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Posted: 15 years ago
Can u pm me when u you update next time
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey miths!!
great part
i loved ridz-atul covo...nicely writen
and armaan seeing ridz everywhere was cute..
but plzz ab tu kahi mat jaa...break ki kya zaroorat hai?



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Posted: 15 years ago
hey mithila
very nice part
loved ridz n atul convo.
hope AR both fall in love soon
pl don't take break, its going great
pl continue soon
take care and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi....superb part...awesome...thanks 4 the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for the link to this ff, Mithali!!
i read all 9 parts in 1 go!! absolutely loved it!!
RM need to get together fast!! and all the characters are described very elaborately in the story!! awesome!!
continue soon!! and can i be added to this pm list, too please?
lots of love,
Sab
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Posted: 15 years ago
cool... can u add AN in here 2??
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

cool... can u add AN in here 2??

an will be coming dear because abhi is already there as ridhima previous boss and armaan rivalry just wait for few parts
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 10

Ridhima atul anjali

Seeing ridhima anjali at once get happy and hug her ridhima coulnd react with this sudden act bt didn't say anything

Anjali: thank god ridhima tum wapas aah gayi I am sorry ridhima Jo hua who

Ridhima: its ok shayad koi aur bhi aapki jagah hota to yehi karta

Anjali: ok thank u tum fesh hojao phir hum lunch saath hi karenge

Ridhimajust to lighten the mood: aaj bhi khana mujhe bana hai kya without mushroom

Inspite of laughing atul and anjali started feeling guilty

Again ridhima said: are main to mazak kar rahi thi main fresh hoke aati hoon

Then she went to her room and atul anjali to theirs

Atul anjali

Anjali at once hugging him: I love u baby aaj agar tum ridhima ko nahi late to pata nahi armaan se shyad hum ek baar phirse

Atul just kept his hands on her mouth: aage kuch mat bolo jaan main aaj bhi un dino ke barrein man soch kar kaamp uthta hoon isliye maine ridhima pe bhi par ab mujhe pura bharosa hai who kabhi bhi humse armaan ko dur nahi karegi

Anjali: haan baby aur ab armaan pyaar ko phirse pehchane lagega I am very happy kissing him

Atul: main tumhe is baar dhoke main nahi rakhna chatha jaan

Anjali: confused main kuch samjhi nahi

Atul: narrated whole conversation which he had with ridhima

Anjali: what tumne aisa kyun kiya atul phirse agar armaan ko yeh sab pata chala ya phir use ridhima se pyaar hua to tumne socha hai who humse phir dur hojayega kyun atul why

Atul: jaan pls calm down meri baat dhyan se suno pls jaan for once

Anjali: ok

Atul: ridhimaq jaisa sochti hai ki who armaan ke layek nahi hai uski who soch khud armaan ko hi dur karni hogi jaan ismain main ya tum kuch nahi kar sakte ridhima ko who ehsaasnh sirf armaan hi dila sakta hai ki use uski zindagi main ridhima ki kitni zarrorat hai manta hoon main selfish ho gaya tha jab ridhima ne mujhse kaha who armaan ke layek nahi hai to main darr gaya tha kahi jo ummed mujhme phirse aayi hai armaan to thik hota hua dekhne ki kahi who umeed bhi na chali jaye is liye mujhe ridhima ko yeh keh kar convince karma padha ki usse use shadi karne ki zarrorat nahi hai sirf usse pehle jaisa bana de I hope tum mujhe samjh rahi ho

Anjali: haan baby I think u are right jo dard ridhima ke dil main hai who armaan hi dur karsakta hai aur jo armaan ke dil main hai who ridhima kash sab thik ho jaye aur armaan ridhima ko yeh realize ho jaye ki who log ek dusre ke liye hi bane hai

Atul: don't worry jaan aisa zarror hoga ab jaldi chalo na mujhe bahut huk lagi hai plshhhhhh

(Making baby face)

Meanwhile armaa had come straith away went to ridhima room

Armaan: tum mujhse baat kyun nahi kar rahi kab se yaha khada hoon dekh bhi nahi aise koi aise jata hai kya ek baar mujhse thik se baat to karti aur kaha thi tum tumhe pata hai main kitna pareshaan ho gayatha

Ridhima was still quite don't telling anything

Armaan: main tumhe bhoot lagta hoon kya kabse main chabar chabar kar raha hoon kuch to bolo

