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Chapter 42.



Balcony which is created for getting freshness around the house is now become the greatest part to freshen and clear the air around Tulsi Mihir relationship. however the quality of the air received depends on the atmosphere around, same is the case with Tulsi Mihir conversation, the dynamics, the tone , the words, the emotions hit differently based on the atmosphere at home. it very much affects them as the responsible elder of the family who cares for their kids and family. It's very evident from the talks that they still are learning, wise people said learning is a continuous process , only thing is we shouldn't be ashamed of it , embrace it gladly and have an open mind to learn at any phase of life. Seekhne ki koi umar nhi hoti.

The words were chosen carefully, slight hesitation, but the transparency and the open communication is something they have learnt now. Earlier, they used to handle things on their own and took the other for granted, but now they try to be part of it, discuss, suggest, quarrel, disappoint one another, but the communication channel is still open.


Rithik Mithali n Munni's conversation, to some extent each one of them took their own stand and had clarity how to lead their life in future, with whom to share.

I am not into their conversation much. Mujhe abhi bhi ye ek hi ghar me ex n current rehna manzoor nhi hai. Aap kitna bhi karlo insecurities Timsy ko leke ya fir partner ko dekh ke ho hi jaati hai it's my POV. So mujhe ye year old fashion dur dur ghar me rehna sahi lagta hai😃. Timsy ko 😟leke do ghar, do loyalty, kis ka pyar zyada, kam sab bilkul bhi sahi hai, aapne bahot accha likha hai ye. The child has to learn this new arrangement and be part of it. The child anyways gets affected by parents separation. However to some extent she will accept it as she don't find any cordial relationship within her parents life. They almost been non existant for each other.

Man to man conversation of Mihir n Ritik is beautiful, subtle. mihir not pushing for things, not in a rush, but very calm, composed, sensibly acted. Their conversation is absolutely subtle, sensible, logical, not a long one but short and to the point. You know the nuances of men conversation, you captured it here beautifully. Ritik being himself and the joy he gets in Munni's company is the highlight of it. Mihir's advise to Rithik to take the right decision and he saying he believes n supports every decision of his is quiet commendable. It helped Ritik to believe in himself, he is satisfied and glad that his parents believe in his abilities, nothing more is important. It boosts his confidence. Nice.

Ritik n Mitali for the first time admiring each other, happy for one another, they talked normally, communicated like humans, not like mouse n cat.

Ok no hard feelings, parting ways cordially( ye thoda filmy logoan ka, rich type people ka classs hogya, partying ways we have decided to move on in media, Virani's bhi to rich classs hai,) so goodbyes in good way.🙄

Munni is sure of her feelings, her conversation with Mitali is just straightforward, no hard feelings, Mitali like a responsible woman apologized for her previous behavior, not everyone has the guts but Mitali did it. Also she expressed her fear of being away from. tulsi n Timsy. Good conversation, not over dramatic at all.

Munni n Ritik conversation was good again.

As Ritik rightly pointed out he comes with a baggage of a marriage and a kid, so Munni definitely deserves better, but since she can think of no one but Ritik they decided to go ahead.

Tulsi n Munni's conversation i loved it so much after Tuhir.

Two things: Ek swarth maa ka, Ek prem and advise as a women. The contrasts you narrated so beautifully, how human beings act differently being two personalities and change their opinions under different circumstances. The thoughtprocess, analytics game depends on the situation we are in. I loved this conversation so much. ❤️❤️❤️


Tulsi thoda zyada hi Mihir ke pyar me pagal hui😜😃, 😂😂 however i liked them flirting, manoaying, finding ways to talk to each their, now they are thinking as one unit instead of "I know better", "I can manage" making their ego bigger than their life, love and bond.

Mujhe Tulsi ka attitude bhi accha laga when she was angry at Mihir, Ritik n Vaishnvi for consulting her for the conference paper work done, without her knowledge and consent. Ego hurt hogya Tulsi ka, she fought with Mihir, Mihir couldn't control, he surrendered, helplessly, angrily asked her how to prove Bandhej is her baby, he never want anyone to take credit of it except Tulsi. He involving in this paper work as an experienced, expert not as Mihir Virani, who wanted to show an upperhand in business or belittle his wife. Jaayaz hai gussa. Tulsi has reacted immediately out of anger bcoz someone has intruded her territory without her consent, that irked her to the core, that's why she asked Ritik to delete the file.

Anger leads to reactions not responses. That's the art of life one has to learn throughout.

Mihir felt insulted, hurt, Tulsi is resistant to his genuine feelings and do not want to take his support. Tulsi fears more she still doesn't believe in her stars fully, she fears self respect, independence, her abilities being questioned, her hardwork suppressed under big shot like Mihir. She is not wrong, but Mihir getting upset is also not wrong for distancing with him on her other achievements of life.

Ice cream khila diya bechare ne fir bhi, sensible, calm, composed, very understanding husband, probably that's why Tulsi is falling for him more, day by day. 😜😃


Writer aap ek baat batavo inko Thandi chai, Thandi kadha, thandi chamomile kyun pilate ho hamesha😂😂😂. I know kuch kuch heated moments me, kuch inke ek dusre me kho jaane me, ek dusre ko admire karne me, uss chuppi me cold peena padta hai, but almost bahot baar thanda pilate ho aap 😂😂

Btw, Tulsi Mihir ko coffee kab pilayegi, he likes coffee more than chai 😜.

I loved the whole of Mihir Tulsi conversation, smiling throughout so much, i enjoyed reading them as always. Their finding ways to kneel upon one another, entering each others territory, making ways to part of it, being a single unit, finding satisfaction in each others embrace, finding warmth, supporting, condemning, advising, more importantly they are learning to undo things without any delay, because they realized delaying thibgs would create a larger whole which cannot be repaired easily, takes linger duration to heal, rebuild and relive.

TuHir the best moments thank you for this beautiful TuHir part, i enjoyed it thoroughly.

Thank you.




PS : ye chapter fast paced tha, thank you for bit getting in too much detailing of the trio😜

Will write only TuHir part review again. Ty

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Chapter 42.


Hey thank u for this beautiful review dear.

Balcony which is created for getting freshness around the house is now become the greatest part to freshen and clear the air around Tulsi Mihir relationship. however the quality of the air received depends on the atmosphere around, same is the case with Tulsi Mihir conversation, the dynamics, the tone , the words, the emotions hit differently based on the atmosphere at home. it very much affects them as the responsible elder of the family who cares for their kids and family. It's very evident from the talks that they still are learning, wise people said learning is a continuous process , only thing is we shouldn't be ashamed of it , embrace it gladly and have an open mind to learn at any phase of life. Seekhne ki koi umar nhi hoti.

Was actually waiting for someone to point it out. When I planned this entire story, I actually had a lot of confusion about the place where they would meet - because the place:

- Should be inside the house itself (since they were going to meet twice a day - ideally start and end the day with each other) yet not exactly where others in the family could logically not see (Tulsi’s initial request that family shouldn’t know because they will expect their reconciliation then).

- But again somewhere that the family would know within a few days and plausibly still not let TuHir know that they know.

- somewhere they could feel free

- A place (as you rightly said) where the very air and atmosphere will have a waterlike quality (jis rang me jaaye waisa hi ho jaaye) and would reflect their changing dynamics over time.

One by one I had 3 ideas in this order - veranda, outer porch near the tulsi plant [I almost finalized this spot then decided it was a very heavy spot in terms of symbolism whereas I need a completely neutral and weightless (in terms of emotional history) spot]. And finally I settled on the balcony because it checked all my boxes.

The words were chosen carefully, slight hesitation, but the transparency and the open communication is something they have learnt now. Earlier, they used to handle things on their own and took the other for granted, but now they try to be part of it, discuss, suggest, quarrel, disappoint one another, but the communication channel is still open.

Yes - as the title says - saath mein - now they’re learning to do everything together and sharing everything with each other- no matter how difficult it is - because non-communication was what drew them apart. Eben if they have to fight - they communicate and keep it strictly between them. Especially Mihir has learnt this! Pehle he used to shout at tulsi Kahin bhi - he didn’t care about who was present. Now even if he’s angry with her, he ensures her respect - because as he said during the confession night - Jab tak main ye nahi karta (ensuring your respect), main basically permission deta hoon to everyone to disrespect you.

Rithik Mithali n Munni's conversation, to some extent each one of them took their own stand and had clarity how to lead their life in future, with whom to share.

Yes pehle ke decisions - thope gaye the unpe

I am not into their conversation much. Mujhe abhi bhi ye ek hi ghar me ex n current rehna manzoor nhi hai. Aap kitna bhi karlo insecurities Timsy ko leke ya fir partner ko dekh ke ho hi jaati hai it's my POV. So mujhe ye year old fashion dur dur ghar me rehna sahi lagta hai😃. Timsy ko 😟leke do ghar, do loyalty, kis ka pyar zyada, kam sab bilkul bhi sahi hai, aapne bahot accha likha hai ye. The child has to learn this new arrangement and be part of it. The child anyways gets affected by parents separation. However to some extent she will accept it as she don't find any cordial relationship within her parents life. They almost been non existant for each other.

I understand and also agree with your feelings and thinking about this track - but like I said previously, I wanted to experiment something different! This is exactly the kind of decisions Tulsi often takes (more like s1 tulsi) so I thought let me bring out an experimental idea


Man to man conversation of Mihir n Ritik is beautiful, subtle. mihir not pushing for things, not in a rush, but very calm, composed, sensibly acted. Their conversation is absolutely subtle, sensible, logical, not a long one but short and to the point. You know the nuances of men conversation, you captured it here beautifully. Ritik being himself and the joy he gets in Munni's company is the highlight of it. Mihir's advise to Rithik to take the right decision and he saying he believes n supports every decision of his is quiet commendable. It helped Ritik to believe in himself, he is satisfied and glad that his parents believe in his abilities, nothing more is important. It boosts his confidence. Nice.

Frankly I am so glad that the man to man conversation came out well - my reference points are only novels written by male authors! Yes Mihir is learning from his talks with Tulsi that Ritik is extremely sensitive and low on confidence so he needs to constantly boost his confidence.

Ritik n Mitali for the first time admiring each other, happy for one another, they talked normally, communicated like humans, not like mouse n cat.

Exactly!! as spouses they fought constantly and now as friends they understand each other!


Ok no hard feelings, parting ways cordially( ye thoda filmy logoan ka, rich type people ka classs hogya, partying ways we have decided to move on in media, Virani's bhi to rich classs hai,) so goodbyes in good way.🙄

Yes - though viranis are sanskari but (actually not sanskari too 🤣 - kitne toh affairs + amongst TuHirs kids most guys married their brother’s wives) rich/elite class toh hain hi.

Munni is sure of her feelings, her conversation with Mitali is just straightforward, no hard feelings, Mitali like a responsible woman apologized for her previous behavior, not everyone has the guts but Mitali did it. Also she expressed her fear of being away from. tulsi n Timsy. Good conversation, not over dramatic at all.

Glad you liked the conversation between Mitali and Munni. Mitali apologizing to Munni completes her redemption arc.

Munni n Ritik conversation was good again.

As Ritik rightly pointed out he comes with a baggage of a marriage and a kid, so Munni definitely deserves better, but since she can think of no one but Ritik they decided to go ahead.

u saying the conversation was good despite not being able to fully accept this pairing - isse better compliment mere liye Kya hi ho sakta hai..


Tulsi n Munni's conversation i loved it so much after Tuhir.

That conversation is one of my favorites too. Loved how it came out - so glad you agree

Two things: Ek swarth maa ka, Ek prem and advise as a women. The contrasts you narrated so beautifully, how human beings act differently being two personalities and change their opinions under different circumstances. The thoughtprocess, analytics game depends on the situation we are in. I loved this conversation so much. ❤️❤️❤️

Exactly -we can not isolate ourselves as 1 relationship only!! Kai baar Hume Samajh nahi aata kaunsa rishta nibhaayen.

Tulsi thoda zyada hi Mihir ke pyar me pagal hui😜😃, 😂😂 however i liked them flirting, manoaying, finding ways to talk to each their, now they are thinking as one unit instead of "I know better", "I can manage" making their ego bigger than their life, love and bond.

Yes - I think I wrote this in chapter 39 too - that’s she falls a little more in love with him every day even though she feels ki ab usse zyaada nahi ho Sakta pyaar. But did you notice one thing? Mihir is showing her more respect than love and that’s why she’s been falling deeper for him.

Mujhe Tulsi ka attitude bhi accha laga when she was angry at Mihir, Ritik n Vaishnvi for consulting her for the conference paper work done, without her knowledge and consent. Ego hurt hogya Tulsi ka, she fought with Mihir, Mihir couldn't control, he surrendered, helplessly, angrily asked her how to prove Bandhej is her baby, he never want anyone to take credit of it except Tulsi. He involving in this paper work as an experienced, expert not as Mihir Virani, who wanted to show an upperhand in business or belittle his wife. Jaayaz hai gussa. Tulsi has reacted immediately out of anger bcoz someone has intruded her territory without her consent, that irked her to the core, that's why she asked Ritik to delete the file.

This was a situation where both were simultaneously wrong and right! Ritik ne Vaishnavi se poocha abt the conference preps and she was confused and stressed because she has no experience ki aise conferences ke liye material kaise banaate hain - whereas Ritik and Mihir have experience so they thought - time pehle hi kam hai so they worked on it without telling tulsi! Kyunki use convince karne ka time hi nahi tha.

Tulsi ne pehle hi manaa kiya tha - si she naturally felt hurt ki they all went behind my back

Anger leads to reactions not responses. That's the art of life one has to learn throughout.

