fact Heer Maan!! You are jealous!"

"I I am not..I just hate when she looks at you like this despite knowing that we're together", I finally gave in and said what I thought.

He tilted my chin up with his hand so that his eyes were burying mine. His chocolate brown were captivating my dull brown eyes. I really don't know how he cooled my anger through those eyes, "You look cute when you're jealous". His eyes were dead serious, yet his mouth held a playful smile. I looked away then focused on breathing and slowing my heartbeat down.

"I am not jealous..Infact Mr. Prem..you get jealoused", I rolled my eyes teasingly.

"When have I ever been jealous?"

I clasped my hands together and looked at him, " The new student who came two years back and then left. Karan Mehta. You watched his every move and glared at him every time he came with in ten feet of me."

He rolled his eyes, ""I wasn't jealous. I was being possessive."

"Yaa..and does that make any difference?..Until I told you I had a huge crush on him and then you got jealous?Right?"

"And dont tell me you didnot tell me that on purpose?", he smirked, giving a naughty smile. My face turned a hundred shades of red and my stomach tied into knots. Gradually he leaned over and whispered in my ear, " Youre adorable when you blush". God, did he want me to die from a heart attack? I could feel my heart pounding in my ears and there was nothing I could do to slow it down. Breath in, out, in, out, out, out, out. Not working.


Leaning more closer, he left a peck on my cheeks. It was a short kiss but it had all his love, sweetness, care and passion for me. Just then we heard a littile cough from the back. Immediately, we broke apart and adjusted ourselves nervously on our seats.

"Ash, I think some people forget that others exist around them too?", Rohan teased as he and Ash settle themselves on the back seat.

A sudden ting of redness rushed through my face while Prem swore under his breath and gave an irritated, yet warning glare to Rohan from the front mirror.

Ash giggled, " We missed a romantic scene just seconds ago..godd!!Why didnt we come earlier"

Rohan grinned, " Ash..Sshh..before Prem burns a hole through the mirror and kills us"

*Flashbak Ends*

I gazed at the photo, my fingers sweeping delicately across the golden embossed frame, a silent drop of a warm salty liquid making its way down my face. The photo had been taken on the day of farewell. It was a perfect picture of us. Brushing away my tears, I gently placed the large photo beside the vase, full of the fresh flowers that Meher had placed there in the morning. My back aching, I shifted slightly in an attempt to get more comfortable on the plain white bed. Just then the door creaked open and I was jerked from my thoughts. Meher and Ash came rushing in, with a slight smile edged onto their lips. As they dropped their gaze on me, they complimented me, wide eyed, "You look stunning". I forced a smile, "Thankyou"

"Dee..Yug Bhayya and his family's here..Dad is saying bring Dee in ten minutes", my heart did somersaults upon hearing this.

"Alright"

"M..mMeher why dont you go downstairs and accompany guests..Ill bring Heer", Ash requested Meher. She agreed and went downstairs wile Ash quickly came and settled besides me. She wanted to say something but I could see nervousness in her eyes. While I judged what the matter was, she quickly said, "Heer listen..Prem had not left yet..I dont know why but he wants to meet you now" my voice became faint and hollow while my heart sank on hearing this. For an odd reason, I couldn't refuse.

My lips parted, "Wwhy? I mean I am getting married in about half an hour Ash"

"I dont know Heer..Rohan told me", she gazed at me.

"I shouldn't be going Ash..if Dad finds out I am missing he will-", beofre I could continue, she interrupted, " he is outdie your house Heer". I kept staring at her,my face numb with what I had heard. I heaved a seep sigh, feeling pale and tremulous, and could barely speak in a whisper, " It was you who told me Ash to forget him..that is what I am doing..letting him go?"

"Heer...abhi in baaton ka time nahin hai...just agree and meet him once", she pleaded me. Before she could get up and grab my hand, my eyes rested on the door. To my astonishment, Dad stood there. I was scared out of my witts while I could see the colour drained off from Ash's face. "Uncle..I", words failed to escape from her mouth.

Dad who was boiling in anger kept glaring at her even more firecly and replied back in a terse tone, " Ashlesha leave the room at once . My legs trembled in fear as I had first time seen Dad screaming at his top voice. "Meher..bring Heer downstairs at once", saying this he stormed out, banging the door loudly. While I stood there, dumbstruck and astounded, just glaring at the door wide eyed. I couldn't believe my eyes. This wasn't my Dad.

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My heart started to zoom and thump around my chest as I was being led towars Yug. He stood there in cream colour sherwani with a brown stall around his neck. The pandit sat there, making his final preparations while the guests exchanged admiring smiles to eachother as I entered. My hands trembled in fear and Meher kept glancing at me after every five seconds.

