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Posted: 15 years ago
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good story !!! Continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: DEVIKA8

sorry Palak ..i tried to Pm you but ur inbox is full😕..hope u will find it soon.....or the next part may come soon.....I wish somebody could work on my research paper...😲



its ight dw i will clear my message and i added u to buddly list. loved the second part better wirtter than the creative continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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devika i read both parts togehther .I like the talkative and naughty radhika.please include me to your pm list.Waiting for the next one,but finish your research paper first.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part-3

Daksh House

The Purohith family arrived little erly at Daksh's house ,It was decorated well with garlents and lights; welcomed by Daksh, and his wife(DW). Radhe Radhe...

and took the blessings of Dadi.

Dadi: maji nahi dikhayi de rahi..kaha hein vo?

Daksh: andar hai..she sprained her ankle today morning ,so she can't walk properly,has pain..aap lok andar chali yena.

Purohith: chalo chalo...

Daksh's Mom(DM) was sitting on her bed and was looking outside at the door.She saw Dadi , vaisali and Mrinalini accompanied by DW..

Radhe Radhe....kithne sal hoge hei aap sab ko dekhkar......bahuth khusi hui hai mujhe..aao aao baitto yaham..

Dadi: Radhe Radhe..good to see you too..but what happened?did u see the doctor?

DM: It is just a small sprian , i will apply some oil and massage and it will go in no matter of time...So all are with you now...

Dadi: ha hum sab hei aur vo bhi Vrindavan main....

DM: tho Dev kaham main?mujhe usse milna hei.

Vaisali: jo hamare sath nahi hai,aap usko dekhne keliye kah rahi ho...arre aap hum se bhi miliye...... and both Vaisali and Mrinalini took blessings of DM.

DM: jeethi raho ...jeethi raho...usse dekhkar kithne sal hogaya hei..ab tho bada hogaye honge..na?

Mrinalini: dadima..vo tho kal syam ko America se ajayegi..thab aap usse milna..ab tho humse bathem karo....dulhan kaham hei?

DW: vo tho thayyar horahi hei..abhi ajayegi..

They hear a knock on the door and they all looked at the door...Mein andar ajavum?.....light pinkish churidar wali Radhika looked at them with holding something in her hand..

DM: ajavo beta..thume aise poochne ki kya zaroorath hain..mein tho kabse endazar kar rahi hum......acha huva ki abhi tho samay mila ho...

Radhika: vo kya hein na Dadima...i was ready early then Babuji asked to do something for him, mom wants me to help her too..and you know i am the only one..and you know i have only two hands ,how can i reach everywhere at the same time....then all of a sudden she looked around and chup hogayi ..giving a sorry sign.

DM: Thum chup kyum hogayi beta...acha acha,,,,en lokom ko dekhkar...ye tho meri bechpan ki friend hei aur ye uski parivar..Radhika looked at everybody and took dadi's blessings....saramane ki koyi bath nahi...

Radhika: tho ..kya mein bad mein ajavum?

DM: nahi nahi...no waste of time..i am ready and showed her ankle to Radhika...Radhika put the thel bowl down and sat on the bedside and started massaging with oil.

DM: thune mujhse poocha tha na..ki mein Dr ke pass gayi ?

tho yehi hei meri doctor..doctor Radhika..

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Dadi: tho Radhika doctor hai...

DM: doctor hai ,lekin sirf meri..aur kisi ki bhi nahi..ha agar poocha tho..meri tharah agar kissi booddi ko dard ho tho un sabke doctor hei ye..

Radhika: Dadima..aap bas bhi keeji yena..

DM: ok beta....sasthriji kaham hei?

R: vo hall mein hai...Daksh babu se bathem kar rahe hein..

DM: acha.....

Dadi was looking at Radhika ..

Radhika: acha..tho ye hogaya...ab mein jaker Deepika se milum..

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DM: beta Mrinalini ko bhi leke jana...Theek hei...Aur they left

Vaisali aur DW: let's go to kitchen and see the dinner prep...

DM: tho aap kya kah rahi thi.Dev ke bare mein...

Dadi: vo kal araha hi..mein tho khusi se pagal ho javoongi.....kithne sal bath mil rahe hum mere pothe se....

DM: uske sadi ke barem kuch socha hei kya...

Dadi: saadi..arre usse tho ane dena...kya koi ledki dekh liya hai kya..

