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TERA SAATH HAI TO ...

First part …………..

Sujal aur Kashish ki zindagi ka aaj sabse Ahem din hai ………… aaj dono ek aise bandhan main bandhne ja rahein hai jo ki janam janam ka saath hoga … sirf iss janam ka hi nahin .. 7 janmon ka bhi nahin …..balki janmoon janmoon kaa … har janam ka …. Aaj dono shadi ke bandhan main bandhne ja rahien hain …. Aaj ke baad who har uss dard ko bhool jayenge jo kabhi jamane ne undo diye the .. jo dard kabhi nasoor ban kar unke jehen ko hila gaye the ..aaj unn jhakhmoon ka unki zindagi main aakhiri din hoga …aur unki aaj ki khushi ko baantne waale sirf unke dost the ..pratham , gauri, Gautam aur Damini .. bas ek hi baat ka gham tha dono ko ..ki unn dono ki families main se koi nahin tha …. Sujal ko ek pal ke liye laga ki jaisi uski behen Dia aayi hai ……….

Sujal : Kashish shayad dia ……par jab peeche mud kar mandir ke seedhiyon se dekha to koi nahin tha … bas par unn logon ke alawa koi nahin tha !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kashish: sujal main janti hoon ki tum dia se …. Par Uski bhi mazboori ko samjho Sujal
Who chah kar bhi nahin aasakti hai ….Papa usko nahin aane denge … Sujal…agar tum iss tarah udaas ho jaooge to kya who khush reh payegi …main usko kya booloongi Shayad agli baar nazarein bhi nahin mila paoongi ..kya kahoongi usse ki uska bhai aapni shadi ke din bhi khush nahin tha …sujal main bhi dia ko bahut miss kar rahi hoon, kash who yahan hoti ,par…..???????

Sujal : Sahi keh rahi ho tum ..par dil nahin manta hai na …Bahut pyar karta hoon main usse ….
Kashish: janti hoon janti hoon ki sujal Garewal Duniya main sabse jyada pyar aapni behen aur mujhse karta hai ….sahi kaha na …..
Sujal : sahi kaha madam …aap kabhi galat kehti hai kya ….. ;))))..sach bhi hai jitna main Dia ko miss kar raha hoon ..utna hi tum Suruchi ko bhi kar rah ho …
Yeh sun kar Kashish ki aankhon main aansoon ajate hain …..jinkhein dekh kar sujal ghabra jata hai ..
Kashish: Sujal … kassh Dii yahan par hoti ..mere saath ……..par …
Sujal : haan kashish …par who jahan hai na Kashish aaj bahut khush hain …aaj unki behen ki shaid hai aur who har pal tumhare saath hai …hamesha thi aur rahengi ..to kya hua agar who aab nahin hai… unka ehsas hi kafi hai …. Who haar pal tumhain hi dekhr ahi hain kashish aur tumhain aise rota dekh kar who kabhi bhi khush nahin reh payengi Kash plz rona mat ……… nahin to pata nahin main kya kar jaoonga….plzz
Kashish yeh sun kar hass padti hai …
Kashish : haan haan janti hoon …. Tum kay karoge
( plzzzzzzz no guessesssssss …aacha chalo guess kar lo …main bataoongi ki theek hai ki nahin ;))))))))))))))))))))))
Sujal yeh sun kar hasta hai ………..
Sujal : Are wah pehle se hi pata hai ….gud gud … waise main soch raha hoon ki mai ro leta hoon ..phir tum………………………….. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kashish ……… Sujallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll… dii dekho no ..Sujal kitna shaitan ho gaya hai … aasmaan ki taraf dekhte hue kehti hai …
Sujal: main kya karoon ne dii …aapki behen ne to mera sab kuch aapna kar liya hai ….mere paas uske alawa koi nahin hai …………aur dono ek doosre ko hug karte hain …
Tabhi ……….. prahtam aata hai ……..
Pratham : Mujhe lagta hai Gautam ki humhein pandit ji se keh dena chahiye ki shadi karne waale thoda busy hain …. Thodi der main aayenge … theek hai ………..
Gautam : haan haan chalo ..yeh to bahut busy hain ……….
Aur who dono jaane lagte hain.
Itne main Sujal unn dono ko pakad leta hai ….
Sujal : ji aap dono kya kar karne ki soch rahien hai????????????
Pratham : aur nahin to kya … tum dono itna busy ho ..hum kya karenin …shadi karni hai ki naihnnnnnn??
Sujal : kya yaar kaisi batein kar raha hai ………. Karni hai na …..
Sujal Kashish ko dekhta hai ……… who aapna muh neeche karke khadi hai …..
Sujal kashish ka haath pakadta hai …. Chalo kashish . nahin to yeh dono hamari shadi postpone kara denge !!!!!!!!!!!!
Kashish Sharma jati hai …. Aur sab hass padte hain …. Itne main Gauri aur Damini bhi aajate hain ………..
Damini : yahi rehne ka irada hai kya .??
Sujal ..kya Dimi … tum bhi na ..chalo aarahien hain …..aab tum mat shuru ho jana plzzzzz……..
Damini … to chalo phir ….

Sab mandir main jate hain ……Sujal aur Kashish dono saath phere lete hain ……aur pandit ji se aashirwad bhi …
Kashish ro padti hai aur damini aur gauri usse gale laga lete hain ……….
Damini : plzz kashish ….. aaj tumhara ek nayi zindagi mai pehle kadam hai ..isse ro kar shuru karogi kya !!!!!!!!!.. sujal kya kahega ….
Kashish: haan ..baba nahin roti bas…
Gauri :: that's like our Kash ….Waise Madam SHADI MUBARAK HO……… wishin u both a very very happy married life …..jis tarah se tum dono ne abhi tak ek doosre ka saath nibhaya hai …aage bhi tum ek doosre se isse tarah jude raho …..

