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aww dharti!! that was a fabulous part yaar...continue soon...cant wait!! and nice homepage!! i didnt know ur a patel...i am one too..lol
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Dharti that was sooooooooooooo cute yaar...PLEASE continue soon 😛
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i just read the whole thing and its gr8... continue soon...

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hey guys! how r u all?? well i m sorry for not posting the part, but here i go....

NEXT PART

They both enter the cottage n leave their hands. Kripa walks further to explore the cottage, while Angad looks around for the wood as it was getting colder. Angad now walks to the side of the cottage, where he founds the woods. So he carries them to a spot where it wasn't wet n set it there. Now Kripa helps him to carry some more woods. Now Angad set the woods on a fire n sit infront of it to feels warm. Kripa sits opposite him for a while. Then she gets up n walks to the other side of the cottage where she found a cloth that looked nice. It was dirty, n it looked as if nodbody had ever touched it. So now she dries her hair with the cloth, as her hair were really wet which could make her sick. Now as she was drying her hair, Angad kept on looking at her (obviously!).

He looked at her for like 5 mins, n he finally stood up n started walking towards her. As he came closer, Kripa started to feel him coming close to her but she still behaved as she didn't knew anything which Angad noticed somehow. Now he's standing right behind her n was breathing on her neck. Kripa could easily feel his hot breathe on her cold neck. Then she felt Angad's arm slip around her tiny waist n got his face more closer to her n neck n started kissing her. As Kripa felt his warm touch, she wanted to turn around n hug him, but she knew this wasn't right, n it wasn't fair to Sonali. So now she turns around, n not wanting to pushes Angad away n says….

K (mad) = Angad, yeh kya batmizi hai??

A (coming closer) = yeh koi batmizi nahie hai!

Now he walked forward as Kripa moved back. Then she lightly hit the bricks, n now Angad was leaning on her. His face was like 3 inches away.

K (looking away) = Angad, yeh kya kar rahe ho??? Sonali ki ko pata chala toh??

A (still lokking her) = u know whats ur problem Kripa, u worry for others a lot! U don't care abt urself. But u always care for others. N u know something, I Love U Kripa, I Love U!!

Now for the first time, she looks at him straight in his eyes in disbelief. Then she slowly says….

K (shaky tone) = come again???

A = I Love U, I Love U a lot!!

Now Kripa could say anything or do something. She went numb. She just stare into Angad's eyes where she could cleary see the love she had been seeing from past some weeks. Today, for the first time, she felt as if that love wasn't for Sonali, but it was for her. The same love that Kripa saw in Angad's eyes was for Kripa which made her happy, really happy. Now as the thought crosses her mind, a tear forms in her eyes n makes it way to her cheek. Now Angad moves closer n kisses on top of the tear. Then he slowly moves n kisses her other cheek. Then he slowly slips his arm aound her waist n again started kissing her neck n shoulder. Now with more love, more passionately, with more feeling, n more attraction. Then Kripa finally manages to talk.

K (whisper) = Angad, plz leave me!

A = kyun???

K = because, I don't love u!

Now Angad stops kissing her n looks into her eyes n says…

A = say that again??

K (looking into her eyes) = Angad, I don't love!

A = I don't believe u! (coming closer) tum mujhse se pyaar karti ho, n I know it!

K (pushes him away n shouts) = well u have to believe me, cuz I don't love u, I never loved u, n I never will! N from next time, don't touch me plz!

A (still goiging closer n held her tight around her wrist) = u love me Kripa….

K (puches him away n shouts) = I don't love u Angad. I hate u Angad, I hate u!!

A (shouts) = u don't hate me! U cant hate me!!

K (shouts) = y cant I hate u????

A = because I know u love me dammit!!

K = ANGAD, JUST SHUT-UP!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't love u dammit, I don't!!

Now saying that she runs away from the cottage leaving a hurtful n a furious Angad behind. Angad was so mad that he didn't care where she was. He just couldne believe what she said! He knew she loved him but she didn't said that cuz Sonali was his girlfriend. He just hate the fact that she actually told him she hates him!