"Uncle...Please dont", he said stuttering. He seemed nervous as his voice trembled. As I turned to see, my eyes locked with a pair of chocolate brown eyes I had fallen for. I could see fear in his gorgeous brown eyes. The strong guy that was my only comfort seemed weak. I had mixed emotions as I stood there perplexed. Why was he looking at Dad? I shifted my gaze to my Dad to get an answer to my question but all I could see was astonished expressions on my Dad's face.

"Prem..Why did you come here?". All the guests had a common puzzled expression while Yug just glared at Prem.

"I couldn't stop myself from coming here", his eyes formed fresh tears as they streamed down.

"Prem..leave this place, my daughter is getting married and I don't want the wedding to get spoiled," he replied coldly.

"I would leave..I know I am breaking my promise but just dont let this wedding happen", his voice faint and shaken. What was going on was completely difficult for me to interpret.

"Wait..Whats going on?", I looked at my Dad. He remained silent. A complete silence entered the hall and I could sense something. Leaving Meher's hand, I headed towards my Dad.
I begged infront of him as my breathe stuck in my throat, "Dad..please tell me what happened..which promise he is talking about", by now tears flowed down my eyes unstoppably. However, he remained silence. Within no second, I gasped, grabbed his hand and placed it on my head, " Dad..ap ko meri kasam..tell me what happened?", I could see him shutting his eyes in anger and helplessness.

After remaining silent for roughly two minutes, he finally sunk in, "I made Prem leave you", five words and they shattered me and took my soul away within no second. My hand loosened and fell down lifeless. "W..What??"my voice quivered in horror.

"I made Prem leave you", His voice cold and serious this time. I shut my eyes tightly as they clouded with tears,I wanted to shut my ears and run out of the sight of my Dad. What had I done so bad that was inviting such bitterness and hurt from the man whom I loved to death?

"Dad..please say that you are lying"..I literally begged infront of him, A ray of hope still alive in me that this was just a lie. He remained silent and I got my answer. Still I couldn't believe this. Not in my wildest dreams would I have ever thought this being a possibility.

"What did I do to deserve this Dad?." I almost yelled in despair and anger, my tears now streaming on my cheeks. "Coudn't you see your daughter dying every single day since he left"

Letting out a gasp in between my sobs, I continued, "You cannot be my Dad..I dont believe this". He moved closer, with tears streaming down and held my shoulders. I immediately shrugged them away in frustration, "Noo..please..don't", I swallowed a lump in my throat, "Why did you make my life hell Dad?Why?", I yelled as hard as I could.

"I had to Heer..I couldn't get you married to a person who's family killed my father", he screamed back in the same tone. By now, I furrowed my eyebrows in confusion. Immediately Prem came forward and asked, puzzled, " What did my family do to your father Uncle?". During this, nobody noticed when Gaytri Aunty and Lalit Uncle joined the hall. Preet was already there, rooted to his spot, baffled.

"I and Lalit met eachother after you and Prem told us that you liked eachother and wanted to get married. However, when I met him, I recalled that we had met before. After putting stress on my mind, I came to know that Lalit's and my father used to be best friends. Lalit and I had spent alot of our time together and we became good friends in the meanwhile. However, suddenly I was told by my father that we urgently had to leave India. We were very young during that time and were told that our fathers had a fight. Sevral years passed and we didnot meet eachother. Your nana died after an year when we left India. I agreed to the engagement thinking that it could be minor fight and misunderstanding and it could have been solved. However just few days before you wedding with Prem, I came to know from my Dad's business partner , Mr. Mehta that your Nana was killed by Lalit Uncle's Dad. When Lalit father came from India in search of your nana, he killed him in process.", tears smarted in his eyes as he told the whole story behind. I stood, routed at my spot. My legs refused to move an inch.

For a minute, I couldnt think straight. It was extremely difficult for me to comprehend his each and every word. All I could do was stand there and swallow a hard lump down my throat.


"Why was she held responsible then Dad? Why did they have to suffer?", Meher asked as she stepped forward, holding me by my shoulders for support.

" Kia mein apni bachi ko us khandaan mein jaane deta jis ne mere baap ka katal kia?"

"My father didnt kill your Dad Balraaj", Lalit uncle stepped forward to protest.

"Why did you come here Lalit..I dont want to see your face", he shoved his head to the other side in anger.

" I had to Lalit..tumhare ander aik boht bari ghalat fehmi pal rahe hai", he gasped and continued, " you made them suffer due to a big misunderstanding and you will regret"

"There's no misunderstanding Lalit"

"There is and I will clear it at any cost... We did come in search of your father from India Balraj. You know what was the fight? They fought over a business project which turned out to be severe due to your Bauji's so called 'business partner'. When my Dad realised that, he came here to clear all the misunderstandings with your father. He called him in a factory of his and he did clear all the doubts. However, unfortunately your Bauji was killed by Mr.Mehta and he acted smartly and made you believe that my father was the one who killed...I feel ashamed and regret..You didn't even bother to ask me once what the matter was?"