Pratham ..to chalein …….. Sujal ..kya khayal hai ……….wasie aaj "Mannat " poora ho jayega … duniya main isse khushi ka pal koi nahin hoga … mannat ke liye to …
Sujal : haan sahi kaha Pratham … aaj mera ghar poora ho jayega ….Kashish ke bina adhoora tha …. Bas ek makaan tha ….aaj who ghar ban jayega …..Aur yeh keh kar pratham aur gautam usse gale laga lete hain .
to chalein…aur sab mannat ki taraf bhadhte hain …..
Jaise hi Sujal door kholne lagta hai ..door aapne aap khul jata hai ..aur sujal aur kashish dono ek saath kehte hain ……………
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TERA SAATH HAI TO.....

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.Dia !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dia: ji main Hi hoon……………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! koi bhoot nahin hoon ….aab aap dono mujhe aise mat dekho……..
Sujal : dia tum yahan ??????
Dia : bahiya aap plz mujhe itni hairnagi se mat dekho …main janti hoon aap aur bhabhi kya soch rahe hain …..aapke har sawal ka jawab main doongi ..par isse pehle mujhe pooja karni hai …..aur yeh keh kar andar chali jati hai ….
Sujal aur kashish dono ek doosre ki taraf dekhte hain … phir uske peeche peeche sujal Aur kashish bhi andar jaane lagte hain ki Damini aur Gauri aage aajate hain aur un dono ko wahiin rukne ka ishara karke andar chale jate hain ….
thodi der main Dia Pooja ki thali le kar aati hai …..
Sujal : Dia yeh sab ….
Dia : Bhayia plz ..mujhe pooja karne do …
Pooja ke baad Gauri ek kalash rakh deti hai darwaze par aur kashish ke kehti hai ki isse gira ka aandar aane .. kashish wahi karte hue sujal ke saath Mannat main aapna pehle kadam rakti hai …. Dono ek hi saath ghar main ate hain …..

Aab Sujal Dia ki aur dekhta hai …
Sujal: Dia …tum yahan …agar papa ko pata …
Isse pehle Sujal aage kuch keh pata …Dia …bhayia kyon pareshan hote ho ..papa ko nahin pata hai kki main yahan aayi hoon …
Kashish ….: par Dia …agar unko pata lag gaya to …
Dia : my dear dear dearest Bhabhi jaan … aab hum bache nahin hain…. Actually aaj meri ek friend ke bhayia ki shadi hai aur main aapni friendzz ke saath wahi ja rahi thi ..par …beech main utar gayi aur yahan aagayi …. ;)))))))))) bas aapke saath thodi der ragoongi phir chali jaoongi ..isse papa ko pata nahin lagega ….theek hai na ..wasie maine Pratham aur Gautam bhayia ko bata diya tha ….
Sujal unn dono ki taraf dekhta hai …..
Aur who dono ;)))))))))
Yeh kehte hi Kashish Dia ko gale laga leti hai ….
Sujal: hmmmmmmmmmm mujhe lagta hai ki meri behen mujhe bhool gayi hai ….
Dia: bhayia aap bhi na aapko kaise bhooloongi …aap to bahut special ho yeh aap bhi jante ho ..hai na … aur waise bhi meri bhabhi aur bhi special hai …aap jo unko mile ho..wasie bhabhi m so sorry …aaj aapki shadi par main aapke liye kuch nahin aayi hoon..jo maine aapke liye liya hua hai ..who bhi nahin la payi ..nahin to papa ko shak ho jata …aur main nahin chahti ki unko pata lage
Kashish: Dia tumne mujhe aaj who diya hai jisko main kabhi nahin bhool paoongi ..aur shayad sorry to mujhe bolna chahiye ..maine tumhare bhayia to tumse alag kar diya hai .m so sorry Dia..
Dia: kya bhabhi aap bhi na ..hum alag kahan hai …. Hamara rishta to hamesha ke liye hai phir iss baat se farak nahin padta hai ki bhayia aur main ek hi ghar main rahein ya alag alag ghar main … rishta to dil se hota hai ..aur mujhe pata hai ki jab bhi mujhe bhayia ki aur aapki yaad aayegi ( waise who hamesha hi aati hai ) main yahan aajaoongi …main to yahiin hoon …aap dono ke paas ….aur sujal aur kashish dono dia ko gale laga lete hain..

Kashish: haan dia ..sahi kaha … ek min main abhi aayi …
Sujal : hmmm to Dia .. kaisi ho …. Aaj subah se tumhain dekha hi nahin hai ….
Dia : haan bhayia … aaj subah se hi na … koi baat nahin … wasie meri chocolate kahan ha ..aap mujhe roz dete hain na ..aaj ki kahan hai???
Sujal : ohhhhhhhhhhhhh woh to main bhool gaya
Dia: kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ..nahin yeh nahin ho sakta …bhayia plzzzzzz mujhe pata hai ki aap bhoole nahin hain …… plzz mujhe aur mat sataoo..
Sujal: haan haan tu bhi janti ho ki main nahin bhool sakta hoon …. Wasie kiddo tum itni badi ho gayi ho phir bhi choclate khati ho…
Dia : to kya .. mujhe pasand hai aur jab aap dete ho to aur bhi aachi lagti hai ….
Tabhi Kashish aati hai …
Kashish : Dia yeh lo ….
Dia : bhabhi yeh kya hai ….
Kashish: yeh iss ghar ki ek key hai ..jab bhi dil chahe yahan aana …yeh ghar tumhara bhi hai …par papa ko mat pata lage bas…
Dia: thanx bhabhi ..nahin pata lagega ….don't take tension …MAIN HOON NA …..

