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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rose.mn

Hey simi hey rabiiiii

u updated.......finallyyy........wowwwww yes finallyyy wow i updatted the part 😆
i loved the update yaar.........finally Arman knew everyting now..........great yaar..........
n now what will be his reaction............zaroa kuch ulta phulta hi socha ho ga tum ne.......... hey tum mujhe kitne ache tarah jaantee hoo 😆😆
uff aaj itney din baad tum ne update kiya,i really missed krish yaar,.......he is so cute............thanks a lot yaar.......... haa even i miss krish a lot , main koshish karunge more of krish part likhnee ki
oh by the way how are you now.???.........n don't worry koi tumhey chappals nahi mare ga..........but next jaldi update na kiya na to kuc bi ho sakta hai.......... haa i m fine now , and thank god ki kisse ne mujhe hcappal se nahi maaraa , 😆 , nahi nahi main update kar rahhe hu , ab main koi risk nahi lene waale 😆
update next soooooooooon
love you.......
bye

hey rabi
thanks a lot for your reply
lots of love
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ssh57

Hey, glad to see that you have re-started this ff. Thanks.

thanks a lot for your reply
lots of love
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sri_4

Hey simi,,

i will be busy with my studies for next few months so i may comment late on u r FF's-talaash/yaar milla de/MFEO ,,,hope u understand n wont mind..but please do send me Pms..will read when ever i get time n will try to comment,,,

good wishes..
sri:-)

hey sri
thanks a lot for your replyyaa sure its o sweety , doo concentrate on your studies first i will surely pm you , and will wait for you to be back after exams , and my other ff name is yaare dosti, 😆 , just kidding
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah Simi tuse agay hai mein mar jawan welcome back its really rocking one superb yaar so its confirm for Armaan now that Ridhima is same girl but what is this why he sick mom destroying his brain with her stupidity anyways i know u make its end cool and Happy one and also show evil a good lesson HAPPY SHIVRATRI plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm





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hey nidhaa
hye tu naa marr , main to waise hi waapas aa gayye , lekin i loved that 'hye main marr jaava' 😆
glad you liked the part , and haa armaan mom is actually a devil , i too hate her 😆
waise as for everythink getting happy happy i think thoda wait karna padengaa 😉
thanks a lot for your reply , glad you liked the part
take care ,and haa happy belated shivratri to you too , i think i m really late to wish 😆
lots of love
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Wild.Aimee

Hi Simi.. hey dii

Pehle to tum mujhe ye batao ki, what happened to the older thread? Why was it closed? aree yaar uska page 1 open hi nahi hoota hai , baar baar itana erroe creat kar rahha tha , soo i openned a new one,
Anyways... I know why you updated late. I hope now you are taking good care of your health aww yaa haa . Aur joote na sahi, you deserve atleast some good amount of spanking... Even after returning back from your health leave, you took sooooooooo long to update. I get time to read only a few FFs, and this has been one of them. ohh hoo kya karuu dii , i m becomming a big lazy bones now a days that's why 😆

Now let me get back to the update...


Hmm, Armaan is a smart guy. He has very smartly calculated everything. thank you thank you , ye mere manufacturring company ki creation hai naa , to smart to hooga hi hai naa 😆 I loved his initiative to get clear conformations of his doubts through proofs. When the handwriting expert was checking the papers to confirm Riddhima's handwriting, I was very tensed... tensed coz of Naina's presence. haa even i was tensed for that 😆😆 I was praying please god, no actually please Simi, hehe , mujhe please😆😆 don't let her know the secret... please-please-please. Par nahi, ye to hona hi tha... Kambakht Naina, bilkul chain nahi hai use bhi. She has started filling craps in his ear. Gosh... I don't like her... iohh hoo even i don't , actually noone like her ,



Buhuhuhu 😭... I cried reading the last para of your super-short update. Armaan knows his mother, her nature and her intentions too well, still he believed her so soon. I know Riddhima is a stranger and Naina is his mother, so he is bound to believe her more than Riddhima. But he got convinced too soon as per my expectation. ahaa iskaa reply aapko next update mein mill jaayengaa, please aise na sochnaa ki armaan sirf naina ke influence mein hai , its somethink more than that Anyways...


