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Hi guys i will be posting this story on every single show that i like so everyone could read it and tell me how they think this story would work if they did make a show with balaji telitimes...
I really loved the show karam apna apna, kasam se and kaisa yeh pyar hai which already ended
and right now im in love with the show kitni mohbbat hai.. i like all the jodis in every show but my most favorite was pallavi and iqbal in KAA..i really liked him with neha as well but when i saw vivan and neha's jodi..she looks much better with him ( vivan)...
Now i've thought of a story in my head that they can probably have in the tv show and i think it would be a really good story and i want everyones opinion if its good or not i know it will be confusing to read the story so im going to make up names for the show and then it will be much easier for everyone to understand
Mehak ( main lead female )
Raj ( main lead male )
pallavi ( mehaks sis )
shekhar ( Raj's freind )
Story :
Mehak is a middle class girl who works and provides everything for her family and she loves her younger sister pallavi dearly and can do anything for her..her sister pallavi works for a ad agency and dreams to become a supermodel..pallavi and shekhar ( raj's best freind ) are in love with each other and are dating and want to marry each other...one day shekhar asks raj to help him out with the wedding and go to pallavis house and ask for her hand with rajs parents because he's his best freind and shekhar parents passed away when he was young and since then he has been living with rajs family and they mean everything to him and he wants raj to be there for him and in every special moment of his life...raj goes to pallavis house with his parents for the propsal and that's the first time he see's mehak...rajs parents love pallavi and say yes to the marriage and also they love mehak as well and they ask for mehaks hand for raj and mehak and raj are in a shock.. raj does not care because his parents want him and his best freind to get married the same day and its better if they get married to 2 girls from the same family and raj does not mind a arrange marriage because he does not belive in love and he will do anything as his parents say..mehak says yes to the marriage to because she wants her parents to be happy and she wants to be close to her sister..the engagments happen and mehak kind of starts feeling something for raj but raj stil has no feeling for her in his heart as a freind he does...the wedding preperations begin..and a twist comes..mehaks sister paallavi who dreamed to become a super model gets an offer far away as a model and she is in a shock and she has to sign a contract saying that she cannot be married if shes goin to be a model and she does not know what to do because she is gettin married in 5 days and then her dream is right infront of her face..she does not tell anyone bout it and thinks alot about it and she signs the contract and tries to ran away before the wedding because she cannot break the propsal and doesnt know how to tell shekhar about it...the wedding has been all set and they are bout to get married and noone can find pallavi anywhere and everyone is in a shock and doesn't know what to do and where to find her and then shekar finds a envolpe in his room that pallavi had left for him and reads the letter that says everything on it about how she wants to become a super model and she has to leave him because that is her dream and for him to find another girl for him self and marry her...shekhar is a shock because he loved her so much and he kills him self by eating poisn..everyone is in a shock and raj is shattered because that was his bestfreind and he was like a younger brother to him...and that is when raj decides that he will take revenge for his bestfreinds life and he will still marry mehak and ruin her life because of what her sister did and she will have to pay for her sisters mistakes..and he marries mehak and tries to make her life as hell as he can..and then slowly slowly starts falling for her too...and then when he falls for her and after a few months they do fall for each other and start livin a good life and then a twist comes to where a new boy enters who was obbessed with mehak in college days and does anythin to get close to her and tries to kill raj.... anddd
that's it in my mind guys the rest of the story could be made up after :)
let me know how you guys like the story and hopefully they make a show like this
the characters i would like to see as the main lead's are
MALE : as Raj
IQBAL KHAN ( my 1st choice because i really liked him in KAA and the story is simillar to that and the role would be perfect for him and i am a big fan of his and want him to come back in a show )
Vivan Bhatena
inderneil sengupta
harshad chopra
FEMALE : As Mehak
Divanyka from dulhan ( she's my first choice because the role is perfect for her )
Pallavi/Gauri from KAA
Prachi desai
pooja bose
Arohii from kitni mohabat hai
........
