FF|Pyaar Toh Hona Hi Tha| Ch 7, Pg 26 - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
#91

Hello! 😃

Meera sent me this FF and I just thought it was awesome!! The story grabbed my attention from the preview. It's a nice twist how Meera is not madly in love with Prem (Unlike in real life 😆😆😆).
The first part was very sweet. I'm loving Ravjot's character, she seems independent care free, which was explained with the flash back. I loved the flashback! The story idea is so new, and the boding between Meera and Ravjot was really adorable. I wonder who the guy was in the elevator 😳😳 I wonder if he's going to be on the plane with her 😉.
I loved the inner dialogue with Meera. I think every girl has that at one point in her life. I could totally imagine Meera doing it, cause she does live for her dreams and falling in love is very important to her. Can't wait until Prem's character is introduced! It'll be fun to see how Prem and Meera become close and Meera finds a way to his heart 😳😳😳.
Please! Please! Post the next part soon! Can't wait to read it! Fabulous job! 👏.
Love always,
Rushvi 😳
Edited by rushvi99 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

Thanks Munam. Hmm...I donno. Monkey maybe?😳 Yea...She has a Gucci watch..I want one too!🥱 I know. And hopefully no one ruins it for her either.
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😲 r u planing something like this????

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Posted: 16 years ago
#93
My comment has been edited.
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Thank you so much for the PM Shifs!

This spot is mine.
*edited*
Firstly, why am I not surprised Ravzie was almost late? 😆 Sorry Ravsie, but you seem the type. Shifu, I loved the way you've expressed the friendship, which really, needs a name all of its own, because it's so much more than just friendship. It's so sweet. They're like sisters, but they don't seem to fight as much. 😆
Thanks😳 And ya, what shall we call thier friendship?
And OMG, Ravzie got such a moment, and she didn't even look at her saviour's face? RAVZIE! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING! Or rather, why weren't you thinking? 😆 When will they come face-to-face? 😉
Haha, you will come to know why I didn't make them come face to face😆
Aw, the Meera part was sweet, and rather melancholic no? She still wants to dream about her Prince Charming, but she's getting married, somewhat for her family. There's a story behind that, which I'm aching to know. But I can wait, because you express things so beautifully.
Thank you sooo much Radz😳
Erm, Meeru has conversations in her head? I'd call her schizo, but I do the same. *whistles* Heh. yeah. 😆 Anywho, Meeru, no need to fret, Prem is your Prince Charming, he just needs to get hit over the head by Yug, or someone (me! me!)
He IS her Prince Charming and just like Yug is for Ravjot😆
Waiting for part 2. 😃
Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: muqualp

where is the next part! i wanna see meeru fall in love with Prem! :D and soon! oh i still have to read chapter 1...brb

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hmm loved the first chapter...love how u described meera and ravz relationship 😊

Thanks Muqu😳

and the "someone" is yug right? so cute!
I donno, you will have to wait and watch😆

the meera talking to herself part - awesome... i can so imagine her doing taht in real life too 😳😛
Thank you soo much Muqu😳

and again....post the next part!!! SOOON, we want to meet Prem and Yug

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Posted: 16 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: rushvi99

Hello! 😃

Meera sent me this FF and I just thought it was awesome!! The story grabbed my attention from the preview. It's a nice twist how Meera is not madly in love with Prem (Unlike in real life 😆😆😆).
Haha, I know. I wanted to torture Meera in the FF...something different but that is what makes our better writers...I actually love Meera's mood swings in the FF😆
The first part was very sweet. I'm loving Ravjot's character, she seems independent care free, which was explained with the flash back. I loved the flashback! The story idea is so new, and the boding between Meera and Ravjot was really adorable. I wonder who the guy was in the elevator 😳😳 I wonder if he's going to be on the plane with her 😉.
Erm...maybe he will be the pilot...you know na? *Tries to hide the truth*😆
I loved the inner dialogue with Meera. I think every girl has that at one point in her life. I could totally imagine Meera doing it, cause she does live for her dreams and falling in love is very important to her. Can't wait until Prem's character is introduced! It'll be fun to see how Prem and Meera become close and Meera finds a way to his heart 😳😳😳.
Yea...Meera will find a way to his heart and this time, it will not be the stomach😆
Please! Please! Post the next part soon! Can't wait to read it! Fabulous job! 👏.
Love always,
Rushvi 😳

Thanks Rushvi for commenting.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97

OK, so now, everyone, especially Ravjot and Meera and me myself have higher expections from me writing this FF and I hope that I can do full justice.

BTW, this is the FASTEST Chapter Update for ANY Fan-Fic that I ever wrote! Last Update: March 15, 2009, and yes, it is 2009 and NOT 2008!!😆

Chapter 3

Meera continued to get confused over what to do and what not to do, when she got a phone call from Ravjot. Meera picks the phone up.


