JWALA Akash-Gauri FF. Updated Jul 27, links on p.1 - Page 2

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Part
TWO

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I

Gauri was at her friend Lisa's wedding. Lisa used to work at the travel agency, but had switched jobs some time ago. Gauri and Lisa managed to stay friends, acting as a source of support for each other through life's turbulences. Somehow, Gauri felt safe confiding in Lisa. As the only one who knew the fears and desires of Gauri's heart, Lisa came to appreciate the growth Gauri had made from timid and shy to an increasingly self-confident woman. It had not been an easy journey.

Lisa's bridal trousseau was the colour of the purest white pearl. Gauri watched in silence as her friend's face radiated light and warmth. A sudden pang of loneliness struck at her. But she brushed it off. She had become really good at ignoring this part of her. The part of her that longed for love, for the kind of acceptance that she never felt in her own family. Strangely, she felt more validated by Devyani than she did by her own mother. But Savitri was perhaps not entirely to blame either. Gauri exited these thoughts abruptly, like she had many a time. She would not allow herself to think about this.

During the reception, Gauri got a moment alone with the busy bride and the two got to chatting. Mayank, Akash's new PA and also a friend of Lisa's, had also been invited to the wedding. He shyly waved at them from a distance. It was not that Mayank was a particularly shy man, but he hated big crowds and parties. Mayank was of simple origins, a middle class background, an adequate education, and a forward outlook. His features were largely ordinary, even if his tall height and distinctive smile set him apart in any crowd.

Mayank heard Lisa's laugh and glanced towards her direction. Gauri was blushing and rolling her eyes as Lisa continued to laugh, with her hand linked with Gauri's. What was Lisa teasing Gauri about now, wondered Mayank. Soon enough, Lisa and Gauri made their way towards him. He unconsciously straightened his long back.

"Mayank, how about a dance?" said Lisa
"Oh, you know I am not much of a dancer, Lisa.." he stammered
"Oh come on, practice makes perfect, Mayank, and it's not with me, it's Gauri I want you to dance with," she said. Before either of them could register any more protest, she left them standing at the edge of the dance floor, walking away but making sure to wink at Gauri.

Gauri hated when Lisa did things like this. She actually wanted to dance, but she made herself believe she didn't. A moment passed in silence. Mayank extended his hand towards her politely. "Well, then?" She smiled in response, gently accepting his hand. They stayed at the edge of the dance floor, dancing awkwardly and making small talk with each other. Looking at Gauri up close for the first time, he noticed her profoundly un-cosmetic glasses. Gauri was one of the most down to earth professionals he had ever met. The thin rims of her glasses really suited her, he thought. Her unsteady and unsure smile was coated with an unpretentious glisten. It was definitely not lipstick. It dawned on Mayank that she really had no idea how beautiful she was. The song had come to an end, and Gauri withdrew. And suddenly, Mayank had the awareness of a man who had unexpectedly, without warning, lost himself in a woman's face.

II

Devyani re-adjusted the curtains of her office. It was too sunny outside. In spite of it being a Saturday morning, she had come to the office to go over next week's merger meetings. The travel agency might need to merge with another company and turn into a partner with less than 50% shares. The company was doing much better now than it was a year ago, but the weight of old debts, the economic recession, and the impact of the competitors was tough to manage all at once.

Lost in thought, Devyani stood by the windows, reluctant to adjust the curtains. Devyani closed her eyes and thought of her late husband. How did he manage everything without getting so overwhelmed? Her admiration for him grew each day as she dealt with the burden of the business together with teaching Akash how to handle it. If Akash's father did anything wrong, it was his tendency to spoil Akash from a young age. He had intended for his son to enjoy every opportunity, every moment of light-hearted fun in life. He delayed giving him any responsibilities, gave him light punishments for leaving boarding school with his friends without permission, allowed him to focus on extra-curricular activities more than school work. Akash was certainly a bright young man, but he was not particularly given to hard work. She had protected him for a long time, offering him many chances to learn from his mistakes.

