FF Murder Mystery Ch 3: Pg 14 Jan 29 - Page 7

Originally posted by: kimmu

Stop it Rinki!! Or you can just say hi to Preets new girlfriend. *cough* Sukriti! *smirks* --- Go and try to put Kris in the hospital. I will not tolerate it. *hmph*

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

I give props to Kimz for thinking of it! 😛 Keep in mind I haven't posted my update yet! 😉

thanks for the offer ladies, but i already have the angel scene done..heh

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

-edited- ---finally, not that i'm saying anything. I still have to update my comment too. 😆

helloww...yesh i am finally updating this! ---and i'm glad. 😃

heh firstly...its shushi's b-day [was] but w/e! so lemme scream this out "Happy Belated Birthday Shushant" 😍🥳 i hope all of his wishes came true, and he always rules the TV and our hearts with his acting, and sweetness... ---Aww what a shweet message. Wouldn't it be awesome if Sushant was reading this, and found out about you and him? *watches rinkz blush*

now on to the actual prt, hehe i loved this part...its so cute! i felt so bad for preet, im causing trouble for him but...*rofl* i AM too good at pranking him 😆 ---Ooh yeaa... but I'm the one coming up with the pranks. *grins* Thank you thank you for your applouds. *proud muh* aww preet is gussa with me...*erm* maybe i shouldn't have been so rough on him...*thinks* NAHH...😆 besides i cant just not bug him, tht isn't like me...*looks arnd* ---Actually you'll know the reaal reason why your bugging him SO much. Your gonna be doing something else kinda funny too in this next part. Muahaha... i think...heh sujal is such a party pooper, u can totally tell frm the beginning of his intro, all strict...---Yup! Thats how I wanted him. 😃 heh me and shabd are busy "giggling" to ourselves 😆 poor preet, so embarassed and unable to say anything in defense... ---Yeaa... aren't you always giggling at peoples misery? 😆

i swear i rlly do start blushing when i read this line, ""I noticed the only seat left was the one next to my dear Rubina Singh aka that vixen"....haiii *goes to preetland* ---Awww!! Glad you liked itt... get used it. 😳😆😆 hehe he growled...i giggled...again...lmaoo shabd is giggling with me! alrite partner! lolz...i love this guy i swear, he's gnna be awesome as my best friend...heh...imagine the pain we would make preet go through...plus preet already hates shabd for some reason...🤔 ---Yupp! Your going to love him, he's like the perfect partner in crime for you! 😆

aww tht premeer scene was too cute, all subtle and making preet think carefully, causing him to not hear sujal talking! ---Well actually... Preet has this problem, that you prolly have to, being distracted by things when boring people start talking. 😆😆😆 aww he leaves all gusaa and dramaticly...trying to act like us when we do our *dms* 😆 ---Sujal or Preet? They both left kinda dramatically... hmmm...

yikes! preet tried to attack me, thanks shabd! or else, i bet preet would've tried to choke me heh i am so evil...hehe telling him his car's being towed...*rofl* but haiii he know wht i get...*blush* heh byyeee preet!!! im the youngest...oh yea! they're all oldies for me now....especially Sujal!! 😆😆 ---You knoww you wouldv'e love it if he TOUCHED YOUR NECK! Stop blushing. Yeaa.. Shabds and Prem are your saviours. But he wouldn't have really shocked youu... i think. Unless you like threateneed him or something. 😆😆

haii these lines..."Even though I hated how miserable she made my life, I wondered how boring life would be without her. We fought a lot, but I couldn't imagine a day without her. She was what brought life into my live. " *sighs dreamingly* i luuurve preet! 😳😳 damn u kimz for making me blush!! *glares* ---*smirks* I love you too. Yeshhh! Mission accomplished. 😆😆

dead bodies as presents...poor preet! tsk tsk, lolz ahh shabd is too funny! "im not a dimwit" ah i rlly wanna know abt his and preet's rivalry thing...---Yeaaa! I like Shabds character too, all snappy-backy kind. 😆

heh that comment abt girls doesnt offend me rlly...i could care less wht i look like, i just get up, do the norms and then change, brush my hair and do something simple and easy with it and leave the house...sometimes putting on eyeliner, but thts it...😆 ---Samee... but your a feminist in here. And your kind of aruguing with him, so have to be defensive and all, right? ah poison in lipstick? hmm...i just dnt wanna agree with preet in front of someone and him especially! 😆--- How well you understand yourself. 😆😆

tht prt abt me being awkward i totally get...its the whole "i like u but i dnt wanna show it, but dnt go near some other chick or else ill kill u with my bare hands" 🥱 heh i think at least 😆😆 ---Yuurrp! You got it. Lovely relationship right? 😆😆

well i loved this part, u know tht already...anything with preet in it, im happy as a ducky! 😆 ---All parts have Preet in it. 😆😆

luv Rinks ---luv ya rinks!