Kahabardaar is baar itni der se update kiya to. And since the update was too short, you really need to hurry up with the next one. I am gonna kill you else...hwwwwww dii main dall gayye , bachee ko daraate hoo , waise maine compensation kiyya hai , long update ke saath hehe



Thanks for the PM. dii ab mere baare , Kahabardaar jo mujhe thanks kahaa kabhi bhii 😆 , love you lots
your shaitaan 😊

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PART 9
Hey friends

First of all , many of you have said that armaan is not correct in listening to his mother and getting in her influence

Soo for you , I need to clear this first ,

Armaan have been searching for his child from last 2 years ,

He had craved for his son for soo long , he really wanted to have his child , and was waiting for it only , when he came to knew that the lady who was giving birth to his child ran away

But then at the time when he came to knew that the lady was actually pregnant he was shattered with the fact that he can't even see his child growing in front of him

He lived the last 2 years of his life like a maniac , really determined just searching for his child and nothing else

He even didn't knew that the lady actually gave birth to his child or not , or his child even have been brought to the world or not , he was not sure for this fact also , but still he waited

He was determined with the fact that yes his child was there somewhere in this world and he will need to search for him or her

In all this , 2 years , he had lived whole 2 years of his life in this pain of being away from HIS Child , restlessness to find him or her , and he was soo incapable , that despite of knowing the fact that he is a father of a baby , he still can't see him or her , he even didn't knew whether it was a boy or girl , he wanted to hold his child in his arms when he or she would have born , he wanted to be there for his child at the time when a baby start recognizing his surrounding , he wanted to be there when his child has said the first word ever , he really wanted to love and pamper his child each and everyday

In short he wanted to live each and ever moment with his child , simply like any other father in this world

But all this wishes were not fulfilled , it was his destiny to get away from his child ,

And yes armaan here don't blame his destiny for that , he blame that lady who had betrayed him , the lady who ran away for her selfishness not for once thinking for the fact that he also had a right to be with his child

He had lived 2 years of his life craving for his child , madly searching for him , all this had caused lot of frustration in him , and that has resulted in the anger , anger over that lady for running away without any knowledge , which was actually wrong

Soo here armaan is actually angry over that girl , he had for once forgotten all this at the time when he came to knew that finally his search is complete , that Krish was his son , but all thanks to Naina Mallik , she very cleverly reminded him of all that pain he had gone through in past 2 years and bingo , it actually worked , the pain of last 2 years ,the frustration took over his happiness ,

And for once everything was forgotten Even the fact that he used to have some feelings for Riddhima , because now she was not the riddhima he had seen 8 years back , or who is his friend , HERE this Riddhima is that lady due to whom armaan had lived past 2 years of his life in hell

OK BACK TO THE STORY

With all these feeling , armaan went and sat in his car and proceeds towards riddhima's house

While armaan reach there, lets see what's actually going in riddhima's house

After the whole encounter with Naina mallik the way she had insulted riddhima that day in the hospital , she finally decided to quit her job , and soo she gave her resignation the very next day to rahul , and didn't even told the main reason for that

And now she is thinking of searching for a new job,

It was morning time , but today she don't have to goo for her work soo she was sitting in the hall and searching for recruitment article in the newspaper , when she heard krish crying

she went to his room and started patting krish [as he was sleeping and now woke up with crying] , he immediately got up and hugged riddhima tightly , she can see that he was scared , of what even she don't knew , but she just holded him tightly , soo that he can relax

kya hua bachaa" , riddhima tried to calm him "bas bas mamma aa gayye na yahaa", after sometime krish calmed down in riddhima's embrace and again went to sleep , riddhima figured out that might be he had some bad dream , or may be he is not feeling well , soo she also didn't left him alone even after he was sleeping

After the morning incident , krish was actually behaving very differently and was also not leaving her for a second the whole time ,

he was following riddhima all over the house since morning holding the corner of her dupatta , even if she went to kitchen , he was going behind him

later on in the afternoon , riddhima sat with him in the hall and after a long soothing session finally he slept again as he was already very tired by constantly following her , she carefully make him sleep there on the sofa itself , as she was sure by now that he is not feeling well today , soo he needs extra care

only then bii came there

"aree bi achaa hua aap aa gayye" , said riddhima

"kya hua beta tum pareeshaan lagg rahhe hoo" bi asked settling herself on the sofa near riddhima

"haa vo shayad krish ki tabiyat theek nahi hai , subah se mere saath saath ghaam rahha hai , ek second ke liyye bhi nahi chod rahha hai , bade mushkil se sulaaya hai isse , patta nahi kya hua" she said confused as well as worried

"aree to ismee itana pareeshaan hoone waale kya baat hai , kabhi abhi bachee aisee karte hai , dekhnaa thode der mein bilkul theek hoo jaayengaa" , said bii smiling

"hmm shayad aap theek keh rahhe hai , achaa bii aap thode der yahaa rahengee krish ke paas , mujhe market se kuch samaan laana hai , krish ki wajaah se subha see jaa I nahi paaye , main 1 ghantee mein waapas aa jaaongee" ,

"ismee poochnee ki kya baat hai , tu araam see jaa main huu na , main yahee rahungee" said bii