Very well expressed

Mihir felt insulted, hurt, Tulsi is resistant to his genuine feelings and do not want to take his support. Tulsi fears more she still doesn't believe in her stars fully, she fears self respect, independence, her abilities being questioned, her hardwork suppressed under big shot like Mihir. She is not wrong, but Mihir getting upset is also not wrong for distancing with him on her other achievements of life.

Yes exactly, as I said both are right and wrong

Ice cream khila diya bechare ne fir bhi, sensible, calm, composed, very understanding husband, probably that's why Tulsi is falling for him more, day by day. 😜😃

Chocolate ice cream rose - sab Tulsi ki taraf se tha Mihir ke liye - but yeah you’re right - Mihir is being such a model husband that she’s falling a little more for him every day

Writer aap ek baat batavo inko Thandi chai, Thandi kadha, thandi chamomile kyun pilate ho hamesha😂😂😂. I know kuch kuch heated moments me, kuch inke ek dusre me kho jaane me, ek dusre ko admire karne me, uss chuppi me cold peena padta hai, but almost bahot baar thanda pilate ho aap 😂😂

Oh my goodness🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I’m laughing so much reading this. Aaj Aapne bola toh main I’m thinking about why I do this - actually the answer came as a surprise to me too

Btw, Tulsi Mihir ko coffee kab pilayegi, he likes coffee more than chai 😜.

I loved the whole of Mihir Tulsi conversation, smiling throughout so much, i enjoyed reading them as always. Their finding ways to kneel upon one another, entering each others territory, making ways to part of it, being a single unit, finding satisfaction in each others embrace, finding warmth, supporting, condemning, advising, more importantly they are learning to undo things without any delay, because they realized delaying thibgs would create a larger whole which cannot be repaired easily, takes linger duration to heal, rebuild and relive.

TuHir the best moments thank you for this beautiful TuHir part, i enjoyed it thoroughly.

Thank you.




PS : ye chapter fast paced tha, thank you for bit getting in too much detailing of the trio😜

Will write only TuHir part review again. Ty

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Disclaimer: The timeline is all messed up due to the show - so please assume that Tulsi and Mihir got married in 2000 (s1 actual year) and that it’s still been over 44 years since then.

Chapter 43: On His Shoulder

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The kaada had gone down the way it always did — slow sips, the balcony still holding onto the last of the morning cool before Mumbai's heat and noise came crowding in. Tulsi had just wrapped both hands around her chai, warmth sinking into her palms, when Mihir reached for his own cup at the same moment and their fingers collided at the tray. They simply smiled and sat quietly sipping their tea.


A while later, he was about to say something, when Ritik came down and opened the balcony door at a pace that stopped his words where they were.


Not running. But close enough to it that both their cups paused mid-air.


"Ritik?" Mihir was on his feet before he had even entered the balcony fully.


Tulsi's grip on her cup tightened. "Kuch hua kya? Timsy theek hai na?"


"Timsy theek hai, Maa." Ritik's breath hadn't quite caught up with him. "Shower lene bheja hai usse abhi."


The relief lasted exactly as long as the sentence after it.


"Main Mitali-Timsy ke room mein gaya tha, roz ki tarah Timsy ko jagaane. Mitali ka saara saamaan — pura kamra bikhra pada tha. Packing chal rahi thi."


Mihir went still in the particular way Tulsi had learned to read over these past months — not surprise, exactly.


Something quieter and heavier than that.


"Maine poocha usse," Ritik went on. "Boli — aaj noon tak nikal jaayegi. Gautam Bhaiya papers mangwa rahe hain aaj late morning tak — yahin Shantiniketan mein, dono ke liye. Signing yahin ho jaayegi. Phir woh chali jaayegi.”


Tulsi heard *noon* and felt something in her chest recalibrate, fast, like a plan rearranging itself before she'd consciously decided to make one.


She didn't say anything. She reached for her phone instead.


Mihir was watching her with the look she knew well — not confused, just waiting, giving her the room to say it herself before he asked. His eyes though asked her - *ab kya karenge?*


She didn't get the chance to answer his unspoken question, because Ritik spoke first, still working through the pieces.


"Maa," he said slowly, "aapne abhi tak Mitali se baat nahi ki — yahin reh jaane ke baare mein."


Tulsi met his eyes. "Aaj karungi. Noon se pehle."


"Toh phir—"


She simply dialed a number on her phone.


The line picked up on the second ring.

"Munni, beta, jaagi hui ho?"


"Haan Malk— sorry, Maa," Munni corrected herself quickly, still catching up to her own new vocabulary. "Jaagi hoon. Sab theek hai?"


"Haan haan, sab theek hai." The lie slid out smooth as anything. "Tu office nikalne se pehle mujhse mil sakti hai? Main aa jaati hoon, nashte pe."


A small pause — Munni, clearly recalibrating, unused to Tulsi asking for anything at all. "Haan, bilkul Maa. Par... itni subah subah, sab kuch theek hai na?"


"Bas mann kiya tera muh dekhne ka," Tulsi said, which wasn't quite a lie and wasn't quite the truth either.


She hung up before Munni could ask a second time.


Ritik glanced between his parents, visibly confused. He expected her to speak to Mitali. He couldn’t understand why she was going to meet Munni instead. Mihir gave him nothing either — just a small, tired shake of the head that said *let her*.


"Sabse pehle ek kaam karega?" She was already moving towards her room to grab her purse, "Mujhe Munni ke ghar chhod dega? Abhi, paanch minute mein?"


Ritik blinked. "Munni ke yahan... abhi?"


"Haan, abhi."


"Aur uske baad?"


"Uske baad tu apna kaam kar — bachchon ko school drop kar. Roz ki tarah." She said it like it was the simplest thing in the world, already moving.


Ritik stood there a second longer, visibly trying to make the morning's pieces fit into something that made sense — Mitali's packing, the noon deadline, his mother suddenly needing to see Munni before any of it was addressed — and failing.


"Theek hai, Maa," he said finally, because there was, in his experience, no version of arguing with her when her mind had already moved three steps ahead of everyone else's.


He glanced at his father on the way past, a silent aap samjhe kuch? Mihir only shrugged, the particular shrug of a man who had long since stopped expecting to understand fully what his wife was up to, though he had a faint idea.


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The staff cleared the last of the breakfast quietly, moving with the practiced invisibility of people used to a Collector's household. When the after-breakfast tea arrived, Munni waited only until it had been poured before she turned to the young woman who'd brought it.


"Tum log ab jaa sakte ho," she said. "Shaam ko aana. Aaj subah ke liye bas itna hi kaafi hai."


The girl nodded, unbothered, and within a minute the house had emptied itself of anyone who wasn't the two of them.


Munni turned back to Tulsi then, her hands wrapped around her own cup, and simply waited — the particular patience of someone who'd already understood, perhaps on the phone call itself, that this visit hadn't been about breakfast at all.


Tulsi turned her cup once in her hands before she spoke.


"Sorry Munni," she said slowly, "agar teri Maa ki tarah sochun toh yeh bilkul nahi bolna chahiye jo main bolne wali hoon."


She looked up, something unusually unsteady in her own voice for once. "Lekin iss waqt main na tumhari Maa hoon, na Ritik ki — uss waqt main sirf Timsy ki Dadi hoon. Woh bhi ek selfish Dadi."


Munni's cup paused halfway to her lips — something gentle already settling into her expression — she'd clearly guessed at least this much before Tulsi had said a word.


"Maa," she said softly, "Timsy ke baare mein? Kyun chinta hai aapko? Timsy toh wahin rahegi na. Shantiniketan mein. Yeh toh mujhe bhi pata hai, aur Ritik ko bhi. Iss baat mein toh koi do rai hain hi nahi."


"Haan, woh toh hai," Tulsi said. "Lekin yeh iss dadi ki poori maang nahi hai, Munni."


Munni waited, her hands clasped.


"Yeh dadi nahi chahti," Tulsi continued, "ki Timsy do hisson mein bant jaaye. Ki use kabhi ek parent ke paas rehna pade, kabhi doosre ke — ki uske do ghar hon, do alag zindagiyan, aur woh beech mein khadi rahe yeh decide karte hue kahan jaana hai kab." She paused, choosing the next words carefully. "Yeh dadi chahti hai use apne Maa aur Pitah dono milen. Poori tarah. Woh dono milke uski parvarish karen — ek hi ghar se, co-parents ki tarah."


Munni was quiet for a moment, turning the shape of it over. "Aap keh rahi hain..."


"Main keh rahi hoon," Tulsi said, "ki Mitali ko uss ghar se nahi jaaye. Ritik se uska rishta bhale hi khatam ho jaaye— lekin Shantiniketan se uska rishta khatam na ho."


Before Munni could fully turn the idea over, Tulsi went on.


"Maine Mitali se baat nahi ki hai abhi iss baare mein, Munni. Aaj Ritik-Mitali divorce papers sign karne waale hain, toh woh aaj hi ghar se jaa rahi hai. Lekin isse pehle ki main usse baat karun — mujhe teri permission chahiye."


"Maa!" Munni sat forward at once. "Meri perm—"


"Meri baat poori hone de, Munni."


Munni stopped, and closed her mouth, though it clearly cost her something to hold the protest back.


A pause settled between them, Tulsi choosing the next part carefully, as if she'd rehearsed it and still found it heavier out loud than it had been in her head.


"Main jaanti hoon tu pehle hi bahut kuch compromise kar rahi hai iss shaadi mein," she said. "Yeh ek aur bahut bada compromise hoga tere liye — ki tere husband ki ex-wife hamesha teri nazron ke saamne rahegi."


Munni opened her mouth to respond, but Tulsi held up a hand, not quite finished.


"Ek baat clear kar doon, Munni." Her voice had shifted — softer now, but firmer too, the kind of firmness that came from genuinely meaning it rather than just saying it to be kind. "Agar tu inkaar karna chahe — 1% bhi — toh tujhe poora haq hai. Kisi ko bura nahi lagega. Aur tere liye hamari family mein respect mein koi kami nahi hogi. Agar tu mana bhi karti hai, toh bhi."


She let that sit for a second before adding, quieter, "Main nahi chahti tu haan isliye bole kyunki tujhe lagta hai tujhe bolna padega. Main sirf sach sunna chahti hoon."


Munni was quiet for a moment, absorbing that Tulsi had thought even of this — of giving her an actual door out before asking her to walk further in.


Then she spoke.


"Maa," Munni said finally, "sabse pehle toh — mujhe koi 1% bhi inkaar nahi hai." A small, steadying breath. "Lekin main chahti hoon aap ek baat jaanein, isse pehle ki aap soche main sirf aapko khush karne ke liye haan bol rahi hoon."


Tulsi waited.


"Mitali ne mujhse maafi maangi thi," Munni said. "2-3 din pehle. Ek café mein milne bulaya tha maine use — kyunki main directly usse sunna chahti thi ki woh divorce chahti hai aur kyun. Saara sach bataya usne — social media wali baat, apna aur Ritik ka rishta, divorce ka faisla, sab kuch." She looked down at her cup for a moment. "Maine socha nahi tha ki woh itni... itni honest hogi. Uske baad se mere mann mein uske liye jo darr tha, jo confusion thi — woh bahut kam ho gayi hain."


Something shifted in Tulsi's face — surprise, quickly folding into something warmer.


"Toh," Munni continued, "Mitali ke ghar mein rehne se mujhe darr nahi lagta, Maa. Woh Timsy ki maa hai, aur mujhe lagta hai woh ek achhi insaan bhi hai. Socha nahi tha ki kabhi Mitali ke liye aisa bolungi”. She paused, and here her voice wavered just slightly, the honesty in it costing her something. "Lekin ek cheez hai jo sach mein pareshaan karti hai mujhe."


"Bolo," Tulsi said gently.


"Har teej-tyohar, Timsy ka har school function, har ghar ki family photo — woh bhi wahin hogi." Munni's hands tightened slightly around her cup. "Main ghar mein aaungi ek nayi dulhan ki tarah, aur mera pehla din se hi ek... ek tarah ka sharing hoga jo shaayad kisi aur bahu ko kabhi nahi karna padta. Yeh sochke thoda ajeeb lagta hai, Maa. Sach kahoon toh."


She looked up. "Lekin ajeeb lagna aur galat lagna, do alag baatein hain. Aur mujhe yeh galat nahi lagta — Timsy ke liye toh bilkul nahi. Bas... mujhe thoda waqt chahiye hoga khud ko iske saath comfortable karne ke liye. Itna keh sakti hoon abhi."


Tulsi reached over and covered Munni's hand with her own.


"Agar tujhe iske baare mein sochne ke liye waqt chahiye," she said, "toh le sakti hai. Main Mitali ko keh sakti hoon ki woh kuch din aur ruk jaaye — tab tak, jab tak tu apna faisla na le le."


She paused, making sure the next part landed with its full weight.


"Lekin ek baar maine yeh Mitali ke saamne rakh diya, Munni — phir main isse wapas nahi le paaungi. Uske liye bhi yeh ek badi baat hogi, apne bachche ke saath rehne ka mauka. Ek baar maine usse keh diya, toh keh diya."


Munni looked at her for a long moment, the offer of time sitting between them — a real one, not a formality.


Munni sat with it for a moment, and what came back to her wasn't the practical weight of Tulsi's offer — it was Mitali's face across that café table, the way her composure had held for almost the entire conversation except right at the end, when she'd talked about what had actually delayed her these past months.