How long could I protect him, she wondered. Last week Devyani had spotted him yet again at another party, in the arms of a different girl. When will his playfulness end, and at which point would he taken on his responsibilities, she had asked him. He had somehow managed to weasel out of the situation. It was not that her son did not respect her. Akash grew up with a keen sense of admiration for his mother, particularly in her role as a strong single parent. But he was given to a general slackness in attitude and wanted to enjoy life before settling down with his responsibilities.

Devyani drew the curtains shut.

Returning to her desk, she sighed deeply at the documents that lay in front of her. The proposal from the other company. Their offer was valid for the next 6 months. Their options, as she saw it, was to agree and to become a unequal partner, or to make enough profit over the next 6 months that the worth of their shares would grow overall, leading to a bigger cut of the shares for them, maybe even equal partnership. There was also the faint possibility of keeping their business whole, avoiding the merger altogether, but for that, they would have to show remarkable progress, which was unlikely given their current situation.


III

Akash impatiently tapped his fingers against the steering wheel. Another signal. At this rate, he was going to be really late for Payal's party. Less than 2 seconds after the light changed colour, he dashed through it, making a sharp turn into her street. But he took considerable time getting to the door, glancing quickly in his rearview mirror before he grabbed a small red velvet bag that had been sitting on the passenger seat.

Payal answered the door promptly.
"Surprise," she said, assessing his slightly bewildered look as he entered.
"There's no party?"
"Of course there is, silly, except it's just not that kind of party," she said, reaching for his hand, "it's a party for just you and me."

Akash was used to women throwing themselves at him, but more than that, he enjoyed the pursuit. Payal had effectively ended the latter. He forcibly relaxed his face into a smile, sighing softly as he offered the bag to her.
"Something for you"
"For me? What is it?"
"Open it," he said, thinking to himself...of course it's for you, do you see anybody else here? He had the faint feeling of being tricked into this rendez-vous, but before he could think any further, she wrapped her arms around him.
"It's a beautiful bracelet, Akash! Thank you."
Yes, Mayank has good taste, he thought to himself.
Edited by --arti-- - 16 years ago
Anhdara13 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow Arti, that was brilliant. I love how you show both sides so well. I love Gauri's growth, and her realisation that her family has somewhat stifled the daughters, even if she tends not to accept it. I guess it's also hard to let your self believe something like that about the people that gave you life, gave you everything.

But Mayank, I really like him. So he's going to be the thrid party in the AkashGauri angle? (And I keep imagining Arjun BIjlani, especially when you mentioned that smile. Oh his smile!) I can see him becoming a good friend to both, and maybe helping them get together?

And Akash, he does not like these girls, then why does he put himself in this position? I cannot wait for more growth in his character, and hopefully this proposal for merger will see him working harder.

Awesome part Arti, and waiting for more!

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Mayank is the new angle? Awesome, at least koi angle toh aaya Akash aur Gauri ke beech mein. I can't wait to find out Akash's reaction when he finds out that Mayank likes Gauri. Too bad for him, that flimsy serumwrap of a guy who enjoys being a rake. šŸ‘ŽšŸ¼
Edited by rachna789 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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This is outstanding šŸ‘šŸ‘!!!! I am speechless!!! And totally hooked!!! Thanks so much for doing this!!!! LOVE it!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Wow Arti, that was brilliant. I love how you show both sides so well. I love Gauri's growth, and her realisation that her family has somewhat stifled the daughters, even if she tends not to accept it. I guess it's also hard to let your self believe something like that about the people that gave you life, gave you everything.

But Mayank, I really like him. So he's going to be the thrid party in the AkashGauri angle? (And I keep imagining Arjun BIjlani, especially when you mentioned that smile. Oh his smile!) I can see him becoming a good friend to both, and maybe helping them get together?