After that riddhima went to local market as she needed some groceries for house

And here bii was sitting in the hall , near krish who was still sleeping peacefully"

When armaan came there , very angry and determined armaan

He came in the hall , as door was open and first think he saw there was krish , HIS SON , sleeping there on a sofa , curdled in a cream shawl , looking like an angel , his angel

"aree beta tum yaahaa" asked bii as she saw armaan there , but again she was confused armaan was not looking at her , and she was sure he haven't even listened what she said , she saw him looking towards krish nothing else

Here armaan Once again he forgot everything , everything else in this world , it was just krish his son his blood

He went there to him and first kept a hand on his head soothing his in his sleep and then very carefully picked him up not to disturb his sleep and bring him near to his heart very near , holding him tight around himself , for the first time he felt like being in heavens , all the pain of last 2 years came out from him in form of silent tears , which came in his eyes the moments he for the first time found his own child soo near to his heart

Yes he had met krish earlier also , but this time it was different , as this time he is meeting him as being his own son

On the other hand , bii was getting confused first with his sudden appearance and then with his behavior she tried to again talk to him

"aap riddhima se milne aaye hai , vo ghar per nahi hai abhi" , sad bii again but noo use , he not listened to that too, he was to busy staring and loving the baby in his arms

"armaan sir what r you doing here" , asked riddhima entering the house and seeing armaan holding sleeping krish in his arms

Now with that armaan trance broke up , and he looked towards riddhima , finally the happiness was again taken over by the anger with which he had came to her house before seeing krish

Keeping sleeping krish back on sofa , properly , as it was now time for some more important discussion here he proceeds towards riddhima

While riddhima here thought that armaan was here to talk to her about the fact of her leaving the job , this was the only possibility she can get out of his sudden visit , because she had not even in her wildest dream ever thought that armaan was here to destroy and shatter her everything

"well I came here to meet you MISS RIDDHIMA GUPTA" , stressing on her name

While riddhima was there standing confused , and then shocked and then sacred

Confused with armaan harsh tone , shocked over the fact that how come he came to knew her real name , cause this name was never used by her she had always told everyone her name as Mrs. Riddhima Khanna , and then scared over the fact that maybe armaan knew a lot more then her name

"ops sorry I mean Mrs. Riddhima Khanna , yahhe naam bataaya tha aapne" said armaan again sarcastically

"armaan sir aap kya keh rahhe hai I m not getting it" , finally she spoke up with lots of courage , as now fear has taken over her courage

"you not getting it , ok then let me make it more simple for you , soo what was your husband's name" asked armaan sarcastically

Which maid riddhima even more scared over the fact that she have never thought about it , as in she had just used this fictitious surname for herself and had told everyone that her husband is dead "ji , voo , voo , I mean" she mummered

"what happened , you r not able to remember your husband name , or you taking time to think that what fictitious name should you take to tell me hmm" said armaan in a harsh tone

"sir aap kya keh rahhe hai , mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa rahha hai" , said riddhima trying to change the topic

"Really tumhe kuch samajh nahi aa rahha , per mujhe sab samajh aa chuka hai Miss Riddhima Gupta , ki tum kitne bade dhokebaaj [traitor] hoo" said armaan angrily

"dhokaa, maine aapko koi dhoka nahi diyya sir , aap kehna kya chahate hai" said riddhima confused

"hmm soo taking someone's child with you and Secretly running away overnight without any information , and may be you call this something else but for mee its called cheating , betraying which you did 2 years back miss gupta" said armaan tying very hard to be calm

But calmness had ran miles away from riddhima at that moment , after listening to this , her mind and body got jammed for a moment , her legs were getting weak , and she felf like she can fall down any moment , the one truth , the one of the biggest truth of her life from which she was running away from last 2 years it came out now , this moment which she prayed that it should never came in her life , not even in her dreams , was here in front of her , and that too all of a sudden , everything got shattered , she could have falled down on the ground , only if bii would have not supported her , as bii was also there listening to all this , and she was also equally scared just like riddhima

Before she can compose herself with this sudden outburst of the truth , armaan again said another think that was even a bigger shock

"how could you miss gupta, how dare had you taken MY CHILD away from mee" said armaan this time actually angry

MY CHILD , another big shock , armaan is the father , as in ARMAAN WAS KRISH FATHER , the man she wished she never meet in her whole life , was now here standing in front of her , and that too he is none other that her boss , and yes her friend too , She was cursing her fate for this

"YOUR CHILD , I mean", was all riddhima managed to say

"yes miss riddhima guptaa , my child , Krish Is my child and you r the one who take my child away from mee , you were not supposed to do this , you were not" , said armaan first calmly and then "you were paid money for this , my assistant have given you money for giving birth to my child , just to give birth to him , but you ran away , ran away and took my child away too" , said armaan angrily "can I ask you , who gave you the right to doo that" said armaan again , but seeing no reaction from her , he got more angry and shouted out loud "WHY ? , Why you did it why?"