*Woh Ritik nahi tha jo mujhe rok raha tha. Timsy se door hone ka darr tha. Aur Maa se. Khaas kar Maa se.*


Munni remembered the glisten in Mitali's eyes when she'd said it — someone who'd apologized for the worst thing she'd ever done, and then, almost as an afterthought, revealed the one thing she was actually afraid of losing.


"Nahi, Maa," Munni said quietly, before she'd fully finished thinking it through, some certainty arriving faster than she'd expected. "Mujhe waqt nahi chahiye."


Tulsi looked at her, waiting.


"Jab Mitali mujhse mil rahi thi, café mein," Munni said, "toh usne bataya ki uski divorce ki himmat itne mahino se sirf isliye nahi ho paa rahi thi kyunki woh Timsy se door nahi hona chahti thi. Aur aapse, Maa." Her voice softened. "Uski aankhon mein jo dard tha aapka naam lete waqt — main woh bhoolungi nahi. Agar main abhi 'mujhe sochna hai' bolun, toh yeh sirf apne aaram ke liye hoga. Aur uss aaram ke liye main kisi ko uss insaan se door nahi rakh sakti jiski use sabse zyaada zaroorat hai."


She met Tulsi's eyes properly now. "Aap Mitali se baat kariye, Maa. Aaj hi. Main theek hoon."


Something in Tulsi's face gave way — not surprise this time, but something closer to being moved beyond what she'd let herself expect from this conversation.


"Aaj tune jo kiya," Tulsi said, "woh shayad koi aur nahi kar paata. Apni khud ki asuvidha se pehle Timsy aur Mitali ki zaroorat dekhna."


She paused, and when she spoke again, something simpler had replaced whatever grander thing she might have said.


"Thank you, Munni," she said, and meant it more than the word usually carried.


She squeezed Munni's hand once, then reached for her phone, the offer of a delay no longer needed, the morning finally, properly, moving forward.


Tulsi dialled Mihir.


"Driver free hai na abhi?" she said. "Use bolo mujhe pick karne aaye."


There was a small pause on the other end, the kind that meant he was already smiling before he'd said anything.


"Tumhara driver hamesha free hai tumhare liye," Mihir said. "Main hi aata hoon."


Tulsi found herself smiling as she cut the call, something in the reflexive ease of it settling her more than she'd expected.


Munni was watching her, faintly puzzled. "Main drop kar deti na aapko, Maa, office jaate hue. Papa ko kyun bola?"


"Tera office toh doosri taraf hai, Munni," Tulsi said. "Tu late ho jaati mujhe drop karke." She glanced at her then, taking in the casual salwar kurta, the hour ticking past on some invisible clock. "Waise bhi, tu already late ho rahi hai apne office ke liye."


Munni looked down at herself, as if only just remembering she had a whole day of her own waiting — and a Collector's office that wouldn't wait for a family crisis, however momentous.


"Jaa, taiyaar ho jaa," Tulsi said. "Main nahi chahti meri wajah se tu late ho."


Munni hurried off to change into a saree, something more befitting the desk she'd be sitting behind within the hour, while Tulsi stayed exactly as she was, waiting now for the sound of Mihir's car in the driveway.


-----


The car pulled out of Munni's gate a few minutes later, Tulsi settled into the seat beside Mihir, the morning's whirlwind at Munni's finally behind her.


"Sab theek hua Munni ke saath?" Mihir asked, eyes on the road, though she could tell he was more curious than the casual tone let on.


"Haan," Tulsi said simply, not ready yet to lay out the whole of it. "Sab theek hua."


He seemed to accept that she'd tell him the rest when she was ready, and let a moment pass before he spoke again, his voice dropping into something quieter.


"Tumhe ek baat bataani thi." He glanced at her briefly before returning his eyes to the road. "Timsy school jaa rahi thi tab, Mitali usse chhodne aayi thi gate tak. Bahut emotional ho gayi thi."


Tulsi turned to look at him properly. "Kya hua?"


"Kuch bola nahi usne," Mihir said. "Bas Timsy ko gale lagaya, bahut der tak. Fir uska maatha choom liya, aur haath hilate hue - jab tak Ritik ki gaadi mudkar nazron se ojhal nahi ho gayi, wahin khadi rahi."


He paused. "Maine dekhe uski aankhon mein aansoo. Chhupane ki koshish kar rahi thi, lekin main samajh gaya."


Tulsi was quiet for a moment, the image settling into her — Mitali standing at the gate, watching Timsy leave for school not knowing yet whether this was one of the last ordinary mornings she'd get to have.


"Aaj noon tak papers bhi sign honge," she said quietly, half to herself.


"Haan," Mihir said. "Shayad isiliye."


Tulsi looked out the window, the city beginning to move past in its usual unbothered rush, and thought of the conversation still waiting for her back at Shantiniketan — the one that might mean Mitali never had to stand at that gate wondering if it was goodbye.


"Ghar chalke Mitali se baat karte hain," Tulsi said finally, breaking her own silence.


Mihir glanced at her, something in his expression suggesting he'd been waiting for exactly this sentence since they'd pulled out of Munni's gate.


A pause settled between them, the car easing through a signal that had just turned green.


"Tum shayad soch rahe hoge," Tulsi said, "ki main Munni se pehle kyun mili, Mitali se seedha baat karne se pehle."


She kept her eyes on the road ahead, though the words were for him. "Kyunki mere liye yeh jaanna zaroori tha — Mitali ko yeh offer dene se pehle — ki Munni iske saath comfortable hai ya nahi. Yeh sirf hamara faisla nahi ho sakta tha, Mihir. Munni ki aane wali poori zindagi iss ghar mein beetne wali hai, aur Mitali hamesha uske saamne rahegi — har tyohar, har function mein. Usse poocha bina, main Mitali ko yeh offer kaise de sakti thi?"


She finally turned to look at him. "Aur woh theek hai. Poori tarah se. Khud usne kaha, apni marzi se."


Mihir was quiet for a moment, something like admiration settling into his face, the kind he'd stopped bothering to hide from her these past months.


"Tumne yeh bhi soch liya," he said softly, "isse pehle ki koi aur soch pata."


Tulsi didn't answer that, just turned back to the window, the house drawing closer now, and with it, the conversation she'd been carrying since the morning had first broken open.


-----


The room was half-stripped when they reached it — two suitcases zipped shut by the door, the wardrobe behind them standing open and empty in a way that made the space feel larger than it had any right to. Mitali stood near the dressing table, folding the cable of her phone charger, before dropping it into her handbag, methodical, unhurried, the way people packed when they'd already made their peace with leaving.


She looked up at the sound of them entering, surprise crossing her face at finding both of them there together.


"Maa, Papa?" she said. "Aap dono?"


"Tumse ek baat karni thi, beta," Tulsi said. "Lekin usse pehle, ek aakhri baar, ek sawaal karna tha."


Mitali set the charger down, giving Tulsi her full attention. "Haan, poochiye na, Maa."


Tulsi held her gaze steadily. "Tumhare dil mein sach mein koi waisi feelings nahi hai na, Ritik ke liye?"


Mitali looked straight into Tulsi's eyes. "Nahi, Maa. Kabhi thi hi nahi."


A pause, and then her gaze dropped, something harder to hold now sitting behind the first answer. "Sach kahoon toh — shaadi ke shuruaat mein, jab usne mujhe—"


She stopped there, her eyes flicking toward Mihir, the sentence catching somewhere it couldn't quite pass through in front of him.


Mihir understood before either of them had to say anything. "Main bahar hi hoon," he said quietly, already turning toward the door. "Zaroorat pade toh bula lena."


He stepped out, pulling the door partly shut behind him, and Tulsi turned back to Mitali, saying nothing, simply waiting — giving her whatever time the room needed to hold what came next.


Mitali sat down slowly on the edge of the bed, her hands finding each other in her lap.


"Ritik ko trap karke shaadi toh kar li maine," she said finally, her voice flat in the particular way that came from having gone over something too many times alone. "Phir Maasi — Noina — ne kaha, jitni jaldi baby ho jaaye, utna behtar. Ki isse meri aur mere through uski jagah iss ghar mein aur pakki ho jaayegi."


She stopped, and when she continued, something in her had gone very still.


"Jab maine khud use..." Mitali stopped, her eyes dropping to her hands twisting in her lap, the sentence refusing to finish itself the way she'd meant it to. A breath, and then, quieter, almost forcing the word out because saying it plainly felt less dishonest than softening it: "Seduce kiya. Maine khud kiya yeh sab, Maa. Aur jab usne mujhe chhua — main aapko woh feeling bata nahi sakti. Kitni cheap mehsoos kar rahi thi main khud ko. How disgusted I felt with myself."


A long pause


"Toh waisi feelings ka toh sawaal hi kabhi nahi tha."


Something cold moved through Tulsi as the words settled — not just at what Mitali had done, but at the shape of the hand that had put her up to it. A fresh, sharpened fury at Noina, at whatever twisted, unrelenting hunger for Mihir had driven her to use her own niece this way — to hollow out a young woman's sense of herself so completely that intimacy with her own husband had become something to feel disgusted by. Even now, even with Noina gone from their lives, the damage she'd engineered was still sitting here in this half-empty room, still being carried by someone who'd never asked for any of it.


Tulsi crossed the room and sat beside her, taking both of Mitali's hands in her own before she spoke.


"Suno meri baat," she said, her voice steady despite everything churning underneath it. "Jo tumne mehsoos kiya — woh sharam tumhari nahi hai, Mitali. Woh sharam Noina ki honi chahiye thi. Usne tumhe iss hadd tak dhakela, apni khud ke ek ghinone fitoor ke liye, aur tumhe iska bojh uthaane pe majboor kiya — kaafi chhoti thi tum tab, uski chhaya mein badi ho rahi thi, aur usne tumhara istemal kiya jaise tum uska koi mohra ho."


She tightened her grip slightly, willing the words to actually reach her. "Kisi bhi ladki ko apne pati ke paas jaate hue itna toota hua, itna gira hua mehsoos nahi karna chahiye. Aur iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum poori tarah galat thi, ya sirf tumne hi kuch bura kiya — iska matlab hai ki tumhare saath shayad usse bhi bahut bura kiya gaya, itni kam umar mein, ki tumhe shayad poori samajh nahi thi kya ho raha hai."


Mitali's eyes had filled, though she was clearly fighting to hold them back the way she'd been holding everything back for years.


"Aaj tak tumne yeh akele uthaya," Tulsi said, softer now. "Aur aaj, jab tum aakhirkaar khud ke liye ek sahi faisla le rahi ho — Ritik se, uss saari cheez se aage badhne ka — mujhe khushi hai ki tumne yeh mujhe bata diya. Isse pehle ki yeh tum akele leke ghar se chali jaao."


She reached up, gently, and brushed a tear from Mitali's cheek — the same tenderness she'd have shown any of her own children.


"Tum uss ladki se bahut aage nikal aayi ho, Mitali," she said. "Aur ab jo bhi aage hoga — woh tumhara apna faisla hoga. Kisi ka thopa hua nahi."


A pause settled between them before Tulsi spoke again, something more deliberate now in her tone.


"Toh iska matlab yeh hai," she said, "ki tumhe Ritik aur Munni ko saath dekhke bilkul bura nahi lagega?"


Mitali looked up, faintly puzzled by the specificity of the question, but answered without hesitation.


"Bura? Maa, maine ab Ritik ko dil se apna dost maana hai." A small, genuine smile touched her face — the first easy thing to cross it since they'd walked in. "Dost ko apne pyaar ke saath khush dekhke mujhe toh achha hi lagega."


"Toh ab hum tumse woh baat keh sakte hain," Tulsi said, "jo kehne aaye the."


She rose and walked to the door, pulling it open. Mihir was a few steps away, thumb still moving over his phone, some official email clearly demanding his attention even here. He looked up at her silent summons and came in, slipping the phone into his pocket.


Inside, he and Tulsi looked at each other for a moment — a wordless exchange, *tum kahogi ya main?* — until Tulsi gave him a firm, settled look that answered it for him.


Mihir cleared his throat and turned to Mitali. "Mitali," he said, "maine tumhe hamesha apni beti ki tarah dekha hai. Shuru se hi. Yeh baat maine kabhi khulke kahi nahi, lekin aaj kehna chahta hoon."


Mitali's eyes softened, something in her posture loosening at the words. "Mujhe bhi hamesha laga hai, Papa, ki maine aap mein ek pita paaya hai." She glanced at Tulsi. "Aur Maa ke saath rehke — pehli baar samajh aaya mujhe ki ek maa ka pyaar kaisa hota hai."


She paused, something catching in her voice. "Main aaj yeh ghar chhod rahi hoon. Lekin jabse Maa laut ke aayi hain — yeh kuch mahine mere zindagi ke sabse khoobsurat, sabse meaningful mahine rahe hain."


Tulsi didn't let the opening pass. "Toh phir," she said gently, "jaana hi kyun chahti ho?"


Mitali looked between them, faintly confused by the question. "Matlab... aaj nahi toh kuch din baad jaana toh hai hi na? Jitni jaldi jaaoongi, utna sab ke liye achha hoga." She gestured vaguely toward the suitcases, as if the logic of it were self-evident. "Aaj toh papers bhi sign ho jaayenge. Aur ab jab Munni aur Ritik ka rishta tay ho gaya hai, toh uska aana-jaana shuru hoga iss ghar mein — toh mujhe na dekhe, tabhi toh woh zyaada comfortable feel karegi. Aur Timsy se bhi rishta ban paayega uska, aasaani se."