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After 2 Weeks

The camera zooms n takes us around a busy city, Mumbai. It was evening, n everybody were going back to their home from school, college, n from businesses. Then the camera zooms n again takes us to one of class in Mumbai University. It was a Drama class, n there u see a young man about 29 yrs old with a muscular body, fair skin, brown hair, n with blue eyes. He was pacing in the room, with Angad, Sonali, Aaliyah, Prithvi, Kshitij, n some other students sitting on the chairs. Then suddenly Angad gets up, n comes infront of the man n says…

A = sir, plz relax!

Sir = relax??? How can I relax when my Juliet broke her ankle! Now we have to find another girl who can play the character of Juliet, n I believe that it's impossible to find a girl who can play that role perfectly without any mistakes in 1 week. I need to find a girl who can perform in the play 'Romeo n Juliet' in front of thousands of people.

A = I know sir, I know! But u just need to chill right now!

Sir = chill?? Angad, u know what? Delhi University has challenged us in Drama competition, n if we loss this challenge, then we wont be able to meet our eyes with a simple, cheap college!!

Aa = sir, how abt Sonali???? I m sure she can play the character of Juliet very well with Angad being the Romeo.

Sir = Sonali???

Sonali = yes sir

Sir = come n stand beside Angad…

Sonali (standing bside Angad) = sir???

Sir = nope! They don't look good together! Plus Sonali is the last person I would go to for Juliet! She cant act!!

Sonali (happily) = Thank God!!!

Aa = sir, how abt Kripa????

Kripa who was lost in her own world now jerks up as she listen her Aaliyah saying her name.

Sir = Kripa, come n stand beside Angad…

K = but sir….

Sir = Kripa….

K = yes sir!

Now Kripa hesistately stand beside Angad n was feeling very uncomfortable which Angad sensed it. So now he took a steo away from her leaving a 3 foot distance between them. But then sir tells them to stand closely, so now they both don't have any choice. Now as they stand together, the teacher examine them closely n finally speaks up.

Sir = perfect! I think this is a perfect match!!

Sir = so its done that Kripa will be playing the character of Juliet n Angad the character of Romeo!

Sir (handing her some sheets) = Kripa, this r the sheets of the script, n I want u to memorize It all n from tomorrow the practice will start!

K (sad) = ok sir!

Sir = now, u all can leave.

Every1 = ok sir, see u tomorrow.

Now before leaving, Kripa goes to pick her up books. Right then she sees Aaliyah, so now she goes to her n says….

K = Aaliyah, yeh tumne kya kiya?? Y did u blurt out my name??

Aa = o com'n Kripa. U know ki yahan aur koi girl bhi nahie thi, aur I m sure ki u r the perfect girl who can play the character of Juliet. Plu Angad bhi toh tumhare saath hai! Now realx ok, n I'll see u tomorrow!

Saying that she leaves n Kripa thinks to herself…

K = isi ka toh dar hai ki Angad mere saath hai!

Now her eyes r watery, n from the corner of her eye, she could clearly see Angad n Sonali hugging eachother. She could clearly see Sonali's big smile, but she couldn't see Angad cuz his back was towards him. She thought Sonali was the only person who can give happiness, n the love to Angad more then Kripa can. Now with more teary eyes she walks by Angad n Sonali who were still hugging. She walks out of the classroom, a tear drop out of Angad's eye, but he quickly wipes it away before Sonali could see it. After hanging around the college for a while, they both go home as well.

Its 11:30 p.m. n u see a depressed Kripa trying to sleep. She tosses around for a while but was unable to find a comfy spot, so she gets up n walk to the window. She stands near the window n leans to it as she was feeling numb n tired. She wasn't eating properly since she came back from the camp. In the morning, she would make excuses saying she would eat in school; in school she would make excuses saying she ate it at home. The only meal she eats is dinner, n that also because of his family. But today, she didn't even ate that! Everyone believed her abt her excuses, except for Angad n Aaliyah. They knew she wasn't eating well, n Angad held himself responsible for that. Now as she stands leaning to the window, she closes her eyes as she remembers what had happened after the camp.