And Akash, he does not like these girls, then why does he put himself in this position? I cannot wait for more growth in his character, and hopefully this proposal for merger will see him working harder.

Awesome part Arti, and waiting for more!

Love,
Radz



Thanks for your comments, Radz! Yeah, Gauri is trying to come to terms with her family and how she has been treated, but I think it's also in her character to be really forgiving, so it will be hard for her to be angry at them.

Arjun is yum! Feel free to imagine him as Mayank. 😃 As for him becoming their friend.. that's a good suggestion, let's see where the story goes! (I have a few ideas but haven't determined yet how it will all play out!). Thanks for the ideas!

Yes, I think the merger will be something that definitely puts pressure on the plot and will change things for sure!

Originally posted by: rachna789

Mayank is the new angle? Awesome, at least koi angle toh aaya Akash aur Gauri ke beech mein. I can't wait to find out Akash's reaction when he finds out that Mayank likes Gauri. Too bad forhim, that flimsy serumwrap of a guy who enjoys being a rake. šŸ‘ŽšŸ¼



Yes! Exactly, I too wanted an angle between them. I think it spices things up for sure! LOL, Akash ko bade maze ki gaaliyan dete ho yaar!

Originally posted by: h&rblock

This is outstanding šŸ‘šŸ‘!!!! I am speechless!!! And totally hooked!!! Thanks so much for doing this!!!! LOVE it!!!!



Aw, thanks h&r. So sweet of you! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: --arti--


Thanks for your comments, Radz! Yeah, Gauri is trying to come to terms with her family and how she has been treated, but I think it's also in her character to be really forgiving, so it will be hard for her to be angry at them.

Arjun is yum! Feel free to imagine him as Mayank. 😃 As for him becoming their friend.. that's a good suggestion, let's see where the story goes! (I have a few ideas but haven't determined yet how it will all play out!). Thanks for the ideas!

Yes, I think the merger will be something that definitely puts pressure on the plot and will change things for sure!



Yeah, I agree, it is in Gauri's nature to be more forgiving, at least when compared to her sisters. šŸ˜† The rest all have such tempers, and give such long bhashans! šŸ˜†

Oh, I cannot wait to see what you write. I just realised I read one of your Adi-Maithilli FFs, and I absolutely love your writing style, so anything you write will be phenomenal!

I hope you update soon!

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Arti 😊
Awesome FF!! šŸ‘
Im already addicted! 😲
You've made me love the Akash-Gauri jodi! šŸ˜›
And lovely banner btw love the words and also they both look nice 😊
But they look even nicer in the one underneath wow Aleeza looks so different 😲
Love your writing style, very clear and pleasant 😃
Absolutely love Gauri's chaaracter, very slef-respecting, sweet, diligent, confident - talking back to Menka and advisin Akash - whoop whoop! 😃
"crutches" - haha so true šŸ˜†
Liked Gauri's reminiscing about Savitri, she annoys me at times šŸ˜•
Love your descriptions of Gauri - very pretty! šŸ˜›
Oooh Mayank's quite cute 😊
Oooh Im sure Gauri will help the company 😃
Hehe Akash doesn't like girls throwing themselves at him, like how you've slightly diluted him so he has flaws but he's not a horrible idiot
Cannot wait 2 read more šŸ˜›
Continue soon šŸ˜‰
Love TJ x
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wowww Arti! Y
ou are a very good writer! the words you used and how you describe things...just amazing šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘
Very Professional looking and easy for me to read(thank god!)...its hard to read and enjoy when people dont spell properly and use the short versions of words šŸ˜†

But i like where the story is going so far!! You described gauri wonderfully and it made me think whether or not it was THE Gauri from GKLB šŸ˜†
and aawwww mayank likes gauri!! ā¤ļø
Edited by Jess. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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btw love the banners/siggy's you made of akash gauri :)
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i really like this so far! can't wait for the rest!

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