[should i say vixen instead now then? 😆] ---Suureee... how bout Prat-Vixen. *kimz blushes*😆😆

Hey everyone! See I kind of fulfilled my promise about updating today. Just a hour and half late... Well not in California though. *smirks* SO its kind of still Friday.

Anyway's I hope you guys enjoy the part. I'm not sure when I'll be able to update next. Because I have Science Fair coming up, and guess who will be at Science Fair! Yupp! Ahmed! --- I'll be staring away... Usman's to dumb to participate in the Science Fair so he won't be there. Oh welll... Crap, I talk too much. Enjooyy!

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Chapter 2

"Two more left," Heer said taking a sigh while walking away from Satya. He was Rishab's assistant, and was the one taking care of all the arrangement at the party. Prem had been noting everything down while Heer talked. Everyone was tired. Most of the guests had arrived at around five pm, and almost half an hour later ambulances arrived outside of the hotel. With a short break, the police had started too arrive too, as the dead bodies had been declared a murder. Now it was around ten pm, as Prem and Heer got to there last witnesses. Though they hadn't witnessed the crime, they had been at the location, and anyone could have seen anything.

So far they had found out that Veera had been kicked out of her home for having an affair with her father's business rival. Her father had been quite upset at the discovery, and some say he had even beaten her, but there were no charges against him. He was a definite suspect in the case.

But there was also Nihaal, whom she was to be engaged too. It was at the engagement party that clips of Rishab and Veera together had been shown. Some said Nihaal had gone ballistic, and even threatened to "kill that slut". He could have been saying it out of anger, but he had the motive and the frustration.

They had even caught others gossiping about how it could have been Dheer, Rishab's younger brother. After Veera had come in Rishab's life, Rishab was planning on giving more than half of his earnings to Veera, rather than Dheer; which made him another suspect, because he also had a strong motive.

"Are you tired?" Prem asked sympathetically. He was also tired, his hands were cramped from writing so much.

"Yes, but you must be more tired," she said looking back at him while walking. "You've been doing all the writing. I'm only talking."

Prem smiled at her. "Talking can make all the difference," he said. She didn't know what that was supposed to mean, but she thought it was an inference to their relationship, which made her blush. In the beginning, she had never taken the time to even look at him. He had always been attracted to her. But one way or another, whenever he tried to talk, things would come up and he would end up being ignored by her, which at times frustrated him. Their first case together, which was recent, had given them the proper time with each other. As they finally got to talk, she too realized that she felt something for him. And the longer they stayed together, the harder it became for them to stay away from each other. In a matter of two weeks they had developed a relationship only they understood.

They reached Sumer Singh, the sixty-seventh person they had interviewed this evening. The work had been divided up between several people, but they had gotten most of the list, since their team was in charge of the case. "Hello," Heer started off.

"Good evening," he replied, in his dark voice. There was something very creepy about this guy.

"Can you tell me if you saw anything suspicious today... anything outside, or inside?" she asked, cutting out every other un-important question she had been asking the people she earlier interrogated. She wanted to get this over with quickly. His gaze shifted from her face.

"Um... no," he said, distracted.

Prem looked up at Sumer as he heard the familiar lust in his voice. He gritted his teeth and slammed the pen on the notepad. "What are you looking at!?" Sumer's gaze quickly shifted from Heer's cleavage to Prem's face, feeling embarrassed. "You! Come here!" Prem ordered Heer while moving away from Sumer. Confused, she followed him a few steps away from the old man.

"What's wrong Prem?" she whispered, not wanting to attract more attention to them. He didn't bother to answer her question and proceeded to put the pad of paper and pen on the table. He freed the papers from the paperclip. "What are you doing?"

Once again, Prem ignored her question and took a step towards her. She flinched as his hands inched towards her chest with the paperclip in his hand. Annoyed, he pulled her back holding her arm and replaced the broken button of her shirt with the paperclip. "Do you know how many guys have been staring at you?" he asked while fastening it correctly.