***** Flashbacks *****

( guys, in this flashbacks, I wrote some parts where it gives information abt Josh n Aaliyah's plan, n I just to let u all know that Kripa doesn't know all that. Its just I put I t over there so u guys can know a little abt Josh n Aaliyah's mind! )

The sun is shining up in the sky, n the camera zooms n takes us around the house. You see every1 were busy with themselves. Every1 were busy doing their packing, n checking every single drawer to see if they left something behind or not. Now the camera takes us up the stairs n in a room where we see a figure laying on the bed. He had a bandage on his forehead, n his right hand was factured. Then the camera gives us a clear look n we can see that its none other than, Angad. Yes Angad, after Kripa had left him at the cottage, Angad was really furious at himself, but more at Kripa. So he was really mad that he had actually hit his arm n head on the woods, n on the bricks until he was soaking in blood. He was injured badly, so he had fainted n lost a lot of blood over night.

Next morning, thanx to god, Josh had found some signals on his phone, so he had called Angad but he never picked up his phone n they knew something was worng. Since they both hadn't returned all night, so now Aaliyah n Josh went out to hunt for Angad n Kripa. Josh kept on calling Angad so atleast by listening to Angad's phone ringing they would know that A-K r here. After walking for like half an hour, they both had finally found Angad, but Kripa was still missing. They both were worried for Kripa, but more for Angad since he had lost lot of blood. Now without thinking about Kripa, they both hurried up n took Angad to the hospital. He was there for a week, n the whole week he wasn't eating properly, n was really weak.

After that week, doctors didn't had any choice but to release Angad. So now they both took him home, but the docs had told them to make sure they take such a good care of Angad. So that was the only reason they had to stay in Ahendabad for 2 more weeks. While Angad was in the hospital, Kripa had called Aaliyah n told her that she was back in Mumbai n not to care abt her. Aaliyah had told her abt Angad n she was really worried n she knew she was responsible for Angad's heath, but didn't showed it or expressed it. After being in Ahemdabad for two more days, the whole gang lands in Mumbai ready to start their daily routines.

After 2 more days, their college was starting up, n Angad was happy abt it. He thought he will get to see Kripa now, but to his utter surprise, Kripa never gave him any chance to even glance at her. She took morning classes so she doesn't have to see Angad in the canteen in the morning; she also took evening classes so she once again doesn't have to see Angad, n she had also changed her lunch which keeps her front coming in front of Angad. Now Angad, Aaliyah, n Josh were really worried abt this. They had never imagined being in this type of situation before. So now Josh n Aaliyah didn't had any choice but to put Angad n Kripa in Drama class, n made sure that they had to do all the plays together as a couple! Angad that was what happened!

***** End of Flashbacks *****

Now Kripa opens her eyes as she remembers all the sad moments that she had spent with Angad. By the end of the flashbacks, she was crying like hel* ; she was really sorry, n at this point she wished hadn't born in this world, she wished she had never fell in love with Angad, she just wished she could run away from all this sad moments, from the crowd, from her friends, from Drama class, n most of all, from Angad! Now as she turns around, she saw the clock had hit 12:15 a.m. so now she goes to the bathroom n washes her face with the cold water, n finally goes back to sleep.

now i hope this part is long! i tried to make it long!

Important: guys, i m thinking of ending this fan-fic! i had planned to make this a long story, but now i m thinking of ending it. but i have a new fan-fic ion my mind!

well now u all have to pick any 1 bullet from below.

  • End this fan-fic n start a new 1
  • dont end this fan-fic n forget abt the new 1! (lolz)
  • dont end this fan-fic, but start the new 1 as well!

so now u all have to pick either 1 of this n plz let me know, so i can plan ahead!

well thank u all for ur lovely comments! 😳

love u all loads,

Dharti! 😳

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Originally posted by: sweet honey

tht was wicked plz continue puja

Puja???? hose Puja??? 😕 😕 i m Dharti! 😃

i just hope u arent reading a wronf fan-fic! but if u arent then, i m Dharti n not Puja! 😃

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Originally posted by: Pooja922

aww dharti!! that was a fabulous part yaar...continue soon...cant wait!! and nice homepage!! i didnt know ur a patel...i am one too..lol

how did u know i m a Patel??? 😕

btw, Congrats on having a baby brother! 😳 i m so happy for u! 😳

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Hey continue soon.. 👏

And continue the fan fic and start the new one.. 😉

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