She said it plainly, like something she'd already worked through and settled on days ago — not a wound she was still circling, but a conclusion she'd arrived at out of care for everyone except herself.


Tulsi shook her head slightly. "Mera sawaal woh nahi tha, Mitali. Maine yeh nahi poocha ki aaj kyun jaa rahi ho. Maine poocha — jaana hi kyun chahti ho?"


The distinction landed slowly, Mitali's expression shifting from certainty to something more unmoored, as if the question had opened a door she hadn't realized was still shut.


"Maa," she said carefully, "main samjhi nahi..."


Mihir stepped in then, his voice quiet, deliberate. "Yeh baat," he said, "tumhari Maa ke mann mein hi aayi thi."


Mitali looked between them, something uncertain flickering across her face. "Maa ke mann mein? Kya baat?"


Tulsi took a breath, and when she spoke, her voice had none of the hesitation it had carried on the balcony two days ago with Mihir — only the steadiness of someone who'd already made peace with the idea, even if she was still afraid of how it would land.


"Main nahi chahti tum yeh ghar chhodo, Mitali," she said. "Ritik se rishta khatam ho jaaye, theek hai — woh faisla ho chuka hai, aur main use samajhti hoon. Lekin uska matlab yeh nahi hona chahiye ki tum Timsy se, humse — Shantiniketan se — bhi door ho jaao."


Mitali stared at her, not fully following yet.


"Main chahti hoon tum isi ghar mein raho," Tulsi continued. "Ritik ki patni ki tarah nahi — hamari beti ki tarah.

Hamesha ke liye. Timsy apne Maa-Papa dono ke saath, ek hi ghar mein, badi ho — use kabhi choose nahi karna pade kisi ek ke paas rehne ke liye."


The room went very quiet. Mitali's hand had gone still over the half-packed handbag, the charger she'd been holding a whole ago now forgotten entirely.


"Beti?" she said finally, the word coming out barely above a whisper, as if saying it too loudly might make it less real, or might make it disappear altogether.


"Beti," Tulsi said. "Bahu nahi. Beti."


Mihir watched Mitali's face carefully, the same tenderness in his expression that he'd have for any of his own children hearing news too large to take in all at once.


"Humne iske baare mein bahut socha hai," he added gently. "Aasaan nahi hoga — Munni ke liye bhi, tumhare liye bhi, sabke liye. Lekin Munni khud iske liye raazi hai. Poori tarah se."


Mitali's eyes had filled again, though this time the tears sat differently than they had a few minutes ago — not shame, but something closer to disbelief at being offered more than she'd ever thought to ask for.


"Lekin tum soch lo aaram se," Tulsi said, gently pulling back from the moment's intensity, giving Mitali room to breathe rather than pressing her for an answer. "Yeh faisla tumhara apna hona chahiye — sirf tumhara. Sirf apne aur Timsy ke baare mein sochna. Aur kisi ki chinta mat karna. Theek hai?"


Mitali nodded, still visibly working to steady herself, the offer clearly too large to respond to properly in the same breath it had arrived in.


"Hum chalte hain," Tulsi said, rising.


Mihir gave Mitali's shoulder a light, brief press on his way past — nothing that needed words — and the two of them stepped out, pulling the door softly shut behind them, leaving Mitali alone with two packed suitcases, an open handbag, and a decision that had, in the space of ten minutes, stopped being made for her.


-----


Ritik knocked once, and when no answer came, pushed the door open just enough to look in. Mitali was sitting exactly where they'd left her, the suitcases untouched, her eyes fixed somewhere past the room entirely.


"Tum theek ho, Mitali?" he asked, stepping in properly now, his voice carrying none of its usual easy humor — only something careful, tender. "Agar chaho toh aaj nahi karte hain sign."


Mitali barely seemed to register the offer.


"Maa-Papa ne kaha—" she started, then stopped, as if the sentence was too large to finish out loud a second time.


Ritik didn't need her to finish it.


Something in his face settled, unsurprised — Tulsi had already told him she meant to speak with Mitali about staying, though clearly not the exact shape it had taken.


"Toh tumhe kya lagta hai?" he asked quietly.


"Main—" She shook her head slightly, searching for the honesty underneath her own confusion. "Main confused hoon, Ritik. Tum kya chahte ho — please, sach sach batana."


Ritik held her gaze for a moment, and when he answered, there was nothing performed in it — just plain, steady certainty.


"Toh sach sach suno, Mitali," he said. "Reh jao. Hamesha ke liye, yahin — unki beti ban ke, Timsy ki maa banke, aur meri dost banke." A small, warm smile found its way onto his face despite the weight of the moment. "Humein milke Timsy ko bahut achhi parvarish deni hai."


Something in Mitali eased at that — not relief exactly, something quieter and more settled than relief, the particular feeling of being told, plainly, that you are wanted for reasons that have nothing to do with duty.


She didn't say anything, only looked at him, letting the moment hold itself without needing words to fill it.


A pause later, some part of her mind caught up with the time.


"Papers aa gaye?" she asked.


"Haan."


"Tum jao," Mitali said, already rising, smoothing her hands down the front of her jeans. "Main aayi bas do minute mein."


-----


The papers were spread across the table in the sitting room, Gautam having already gone through them line by line with the careful precision of someone who did this for a living but still felt the weight of doing it for family. Tulsi and Mihir sat across from Mitali and Ritik, the room quieter than any legal proceeding had any right to be.


Tulsi's eyes moved down the page Gautam had placed in front of her, and stopped.


"Yahaan," she said, tapping the clause. "Alimony wala hissa — yeh khaali kyun hai?"


"Maine mana kar diya tha," Mitali said simply, not looking up from her own copy.


Mihir frowned, leaning forward slightly. "Arre, lekin Mitali beta—"


"Mitali ka decision hai," Tulsi said, cutting in gently but firmly, one hand coming to rest briefly on his arm. "Toh theek hai. Humein accept karna chahiye."


Mihir looked at her, something in his face wanting to argue further, but he let the objection go unfinished, deferring to whatever Tulsi had already decided about how far they were allowed to push into Mitali's choices today.


Mitali signed where Gautam indicated, her hand steady in a way it hadn't been all morning, and set the pen down.


"Ek baat," she said, looking up at all of them now. "Mujhe thodi der apne room mein akele rehna hai. Jitni der bhi lage." Her voice was calm, not distant — just clear about what she needed. "Please, koi bhi mujhe bulaane mat aana. Jab main taiyaar houngi, main khud aa jaaungi."


Nobody argued with that either.


-----


An hour passed before Mitali could form a single coherent thought. When she finally reached for her phone, her hand still wasn't entirely steady.


"Sorry," she said the moment Munni picked up, "tumhe work day ke beech mein disturb kar rahi hoon. Abhi baat kar sakte hain?"


"Haan, bilkul," Munni said. "Lunch hour hai waise bhi, main free hoon."


Mitali took a breath. "Humne aaj papers sign kar diye."


There was a small silence on the line, Munni clearly unsure what to say to that — congratulations felt wrong, condolences felt worse.


"Lekin isliye call nahi kiya maine," Mitali said, before the silence could stretch further. "Maa-Papa ne mujhse kuch aisa kaha, jo maine sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha."


Something in Munni's voice eased into understanding. "Shantiniketan mein reh jaane ki baat na?"


"Haan." Mitali paused, then went on, hesitant in a way that clearly cost her something. "Aur, Munni — mujhe tumse ek baat seedhi poochni hai. Please sach batana. Tum sach mein iske saath theek ho? Ya tumne haan isliye bola kyunki tum apni hone waali family ko khush karna chahti thi?"


"Nahi, Mitali." Munni's answer came without hesitation, warm and certain. "Main sach mein theek hoon. Poori tarah se."


She let that settle for a second before continuing, something more personal creeping into her voice now. "Aur main jaanti hoon Maa ka saath kitna kuch de sakta hai kisi ko. Mera khud ka bhi ek alag rishta raha hai unke saath. Jab unka apni family se poora sampark toot gaya tha, tab bhi Maa ka mujhse se sampark nahi toota — unhone meri bahut madad ki, himmat badhaayi, jab lagta tha main fail ho jaaungi tab bhi mujhe aage badhaaya. Main aaj jo Collector hoon, uski wajah Maa hi hain." She paused. "Toh main samajh sakti hoon unse door jaana kitna mushkil hoga. Aur main yeh nahi chahti tumhare liye."


"Thank you, Munni," Mitali said, her voice thick with something she wasn't bothering to hide anymore. "Sach mein — thank you."


"Reh jao, Mitali," Munni said gently. “Timsy ke liye." A small, warm certainty settled into her voice. "I am sure hum dono adjust kar lenge ek doosre ke saath."


-----


Mitali came downstairs a while later, some new lightness in her step that hadn't been there before, and noticed movement in Tulsi's room on her way past. She stopped, curious, and stepped in.


"Maa, aap kaam pe nahi gayin aaj?"


Tulsi looked up from whatever she was folding into a drawer. "Nahi. Do wajah hain." She held up a finger. "Ek toh, aisa koi zaroori kaam nahi tha aaj." A second finger. "Dusra — soch rahi thi, ladkiyon ko akele handle karne do sab kuch, mere bina. Waise bhi parso conference ke liye nikalna hai — toh unhe abhi se apne aap sambhalne ki aadat daal leni chahiye."


She resumed her folding. "Aur Munni ke Mama-Mami bhi aa rahe hain aaj shaam paanch baje, Gor Dhana ke liye. Uski bhi taiyari karni hai."


Mitali nodded, absorbing that, then went quiet for a moment, something visibly settling into place behind her eyes.


"Maine ek faisla liya hai," she said finally.


Tulsi looked up properly now, giving her full attention.


"Aap ki beti," Mitali said, "isi ghar mein rahegi."


Tulsi crossed the room in two steps and pulled her into a tight, warm hug, something in her that had been holding its breath all morning finally letting go.


"Achha hai," she murmured into Mitali's hair, "bahut achha hai."


She pulled back after a moment, still holding onto Mitali's arms, something bright and unguarded on her face. "Main abhi free hoon," she said. "Agar chaho toh, tumhara saamaan unpack karne mein madad kar doon?"


"Saamaan unpack karne ke baare mein, usse pehle, Maa—" Mitali hesitated slightly. "Main soch rahi thi, kya main second floor pe koi room le sakti hoon? Yeh room Ritik ke room ke bilkul bagal mein hai, aur mujhe lagta hai mujhe wahaan nahi rehna chahiye."


Tulsi looked at her for a moment, something like quiet admiration crossing her face at the tact of it — Mitali thinking three steps ahead, the same way she herself tended to.


"Second floor kyun?" she said. "Woh toh generally guests ke liye hote hain. Aur tum koi guest nahi ho, Mitali — ab toh bilkul nahi."


She considered for a second, then brightened. "Daksha Chachi ke bagal wala kamra le lo. Staircase ke uss taraf, Ritik se door bhi hai."


Mitali blinked. "Daksha Baa ke bagal wala?" she said slowly. "Woh toh bahut bada hai, Maa — itne bade kamre mein main akele kya karungi?"


"Wahaan rahogi, aur kya karogi?" Tulsi said, a smile tugging at her mouth now. "Waise bhi khaali hi padha rehta hai woh.”


Tulsi was already moving toward the door. "Main Kamla ko bolti hoon, woh room saaf kar de abhi—"


"Maa, ek baat aur." Mitali's voice stopped her at the threshold.


Tulsi turned back.


"Jab bhi mujhe theek lagega," Mitali said, "main kuch ghante ya kuch din ke liye apni Mom ke paas chali jaaoongi. Bas aapko bata rahi hoon."


"Toh isme poochne ya batane ki kya baat hai?" Tulsi said, faintly puzzled by the formality of it. "Tum apni marzi se kahin bhi aa-jaa sakti ho, Mitali. Yeh tumhara bhi ghar hai."


"Toh theek hai," Mitali said. "Aaj shaam, chaar baje se raat der tak, main Mom ke ghar jaa rahi hoon."


Tulsi took a moment with that, the timing not quite registering at first — and then it did, all at once. "Kyunki aaj Munni ke Mama-Mami aa rahe hain?"


"Haan."


"Iski koi zaroorat nahi hai, Mitali—" Tulsi started.


"Maa, sun lijiye meri baat." Mitali's voice was gentle but sure. "Woh log bahut seedhe-saadhe, gaon ke log hain. Main unhe chhota nahi bata rahi — bas yeh soch rahi hoon, woh shayad samajh hi na paayen hum sab yahaan kya kar rahe hain. Ek divorcee, uski beti, sab ek hi ghar mein, sabke saath khush — unke liye yeh sab bahut zyaada ho sakta hai, ek din mein samajhne ke liye." She paused. "Behtar hai yeh rasm bina kisi complications ke ho jaaye. Main Timsy ko bhi saath le jaaungi."


Tulsi looked at her for a long moment, the practical wisdom of it slowly overtaking her instinct to insist otherwise.


"Theek hai," she said finally, reluctance still sitting in her voice even as she gave in to the logic of it. "Jaisa tumhe theek lage."


-----


Munni along with her Mama and Mami arrived a little before five, both of them dressed carefully in their best — clothes that had clearly been pressed and re-pressed that afternoon — and both of them visibly braced for something, though neither could have said exactly what.


Mama carried the matli himself, a steel container wrapped in red cloth, filled with sweets and small gifts they'd put together with far more care than their modest means might have suggested. Mami walked half a step behind him, her eyes moving over the sheer scale of Shantiniketan's entrance the way someone's eyes move over something they've decided in advance not to be impressed by, and were failing anyway.