DM: agar mein kissi ladki ko dikhavum,kya thum usse sweekar karogi?

Dadi: kyom nahi...aapko tho patha hei Dev kaisa he...tho aap uskeliye koi acha hi socha hoga....

DM: tho mein Radhika ko chunthi hum..

Dadi: Radhika,,,vo tho sundar hai, akal bhi hain or thoda sa naughty bhi hain..lekin Dev keliye????

DM: aur Dev keliye perfect ...

Dadi looked at DM ..

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DM: lekin..

Dadi: lekin kya?

DM: vo ek anath hei?

Dadi: Kya..vo sathriji ki beti heina..

DM: ha..Sathriji ko usse bachpan mein mandir ke seediyom se mila hei....I always ask Daksh why he didn't find her?..but i know the answer....Vo bhagavan krishn ne apne Bhakth Sasthriji ko varadan diya hai.......

Dadi: ye aap kya kah rahi hei..?

DM: sach..aapne usse muskurakar chalthe huve dekha heina...vo hamesha aisa hei..she always think of good and do help all in need...sathriji 's mother doesn't like her ,she get angry with her in front of public and make her to work like a servent..she do everything without saying anything back..that also with a beutiful smile..I asked her once why she is like this and you know what she told me....' dadima..we all are born to perform our duties ,and let's do out duty and kanna will take care of the rest'..

she is not like other girls of her age..she knows Krishna katha and knows the meaning of Geetha better than anyone and she follow that in her life...Sometimes we see her very naughty..but that is her way of covering her sadness and how can we blame her for that..swayam krishn bhi naughty tha na......

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Dadi: after hearing all this, i think she is good girl...

DM: she is not only good girl..she is the best..mein tho apne Raj keliye uska hath poochne jaraha tha..lekin,Raj uski layak nahi hei..usse koi eisa ladka milna chahiye,,who can shower all his love on her ,,no matter what....first you see her and understand her....

Dadi: let see..kisko patha bhagavan ne kya soch rekh hai?

Vaisali and DW: Diiner ready hie..chalem..

Dadi: R u going to bring food for DM here?

DM: nahi mein bhi ajavoongi..Radhika did the massage so now i can participate in running competition even..ha ha....uske hathom mein koi jadoo hei...and she stood on her feet and walked along with dadi....

Purohith's were ready to go back and Mr.Purohith: sathriji aap hamare sath ayiye..hum chod denge aapko apka ghar..

Sasthriji; suskriya ..mujhe rasthe mein kisi ko milna hai..aap log chaliye..

Dadi: i think Radhika will like a car ride..don't you?

Radhika: embarasingly..thanks..but i will come with babuji..

Then they saw Birju coming running towards them..

Dadi: Kya huwa..why are you running like this..?

The villagers caught a thief and they are beating him nicely....he looks like a gentleman...

Daksh: ab sahar aur gav mein koi farkh nahi hi..kaun acha aur kaun bura ....kaun jane...

Radhika held Sasthriji's arms tightly..

Sathriji: dar math beta..usse pakada hei....looking at everyone,....bechari dar gayi

Purtohith:sathriji bahuth der ho chuki hai..ab aapko hamare saath ana hei.hum chod denge....aapko jisse milana hei..vo kal mile lena..

Sasthriji:..jaise aap ki marzi..

Radhika without delay crawled into the car..Dadi understood that she is very scared...Birju looked at Radhika..thinking how she made him ullu earlier that day....

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Part 4
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Another great update! can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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A big thank you to...palak,gauranitai,chalhov,maleena,abhilasha,sia and jyothika...

Catch you all soon....Take care....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow..Devika..you are on fire..three parts in 1DAY..awsome..loving ur FF by the way..it's great..I know the FF's just begun but hoping for loads and loads of Radev romance!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Where's Dev...please introduce Dev...it's not the same without him..WE NEED HIM!!! Please....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice chapter devika well done👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: RaDev_4Eva

Where's Dev...please introduce Dev...it's not the same without him..WE NEED HIM!!! Please....

Thanks RaDev...even i can't wait to introduce him😛..that is why i am updating as fast as i can..but i want everyone (who reads)..to know that my radh is different...😆..so late entry for Dev.....
I am tired of this current CB line..so doesn't want to think or discuss about it..and this is the only way i can engage my time for themm...and like this forum very much..this is the only solution i found.....😉 he he...

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