She looked up at him, flustered, not sure what to say. "And you couldn't have mentioned this earlier?" she was whispering, not wanting any of her colleagues to find out of the situation she found to be very embarrassing.

"Well... I was kind of staring too..." he sheepishly smiled, while pulling away from her. "Do you wanna leave now? I'm sure that kid over there would be glad to ask questions from the last person for us." He put his hands on his hips, hoping to change the subject, but he really did want to leave now. It took Heer a few seconds to focus on something else as she looked down at the paperclip.

"Yea... definitely..." she muttered.

"Okay, let me just give him this list... wait give me back that paperclip and you go give the list to him, I'm sure he'd be much more happy then..." he said, pretending to be serious. Heer gave him a deadly look, making him chuckle and walk over to the 'kid' in the unit. Being at a higher position, it was easier for him to bully people on a lower height.

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I arrived at our office around eleven pm, with Rinki behind me. I should have never let her drive my car. She's crazy; she circled a Starbucks shop at least twenty times. With the excuse that she had lost a penny somewhere around there, and she wanted to look for it, now! I was very tired, so I decided not to argue for a while, thinking she would get over it later on. But no, she kept it up for a whole ten minutes, I couldn't take it anymore I screamed as loud as I could and told her to "FORGET THE PENNY!" I think I was kind of harsh, because I had seen a flash of fear sit in her eyes for a while. It made me feel guilty, but I wasn't going to say sorry, because my ego was in the way.

I sighed, and held my head in the darkness of the office. What a horrible day today had been. Only an hour left until the day would end, and I wished that it would go by as quickly as possible. This had to be his worst birthday ever.

Before I could react, all the lights in the office turned on by themselves and I heard a small crowd yell "Surprise!" Usually surprises weren't much of surprises for me, because I could always tell when someone was throwing a surprise party, which always ruined it for everyone. Because I never reacted the way I was supposed to. And my initial reaction was much different. When I thought things were at their worst, this small get-together had done the work to cheer me up more than anything could ever. I could tell this was planned by my Vixen; I looked behind me to see where she was. I was surprised to not find her behind me. My heart tugged at me, wanting to go and look for her, but I was being pulled in by the crowd.

"I'm right here you big dummy!" Rinki yelled in more of a mumble near the cake. She had made it herself, vanilla with chocolate icing. Especially for him, she had entered the kitchen in her apartment for the first time. It took her the whole night yesterday to finish the cake, and the whole morning she had spent in annoying Preet, so he wouldn't suspect the surprise that was planned. She knew how good of a detective he was, but keeping him distracted seemed to lower his 'abilities'. It had hurt her when he had suddenly yelled at her in the car, she had been shaken up. That tone was a first from him for her, but she knew she was at fault too.

"But... you were..." I said looking around, fully confused now.

"I used to have a cat..." Rinki started off. "... We used to play tag." She said while shrugging, I think she thought I understood. And I did, she had crawled all the way there in the dark. I had to admit, though, that she was very sneaky. I felt like giving her a hug, as her whole plan finally registered in my head. I really felt bad now. She had outsmarted me, and instead of being jealous I felt good that she had.

I walked towards the table as Rinki started to light all the candles. I waited for a while staring at the cake. I could tell she made it, maybe accidently, but the cake read "Happy Birthday Prat!" and only she called me that, plus her hand writing was identifiable for me. I admired her as she lit the last candles for a while... she had done so much for me, and this is how I treated her? I think she knew I felt guilty, because she nodded at me as she straightened up after lighting all the candles.

I wanted to talk to her alone, but went on with blowing the candles. I remembered how I used to wish for something before blowing the candles when I was little. So this time, I made a promise to myself, that I would never yell at Rinki again, and I wished she would always remain happy. Cutting the cake, which looked delicious, I gave the first piece to her. Everyone clapped as she fed me back.

I didn't realize when Rinki had slipped out of the room as everyone else started to crowd around me. I knew she was still upset, and I also knew there was a bigger reason to it. It couldn't have been just because of me yelling at her rudely, I think it had triggered a past memory. Her eyes had fallen so dark when I had suddenly broke her smiling face by yelling.

Prem and Heer had volunteered to clean up the office, and I could go home, since it was still my birthday. But only a minute was left until it wouldn't be, so I left the office as quickly as I could, before they changed their minds. I was going to Rinki's apartment to meet her. I wouldn't be able to sleep until I saw a genuine smile on her face.

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