Tulsi was the one who came out to receive them, not sending a servant, not waiting inside for them to be shown in — and something in that alone seemed to catch Mama slightly off guard.


"Aaiye, aaiye," she said warmly, taking the matli from his hands herself before he could even think to hand it to someone more appropriately positioned to receive it. "Bahut intezaar tha aapka."


They were seated in the main hall, the Mami standing behind her husband and for the first few minutes, the visit carried the stiff, careful energy of people trying very hard not to say or do the wrong thing in a house so far above their own. Mami stood with her hands folded tightly in front of her, answering Damini's gentle questions in short, polite sentences, her eyes occasionally flicking toward Munni as if checking, again, that this was really happening — that her niece, who had grown up cleaning these floors not so many years ago, was actually about to marry into this.


Mami had, out of old habit, started to lower herself onto the floor rather than take one of the chairs or sofas — the instinct of someone used to knowing her place in rooms like this. Shobha was there before she could finish the motion, one hand catching her elbow, tutting.

"Arre arre, yeh kya kar rahi hain aap? Aaiye wahan baithiye.” She steered her firmly toward a seat beside her own, settling in close, shoulder to shoulder, as if they'd known each other for years rather than minutes. "Yahaan koi neeche nahi baithta, samjhi aap?"


She launched into some story about Ritik's childhood before Mami could even fully process being redirected, laughing loudly at her own telling of it — then at something Mami hadn't quite meant as a joke but that Shobha had decided to find delightful anyway — and refused to let the conversation settle back into anything formal for more than a minute at a stretch.


Gayatri Chachi simply held Mami's hand at one point, mid-sentence, the way she might have with any woman in the family, and didn't let go for a while.


By the time Angad appeared with a tray of mithai insisting everyone try the mohanthal before anything else began, something in Mama's shoulders had visibly loosened. He glanced once at his wife, and some silent, relieved understanding passed between them — the understanding of two people who had spent the drive over rehearsing how they'd endure this evening, only to find there was nothing here that needed enduring.


The ceremony itself unfolded with quiet warmth rather than grandeur. The priest chanted as gor (jaggery) and dhana (coriander seeds) were offered together at the small altar set up for the occasion, jaggery and coriander seed mingling in a single bowl — sweetness and substance, the old symbolism of a marriage that would need to hold both. Ritik and Munni exchanged rings under the family's watching eyes, Munni's hands trembling slightly as Ritik slid the ring onto her finger, his own hands not entirely steady either.


Then came the blessings — five married women stepping forward one by one, each pressing a hand to Munni's head, murmuring something private and warm. Damini first, then Shobha, then Vrinda, then Gayatri Chachi. And finally Tulsi, who held her hand there a moment longer than the others had, and said nothing anyone else could hear, though Munni's eyes went bright the instant she heard it.


Ritik stepped forward then and bent to touch Mama and Mami's feet, one after the other, the gesture unhurried and entirely without performance. Both of them startled visibly — in their own community, a soon-to-be damaad rarely bent for anyone; if anything, it was the bride's side that spent the engagement carefully managing his ego, mindful of his status as the one being married up to. Mama actually reached down to stop him halfway, murmuring a protest, but Ritik simply straightened only once he'd finished, unbothered by the older man's fluster.


Mami's hand went to her mouth, something in her face rearranging itself entirely.


Mama watched all of it with an expression that had shed every trace of its earlier wariness. When it was over, he crossed the room to where Mihir stood and, entirely without meaning to sound the way it came out, said quietly, "Humne suna tha bade log hain aap log. Kisi ne yeh nahi bataya tha ki itne achhe bhi ho sakte hain."


Mihir, caught off guard by the plainness of it, simply put a hand on the man's shoulder. “Ab woh sirf aapki beti nahi rahi," he said, "hamari bhi ho gayi hai. Toh humare beech koi farak reh hi nahi jaata ab." He paused, something warmer creeping into his voice. "Aur waise bhi — dene waala lene waale se bada hi hota hai. Aap apni beti de rahe hain, hum le rahe hain. Iss naate toh aap hi bade hue na?”


Mama stood there for a moment, entirely unable to speak, something visibly working its way up his throat that he couldn't quite get past. He'd walked into this house braced to feel small — had spent the whole drive over preparing his wife, and himself, for exactly that. And here was the man at the center of all this wealth, telling him plainly that he was the one who outranked him tonight.


"Sahib," he finally managed, his voice unsteady, "hum toh soch ke aaye the ki humein yahaan..." He couldn't finish it, and didn't need to — the sentence had already said enough.


Mihir simply put his arm around the man's shoulders, the gesture doing what words couldn't. "Ab hum sirf sambandhi nahi hain," he said. "Ek parivaar hain."


Mama's eyes went bright, and he turned his face away for a moment, blinking hard, before reaching out and gripping Mihir's hand in both of his — the handshake of a man who'd come in expecting to be tolerated, and was leaving, instead, having been welcomed.


(Continued in next post)

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Chapter 43: On His Shoulder

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The next morning, Mihir had spread three different printouts across the dining table by the time Ritik came down, dressed and ready to leave for the office, keys already in hand.


"Ritik, ruk zara." Mihir waved him over, one finger still pressed to a line on the page. "Yeh dekh - yeh trend-sentiment wala hissa. Yeh hai kya yaar?" He was thoroughly confused.


Ritik glanced at the page, then patiently pulled out the chair beside his father and began explaining - how the model tracked real-time signals off social media before a trend even hit the sales floor, how the numbers on the slide weren't old-style seasonal projections but something closer to a live pulse of what people were about to want. He kept it simple, kept circling back, adjusting his explanation each time Mihir's frown didn't quite lift.


It took considerably longer than either of them expected before something in Mihir's face finally cleared. "Ohh - toh yeh basically real-time data hai, jo trends batata hai pehle se, isse pehle ki woh actually market mein aayen?"


"Bilkul, Papa." Ritik looked relieved, standing up now, glancing at the time.

Mihir looked up, about to say something else, and caught Tulsi standing in the doorway, watching the whole exchange with open, unmistakable amusement.


"Kya dekh rahi ho?" Mihir said, mock-aggrieved. "Tumne apne iss bete ki love story ke chakkar mein-"


Ritik was already halfway to the door by the time the sentence landed, muttering something about traffic, making himself scarce with impressive efficiency before his father could finish it, let alone rope him back in.


"-mujhe kitni buri tarah phansa diya hai," Mihir finished anyway, to the empty space Ritik had just vacated. "Pata hai?"


"Main bas kuch soch rahi thi," Tulsi said, coming to sit across from him, still smiling.


"Kya?"


"Yehi - kitni ajeeb baat hai na," she said. "Bachche chhote hote hain, tab hum unhe sab kuch sikhaate hain. Aur jab woh bade ho jaate hain, tab yeh humein sikhaate hain - kitna kuch."


Mihir considered that for a moment, something softening in his expression. "Haan, yeh toh hai." A pause, and then, brightening, "Arre - tumhe Bandhej drop kar doon?"


"Jaldi nahi hai," Tulsi said. "Bas lunch se pehle kabhi bhi ek ghante ke liye jaana hai. Sab settle karke ladkiyon ko samjha dena hai, taaki agle das-gyarah din woh sab khud sambhal saken. Tum busy ho toh main cab le lungi."


"Cab kyun?" Mihir was already reaching for his own keys. "Main le chalta hoon. Ek ghante ke liye kisi paas ke café mein baithke apni preps kar lunga."


"Café mein kyun?" Tulsi said. "Mere cabin mein hi baith jaana."


"Theek hai." He glanced at her, something easy settling between them. "Kab nikalna hai?"


"Bas, thodi der mein."


-----


Two hours later, they were back. The watchman heaved two noticeably heavy carry bags out of the car and into the house, where Kamla took them off his hands.


"Kamla, mere room mein rakh dena unhe," Tulsi said, already looking faintly amused at her own predicament.


Shobha wandered over, eyeing the bags with open curiosity. "Mumma, yeh itna sab kya hai?"


Tulsi shook her head. "Mat pooch, Shobha - meri Bandhej ki ladkiyan!" She threw up her hands. "Iss umar mein mujhe model banake chhodengi yeh log. Das din ke liye chaudah sarees de di hain - blouse-petticoat bhi khaas silvaake. Kehti hain, Bandhej ko represent karne jaa rahe ho, toh Bandhej ke best creations hi pehenke jaana wahaan."


Shobha laughed, clearly siding with the girls at Bandhej on this one. "Sahi toh keh rahi hain woh, Mumma. Aap Bandhej ki face ho - thoda toh style maaro aap bhi wahaan."


She glanced at the time. "Mumma, bas paanch minute mein lunch lag jaayega. Aap freshen up ho jaaiye."


Mihir glanced at his watch after lunch, then at her. "Tulsi, abhi so jao thodi der. Raat ko bhi neend poori nahi milegi, aur waise bhi tumhe flight mein toh neend aati hi nahi."


She nodded, already feeling the pull of it, then paused at the doorway. "Tumhari packing ho gayi?"


"Packing?" A pause. "Ho jaayegi bas thodi der mein."


He went upstairs, and a minute later, without his knowing, so did she.


She found him standing at his open suitcase, which held, so far, nothing but a few blazers laid flat and not much else.


He hadn't heard her come in, was still frowning slightly at something in his own head, and it was only when she stepped further into the room that she saw it - his side of the wardrobe, doors open, and inside it, chaos. Shirts half-folded and shoved in at odd angles, ties tangled into each other, a shelf of neatly stacked kurtas collapsed sideways into a heap that looked like it had been that way for a long time.


Something in her went very still.


She'd seen her own side of this huge wardrobe a number of times since coming back - had opened it herself more than once, taken out a piece of jewelry when she needed it, found everything exactly where it should be, Shobha's careful hand evident in every drawer. She had simply assumed, without ever once checking, that his side received the same quiet maintenance in her absence.


It hadn't occurred to her, until this exact moment, that six and a half years had passed since she'd actually looked inside it.


"Yeh kya haal banake rakha hai apne wardrobe ka?" she said, moving closer, already reaching to straighten a shirt that had slid halfway off its hanger. "Kab se nahi theek karwaya?"


Even as she asked it, some part of her already suspected the answer.


Mihir didn't look up from the suitcase.


"Jab se tum gayi thi," he said quietly. "Tab se." A pause, his hands going still over the blazer he'd been folding. "Mujhe pasand nahi tumhare sivay koi aur meri cheezon ko chhue."


"Arre toh-" she started, some instinct in her wanting to argue, to tell him that was absurd, that six years of ties knotted into each other over a stubborn refusal made no sense at all - and then the sentence simply gave up on itself, the whole enormous weight of what he'd just said arriving all at once, too much to argue with, too much to even fully look at directly.


She turned to the wardrobe instead and began setting it right, hands moving with the particular briskness of someone who needed something to do with them.


"Arre - abhi mat karo yeh," Mihir said, coming up behind her. "Abhi jaake aaram karo."


She didn't listen, reaching past him for another tangled hanger, and he stepped sideways, deliberately blocking her path to the shelf.


"Waise bhi yeh kaam wife ka hai," he said, something teasing creeping back into his voice now, "aur maine tumhe kaha na - main tumhe apni wife ki tarah kabhi nahi dekhna chahta. Hamara toh abhi courtship chal raha hai, yaad hai? Ek janam bhi poora nahi hua abhi - tumne toh saat janam ki negotiation ki thi."


She didn't laugh, didn't even let herself smile at it, though something in her chest had loosened slightly at the deflection.


"Ho gaya tumhara?" she said instead, already steering him by the arm toward his desk. She sat him down in the chair and put the iPad into his hands before he could protest further. "Ab yahaan baitho, aur chup chaap apna homework karo. Mujhe karne do sab."


She turned back to the wardrobe and started again.


"Achha," he tried once more, twisting around in the chair, "wardrobe wahaan se aane ke baad theek kar lenge. Abhi sirf packing kar lete hain, dono milke. Please na, Tulsi. Tumhe aaram karna chahiye. Please."


She only nodded, not agreeing so much as acknowledging, and kept going.


His suits, at least, had come back from the laundromat properly dry cleaned, pressed and hung, one small mercy.


"Socks," she murmured, half to herself, moving to the drawer where she used to keep his once - and found it in such disarray that it took her a couple of minutes of searching to piece together even ten matching pairs.


Then his shirts, which needed ironing before they could go in, and she crossed the room toward the corner where the standing iron used to live - only for Mihir to get there first, lifting it out before she could.


"Main kar deta hoon iron," he said. "Tum baaki ki packing dekh lo."


She looked at him properly then, something like disbelief crossing her face. "Tumhe aata hai ab iron karna?"


"Tumhari judaai ne," he said quietly, not quite meeting her eyes as he said it, "bahut kuch sikha diya."


She had to blink hard, twice, to keep the tears from actually falling, and he didn't let the moment stretch long enough to test whether she'd succeed.


"Jaldi baaki ki packing dekh lo," he said, already smoothing a shirt out on the ironing board, brisk again, deliberately ordinary. "Aur please, jaake aaram kar lo."


She nodded, though she didn't leave - just moved quietly back to the suitcase, folding what remained of his things with a care that had nothing to do with efficiency, the whole rest of the packing finished in a silence that neither of them tried to fill.


-----


After dinner, Mihir found her again. "Tulsi, abhi so jao. Tumhari toh packing ho gayi na?"


"Haan, bas paanch minute mein ho jaayegi," she said. "Mujhe khaas kuch karna hi nahi pada - ladkiyon ne chaudah sarees de di hain, complete set ke saath. Bas ab upar jaake do-teen jewelry sets nikaal leti hoon, aur phir sirf suitcase mein daalna reh jaata hai."