His tone was soo loud and harsh that riddhima was literally shaking with fear , her mind and thinking power all had just got jammed , and even her vision got blurred with tears forming in her eyes

"I m asking you something , I want to knew this , why , why have you done this , why" , this time armaan voice was also filled with pain he was too really in pain ,he always wanted to knew this, that why she just ran away like this , why she didn't thought about him for once , she not even for once thought that may be family which was telling her to do this were also in wait for that child , they also want that child

"Kyon riddhima kyon ?" said armaan holding her arms tightly and shakking her a bit

"kyonki main uskee maa huu" , riddhima finally screamed ,loud very loud , "maa huu main" , she cried out "main apne bachee ko kisse ko nahi de sakte the" said riddhima

"aur main uskaa pitta hu aur krish tumhaara nahi , mera beta hai , SIRF MERAA" , said armaan finally , "he is only my son, and I M GOING TO TAKE HIM AWAY WITH ME" , said armaan firmly

"No sir , no you can't doo this" , said a scared riddhima

"offcourse I can and I will" said armaan angrily and moved forward towards the sofa , to pick sleeping krish from there

But before he can reach there to hold him , riddhima came in between armaan and krish ,

"no sir I will not let you take my son" said riddhima

"you can't stop me miss riddhima gupta , remember you have signed the legal documents and legally you don't have any right over My Son , soo its better you let me take him from here , or else I will have to call the police" , said armaan

"I don't care , I don't care for anything , he is my son , and I will not allow you to take hi from here" , said riddhima

And with that she tried to pick krish but before that armaan picked him up

"I m taking my child away , and you can't stop me now , if you want you can call the cops , but you knew that I m not doing anything wrong , soo its better you just keep quite and stay out of this" , warned armaan to her and with that he starting moving out of there

"no sir please , please , you can't doo this , please main krish ke binna nahi reh saktee ,sir" , riddhima followed him but it was too late he already settled in his car

Armaan didn't listened to her single pleading and went away from there

Riddhima cried loud , she followed the car for a long time , but after that she fall on the ground and cried loud , but nothing worked ,armaan was already gone , gone away , taking her life along with him ,

And here it was time for sunset and the dawn took over the sky and her life

Phewwwwwwwww I m tired

Finally, the part is over guys

Achaa , please don't beat mee with that joota's and chappals , after reading this part , I knew thoda emotional and bakwaas tha , per next time thoda achaa likhnee ka try karunge

Hope you hated , ops I mean liked the part 😆😆

Will be waiting for your replies ,and as per precap , hmm keep on guessing

Till then take care

Lots of love

simi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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OMG poor ridhima
no one bare the pain of what she is going thru right now
i know armaan is only angree at her and not thiking stright but still i hate him right now...
i hope ridhima gets krish back...
coz naina or maya wont be doing anything nice to krish
they wud make him cry more and also armaan coz krish cant leve without ridhima....
just hope that rahul and mushkan atul and anjali be able to knok some sense in him
cont soon
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nruti
this was the sades part every simi
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P.S :PLEASEE UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOOON YAAR

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Not like previous week ohk😆 !!!


Well very emotional update yaar.Cant see Riddima like that.Y cant he understand Riddhima's situation.He atleast have his family .. wife n mom...but Riddhima !!how can she even live a min without her son!!


Wish he will understand her b4 the loss!!


Update next part sooon Sweetheart



Takecare ...

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great story hun... =D
feel soooo sorry for poor ridzi :'(
why did armaan have to listen to his stooopid mom :@
ahh well hope everything gets better with time.

do continue our story loved reading it.
and add me to your PM list pleaaassseee (:

will be waiting for your next update.

Ravviie.x ;D
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Simi.....
thank you soooooo much 4 updating MAM......
da update was soooooooooo gud.......i mean it was full of emotions yar...
seriously ....i got teary while reading it ......
i can understand wat Armaan went thru ...but how can he take away such a small baby away frm his mother....😭
dat was quite painful u know......plzzzzzzzzzzzzz simi.....dun make Ridz cry soooo much..
poor soul's been thru alot.......u better get AR 2gether in da next update or else......😡
jus kiddin....😆
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooooooon dis time........em eagerly waiting 4 da next update....
luv dis story soooooo much......plz plz plz cont. sooon...
n thanx alot 4 da PM sweetheart....😊😊
TC...lots n lots of luv
JIA!!!!❤️
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