Pratham : hmmmm ..gautam kya khayal hai … party shuru karein ..aab to Dia bhi hai ….
Gautam ..: haan chalo ….
Dia: haan bhayia .phir mujhe jana bhi hai ….
Pratham : theek hai …1 ghante main jab hum log nikenge tab tumhain bhi suruchi ke yahan chod denge ..
Dia : theek hai bhayia…
Itne main Damini aur Gauri ek bada sa cake late hain ( Kaisa Dimmy ne mujhe giya tha …B'day gift !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! new year ki party main jakar dekh lena plzzzzzzzzz) …
Sujal aur Kashish cake katate hain ..uske baad ..
Dia: Pratham bhayia …plz ek gaana….
Pratham ….nything for u sweet sis …
Pratham aapna guitar lata hai …..and starts singing…

Tumse kitna pyaar hai dil mein utarkar dekh lo –
Tumse kitna pyaar hai dil mein utarkar dekh lo
Na yakeen aaye to phir
Na yakeen aaye to phir dil badalkar dekh lo
Tumse kitna pyaar hai dil mein utarkar dekh lo

Humne apni har saans par naam tera likh diya
Ek tujhe paane ki khaatir khudko paagal kar liya
Ishq mein tum bhi sanam
Ishq mein tum bhi sanam had se guzarkar dekh lo
Tumse kitna pyaar hai dil mein utarkar dekh lo

Jaane kyoon saare jahan se ho gaye hai bekhabar
Jab se tum aankhon mein aaye jaagti hai yeh nazar
Apni raaton se meri
Apni raaton se meri raatein badalkar dekh lo
Tumse kitna pyaar hai dil mein utarkar dekh lo –
Tumse kitna pyaar hai dil mein utarkar dekh lo
Na yakeen aaye to phir
Na yakeen aaye to phir dil badalkar dekh lo
Tumse kitna pyaar hai dil mein utarkar dekh lo

Sujal kashish se dance ke liye poochta hai ….kashisk accepts… Pratham Dia ke saath dance karta hai aur Gautam Gauri ke saath … Damini sab ko dekh rahi hoti hai ….
Pratham dance karte hue saara time Gauri ko dekh raha hota hai ….
Kashish Sujal ko ishare se pratham ko dekhne ko kehti hai … sujal uski aur dekhta hai aur phir gauri ki aur.. tabhi Gauri bhi dekhti hai ki sujal usko dekh raha hota hai … who usse poochti hai ki kya ..sujal hass deta hai ..aur kehta hai kuch nahin ………
Sujal : lagta hai aab inn dono ki baari hai …..
Kashish: haan ….bas dono aab jaldi hi aapne pyar ka izhaar kar dein ….

Pratham finishes his song and starts another …Dia now dances with Gautam and Pratam with Gauri..

tujhe dekh dekh sona ...tujhe dekh kar hai jagna ..
maine yeh zindagani ..sang tere bitani ..tujhmain basi hai meri jaan hai
jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak jaye ......
jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak jaye ......

tujhe dekh dekh sona ...tujhe dekh kar hai jagna ..
maine yeh zindagani ..sang tere bitani ..tujhmain basi hai meri jaan hai
jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak jaye ......
jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak jaye .....

kab se hai dil main mere armaan kayi ankahe ..
kab se hai dil main mere armaan kayi ankahe ..
inn ko tu sun le aaja ..chahat ke rang chadha ja
inn ko tu sun le aaja ..chahat ke rang chadha ja
kehna kabhi to mera maan hai
jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak jaye .....
jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak jaye .....

lagta hai yeh kyon mujhe sadiyon se chahoon tujhe ....
lagta hai yeh kyon mujhe sadiyon se chaoon tujhe
.mere sapnon main aake aapna mujhe ko bana ke ...
mere sapnon main aake aapna mujhe ko bana ke
mujh par tu kar ehsan hai ..
jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak jaye .....
jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak jaye .....

tujhe dekh dekh sona ...tujhe dekh kar hai jagna ..
maine yeh zindagani ..sang tere bitani ..tujhmain basi hai meri jaan hai
jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak jaye ......
jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak..jiya dhadhak dhadhak jaye ......

Pratham poore gaane ke dauran Gauri ko dekh raha hota hai … usse pata hi nahin chalta ki kab gaana khatam ho gaya hai …..par who dono abhi bhi dance kar rahe the ek doorse ki aankoon main aankhein dale hue ….tabhi gauri ko ehsas hota hai ki sab unko hi dekh rahein hain ..aur who Sharma jati hai ….aur wahan se jane lagti hai …
Sab haste hain …
Pratham ko bhi thoda ackward lagta hai ….
Sujal : …….. kya yaar tum bhi na ….
Pratham …sujal …..
Sujal : kya Sujal .. bolo kya Sujal …..
Pratham ……………..Kuch nahin who Gauri ko jaate dekhta hai aur …………………..

just walk into my life kahe deewanapan
just walk into my life kahe deewanapan
tainu dil wich rakh loon jane maan ..
tainu dil wich rakh loon janemaan
tainu dil wich rakh loooon janemann
just walk into my life kahe deewanapan
just walk into my life kahe deewanapan
tainu dil wich rakh loon jane maan ..
tainu dil wich rakh loon janemaan
tainu dil wich rakh looooon janemann

dil mera todo na ……………todo na
saath mera chodo na…………… chodo na
tumse hai meri ummedeein
just walk into my lihe kahe yeh pagalpan ..
tainu dil wich rakh loon janemaan
tainu dil wich rakh loon janemaa

tumse koi pyaraa ………………. pyaraa
dekhan nahin yyaaarra………….. yaaraaa
tuhi ho mera sahaara..
just walk into my life ..kahe meri dhadhkan ..
tainu dil wich rakh loon janemaan
tainu dil wich rakh loon janemaan