He nodded, and the two of them climbed the stairs together.


Upstairs, she went straight to the jewelry cabinet and pulled it open. Her hand went first, without a word, without needing his opinion on it, to the champagne diamond set - reaching past everything else to lift it out and set it aside, done before he'd even had the chance to offer a thought on it.


For the rest, she turned to him, holding up one piece after another. "Yeh loon?"


He considered each one for a moment before answering, and she took his word for it every time - the two of them working steadily through the drawers together until the last of what she'd need was set aside, ready for the suitcase.


He'd gone to sleep only after she'd assured him she'd be done in five minutes and then go to sleep too. An hour later, he was asleep, when the sound reached him from the room below - hers, directly beneath his, in the arrangement that had held for months without either of them naming why.


He went down and knocked. She opened the door looking thoroughly hassled and simply said, "Andar aao," stepping back to let him in.


It was the first time he'd been inside since she'd come back.


The room had been Baa's once, and he'd wanted, right at the start, to make it into something better for Tulsi - had thought about it more than once, before deciding against offering anything at all, knowing she wouldn't have accepted it from him then.


Seeing it now, properly, after all these months, it struck him differently than he'd expected. No proper bed, only a charpayi. A small, plain desk. A ceiling fan turning slowly overhead - no AC, unlike the rest of the house. An old steel almirah standing in the corner, the kind that belonged to a different era entirely.


It was already mid-May. The days were climbing toward the season's real heat, and some part of him had assumed, without ever quite admitting it to himself, that she'd have moved back to their room by now - that whatever had been holding them apart before had thinned enough, these past months, to no longer need this kind of distance. He didn't know if it was her own hesitation keeping her here, or some unspoken pressure from the family, everyone quietly waiting for her to take that step herself. He didn't want to be the one to ask. Once they were back from New York, he told himself, he'd bring it up - even if she wasn't ready to move back to their room, he'd at least get her somewhere cooler before the real heat set in.


He set the thought aside and looked at her properly.


The fourteen sarees the girls at Bandhej had packed were meant to have stayed exactly as they'd arrived, folded, wrapped individually along with the blouses and petticoats, and ready to go straight into the suitcase. Instead, Tulsi had unwrapped most of them, and the room was now a sea of unfolded silk - bright, layered chaos spreading across the charpayi and the floor around it - with her standing in the middle of it looking something he almost never saw on her: confused, flustered, and thoroughly irritated.


"Kya hua yeh sab!" he said. "Tumne toh kaha tha paanch minute lagenge. Lekin tum toh ab tak soyi bhi nahi."


"Yeh ladkiyaan!" She gestured at the mess, clearly past the point of being calm about it. "Inka dimaag kharaab ho gaya hai. Main yeh sab sareeyan pehnoongi? Conference mein? Joker lagungi main, Mihir! Mujhe inn ladkiyon pe bharosa hi nahi karna chahiye tha." She pressed a hand to her forehead. "Ab last moment pe kya karoon? Purani sarees dry-clean karwani padengi, matching blouse-petticoat bhi dhoondhne padenge - aur nikalna hai humein chhe ghante mein."


Mihir looked around at the sarees scattered across the room. If he was honest with himself, most of them were far too loud, too bright, for anything he'd ever seen her choose on her own.


He crossed the room and took her face gently in his hands, waiting until her eyes actually met his before he spoke.


"Pehle ek gehri saans lo," he said quietly. "Relax karo." He held her gaze a moment longer. "Tum kisi bhi libaas mein dignified hi lagti ho, Tulsi. Yeh baat kabhi mat bhoolna." A small, reassuring smile. "Aur main samajh raha hoon - yeh tumhara style nahi hai. Lekin hum dono milke sort karte haina. Ek-ek karke."


He picked up the ivory one first, the silk sombre and plain except for a pallu that erupted, almost absurdly for her, into a riot of color with the blouse matching the pallu. "Yeh," he said, holding it up. "Yeh chal jaayegi. Body sombre hai - pallu thoda loud hai, par overall theek lagega. Agar iske saath chaho toh koi aur plain blouse le lo."


She eyed it doubtfully, but let herself be convinced.


The deep maroon with its fine border needed no argument at all - she simply nodded and set it aside herself.


Then the burnt rust, almost terracotta in the room's dim light. "Yeh," Mihir said, turning it over in his hands, "yeh gorgeous lagegi. Heritage-textile jaisa look hai iska. Poori tarah Indian, lekin New York ke liye bhi sophisticated enough."


She looked at it again, this time with something closer to agreement.


The emerald green, when he held it up, made her wince slightly. "Yeh toh bahut gaudy hai, Mihir."


"Tumhare liye, haan," he said. "Lekin conference ke liye bilkul sahi color hai. Log yaad rakhenge."


By then, something in her had settled enough that she picked the next three or four herself, working through the pile with her own eye again rather than needing his.


"Aur inke alawa," Mihir added, once she'd nearly finished, the rest of the new lot rejected unanimously by both, "woh saree bhi le lo - jo tumne conclave mein pehni thi." He paused briefly before continuing. "Aur Pari ne apne haathon se banake di thi tumhare birthday pe, woh bhi rakh lo. Jaanta hoon uska weave thoda uneven hai, lekin ek toh uska color combination bahut achha hai, tumhare complexion pe bhi suit karta hai - aur doosra, kya pata koi aisa mauka aa jaaye jahaan tumhe apne workers ke baare mein baat karne ka mauka mile. Toh apni pehni hui saree hi dikha ke keh sakti ho, yeh humare naye workers ka kaam hai."


He named two or three more after that - a specific saree from some evening months ago, another from a function she barely remembered attending herself - each one recalled with a precision that caught her completely off guard. She went still for a moment, genuinely stunned that he could summon so many of her sarees in such detail, even from the stretch of months when things between them had been far from easy.


"Abhi sab pack kar dete hain," Mihir said, already reaching for the suitcase. "Dry-cleaning, ironing, sab hotel mein ho jaayega."


Together they cleared the charpayi, folding and putting the chosen sarees into the suitcase, and put everything else back into the old steel almirah. Once it was done, he stood and looked at her, something firm settling into his voice.


"Chalo, ab aao, so jaao."


"Tum jaao, so jao," she said. "Main so jaaungi."


"Main dopahar se keh raha hoon neend poori karo," he said, "lekin tum maan kahaan rahi ho. Chalo, aao leto. Tumhe bed mein settle kiye bina main ab nahi jaaunga."


She lay down at that, and he pulled the duvet over her, tucking it in with more care than the gesture strictly needed. He was reaching for the light switch when a thought seemed to catch him.


"Arre - tumhari ticket aa gayi na? Organizers ne bheji hogi."


"Haan," she said, already half into the pillow. "Vaishnavi ne shaam ko bhej di thi. Maine abhi thodi der pehle Gautam ko forward kar di hai - uske room mein printer haina."


"Gautam ko bheji hai, phir toh subah zaroor print out de dega." Something in him eased at that. "Ab so jao thoda."


He switched off the light and left, easing the door shut softly behind him.


-----


By 4:30 am, the house was awake despite itself - everyone except the four youngest gathered near the entrance in various states of sleepy formality, seeing them off before the car left for the airport.

Gautam came down the stairs with a sheet of paper in hand, his expression already sour before he'd said a word.


"Maa," he said, holding the printout out to her, "aapko toh organizers ne economy class ka ticket diya hai."


Tulsi took it, genuinely surprised, scanning the page as if it might correct itself on a second read.


Mihir's reaction was immediate and considerably less measured. "Kya?" He was already reaching for the paper himself. "Yeh kya mazaak hai? VIP invite ke saath economy ticket?"


"Mihir," Tulsi said, calm even as he wasn't, "itna outraged hone ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Bandhej abhi kaafi chota, naya business hai unke liye - obviously mujhe VIP treatment nahi milegi jaisi tumhe milegi. Yeh normal hai."


"Agar mujhe pehle pata hota," Mihir said, still frowning at the ticket, "toh main khud tumhara ticket book kar deta. Business class mein."


"Arre, itni si baat ka itna bada kyun bana rahe ho?" She took the paper back from him gently, tucking it into her bag with a briskness that was meant to close the subject. "Main bilkul theek rahungi economy mein bhi. Tum sab relax karo -main comfortable rahungi."


The goodbyes came in the usual overlapping rush - Ritik reminding them to call once they'd landed, Vrinda pressing a small packet of homemade snacks into Tulsi's hands "boarding ka wait karte waqt bhookh lage toh," some waving sleepily from the stairs.


As Angad's car finally pulled away, Daksha Chachi turned to Gayatri Chachi with the satisfied air of someone watching a plan unfold exactly as intended.


"Achha hua yeh dono saath jaa rahe hain," she said. "Das-gyarah din - na koi zimmedari, na ghar ka kaam-kaaj, na hum sab beech mein. Bas woh dono."


Gayatri Chachi nodded, following the car with her eyes until it turned out of the gate. "Aur agar abhi bhi koi baat baaki hai unke beech - koi purani galatfehmi, koi jhijhak - toh yeh trip woh bhi saaf kar degi. Dekhna."


A murmur of agreement went around the small group still standing in the driveway, everyone nodding along with the quiet confidence of people who'd been waiting a long time for exactly this kind of unsupervised, uninterrupted stretch of time to work its own magic.


-----


At the airport, Mihir made one more attempt before boarding - a quiet word to the counter staff, the practiced ease of a man used to problems dissolving in front of him. This one didn't. The flight was full, no upgrades available, no seats to be moved.


He came back looking faintly irritated with the entire aviation industry, and Tulsi simply took his arm, steering him toward their gate.


"Chalo," she said. "Jaisi hai waisi seat mein baith jaate hain. Kya farak padta hai?"


In the end, they boarded exactly as their tickets said they would - Mihir toward the front of the plane, Tulsi several rows back in economy, the two of them parting ways at the aisle with a small, almost amused look passed between them, before each found their own seat for the long flight ahead.


Ten minutes after takeoff, the seatbelt sign blinked off, and Mihir was already making his way down the aisle toward her.


Tulsi looked up from her book, unsurprised, already sensing what was coming.


"Chalo," he said, stopping beside her row. "Meri seat pe jaake baitho. Main yahaan baith jaata hoon."


"Mihir." She kept her voice low, glancing briefly at the two passengers beside her. "Tum bahut uncomfortable ho jaaoge yahaan. Tumne life mein kabhi economy travel kiya hi nahi hai. Mujhe thodi-bahut aadat hai iski. Main theek hoon."


"Koi baat nahi," he said, entirely unbothered. "Har cheez ke liye life mein kabhi na kabhi ek first time hota hai. Yeh mera economy class ka first time hi sahi."


She felt the particular awkwardness of the moment settle over her only then - sitting boxed in by the window, two strangers between her and the aisle, and Mihir standing there holding up the flow of passengers behind him, apparently prepared to argue this out in front of all of them.


"Jao," she said, firmly now. "Baith jao apni seat pe."


"Toh tum yahaan se uthogi nahi?"


She shook her head.


"Theek hai," he said, and turned, walking back up the aisle without further argument.


She'd barely returned to her book when he reappeared - this time with a flight attendant beside him, wheeling his carry-on.


"Excuse me, madam," the attendant said to the woman seated beside Tulsi, entirely pleasant about it, "would you like to give up your seat to this gentleman, in exchange for his business class seat?"


The woman's face lit up instantly. "Oh - yes, of course, absolutely!" She was out of her seat and gathering her things before anyone could even process how quickly the trade had happened.


Tulsi stared at him, thoroughly flabbergasted, as he settled into the vacated seat beside her with the calm satisfaction of a man who had simply refused to lose.


"Yeh kya tareeka hai," she said, once she'd recovered enough to speak. "Bribery? Woh bhi apni khud ki seat de ke?"


"Bribery nahi," Mihir said, buckling his seatbelt. "Fair trade. Usne upgrade liya, maine downgrade - dono khush."


"Tumhe pata bhi hai economy seat mein legroom kitna kam hota hai? Solah ghante ki flight hai yeh, Mihir."


"Toh?" He shrugged, entirely at ease. "Solah ghante mein kya hi ho jaayega. Zinda bacha rahunga."


"Aur tumhara business class ka khaana?" She gave him a pointed look. "Yahaan toh tumhe wahi milega jo mujhe milega."


"Achha hi hoga," he said. "Tumhare saath baithke khaana - kaisa bhi ho, achha hi lagega."


She shook her head, unable to fully hide the small, exasperated smile tugging at her mouth, and went back to her book.


"Tumhe neend bhi aayegi iss seat par?" she asked after a moment.


"Sona kise hai?" Mihir said, settling back with the air of someone who'd already decided the matter. "Tumhe toh waise bhi neend nahi aati flight mein. Toh dono milke jaagenge."


A flight attendant appeared a while later with a small trolley, pausing beside them. "Something to drink before your meal? We have a full bar, or fresh juices-"


Mihir glanced at the laminated menu card, scanning down a list of names that meant absolutely nothing to him - wines, cocktails, things with more syllables than he had patience for.


"Yeh sab kya hai," he muttered, half to himself, turning the card over as if the back might explain the front.


Tulsi leaned over slightly, glanced at the card, then at him, and took over without being asked.


"Could I get a Bloody Mary mix for him - just the mix, no vodka, please," she told the attendant. "And a fresh lime soda for me."


"Of course, ma'am." The attendant returned a few minutes later, setting a glass down in front of each of them - the tomato-red mix garnished with a celery stalk in front of Mihir, the pale, fizzing lime soda in front of Tulsi - before moving on to the next row.


