Death Talkies: Wheel of Time [Apr/04 P66]

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315925

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

But they are still so beautiful!!

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

hey sookie...thanks for PM
love u r stories as usual...when i read this 2nd part i remembered of some movie i saw...anyways thats not imp..love the way u described it ..
u r stories always seem to have this mystic element in it which makes me hooked to it..just wanna read all but exams!!!!
loved the way u started -hell? and the second part unfolded some other mystery,waiting to read more of it,,,do send me PM...please...
really u r writings tell how much effort u keep in it..five years or six years back..they seem to be fresh for me...
good wishes...
take care..
sri:-)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

thanks for the link...i will get back to this soon..pakka

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Hey Sookie!

Amazingly written one! A very complex one that is spelt out in a simple way. Absolutely loved this line -

"I was full of bravery today. I know how people think that its only a coward who can think of giving up his life but then why is everyone so damn scared of dying? "

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

hey sookie..nice story..

Being single and alone at 34, can def be depressing.U feel as if no1 wants u,no1 likes u! but then suicide is not always the best option..

but it did turn lucky for him, he found the most beautiful gal there..and the way he expressed her beauty was so sweet..n i bet she was impressed..by his flirtin n sweetness..tatz y she wanted 2 meet him..

but then did they jump or not?..was a bit confused der..

thnx 4 d PM

do write more

-aish

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Its beautifully written... i felt that this was a piece ot read and know what writers can do with mere words.. it can take u to another place, another feel.. another surroundings and mostly to know what another individual may can or feel when somethign hits upon.... i was too hoping for heaven but it ended with hell... hmmm.. woudl be reading more of it..and ocmment..

great work.. we all know u r extremely talented... thanks for hsaring it with us... sharing knowledge indeed...

Bhoomi

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Mridhula

@Mridhula

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

hmm...interesting.
i don't really know what to write....still absorbing it.
it was soothing actually, even though both were abut death, it had a serene feeling? perhaps.

i felt a reverie of thoughts.....

will wait for more...

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Watercolor on canvas

Suddenly I have no words, no ideas left. There is a deep sorrow that I feel when I pick up a pen to write. My hands smoothed absent crease on paper while my brain fumbles with words. Then I feel that there is inertia when it comes to penning down the words that swirl inside my head similar to the way the multi hued water in a container in which the painter dips various colored painting brushes. The way one cannot make out a single color in that container, I am not able to pick out one idea, one word, one cthought that would make a sentence. A single tear escaping the confines of my eyes is the only resultant of the invisible pulling of strings of my heart; besides heart ache that is. Another tear escapes as my hands write those letters that make up your name. Even with the lack of clarity, my mind gush a million and one thing, my heart tries to override my mind, admonishes it and dictates a beautiful sonnet. The delirium that surrounds me suffocates me and hurts me. Amidst all the chaos that's taking place in my mind and heart and their internal warfare, my fingers writes those three little words that my pride hadn't allowed me for a while.
"I am sorry."

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315925

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Very beautifiiul Sookie!! I'm glad I was online to read this!!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

wonderful words sookie.
the first entry immendiately got me thinking back to this poem, i had written years ago- entitled 'born again' about an untimely death and a yearning to live again as the soul struggled to exist in between the two worlds...i'm pasting a few lines from it here - they are not in the exact order..but just a few lines

Till on fine dusk when mercy was showered on

Soul felt emancipated from ages of cruel reality to boundaries unknown

Where word less voices echoed, revived all, passed on words that touched the core

Somewhere between all this, I lay to rest for the final time

Now when I open my eyes I feel flesh and smell the air

I stand on the very place, I had known before

Only this time I inhale the air that lets us live

Can hear the beats of life that I had longed for so long!