Sab uski taraf dekh rahein hote hain ..aur Gauri jahan khadi hoti ai wahi khadi reh jati hai …who peeche mud kar dekhti hai to uski aankhein ka saamna pratham ki aankhoon se hota hai ..pratham ki aankoon ko who padh sakti hai aaj aur who jaan gayi ki pratham usse bahut pyar karta hai ………….who uski taraf bhadhte hue gaati hai

pyar hi pyar doon …………..pyar doon
tumpe yah jaan waar doon……………….. waar doon
tum karo jara ishara ...
just walk into my life kahe aapna bandhan
tainu dil wich rakh loon janemaan
tainu dil wich rakh lon janemaan

just walk into my life kahe deewanapan
just walk into my life kahe deewanapan
tainu dil wich rakh loon jane maan ..
tainu dil wich rakh loon janemaan
tainu dil wich rakh loon janemann

dono ek doorse ki taraf bhadhte rehte hain …. Poori duniya se bekhabar ..aur ekk doorse ko dekhte hi jaate hain … aakhir main dono ek doosre ke gale lag jate hain …
Sab ki nigahein unko waapis duniya main lati hain ..aur dono Sharma jate hain ….
Sujal …: lo ek aur phas gaya …….
Kashish : kya kaha …. Ek aur ka kya matlab …
Sujal : matlab ki ek to main ..aur aab pratam …
Gautam : Sahi kaha …..
Kashish : kya kaha …tum phase ho !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sujal ……..
Sujal : are … main to mazaak kar raha tha ……. Tum nahin milti na to mera jaane kya hota hai …… jo aaj main hoon who sirf tumhari wajah se hoon ..i love u Kashish ..and he gives her a warm hug …
Gautam : areeeeeeeee tum ne to side badal ki Sujal …not fair……. Bhai main to nahin padne waala iss jhamele main ..not my cup of tea..……
Yeh sun ka Damini ko gussa aata hai ( as damini gautam se pyar karti hai …)Aur who wahan se uth kar chali jati hai …kashish yeh sab dekh ti hai ( who janti hai ki Damini Gautam se pyar karti hai )
Kashish: haan haan main tumse uss din poochoongi jab tumhain bhi pyar ho jayega … tab batana ..samjhe …
Gautam : pyar aur main ………….. forget it Kashish …
Kashish : Sahi keh rahi hoon ……. Whatever we'll see…
Gautam : haan dekh lena ….aur main bhi dekh raha hoon ….dekhta rahoonga…
Dia : Plzz aap sab baad main yeh sab discuss karna … mujhe der bhi ho rahi hai ….. agar jald hi nahin pahunchi to …
Gautam …are haan tumko chodhna bhi hai ….chalo ….
Chalo Pratham …Gauri ….Damini ……. Aab yeh kahan chali gayi ………..
Damini ..yahiin hoon ..kahin nahin gayi ……….haan chalo ….
Dia: bbye bhabhi …bye bhayia …..aur dono ke gale lag jati hai …
Kashish : aapne khayal rakhna Dia …
Dia …: aur aap dono bhi …wasie mujhe aap dono ki itni chinta nahin hai.. aap dono ek doorse ko dekhloge ………par aapna khayal rakhna …aur waise mera jab bhi dil karega main aati rahoongi …
Sujal : aur haan raat ko mujhe call jaroor kar dena ki sab theek hai …ghar par..
Dia : Raat ko ??????? hmmmmmmmmmm yeh keh kar who kashish ki taraf dekhti hai … aur wink karti hai ….phir sujal ki taraf..
Kashish : Sujal yeh bahut samjahdar ho gayi hai …lagta hai iske liye bhi koi dhoondhna padega ….. haan raat ko call kar dena ..samjhi
Dia: are bhabhi neki aur pooch pooch …
Kashish : wasie koi hai ya mujhe hi …..
Dia: fikar not bhabhi ……. Agar kabhi koi meri Zindagi main aayega ..to sabse pehle main aapko hai bataoongi … aapko nahin bataongi to kisko bataoongi ……..kyon bhayia …
Sujal:..sahi kaha ………………..
Aab chalo tumhain der bhi ho rahi hai …….. archie ke yahan sab tumhara wait kar rahein honge ..jaoo nahin to late ho jaoogi ….Love u kiddo …..
Dia : love u both of u …………………bbyeeeeeeee

Sab chale jaate hain … sirf Sujal aur Kashsih reh jate hain ……….

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Posted: 19 years ago

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ok jee manu yeah tak pst kar chuki hai and ab next part to all of u manu said ke yeah aap sab logo ke liye treat hai

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Posted: 19 years ago

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ok jee manu dedicated this part to ADI , KIREN and ME

TERA SAATH HAI TO…PART 2

Sujal aur Kashish aab dono saath saath hain ..
Sab ko chodhne ke baad dono andar aate hain ..kasish aage aur sujal uske peeche
Aandar aakar..Sujal Kashish ko peeche se pakadta hai … aur uske shoulder par aapna sar rakhta hai …..