Mihir looked at his glass, then at her. "Tumne poocha bhi nahi mujhse."


"Poochne ki zaroorat kya thi?" she said, picking up her own glass. "Tum alcoholic drinks toh peete nahi ho, aur baaki iss list mein kuch bhi tumhe samajh nahi aaya - chehra dekh ke pata chal raha tha." She took a sip. "Toh maine wahi order kiya jo tumhe pasand aayega."


He didn't argue with that, because there was nothing to argue with. He picked up his glass and tried it instead, and something in his expression suggested she'd guessed well.


"Ek kaam karte hain," Tulsi said after a moment, setting her glass down. "Tum window wali seat le lo. Yahan zyaada jagah milegi tumhe, itna cramped nahi lagega."


Mihir glanced sideways, toward the man seated on his other side - a stranger, headphones already on, eyes closed.


"Nahi," he said, shaking his head. "Tum yahin baithi raho."


"Kyun? Mujhe koi farak nahi padta-"


"Mujhe padta hai." He said it simply, without making a production of it. "Tum yahaan window ke paas comfortable ho. Waise bhi" - a small tilt of his head toward the stranger beside him, lowering his voice- "tumhe kisi anjaan aadmi ke bagal mein baithna theek nahi lagega."


Tulsi looked at him for a moment, something quietly registering - the fact that he'd thought of this at all, in the middle of an argument he'd already lost about the seat itself. She didn't push it further.


"Theek hai," she said instead, picking her glass back up. "Jaisi tumhari marzi."


They settled into an easy quiet after that, sipping their drinks, the conversation drifting the way conversations do on long flights - from the conference, to Ritik-Munni's wedding preparations that would need to start properly once they were back, to some old argument about a relative neither of them had thought about in years, resurrected now purely because they had sixteen hours and nothing better to do with them.


The meal arrived not long after - trays set down with the particular ceremony of economy class service, small compartments of food arranged neatly under foil.


Tulsi peeled back the covering on her own tray, glanced at his without needing to ask, and immediately began rearranging both.


"Yeh lo," she said, sliding her paneer dish toward him and pulling his dal toward herself. "Tumhe paneer zyaada pasand hai, aur mujhe dal."


Mihir looked at the swap, then at her.

"Tumne dekha bhi nahi properly, kya hai kis mein."


"Dekhna kya hai," Tulsi said, already breaking off a piece of roti. "Itne saalon mein itna toh pata hi hai mujhe."


He didn't argue with that either - just picked up his fork, and ate the paneer she'd handed him without a word, though something in the set of his mouth suggested he was fighting the urge to say something about it, and losing.


They ate mostly in comfortable silence after that, trading small comments about the food, about the cramped fold-down trays, about nothing in particular - the kind of meal that didn't need much conversation to feel complete.


Once the trays had been cleared and the cabin lights dimmed for the long stretch of night ahead, Tulsi glanced at the screen still glowing faintly in front of her, "Koi movie dekhein?"


Mihir looked over, mildly surprised.

"Tumhe movie dekhni hai?"


"Routine mein toh kahan time milta hai. Aur flight bhi kaafi lambi hai abhi." She was already reaching for the screen in front of her, tapping it awake.


"Tum apne screen pe wohi movie chalao jo main apne pe chalaungi - saath mein dekhte hain."


He agreed easily enough, and they both began scrolling through their respective catalogues, calling out titles to each other across the narrow gap between their seats.


"Yeh dekhi hai."


"Yeh bhi."


"Yeh achhi lag rahi hai-"


"Nahi, yeh bore karegi."


Mihir's thumb paused on a title, and he went quiet for a second longer than the moment required.


Tulsi noticed. "Kya hua?"


He smiled slowly, something distant crossing his face. "Kuch yaad aa gaya."


"Kya?"


"Yeh dekho," he said, turning his screen slightly toward her.


She looked. Mohabbatein.


For a moment, neither of them said anything. The title sat there between them - Mohabbatein - glowing quietly in the dimmed cabin.


Then Tulsi's hand went still over her own screen, something crossing her face that took a second longer to name than surprise usually did.


"Yeh..." she started, and didn't finish.


Mihir was watching her rather than the screen now, something soft and faraway in his own expression. "Yaad hai?"


"Kaise bhool sakti hoon." She looked at him properly. "Humne saath mein dekhi thi. Shaadi ke baad pehli baar."


"Nayi-nayi shaadi hui thi humari," he said quietly. "Aur gharwalon ne humein honeymoon pe jaane hi nahi diya tha."


*Uss zamaane mein bhi tum mujhe khush karne ke tareeke dhoondh hi lete the*, she thought, though what she said out loud was simpler. "Toh tumne mujhe picture dikhane le jaane ka plan banaya tha."


"Haan." A small, remembering smile. "Lekin seedhe seedhe le jaana toh mumkin nahi tha."


About forty-four years ago:


Tulsi had been standing near the kitchen doorway that evening, still in her everyday saree, adjusting her pallu, when Mihir had appeared with his usual unhurried ease and gone straight to his mother instead of to her.


"Maa," he'd said, "mere dost ne mandir mein ek Pooja rakhi hai. Mujhe aur Tulsi ko bulaya hai."


Savita had looked up from whatever she was doing, something faintly suspicious already sitting behind her eyes, the way it always did whenever her newly-married son suddenly needed to take his wife anywhere at all. "Kaunsa dost?"


"Maa, aap nahi jaanti use."


"Kaunsi Pooja?"


"Bas... Pooja hai, Maa."


Savita had studied him a moment longer than was comfortable, and Tulsi, still by the doorway, had felt her own pulse pick up slightly, entirely unsure herself what was actually happening.


"Theek hai," Savita had said finally, reluctance written into every syllable of it. "Lekin jaldi wapas aana."


"Ji, Maa."


Tulsi had barely had time to process any of it before he was steering her out toward the car, and it was only once they were on the road - well past the turning that led to the mandir - that she'd finally looked at him properly.


"Mihir."


"Hmm?"


"Yeh raasta toh mandir ka nahi hai."


"Pata hai."


"Phir?"


"Bas thoda aage."


A few minutes later, the car had pulled into a parking lot she recognized immediately, and her stomach had done something complicated at the sight of the theatre's lit-up signage.


"Mihir..."


He'd turned to her with an expression of entirely manufactured innocence. "Haan?"


"Yeh... Pooja hai?"


He'd laughed so hard he'd nearly forgotten to park the car properly.


Back to the present:


Tulsi laughed now too, the sound slipping out of her before she could stop it, drawing a brief, curious glance from the passenger across the aisle.


"Tumne itni aasaani se jhoot bol diya tha Maa se," she said, lowering her voice again. "Mujhe toh aaj tak yaad hai - uss din ghar aake Maa aur chachiyon ne jo meri kaisi class li thi. Kiski Pooja thi, kahan thi, kitni der lagi - ek ek sawaal."


"Bechari tum," Mihir said, entirely unrepentant.


"Bechari tumhari wajah se bani thi main."


"Achha?"


"Haan." She gave him a pointed look. "Baa ne bacha liya tha mujhe uss din, warna pata nahi kya hota."


Something shifted in his expression at that - a small, private amusement he seemed to be deciding whether to let show fully.


"Baa ko toh tumhe bachaana hi tha," he said.


"Haan, woh toh hai."


"Unhi ka toh idea tha yeh sab."


Tulsi turned to look at him properly. "Kiska idea?"


"Baa ka."


She stared at him. "Baa ka? Tumhe kaise pata?"


"Kyunki unhone hi mujhe bola tha," Mihir said, something mischievous creeping fully into his face now. "'Pooja ka bahaana banaa aur meri Tulsi ko picture dikhane le jaa. Warna meri yeh teeno bahuen tum dono ki prem kahani ki chhutti kar dengi.'"


Tulsi's mouth fell open. She swatted his arm without thinking. "Mihir! Itne saalon tak yeh baat chhupa ke rakhi tumne?"


"Tumne poocha kab?" he said, laughing properly now.


She shook her head, though the smile wouldn't leave her face. "Baa hamesha humari taraf thin."


"Hamesha," he agreed, quieter now.


"Waise," Mihir added after a moment, "Baa kitni cool thin na."


Tulsi's expression shifted immediately into something mildly disapproving. "Hmm."


He smiled at that, clearly having expected exactly this reaction.


"Bahut progressive thin apne zamaane ke hisaab se," Tulsi said, relenting slightly, though she said it like a careful correction rather than agreement with his word choice. "Apne time se kaafi aage."


"Bilkul," Mihir said.


"Unhe pata tha humein kabhi-kabhi ghar se bahar nikalne ka bahaana chahiye hota tha."


"Unhe pata tha Maa aur chachiyan agar asli wajah jaan jaatin-"


"-toh humari prem kahani ki chhutti kar deti," Tulsi finished, and they both laughed at that, the old joke landing easily even now.


For a moment they simply sat with that - an old, private history reopened after decades, still warm at the center of it.


"Toh," Tulsi said eventually, glancing back at the screen, "yehi dekhein?"


"Yehi dekhte hain," Mihir said. "Kaafi saalon baad dobara."


Once it was settled, Tulsi called the attendant over and asked for an extra blanket. She rolled it herself once it arrived, working it into a firm cylinder, and held it out to him.


"Thoda aage jhuko."


He did, mildly confused, and she tucked the rolled blanket in behind him, against the small of his back.


"Yeh kya hai?"


"Lumbar support," she said, entirely matter-of-fact, as though this were a piece of standard economy-class knowledge everyone possessed. "Warna peeth dukhegi tumhari, itni der baithe rahoge toh."


He settled back against it, and something in his face suggested it had actually helped, though he didn't say so.


Then she reached for the armrest between their seats and folded it back and away, closing the small gap that had been sitting between them since takeoff.

Neither of them commented on that part at all.


She started both their movies at exactly the same moment, and the opening titles of Mohabbatein began to play, twin and identical, across two small screens in the quiet, dimmed cabin.


They'd barely settled into the opening scenes when Jugal Hansraj's face first filled the screen, and something in Mihir's expression flickered - a memory surfacing before he'd even decided to mention it.


About forty-four years ago:


The theatre had been dark, the film barely ten minutes in, when Mihir first noticed it - the particular way Tulsi's eyes had gone soft and fixed the moment the young hero appeared on screen, her attention leaving the popcorn between them, leaving him entirely, settling somewhere up there on that oversized, unfairly handsome face. "Kitna cute hai!" She'd said almost to herself.


He'd glanced at her. Then at the screen. Then back at her.


She hadn't noticed him noticing.


By the second scene, he'd shifted slightly in his seat, arms crossed, something unfamiliar and faintly ridiculous churning in his chest - jealousy, he'd realized, with no small amount of disbelief at himself. Jealous. Of an actor. On a screen. While sitting beside his own wife, on their secret, stolen almost-honeymoon date.


"Kya hai isme itna khaas," he'd muttered, more to himself than to her.


Tulsi, still watching the screen, hadn't even turned her head. "Hmm?"


He hadn't tried again after that.


Back to the present:


"Tumhe pata hai," Mihir said now, glancing sideways at her, "uss din bhi tum bilkul aise hi dekh rahi thi isse."


Tulsi pulled one earphone out. "Kya?"


He nodded at the screen. "Jugal Hansraj. Uss pehli baar bhi tum poori movie iski taraf hi dekh rahi thi. Main tumhare bagal mein baitha tha apni jaan jalaate hue."


"Aisa kuch nahi tha," she said, though the smile tugging at her mouth said otherwise.


"Tha," Mihir said. "Main tab bhi jealous ho gaya tha. Apni khud ki honeymoon-jaisi date pe, ek actor se."


Tulsi considered him for a moment, something mischievous settling into her expression now. "Haan, toh mujhe pasand hai abhi bhi," she said, entirely unbothered. "Isliye toh maine recently Nadaaniyaan dekhi thi - sirf Jugal Hansraj ke liye."


Mihir's hand went to his face, one long, resigned facepalm.


Tulsi looked at him pointedly, letting the moment stretch just long enough to enjoy it. "Woh kya hai na, Mihir," she said looking straight into his eyes, "meri choices change nahi hoti."


They settled back into the film after that, the banter dissolving into a comfortable, companionable quiet neither of them felt the need to fill.


Somewhere past the halfway mark of the movie, without either of them deciding it, her hand found the armrest space between them where the divider no longer sat, and a while later, so did his. Neither commented on it. Neither moved away from it either.


The scene changed. Then another.


Somewhere in the space between them, without her quite registering when it had happened, her arm had settled through the crook of his - not held, not gripped, just resting there, the way it might have rested against him a thousand ordinary times across thirty-eight years, before all the years there'd been no arm to rest against at all.


He felt it before he let himself react to it. Kept his eyes on the screen a moment longer, giving her the space to pull back if she wanted to. She didn't.


Slowly - carefully, as if any sudden movement might undo it - he shifted his own arm free and brought it around her instead, resting it along the back of her seat, not quite touching her shoulders yet, simply present.


She didn't pull away from that either.


Another scene passed. Then another. At some point her head found its way to his shoulder - not a decision, not a moment either of them marked, just the slow, inevitable physics of two tired bodies finding the nearest comfortable thing after everything the day had asked of them.


Mohabbatein played on, the dialogue growing distant and muffled in her ears, the words no longer quite landing the way they had twenty minutes earlier.


Mihir noticed the shift in her breathing before anything else - slower, deeper, the particular rhythm he hadn't heard beside him in six and a half years but recognized instantly anyway, the way the body remembers things the mind has stopped consciously cataloguing.