Ridhima: kya bolun main unse baat nahi karti jinhe mujhpar vishwas na ho

Armaan: oh to tum isliye naraz ho par tum bhai bhabi se to baat kar rahi ho phir mujhse

Ridhima: armaan tumare bhai bhabhi mujhe kitne din se jante hai

Armaan: ek din se aur main pechle 15 din se manta hoon ridhima meri galti thi par main dar Gaya tha pechle baar

Armaan was shaking remembering that and just wen away from there ridhima realizing

Atul bhaiya sach kehthe hai armaan tumne who dard apne andar kuch aise daba rakha hai ki who nazoor banta ja raha hai par main aisa nahi hone dungi tumhe us dard se bahar nikalna hoga armaan apne liye nahi to apno ke liye hi sahi main chathi hoon yeh sab jadse jald ho jitni jaldi hoga main yaha se utni jaldi jaoungi ho sakta hai zada rukne par main kamzorr padh jaaun

Meanwhile she failed to see arav was just standing at the door and he witneed armaan and ridhima argument also he was standing his head down

Ridhima was first amused to see him there with his head down then said aap waha aise kyun khade ho andar aajo

Arav: sholly(it was midly a whisper

Ridhima:kya

Arav then holiding his ears came front and very cutely said sholly

Ridhima was amazed by his cuteness and now understand hw armaan can also don't be angry or cant stop smiling seeing him and his cute antics

Ridhima: main aapse naraz nahi hoon its ok

Arav: sachi

Ridhima: haan

Arav: to aap chachu se kyun nalaz ho unhon bhi to sholly kaha maine dekha

Ridhima: thinking abhi bhi chacu ke liye hi aya hai aap apne chachu se bahut pyaar karte hai na

Arav: haan who is duniyan ke best chachu hai aap unse gussa mat hona plsshhhhhhhh unhone mere liye hi aap par chilaya tha

Ridhima: nahi beta aapke liye nahi aapke chachu ko mujhpar thinking something tum nahi samjhoge tum abhi chote ho arav

Arav: nahi muma kehthi hai I am big boy aap bolo Na

Ridhima: smiling and lifting him up kissing on his check aapko pata hai aap bahut cute ho

Arav: smiling gleefully pata hai sab kehthe hai aapne chachu ko maaf kiya

Ridhima: haan baba chacu ko bol do ab main unse gussa nahi hoon ok putting him down lekin ek shart par aapko mujhse dosti karni padegi puuting her hand in front to shake

Arav just run saying nahi pehle chachu se dosti kalo phir

Ridhima laughed wholeheartedly seeing that chachu ka chamcha

Rahul muskaan

Rahul: yeh lijeye madam office aah gaya or hum late bhi nahi hai

Muskaan: thanks rahul thanks for everything

Rahul: kar diya na paraya huh (dramatically)

Muskaan: matlab

Rahul: no sorry no thanku in friendship shyad pata hoga

Muskaan: oh isliye ok baba sor then bit her touge ok ab se nahi bolungi no sorry no thank u happy

Rahul: ya getting down from the car

One lady working on office was just entering so gestured him

Gud morning sir

Rahul thought ab to gaya

Muskaan: are wah tumhe to yaha par bhi sab sir kethe hai

Rahul: are aisa nahi hai usne abhi abhi join kiya hai isliye sir kethi hai aur boss mujhe mante bhi hai na islliye

Muskaan: ok maine to bas aise hi keh diya ab chalo andar

Rahul: thinking something u go main baad main aaunga

Muskaan: par tumne hi to kaha tha ki tumhe bhi kaam hai aur hum dono saath jayenge phir

Rahul: haan par mujhe kahi aur jana yaad aah gaya u go I will be joining later

Muskaan; ok bye

Rahul: all the best

Muskaan was saying th bt gave him sweet smile and went away

Rahul thinking

Maine uncle KO to samjha diya ab staff KO kaise handle karunga yaar ye to socha hi nahi tha iske pehle muskaan KO shak ho ya kisse aur se pata chale mujhe batana hoga warna abhi abhi to dosti Hui hai agar yeh bhi tut gayi to meanwhile seen sia coming

Rahul: oh no is mussebat KO bhi abhi aana tha seeing her car he just sat in his car and went away