Sujal : aaj main bahut khush hoon Kashish ..aaj meri zindagi mere paas hai …mere jeene ki dooor tum se shuru hoti hai aur tum par hi jakar khatam hoti hai ….mujhe aapne jeene ke har mayane aaj samajh main aagye hain …. Jeene ke ishare mile hain tumhain pakar …. Aaj pata lag raha hai zindagi kitni khoobsoorat hai agar aapko pyar karne waala aapke saath hai ….harr mod par who aapke saath hai …

Kashish : janti hoon sujal … meri to poori zindagi hi tum ho ….pyar ka har akshar tum se shuru hota hai aur tumhi par aakar rukta hai …I Love u …

Sujal : I love u tooo ……….. aur sujal kashish ko cheeks par kiss karta hai ….and then the nape of her neck ..finally he playfully hits his head with her's ..

Waqt mano them sa gaya hai …..pyar karna aur ussi pyar ko humsafar ke roop main paana kismat waaloon ke naseeb main hota hai …sach hi kaha hai kissi ne ….koi na koi iss duniya main bana hai aapke liye …. Bas usko pehchane ki der hoti hai ….har koi apni hamsafar chun kar hi iss dharti par aaya hai … aab usse kab ..kahan ….kaise mulakat hogi ..yeh to aapki takdeer par nirbhar karta hai …..
Jaise sujal aur kasish ki takdeer … aapne aap main ek doosre ko poora karti hui …harr lamha ..harr pal ek doorse ko samajhna …. Bina bole ek doosre ke dil ka haal jaan lena .. sab … bas yahi pyar hai ….

Sujal : hmmmmmmmmmm Kashish ..bas aaj waqt yahi tham jaye ……..kash..
Kashish :hmmmmmmmmm
Sujal : are haan …main to bhool hi gaya !!!!!!!!!
Kashish : kya …
Sujal : ek surprise hai tumhare liye ..
Kashish : mere liye ??
Sujal : haan ….room main rakha hai … jaoo jakar dekho …. Main aata hoon ..
Kashish : .k … love u … and runs after kissing him …
Sujal : hmmmmmmmmmmm love u tooo …………
Kashish ..upar room main jati hai ……… its beautifully decorated … with red color heart shaped balloons all around ….. filling up the entire room…kashish poore room main dekhti hai … usko cupboard ke mirror par kuch nazar aata hai …..
Usse Sujal ki handwriting main kuch milta hai wahan par laga hua

Iss dil ki rahoon main … aapnoon main ..saapnon main ..
Palkon ki chilman main …aankhon ke aansoon main …
Muskurate hoton par…har hasii chehre main …
Har lamha yaadon main … khoobsoorat mausam main ….
Footiti kaliyon main …. Khilte phoolon main ….
Suraj ki kiranon main …. Dhoop main …saaye main ….
Kadkadaate badal main …. Bearish ki boondoon main ……
Dhalti shamoon main … tanha raatoon main …
Raat ki tareek main …. Chaan ki roshni main ….
Taroon ki zhilmilahat main … khushboo main ….saanson main …..
Aankahee baatoon main ….. pyar main …..mohabbat main ….
Dhoondha tumko jahan main …..
Paya tumko aankhon main ………..

Kashish: I love u sujal ……….. bahut bahut ….aur who peeche mudti hai ……
Sujal : mujhe pata hai kashish ….sujal peeche khada tha ….yeh tumhare liye

… who sujal ki taraf dekhti hai …..uske haath main kuch hota hai ……… kashish : kya hai yeh ..
Sujal : khud hi dekh lo…
Kashish: hmmmmm laoo….. kashish packing kholti hai …. Usmain ek RED(WINE RED COLOR) color ki saari hoti hai ……….. plain saari with some work on the borders ………..wow …bahut sundar hai sujal …hmmmmmmm tumne pasand ki hai ????????
Sujal : ji haan meri choice hai ………
Kashish : hmmmmmmmm not a bad choice …
Sujal : haan who to hai ….. aakhir tum bhi to ……………. And he kisses her on the forehead ……. Kashish … plz saari daal kar dikhaoo…….
Kashish : abhi ….. mmmmmmmmmm .k … main abhi aayi …….aur who sujal ko kiss karke bhagti hai ….
Sujal : mmmmmm love u jaan and he hits his head playfully ………..
Uske room ke saath hi bada sa terrace hai …….. sujal ne usko bhi decorate kiya hua hai ..he puts on some light music …and waits for kashish …… with his back towards the door……..
Kashish ko phir se Mirror par ek chit milti hai ……………
Terrace
Tum aise aaye meri zindagi main …..saari kahani poori ho gayi …..
Haar pal kuch dhoondhti aankhon ki ..tanhaii door ho gayi ……
Tumse ek mulakat ne aisa asar kiya ….
tumhara ehsaas meri rooh main shamil ho gaya …
aisa lagta hai …mere zeene ka maksad poora ho gaya ……

kashish …mere zeena ka bhi …… tum jo mil gaye ho aisa lagta hai ki poori duniya aaj mere paas hai ……
who change karke aati hai ……….. needless to say ..she's looking gorgeous …with her hairs open … (khud hi imagine kar lo ..mere paas aur words nahin hain !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)……
who room main dekhti hai …usse Sujal nahin milta ……… par terrace waal door khula hua hota hai … who wahan dekhti hai……..usse sujal dikhayi deta hai ……… who chupke chupke uske paas jati hai …tabhi sujal peeche dekhta hai aur who usse dekhta hi reh jata hai ………….
Kashish : snaps her fingers in front of him … sujal …
Sujal : sits on one of his knees ………. Will u dance with me !!!!!!!!!!!!
Kashish : sure …
Sujal puts his hand on her waist and moves her closer ..and they both r lost in each other …..slow steps and slow songs completes the romantic atmosphere …..