He turned his head slightly. Her eyes were closed. Her earphone had slipped half out of one ear, the tinny sound of dialogue barely audible now against the cabin's hum.


She's asleep, he thought, something in his chest going very still with the realization. On a flight. She never sleeps on flights.


He didn't move for a long moment, simply sitting with that - the specific, quiet miracle of it, the thing six and a half years of separation had taken from her finally being handed back, apparently, by nothing more than his own shoulder.


Carefully, so as not to wake her, he reached up with his free hand and eased the loose earphone the rest of the way out, setting it down gently in her lap. He did the same for himself, and reached forward to switch off both their screens, the cabin dimming further around them into near-total dark, lit only by the scattered glow of other passengers' entertainment systems further down the aisle.


Then he looked at her once more, removed her glasses and pocketed them carefully.


She didn't stir through any of it.


He let his arm settle more fully around her then, careful, unhurried, and allowed himself, finally, to simply look at her - asleep against him, something in her face fully at ease in a way he rarely saw even when she was awake.


Some time later, the plane dipped slightly - a small pocket of turbulence, nothing serious, just enough to jostle the cabin for a few seconds - and her head, still deep in sleep, began to tip forward, drifting toward the hard edge of the window beside her.


Mihir's hand moved before he'd consciously decided to move it, sliding up to cushion the space between her head and the glass, his palm absorbing what the window would have otherwise dealt her.


She settled back against him instead, undisturbed, never waking.


He kept his hand there a while longer than the moment strictly required, and then, finally, let his own eyes close - smiling faintly in the dark, at eleven thousand meters, at a closeness he had waited six and a half years to have back.


Author's Note

This chapter, like every other one before it, carries a little piece of me in it.

Writing TuHir is never just about putting words on a page for me. It is about sitting with their silences, their small gestures, their quiet courage, and trying to honour every emotion as honestly as I can. Some chapters take more out of me than others - this one certainly did - but the process of telling their story continues to be one of the most fulfilling things I do.

Apart from the pure joy of writing a story that feels true to me, your reviews remain one of my biggest motivators. On days when the forum feels quiet or the words come slowly, a single thoughtful comment can make the entire effort feel seen and worthwhile. I read every one of them, often more than once, and they genuinely keep me going.

Thank you for staying with this story, for feeling along with these characters, and for taking the time to share your thoughts. It means more than I can properly put into words.

See you in the next chapter.

- ElitePerfumer

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Chapter 43..Part 1..

Loved how you have handled delicate personal transitions between Mitali-Ritik-Munni so well in this section. From divorce, a co-parenting agreement, to a new engagement .. everything with exceptional sensitivity and moral clarity. Rather than resorting to sensationalized domestic drama.

Loved how Tulsi first reached out to Munni for her consent before Mitali. And Mitali too, she didn't force, she made sure its her own decision. superbly handled.

The transition from the heavy emotional negotiations of the morning to the joyful, grounded warmth of the evening Gor Dhana was so well. The arrival of Munni's Mama and Mami braced for condescension from an elite family but receiving only warmth and respect. Not just from Tulsi but her kids, Mihir, Chachi, everyone truly served as a wonderful mirror to reflect the true character of the Virani household.

Thank you for awesome part.

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Chapter 43.. Part 2...

One of my absolute favorites so far.. The whole section beautifully shifts the focus onto the foundational bond between Mihir and Tulsi only in this entire section and thank you for that 😇🤗

Loved how you opened it with Mihir doing his homework with Ritik helo and Tulsi amused by it to his mock irritation😃

Bandhej girls conspiring and packing for Tulsi. Shobha and maybe Pari agreeing with them was so cute 😇

The packing sequence served as a deeply moving turning point for them. Tulsi stepping into Mihir's room to find his wardrobe in complete disarray is a stark, physical manifestation of his life over the past six and a half years. 🥺

Mihir's quiet confession, "Jab se tum gayi thi...” and “Mujhe pasand nahi tumhare sivay koi aur meri cheezon ko chhue," hits with overwhelming emotional gravity. It lays bare the reality that while the household continued to run smoothly around him, Mihir intentionally froze his personal space in her absence. 🥺

But then Tulsi's reflexive instinct to step in, sort his socks, and pack his things paired with Mihir taking over the iron because her absence taught him how to. Later he noticing Tulsi has not slept yet and going to check on her, helping her sort through her “gaudy” sarees crisis. And top it all remembering every saree she owns with great details and Tulsi realizing that small detail 😍. All shows that despite their past separation, their division of care and unspoken sync remain intact.

Mihir's immediate outrage over Tulsi receiving an economy class ticket highlights his protective nature. His subsequent maneuver on the plane with trading his business class seat with a fellow passenger just to sit beside her is quintessential Mihir Virani and reminds us why he is adored husband of Indian TV despite having so many flaws 😀

From Tulsi ordering his non-alcoholic drink by reading his facial expression, to swapping her paneer for his dal without a second thought, the flight sequence illustrates how thoroughly they understand each other's habits and preferences without needing words.

The mid-flight movie selection is so trivial but you made it come out so romantic. Hats off 👏🏻👏🏻 The wave of nostalgia through their shared memory of watching Mohabbatein forty-four years ago. Learning that Baa was the secret mastermind behind their fake "pooja" date adds a wonderful touch of vintage family charm and show how Baa always rooted for them. I also loved how Mihir remembered getting jealous of Jugal Hansraj and Tulsi teasing him by sharing how she still watches movies for the actor 😀 I always enjoy them teasing and bantering with each other like friends they were before falling in love.

The armrest divider finally removed and Tulsi naturally resting her head on Mihir's shoulder. For a woman who never sleeps on flights, dropping her guard to fall sound asleep beside him is the ultimate symbol of restored trust and comfort. Mihir gently removing her glasses and cushioning her head against the window frame during turbulence brings their six-and-a-half-year emotional separation to a quiet, breathtaking closure.

Thank you thank you for such a wonderful chapter 🤗

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Chapter 43:

Its all about Tulsi, Mihir solving or making space into new life of Ritik, Mitali n Munni.

Tulsi as always way ahead to process the things, quickly find ways to communicate so that further decisions can be taken basis the outcome and circumstances. She knew she cannot make everyone happy, at the same time she cannot take it if any of her children pain. She equally wants to manage and be that bridge, understand and behave being in each one's shoes. So thoughtful writing here.

Her conversation with Munni, her choice of words, she do not want to pressurize anybody, or influence her decision, but to take right decision which brings happiness. Munni is gonna be insecure, it's not easy to live with a man who was already married, has kid and with this extra Exwife staying under same roof, and kids shared responsibilities, possibilities of public appearances etc.

Munni is sensible, but iss mamle me thoda iverboard hogyi hai aise mujhe laga. Sooraj Barjatya ka film dekhe jaisa laga mujhe😜😃. Heaven on earth, so understanding, heartful of love, no one misunderstands the other, fully trusts each other, sab kuch bahot sahi hai. Beyond words to describe, fairytale lagne lagi, sab bahot accha, without loosing the essence of it.

Kya duniya itna bhi khoobsoorat hosakta hai, har rishta itna aasani se nibhaya jaa sakta hai, kya aise log honge jo ek dusre ko itna trust karenge, itne dependent, itne seedhe se cheezoan ko samjhenge aur apnayenge.

Mitali on the other hand transformed completely, been a good human being, jo apne se pehle dusroan ko rkh rhi hai, dusre ki importance samjh rhi hai, unki feelings ko respect karne lagi hai. But she is a human her breaking down shows she can't think of her life without her daughter n Tulsi. The newly built bond is holding her, but sge cabbot be selfish at this moment. Ritik is now stuck here.

They are sharing more cordial relationship now, acting protective, sharing friendly behavior with each other. It's strange how things changed between them the moment they decided to part ways, suddenly they started to like and admire each others opinions.

Mitali sharing Tulsi how she felt her relationship with Ritik, her intimacy with Ritk was part of an act but not out of love, surrender and want, definitely it is obvious the touch felt filthy, disgusting. Writer at this point you completely made sense why they are divorcing. So thoughtful judis to you.

Mihir n Tulsi resolving the issues and convincing Mitali to stay at SN as their daughter.

Mihir trusting Tulsi's instincts is much appreciated.

Chalo divorce hogya, Mitali agreed to stay back then Ritik Munni ki sagayi bhi

Often it happens till today the class difference and the treatment received. How Munni's mama mami were worried to match upto Virani's taur tarike, financial status, class, how every Virani treated them so well, given the warmth, been a good host. They simply value people irrespective of their class. You narrated it beautifully here Tulsi receiving them at the door, how Shobha asked them sit on the sofa and seating just next to them, then Mihir assuring by holding Munni's mama, wo maan samdhi hone ka gesture beautiful. The tradition you explained very well.

Ab aagya main cheez: Nayi Safar Conference ki. 😃

How Mihir has not completed his homework, unable to keep up with the new trend analysis, how he is frustrated and taking help from Ritik, smirking over and Tulsi enjoying it. Mihir mocking it Tere Bete ki love life k liye, mujhe ye karna pad rha hai( man me to laddoo phoot rhe hain Mihir ke fir bhi show ro karsakta hai na ki he is not that much keen to go for the conference 😂😂) it's so him😂😂, Tulsi ko bhi pata hai, at the same time Mihir ko thoda kaam mile, kyun sab kuch mere bache kare wala maa ka attitude and she is bemused by his annoyed face 😂😂, it's super duper cute.

Arre wah Bandhej ki ladkiyoan ne Tulsi ki packing karke bheji nice, Shobha backing their idea shows how she thinks her mom should be look her best in an important event. Then she some how felt to look Mihir's packing, he was a mess. The contrast of being organized abd unorganized shelves. Unorganized because he do not want anyone to touch his things other than his wife, it hits differently, Tulsi ki dil ko choo liya, he saying he learnt to ironing, time has taught him to adopt things- mostly he did it because he missed her. Tulsi almost at the verge of breaking down, somehow Mihir manages to divert the topic. This whole thing was so adorable, touchy, emotional, full of TuHir displaying love, expressing how her presence is missed, felt and the heart accepted as irreplaceable.

Then his protectiveness - he insisted her to rest as she cannot sleep during their flying. Mihir entering Tulsi's room for the first time, he realizing it's a very ordinary room, very basic things-somewhere it hurts him to not offer a good place to live in. His determination to ask her after this trip to either movevto their room or a comfortable one, his thoughts, arithmetic beautifully written. Then Mihir helping her choose Sarees, suggesting her to pair with plain blouses etc, it's so adorable. Especially the part where he mentioned how her other saree collections, her likes, she was very happy to know this how exactly he remembered her collection and taste, even the event she worn before, how he admired her, assimilated her everything in himself. He is just at his best, Tulsi undoubtedly will fall in love with this man every day, every hour. That could be one of the reasons she can forgive him, adore him, love him enormously. The scene was awesome take a bow, this is real no big dialogues, no show off, no drama plain simple Truth put in the most natural way, vocal about his admiration to his wife's liking, how ge noticed everything of her, till today he had secretly kept in his memory. It's so so cute and admirable.


The family is very happy to send them away far from the family responsibilities, Business stress and be themselves, have their me time. Quiet a scene to visualize 😃

His frustration over her getting Economy ticket, he trying his best to upgrade her seat, upon unavailable he insisting her to swap his seat, she denying it because she knew him more than himself. But the man comes with an idea of swapping with the copaasenger, Mihir plans 😂😂 he succeeds grabing the seat next to her. Pehli baar Mihur must be happy to get his seat downgraded to Economy class😂, Mihir want to utilize most of their time being together.

Mohabbatein being their fake pooja movie 😂😂. Their memory lane how they had plan secretly to watch this movie, how the family suspected, how they had to cook stories to cover up, how Baa was on their side. (Accha honeymoon after 44yrs is something very special n cute 😂😜, let's consider this trip as the one, Mihir ke liye Bhaad me jaaye project wala attitude rahega😂😂😂).

They watching again, how Mihir was jealous of Tulsi admiring JH😂😂, and she admitting her liking for JH till date, Mihir laughing at his own immaturity abd sharing it with Tulsi, then she enjoying his discomfort n honesty 😂😂. Tulsi getting the etc mattress to support his back, ordering him food, swaping her Paneer with his dal, theur banters lovely.

The love birds finding their ways, she kneeling on his shoulder to rest willingly on her own without any hesitation, resistance, he protecting her using his hand cushioning her head so that turbulence doesn't disturb her sleep. She sleeping away to glory in his arms, the calmness, the serenity, steadiness is sometihing so satisfying to read. He admiring her sleeping form, the lost 6.5 yrs lost warmth, once he believed it's almost a dream to behold her again in his arms, rejoice the moment, he accepted it is impossible. But today the warmth, the satisfaction, the lost touch is felt again, her breathing against him is noticed, felt. Isse accha kya hosakta hai Mihir ke liye ki his live is with him fully like before. He knew she cabnot sleep during a flight, but today possibly she found her nest to rest, the contentment, the warmth she reclaimed, and the happiness she found.

Not many words required to express, not big conversations but these gestures surely wil make a big difference to learn, adore, admire and surrender.

Thank you for this TuHir moments, I am so glad to read them always. I am more excited for their trip. I am looking forward to have more TuHir moments.

Thank you writer for bringing the best in you to project TuHir beautifully and hats off to you for this wonderful chapter. Romance without emotional connect doesn't resonate well, here it is a blend of the two, you did a fabulous job.



Thank you ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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