Sia: oh shit rahul rahul wait coming from the car phirse bhaag Gaya bt I will see kitne din ak mujhse dur bhagoge mr rahul next mnt mera birthday hai main is baar gift main tumhe mangungi dad se aur dad mujhe kabhie mana nahi karte just wait for one mnt dear after wards u will be mine only mine

Armaan arav ridhima

Its habbit of armaan when get upsets he just throw each and everything in his room doing the same thing from cupboarbd throwing everything

Arav: chacu aap sab aise kyun phek lahe ho Gandhi baat

Armaan: arav is waqt main gusse main hoon pls yaha se chale jaaun

Arav: aap gussa kyun ho

Armaan: itni bar sorry kaha phir bhi

Arav: par lidhima ne aapko maaf kal diya

Armaan: kya

Ridhima: arav inse kaho kisse aur ka gussa kapro par nahi utarthe

Armaan: arav inse kaho main job hi karoon inhe kya inhe to mujhse baat hi nahi karni

Ridhima: arav

Arav: aapdono ek doosle se kyun nahi keh dete main kyun kahonn

Seeing his cute face and expression they both started laughing and arav clapping seeing them laugh

Arav: aab aap dono handshake kalo lidhima aunty main aapse tabhie dosti karunga jab aap chacu se dosti karenge

Ridhima: acha tarreka hai dosti karane ka blackmailing haan aapko yeh sab chacu ne hi sekhaya na

Arav: no chachu ne nahi sekhaya plomish holding his neck

They both again started laughing ok

Ridhima: ok baba friends shaking hand with armaan armaan at once bring his hand forward not wasting anytime

Arav: yehhhhhhhhhh thanku lidhima aunty aap baut achi hai kissing her ab main bhi aapka fliend brining his hand forward to shake with ridhima

Which ridhima very happily aceepted then ryan just went hapilly from there to share this news to his parents

Ridhima: kitna pyara hai na

Armaan: haan bahut aur utna hi shaitan aur ziddi bhi hai apni baat kisse tarah bana hi leta hai

Ridhima: haan who to abhi abhi dekha smiling

Armaan: tumne sach main mujhe

Ridhima: its ok armaan jo hua so hua par agar aapko sach main meri freinship chahiye to aap agle ek hafte tak club nahi jayenge

Armaan: whaaaaaaaaaaaaaat

Rahul muskaan

Rahul was standing there waiting for muskaan as soon as he was confidend sia went upstair when muskaan came she instantly hug him for once he was taken aback then just smiled

Muskaan: mujhe job mil gayi rahul thanks

Rahul: phir

Muskaan: ok ok chalo na restaurant main jatte hai mujhe tumhe treat deni hai

Rahul: no its k uski koi zarrorat nahi

Muskaan: pls pls chalo na mera aur koi friend bhi nahi hai agar di hoti atonce her smile vanish

Rahul:ok ab udhas mat ho baba chalo chalet hai

While they were having their lunch

Rahul: ek baat bolun

Muskaan: haan rahul

Rahul: main waisa nahi hoon jaisa tum sochti hoon

Muskaan: matlab

Rahul: matlab yeh company jismain tum abhi interview deka aaye ho main waha ka boss hoon I am 50% parner there

Muskaan at once started laughing to aur boss hahahha bahut acha mazak tha hahaha

Agar tum boss hote to bus main travel kyun karte hahahaha

Rahul: main sach keh raha hoon muskaan tu mujhe pehle nazar main hi achi lagne lagi thi main bus main sirf tumare liye yeh sach hai ki main

Muskaan expression change suddenly fisrt amused to shock to anger

Rahul: noticing that tu gussa mat ho pls dekh maine who sab

Muskaan just went away from there listing all that

Karan ki dewani mithila

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Posted: 15 years ago
cool update mithila. loved it a lot.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi dear!
How R U!
I wish u r gud
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woah dear
its really a nice one hats of to u i think its best oneso Atul want Armaan make Ridhima fall in love but its rocking oneplz continue it soonand thanks for the pm

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Dil ki dhadkan miss ho gai,
Hum to kuch dene ke kaabil nehi hai,
Dene waala hazaar khushiyaa de aapko.
Hum sirf Dua karta hai ki zindagi har khushi de apko..."



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Bada Yaad ata hai...."






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Edited by nidha1983 - 15 years ago

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