teri bahoon main hum jeete marte rahein ..
yoonhi hum tumse pyar karte rahein ..
teri bahoon main hum jeete marte rahein ..
yoonhi hum tumse pyar karte rahein ..
humne dekhi nahin aise deewaangi ..
kamm na hogi kabhi aab ti dil ki lagi
jism se rooh main hum utarte rahein ..
yoonhi hum tumse pyar karte rahein ..

aaj karo tum humse bas chahat ki baatein
kaatne se katni nahin aab to tanha raatein
khwaab bana ke tumko aakhoon main rekh lenge
bekrariyan keh rahi hain hum chain tumko denge
aake aaghoosh main hum sawarte rahein
jism se rooh main hum utar ke rahein
teri bahoon main hum jeete marte rahein
yoonhi hum tumse pyar karte rahein
humne dekhi nahin aise deewaangi ..
kamm na hogi kabhi aab ti dil ki lagi
jism se rooh main hum utarte rahein ..
yoonhi hum tumse pyar karte rahein ..

yoon agar dekhoge deewana kardoge
ishq main humhein yaar tum to mastana kar doge
baat meri tum maano deewanapan chodo
na karo hamein bekaraar..kasmoon ko na todo
khushbooyon ki tarah hum bhikhare rahin
jism se rooh main hum utarte rahein
teri bahoon main hum jeete marte rahein
humne dekhi nahin aise deewaangi ..
kamm na hogi kabhi aab ti dil ki lagi
jism se rooh main hum utarte rahein ..
yoonhi hum tumse pyar karte rahein ..

teri bahoon main hum jeete marte rahein ..
yoonhi hum tumse pyar karte rahein ..
teri bahoon main hum jeete marte rahein ..
yoonhi hum tumse pyar karte rahein ..
humne dekhi nahin aise deewaangi ..
kamm na hogi kabhi aab ti dil ki lagi
jism se rooh main hum utarte rahein ..
yoonhi hum tumse pyar karte rahein ..

sujal aur kashish ek doosre ki aankhonn main khoye hue hain ………. Bas lagta hai ki jahan main wahi dono hain …………….they keep on dancing song after song…..

chup chup ke (bunty aur babli)

maan urr gya hai Dekhna marey sir say
Asmaan urr gya hai Dekhna asmaan kay sirey
Khulgye hein zmeen say ….Chup chup kay chup chup kay
Chori say chori chup chup kay rey…Chup chup kay chup chup kay
Chori say chori chup chup kay rey…Dekhna kya howa hai
Ye zameen beh rahi hai….Dekhna paniyoon main
Zameen ghul rahi hai kahi say….Dekhna asmaan kay sirey
Khulgye hein zmeen say

Chup chup kay chup chup kay…Chori say chori chup chup kay rey
Chup chup kay chup chup kay….Chori say chori chup chup kay rey

Hosh main main nahi…Ye ghashi bhi nahi
Is saadi main kabhi….Ye howa hi nahi
Jism ghulney laga…..Rooh galney lagi
Paon rukney lagey…..Rah chalney lagi
Asmaan badloon per…..Kerwatein ley raha hai
Dekhna asmman hi…..barsaneyLagey na
zameen perrrrr…………ye zameen paniyoon per
dubkiyaan le rahi hai…………dekhna khud kay pairoon
per chalney lagey na kahin………..Chup chup kay chup chup kay
Chori say chori chup chup kay rey……………Chup chup kay chup chup kay
Chori say chori chup chup kay rey…….

Tum kaho to rukein……………Tum kaho to chalein
Ye junoon hai ager……………To junoon soch lein
Tum kaho to rukein…………….Tum kaho to chalein
Mujh ko pehchanti hein…………….Kahan dhadkanien
Dekhna marey sir say…………………Asmaan urr gya hai
Dekhna asmaan kay sirey…………Khulgye hein zmeen say
Dekhna kya howa hai……………..Ye zameen ban than rahi hai
Dekhna paniyoon main……………………..Zameen ghul rahi hai kahin say

Chup chup kay chup chup kay…………..Chori say chori chup chup kay rey
Chup chup kay chup chup kay……………….Chori say chori chup chup kay rey

Kashish rests her head on his chest aur dono madhosh hokar dance kar rahein hain ………

O Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe
Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe
Tere Bin Tarase Nayan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

Aa Ja O Meri Jaan
Mere Dil Ka Jahaan
Maange Teri Khabar
Dhoondhe Tera Nishaan
Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe
Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe
Tere Bin Tarase Nayan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

Tera Tujhako Saunp De Kya Laagat Hai Mor
Mera Mujhamen Kuchh Naaheen Jo Hovat So Tor

Tere Bin Mera Man
Jaise Ban Men Hiran
Jaise Pagali Pawan
Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

Tabhi ek call aati hai ……..sujal check karta hai ……….call Dia ki hoti hai ……
Sujal : Dia … ghar par sab theek hai na..
Dia: bhayia ..waise main aap dono ko disturb nahin karna chahiti thi …………par aap worry karte ………haan sab theek hai ……..mujhe ke baar ko laga ki papa ko ….par nahin …… aab main rakh rahi hoon ……agar pata laga to pata nahin kya hoga …….bhabhi ko bahut saara pyar ……….sujal uss samay tak aapne cell ka loudspeaker on kar chukka hota hai ..isliye kashish bhi saari baat sun rahi hoti hai
Kashish : aapna dhyan rakhna dia ..plz … aur aaram aur dhyan se kamm karna ..nahin to prob ho jayegi ..aur main nahin chhait ki tumhain koi kuch kahe …….plzzzzz
Dia: no prob's bhabhi ..kuuch nahin hoga … jab aap dono mere saath hai to mujhe kissi cheez ki worry karne ki koi jaroorat nahin hai
(Jahan dia yeh sab baat kar rahi hoti hai ..wahi uske room ke bahar uski mom (VEENA) yeh sab sun rahi hoti hai ……..)
Dia: bbye bhayia…bbye bhabhi …….
Sujala aur kashish : bye..