I really loved the show karam apna apna, kasam se and kaisa yeh pyar hai which already ended
and right now im in love with the show kitni mohbbat hai.. i like all the jodis in every show but my most favorite was pallavi and iqbal in KAA..i really liked him with neha as well but when i saw vivan and neha's jodi..she looks much better with him ( vivan)...
Now i've thought of a story in my head that they can probably have in the tv show and i think it would be a really good story and i want everyones opinion if its good or not i know it will be confusing to read the story so im going to make up names for the show and then it will be much easier for everyone to understand
Mehak ( main lead female )
Raj ( main lead male )
pallavi ( mehaks sis )
shekhar ( Raj's freind )
Story :
Mehak is a middle class girl who works and provides everything for her family and she loves her younger sister pallavi dearly and can do anything for her..her sister pallavi works for a ad agency and dreams to become a supermodel..pallavi and shekhar ( raj's best freind ) are in love with each other and are dating and want to marry each other...one day shekhar asks raj to help him out with the wedding and go to pallavis house and ask for her hand with rajs parents because he's his best freind and shekhar parents passed away when he was young and since then he has been living with rajs family and they mean everything to him and he wants raj to be there for him and in every special moment of his life...raj goes to pallavis house with his parents for the propsal and that's the first time he see's mehak...rajs parents love pallavi and say yes to the marriage and also they love mehak as well and they ask for mehaks hand for raj and mehak and raj are in a shock.. raj does not care because his parents want him and his best freind to get married the same day and its better if they get married to 2 girls from the same family and raj does not mind a arrange marriage because he does not belive in love and he will do anything as his parents say..mehak says yes to the marriage to because she wants her parents to be happy and she wants to be close to her sister..the engagments happen and mehak kind of starts feeling something for raj but raj stil has no feeling for her in his heart as a freind he does...the wedding preperations begin..and a twist comes..mehaks sister paallavi who dreamed to become a super model gets an offer far away as a model and she is in a shock and she has to sign a contract saying that she cannot be married if shes goin to be a model and she does not know what to do because she is gettin married in 5 days and then her dream is right infront of her face..she does not tell anyone bout it and thinks alot about it and she signs the contract and tries to ran away before the wedding because she cannot break the propsal and doesnt know how to tell shekhar about it...the wedding has been all set and they are bout to get married and noone can find pallavi anywhere and everyone is in a shock and doesn't know what to do and where to find her and then shekar finds a envolpe in his room that pallavi had left for him and reads the letter that says everything on it about how she wants to become a super model and she has to leave him because that is her dream and for him to find another girl for him self and marry her...shekhar is a shock because he loved her so much and he kills him self by eating poisn..everyone is in a shock and raj is shattered because that was his bestfreind and he was like a younger brother to him...and that is when raj decides that he will take revenge for his bestfreinds life and he will still marry mehak and ruin her life because of what her sister did and she will have to pay for her sisters mistakes..and he marries mehak and tries to make her life as hell as he can..and then slowly slowly starts falling for her too...and then when he falls for her and after a few months they do fall for each other and start livin a good life and then a twist comes to where a new boy enters who was obbessed with mehak in college days and does anythin to get close to her and tries to kill raj.... anddd
that's it in my mind guys the rest of the story could be made up after :)
let me know how you guys like the story and hopefully they make a show like this
the characters i would like to see as the main lead's are
MALE : as Raj
IQBAL KHAN ( my 1st choice because i really liked him in KAA and the story is simillar to that and the role would be perfect for him and i am a big fan of his and want him to come back in a show )
Vivan Bhatena
inderneil sengupta
harshad chopra
FEMALE : As Mehak
Divanyka from dulhan ( she's my first choice because the role is perfect for her )
Pallavi/Gauri from KAA
Prachi desai
pooja bose
Arohii from kitni mohabat hai
........
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