My Dad twirled his eyebrows together, " This cannot be possible..he died because of a heart attack"

"You were told that Balraaj..he was killed by Mr. Mehta".

"And in all this process, Bauji didnot tell me where was he going?". Lalit Uncle shifted his gaze to the ground and nodded reluctantly.

" Why do I believe you"

"You have to..Mr.Mehta is at his last stage of cancer..He called me and informed me". As Dad heard all this, he collapsed on the hard marble floor while Lalit Uncle rushed towards him to provide him support, " Sambhalo apnay aap ko Balraaj"

"How can I be so hard and stupid?", he paused, "Why did Mr.Mehta tell me that your father killed my Bauji just few days before their marriage?Why not the day he did that?"

Lalit Uncle gasped, "He had to find fake prooves to proof you"

He now sobbed heavily, " Mujhe maaf kerde Lalit..mein nein inte bari ghalat fehmi paali..I tortured everybody"

"Mujh se mat maang mahfi lalit..apne bachon se maang..I never cursed you for anything..infact I curse myself for not telling you about all this before". Shock, astonishment and regret was all that was filled in my eyes and Prem's. We suffered for one year just becuase of a misunderstanding. Dad, got up at once and headed towards Prem. With shame filled eyes, he joind his hands together infront of him, "Mujhe Maaf kerde Beta!!I dont deserve this but I am really very sorry for what I did..I-", before he could continue, Prem interrupted by placing his hands on Dad's shoulder, " Uncle..Yeh aap kia ker rahe hain..You're elder than me..I feel ashamed and what happened was just a misunderstanding that has been solved". Dad quickly embraced Prem into a hug and I could notice an odd twinkle in Prem's eyes. It was the first time Dad hugged him. In between my sobs, a smile broke on my lips.

After breaking apart, he grasped Prem's hand and came towards me, " I know Heer I don't deserve this but please-", I immediately srugged off, shutting my eyes tightly. Nobody could understand what I was passing through. So much pain from a person I loved dearly? Atleast, he could have told me.

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Precap:
He pulled me back towards him, gently, to not break my extreme fragility at this time. He clasped one of my hands to his chest, and reached out with the other. His fingers grazer my chin lightly, and he tilted it upwards with one finger. His voice was deep and smooth with confidence as he spoke again, rumbling. "I died every day without seeing you Heer, without feeling the warmness of your body againse mine, without your smile that made me crazy. Now I wont wait. Now I have all the time in the world.", he whispered against my ear.
"Time for what?" I urged him on, willing him to say the words on both our minds.
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I know it wasn't up to the mark😕😕
I am so mean Right??😆I know you guys would want to kill me for ending it here!!😆...but Ill try and update soon promise😳...And for that I want to turn a little more selfish😆...reach till page 82..and you'll get your update😆...Till then take care!!😃


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Posted: 15 years ago

hii mehak

yupieeeeeee.........
i m the first to coment...............🥳
bahut khush ho li ...........😆
now coming to the update ..............
awesome update .........⭐️
loved it ..........
specially the farewell flashabck ........⭐️
u showed the jealously side of premeer.............😛
finally u revealed the whole truth...........
now ballu will let heer to marry prem....................
great ............
it means more premeer scenes...........
prem didnt let anyone to marry his heer........
he should have entered like dis -
kisi miaka lal mein itna power ni ki meri heer se shaadi kar sakeeee...............😆
usse jhelne ka haq sirf mera hai..............😆
agar aise dialogues bolta na toh heer janamo tak shaadi karti😆...........
nicee precap .........
better update soon sweety
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Posted: 15 years ago
heymehak
ur update had many a shades of emotions
starting with heers crushed heart oh god her dialougues in which she said why the hell he came so that he can torture her to death was too good
and ash didnt replied that meant there only that prem have not left

now coming to the flash back

wooh that was soo humourous , funny , witty , sarcastic , naughty , romantic hihihi

the way heer was angry as maya asked him fro dance was umm and prem trying to make her chill and that line [what should i have said her i should run away heer will kill me even if i look at her ] was too good hihihih

and then heer had crush on karan and she said it proposely t prem and prem was jealous lolz two idiots have brains how to irritate each other

hihih they forgot ash and rohan hahahah so embarrasing

ohh dad is in his real colors now
yaar ek baat bata prem jaise hotty ko kaise koi dad pasand nahi karega and even he is richie rich too

my god buddha pagal ho gaya hai
kahaaaaa premm and kaha yuggg

thank god misunderstandings are clear and i hope to see them married yaar

love
aishwarya gayen

remove ur cliff hanger habit okk

i hope my commet is big enough

Edited by aishwaryagayen - 15 years ago

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