Jaise hi Dia phone rakhti hai ..usse lagta hai ki darwaze par koi hai ..who uth kar kholti hai to usse aapni mom wahan dikhayi deti hai..who gharbra jati hai
Veena aandaar aati hai …….
Veena : Dia … tum sujal …………….
Dia ko yakeen ho jata hai ki veena na unki baat sun li hai ..
Dia : haan mumma main sujal bhayia se hi baat kar rahi thi ………….
Ye sun kar veena ki aankhon main aansoon aajate hain …
Veena : kasia hai Sujal ….Dia…..aur Kashish ?????????
Dia: theek hai mumma ……. Par aapko kya …..
Veena : Dia ….plz main sujal se baat karna chahti hoon ………
Dia: kya ………. Mumma main kuch nahin keh rahi hoon ..par ho sakta hai ki jo aapne kiya uske baad Sujal bhayia aap se baat na karna chahein …
Veena .: dia ….mujhe usse baat karni hai ……..
Dia: par Papa ……….
Veena : tu uski chinta mat kar …. Who dekhna mere kaam hai ……….
Dia Sujal ka number dial karti hai ……….
Udhar sujal doobara se Dia ki call dekh kar thoda pareshan ho jata hai ….
Sujal : kiddo…. Kya hua …. Koi prob to nahin ho gayi ……….( uska cell loudspeaker par hai ..taki kashish bhi sun sake ….)
Dia: ..nahin bhayia …kuch nahin hua hai ……….actually jab main aapse baat kar rahi thi to mom ne baat sun li thi …who aapse baat karna chahti hain …………
Sujal : Dia ..tumhain pata hai na … main ………
Kashish : sujal Plz …mumma baat karna chahti hai na …….plz ….
Veena : sujal ….. kashish ……… kaise ho …
Sujal baat nahin karta hai ..kashish answer karti hai …
Kashish : mummy …. Hum theek hain …aap kaise hain ……..
Veena : … kaisi ho sakti hoon ..kashish …aapne bete ki shadi nahin dekh payi main …….
Sujal : plzzzzzzz main aapka beta nahin hoon ……..
Veena : sujal …….. tum mere hi bete ho aur duniya ka koi bhi insaan iss baat ko nakara sabit nahin kar sakta hai …………samjhe tum ……..main manti hoon … uss din tumhare papa ke samne main kuch nahin keh payi …par kya hua agar tum mera khoon nahin ho to … tumhain maine hamesha aapne bete ki tarah pala hai ..aur tum iss ko palat nahin sakte ho ….
Sujal : plzzzz main kissi ka beta nahin hoon …. Anath hoon main ……..aur yahi sach hai .. haan ek sach aur hai …ki aapki beti meri behen hai … bas iske alawa koi aur rishta nahin hai mera aapse…..
Kashish: plzzz sujal … tum mummy ki baat maan kyon nahin lete ……..
Veena : sujal … tum mano ya na mano ……… maine ek baar galti ki hai ..uss din Mr. Garewal ka saath de kar … aab doobara nahin karoongi …… galati harr insaan se hoti hai sujal .. par iska matlab yeh to nahin ki tum kissi ko aapni galti sudharne ka koi mauka mat do …aab tak maine Mr. Garewal ka saath diya hai …aab main wohi karoongi jo mujhe theek lagta hai………
Dia : bhayia plz maan jaoo na …..
Sujal : Dia …. Tum bhi …..
Dia: haan bhayia ..kyonki maine mom ko dekha hai …aapke liye rote hua …. Aap dono ke liye … plz bhayia maan jaoo……..
Kashish: Sujal … tum kissi aur ki galti ki saza mummy ko kyon de rahe ho …. Mummy ne kya kiya hai ….. aapne pati ka saath hi diya hai na … galat to who bhi nahin hai ..par iska matlab yeh to nahin ki tum unse ristha tod do ….itne saal tum unke bete the …..sujal chahe ristha khoon ka na ho ..par rishta to dil se hota hai na …. Khoon ek nahin hai to kya hua …pyar to mummy ne tumhain shayad aapne bete se bhi bhadkar diya hai ..maan jaoo sujal ….
Veena : sujal …
Sujal : mom ..plz doobara plz mat boliyega …. M sorry maine apko bahut dukh diya hai …main bhool gaya tha ki ismain aap ki koi galti hi nahin hai …………. Plz mujhe maff kar dijiye …
Veena : sujal …aab kabhi mat jana chod kar … ek baar marte marte bachi hoon ….
Sujal : nahin jaoonga …
Dia: thanx bhayia…..
Sujal …thanx mujhe tumhara bolna chahiye …. Agar aaj tum nahin hoti to shayad …
Dia: bhaiya plz ….isse badi khushi mere liye aur kya hogi ki aap dono ke beech ki misunderstandings khatam ho gayi …….. aaj sach main main bahut khush hoon …..
Aapna khayal rakhna ….. aur bhabhi ka bhi …. Aapko fikar karne ki koi jaroorat nahin hai …hum aapke saath hain …
Veena : bbye beta … aapna khayal rakhna
Sujal …aap bhi ..bbye

Dia aapni mom ko gale laga leti hai ………..thanx mom …………veena …Dia….