"Hello Ravjot" greets Meera.


"Hey Meeru Sheeru, acha, I wanted to tell you that I am at the airport, and I would board my flight any moment. Just thought of informing you. I was thinking of giving you a surprise but I just noticed that you are surprised enough that you are getting married that I would have nearly scared you then surprised you." Ravjot says, in just one breath.


"Ravs! Take a deep breath! Tu itna maat bola kar!" says Meera. "And thanks for telling me, I will make the necessary arrangement for you, OK?"


"Uff! That is why I don't call you. You become soo formal! Main apna arrangement khud hi kar sakti hoon. You just relax." replies Ravjot.


"Ravjot! You are coming after 4 years, ofcourse I will get worried and waise bhi, I am sure that you were probably late for the airport, weren't you?." Meera asks politely.

"Meera! How do you know me so well?" Ravs asks, proven guilty.
Meera giggles. "Just like you know me." Meera smiles. Ravs does too.
"Acha meri ma! Now listen, don't get too worried about me and I will see you in India now...and Jiju aswell!" replies Ravs.
Ravjot clicks 'Call End' on her iPhone and smiles to herself, before proceeding to the Check-in counter. While at the check-in counter, she doesn't find a big line up of people. Ravs checks her watch and smiles "Perfectly on time" she mutters to herself.
"What? I missed my flight? But how? I am perfectly on time, aren't I?" the person infront of her at the counter, a guy asks the lady on the counter.
"Sir, no. You wanted to leave for India but your flight was at 8am and not 11am. The time on your ticket is wrong." explains the ticket lady.
Ravjot just smiles to herself seeing the argument.
~*~
"What? I missed my flight? But how? I am perfectly on time, aren't I?" Yug asks the lady on the counter.
"Sir, no. You wanted to leave for India but your flight was at 8am and not 11am. The time on your ticket is wrong." explains the ticket lady.
"But how is that possible? My ticket says 11am, doesn't it?" asks a confused Yug.
"Sir, the time on the ticket may be right, but the flight name and number is wrong. The name written on your ticket is Air India but here, there is no Air India flight leaving for India at 11am. The Air Canada flight left for India at 8am. There is an Air Canada flight leaving for India at 11am, which is this flight. Now I don't know if your ticket's time or flight is wrong but I can't let you board the flight. That is just not possible." explains the ticket lady.
"So is nothing possible?" asks a sulken Yug.
The lady shakes her head. "No Sir, but if you could get a ticket trade with any passenger of Air Canada, then things can work out."
"Thank You." says Yug and gives his cute smile. "Air Canada passenger....hmmm"
~End of Ch 2.~
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
mine! 😃

*unreserved*

Oh shush you about expectations....you have to know, that you will ALWAYS exceed my expectations!😳😳😳 but yes I'm super proud of you updating soooo quickly! 😃 I was hoping for a faster one next time...but it's okie! 😉😳 You know you still love me! 😃

Meeru Sheeru?😳 I love the nicknames I get here!😆😆😆 Damn does Ravs talk fast or what?😆 But surprisingly I caught it all!😉😆

This was my fav: " Meera! How do you know me so well?" Ravs asks, proven guilty. Meera giggles. "Just like you know me." Meera smiles. Ravs does too. " You protrayed the friendship so cutely!😳

Awww poor "guy" ! 😊 he missed his flight? Oh well...that's kinda what Ravs is for!😉😃😆

Side comment...I hate Air India and AIr Canada!😆😆 (not that it matters...but just thought you should know!😉😆) Can not wait to see how you continue with them! 😃 Ahhh I love when ppl fight first!😍 And now that I've started watching TSPLS....I can imagine Yug and Ravzie together too! 😃😳 Crazy...yet true! 😛

Continue soon! 😃

Love you,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
Wow Shifali you're right! This IS the fastest update! *gives you an iced cap* And you always do justice to whatever you write =)
Omg Shifali you know me so well! You even included the part about me talking so much😆 I feel special =)
Shoot Meera does know me well😆 I was hoping she wouldn't know I was late. So much for that😆
And it's just like me to smile at other people's arguements😆 Well I do feel bad after =) Aww poor Yug got the wrong ticket? Well at least I got the right one😃
Ticket trade? Uh-oh. He better not swap tickets with me! As much as I love him an all, I'd rather have him take somebody else's ticket instead so that I can sit with him for hours😍
Loved the update Shifali! Like always, it exeeded my expectations, not that I had any cuz I knew you would go beyond it😃
Can't wait to read the next update =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh and Ariba is sick and won't be on for a while but she wanted me to tell you that she's read all the parts and really liked them. Especially the part where Yug needs a ticket to go to India😆
Btw those were exact words, including the smiley😆

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