Sujal …: pata nahin kashish …theek hua ki nahin…par aacha lag raha hai ….
Kashish ..sujal jo hota hai aache ke liye ho hota hai …hua hai …aur aage bhi hoga ..
Sujal : hmmmmmmmmm yeh to tum sahi keh rahi ho ………

Kuch Khushbuyen…Yaadon Ke Jungal Se Beh Chali
Kuch Khidkiyan………..Lamhon Ke Dastak Pe Khul Gayi
Kuch Geeth Purane Rakhe The Sirhaane…………
Kuch Sur Kahin Khoye The Bandish Mil Gaye

Jeene Ke Ishare Mil Gaye………..Bichde The Kinare Mil Gaye

Meri Zindagi Main Teri Baarish Kya Hui..Mere Raste Darya Bane Behne Lage
Meri Karvaton Ko Tune Aake Kya Chhua…..Kahin Khwab Neendon Ki Gali Rehne Lage

Jeene Ke...Kinare Mil Gaye………
Meri Loh Havaaon Se Jhagadkar Lee Uthi…….Mere Har Andhere Ko Ujale Pee Gaye
Tune Hasken Mujhse Muskurane Ko Kaha…Mere Man Ke Mausam Gulmohar Se Ho Gaye

Jeene Ke...Kinare Mil Gaye

Kuch Khushbuyen, Saanso Se Saanso Me Ghul Gayi
Kuch Khidikyan, Aankhon Hi Aankhon Me Khul Gayi
Kuch Pyaas Adhuri……….Kuch Shyam Sindhoori
Kuch Reshmi Gunahon…………Main Rate Dhal Gaye
Jeene Ke Ishare Mil Gaye…………Bichde The Kinare Mil Gaye

Sujal … and kashish are dancing …..

Hm hm hm, hm hm hm hm, hm hm, mm mm hm hm hm
Thoda sa pyaar hua hai, thoda hai baaqi
Thoda sa pyaar hua hai, thoda hai baaqi
Hum to dil de hi chuke, oh
Hum to dil de hi chuke, bas teri haan hai baaqi
Thoda sa pyaar hua hai, thoda hai baaqi
Mm, mm mm mm mm mm
Mm hm, hm mm hm hm hm
"Kaunsa mod aaya zindagi ke safar mein
Bas gaya tu hi tu ab to meri nazar mein"
dil ki har ek dhadkan tujhko pehchaanti hai
Meri chaahat hai ab kya, tu nahin jaanti hai
Main tujhe jaan gayi, oh
Tujhko pehchaan gayi, phir bhi teri haan hai baaqi
Thoda sa pyaar hua hai, thoda hai baaqi
Aaj yeh kya hua hai, dil nahin mera bas mein
Is liye sochti hoon tod doon saari rasmein
Umr bhar ke liye tu aa mera saath de de
Tera ho jaaoonga main, haathon mein haath de de
Haathon mein haath sahi, ho
Tu mere saath sahi, phir bhi teri haan hai baaqi
Thoda sa pyaar hua hai, thoda hai baaqi

Sujal kisses her on the forehead … and eyes and the cheeks ……..and finally on her lips … and the world seems to dissolves round them … finally he picks her up and went inside..

Oye manti hoon ki tum nikke nikke se bache nikke nikke nahin ho ..sab samajhte ho ..par meri kuch limits hain aakhir ……… nahin to mom kya bolengi ….chote chotoon ko yahi batati hai ………………..;)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

ok here is the next part of MANU story and pls pls post ur comments to MANU

Edited by shruti_gauri1 - 19 years ago

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Shruti

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Posted: 19 years ago

#104

ok i am the first one to comment on ur story manu ur story is just mindblowing 👏 and i luv ur shayris and song u used in ur story 👏 👏 👏 i think ur story will create a magic in coming days pls write a next part soon

luv u lot
shruti

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Shruti

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Posted: 19 years ago

#105

yeah niki we will surerly continue it soon

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#106

sorry could'nt comment all these days.....
farah jaldi se us piyush ka kabada karo 😊 ,
sawera plzz us tushaar ko sujal , kashish se durr rakho aur haan tum chaho tho sirf tushaar aur kashish ki engagement karo but plz undo ki shaddi mat karo 😃 ,
ana tumhare war & pyar ka kya kehna 😛 ,
natz ab jaldi se us tushaar ko gaddar bana do 😆,
shrutu dear wah wah wah wah wah bohat achche 👏 , shrutu tumne kaise soch liya ki main tumse naraz hongi...ek baat yaad rakhna main sapne mein bhi tumse naraaz hone ki baat nahi soch sakhthi...... 😳 ,
surbhi too good end dear & plz start writing a new fanfic soon 😃 ,
manu veryyyy nice............... 😊

all plz continue fast..... 😛

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Posted: 19 years ago

#107

ANA DII tooo goood fantastic story 👏
MANU DII yaar busy ho chatting ke liye bhi nahin aati 😭
but the story is a rocker.....absolutely mindblasting 👏

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KulBin

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Posted: 19 years ago

#108

first of all lklk rocking 👏 part tht was ur end is really minblowing.... thanks for such a lovely story...

then ana nice part bt seems it was little short part...

hey shruti thanks for posting manu's story... 😊

Manu ur story is really superb specially those writings on mirror r awsome...

Farah gr8 going yaar cont soon....

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Posted: 19 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: sun_423

shrutu dear wah wah wah wah wah bohat achche 👏 , shrutu tumne kaise soch liya ki main tumse naraz hongi...ek baat yaad rakhna main sapne mein bhi tumse naraaz hone ki baat nahi soch sakhthi...... 😳 ,
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manu veryyyy nice............... 😊

suri i know ki tum mujhse kabhi bhi naraz nahi ho sakti and that is very sweet of u and thanku dear for ur comment