TuHir FF: Never Your Wife Again!! Ch23 on pg 44: The Missing Pieces - Page 45

Originally posted by: Aimsha

Loved it , want a reunion like this in the show itself will wait eagerly for the next update

Thank u dear, I’m glad you loved it- show se toh expect karna hi chhod diya hai Maine.

Next chapter may take time - unable to concentrate right now due to being under the weather

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: fan_fiction123

Chapter 23 is honestly a huge payoff. It lands like a controlled detonation. Everything that’s been building finally goes off, but in a way that reveals structure rather than chaos.

Hey again, dear! Thank you for this very beautiful and satisfying review❤️

I had to keep rewriting parts of this chapter until everything fell into place. So glad my efforts paid off!

The boardroom scene is super satisfying. Lots of flips happen because people actually make choices. Gautam, Karan, Mitali, Suchitra (honestly, this one surprised me). And that Angad–Ritik move? What an idea. Khud ka toh lo hi, Pari ka bhi share wapas lo 😃 The show just told us they were planning something against RV, but there was never any real outcome.

Thank you so much - glad that scene came out well! Glad the choices made sense. Suchitra flipping wasn’t originally my plan - Till I wrote the beginning of that flashback Mitali - Suchitra scene in an earlier chapter - my original plan was that Mitali will simply listen to her plan and lie to her that she was with them but before the meeting would transfer her stake to Tulsi. Then I had an idea from a dialogue of Noina on the phone call to Mihir - Tum akele reh jaaoge. So I thought why not flip that on her face - kyun na noina akeli reh jaaye? But then I needed a strong reason for suchu to betray her - hence I made Mitali say the reciprocal thing as well as - for once in life do the right thing as well as pointing out their folly and shamelessness in trying to trap Mihir

Angad Ritik trick- oh the way they built up their fights in the show- I kept waiting for something big! Alas!

Tulsi is still the quiet MVP. She doesn’t need big speeches (like another ITV character 😜😜). The way she just is in every moment (signing papers, holding the girls, touching Gayatri’s feet, and that final balcony-cum-Holi scene 🥰) carries so much weight. And when she breaks later, it hits harder because of that. First Mihir and then Tulsi in two back-to-back chapters… heartbreaking 🥺

I think I get what other itv character u r talking about here although I have never seen a single scene of that show. Tulsi - i m trying my best to keep the character true to the show - especially the season 1. S2 tulsi cries at the drop of a hat and is sometimes dramatic. Anyways still the character is immensely likable.

That breakdown had been building for a long while.

Mihir’s part really stood out here. The corridor scene + the divorce paper realization adds so much depth to his last six years. What thoughtful writing. This is where your writing really trumps the actual show writers, who are just rushing everything and leaving the audience to fill in the blanks 🤪😀

Exactly the reason I started this story - I’m constantly trying to explain the illogical things shown in the show - Mihir so comfortable with Noina and not even trying to find Tulsi - those things really jarred - show ke writers probably don’t have an iota of sense nor emotional depth - god knows why they’re hired in the first place

glad I could explain away 2 most illogical things with logic and some psychological reasoning

The way you’ve written him, it doesn’t excuse him, but it helps us understand him more.

Excuse toh kar hi nahi sakte - it is impossible to excuse a lot of things he’s done. We can only understand how he was just a weak person

Pari and Mitali’s confession was heavy but necessary. They didn’t get an easy pass, which is good. You can still feel the discomfort in the room afterward, especially with Vrinda and Ritik.

Correct Pari and Mitali will face censuring looks for a while ..to an extent even Gayatri! This was my another complaint from the show like a few other people- that Pari is forgiven without even knowing what she did

Gayatri chachi’s confession was surprisingly strong too. Messy, uncomfortable, but very believable. It shows the problem wasn’t just Noina but the family dynamics played a role as well. Both Mihir and Tulsi reflecting on Chachi’s confession really shows how important it is for their patch-up.

Correct - Noina only used the fault lines within the family, so to say. This is also a lesson to any family ki aapas me kitni bhi resentments hon, bahar walon ke saamne nahi aani chahiye! Always should present a united front before outsiders even if they seem good and our well-wishers

If anything, the chapter is just very packed. A lot happens back-to-back. I honestly thought you’d end it much sooner, but thank you for giving us more 🤗

🤗Had to finish both the resolutions in the same chapter - the outer challenge and TuHirs relationship

The end of one phase (Noina) and the start of something deeper (TuHir).

yes correct

And that last balcony scene has my heart ❤️ Perfectly done. 👏🏻👏🏻

Thank you dear! Glad it came out well. I didn’t want it cheesy or dramatic or shallow or forced

Thank you dear once again - my replies in red.

Originally posted by: bpatil3

This chapter has been the new beginning i suppose.

For not just Tulsi n Mihir, for Pari, Mithali n Rithik too.

The writing was absolute treat to read.

Hey dear thank you so much for this review - I always wait eagerly for ur reviews and this review is more than worth my wait.

Yes a new beginning in more senses than 1.

Oh I am so glad it was a treat to read!

The Shareholder Meeting:

The Board Meeting has absolutely full of suspense and interesting facts. I understand about every other Virani voting against Noina, surprised to see Shuchu joining hands with Viranis 😂😂.

ab woh kya haina - ki noina ne Mihir ko bola tha - Tum akele reh jaaoge - toh isiliye mujhe idea aaya ki why not flip that on her face! Originally mera plan nahi tha woh baad me idea aaya- please read in more details in my response to fan_fiction123 which I is just above this one.

Mihir taking Tulsi along to end Noina's partnership, Noina pulling up cheap stunt (she can't win him by her charming, beautiful, her sexual advancements, body structure in 6years) seductive touch, he felt disgusted, he regrets every star of his when he met her in his life. I credit the writer here for bringing this scene, Tulsi can witness the kind of life Mihir n Noina led together past 6years. Tulsi had these doubts, what kind of bond and relationship Noina n Mihir shared, how they behaved, did they really share any emotions like a couple, Tulsi got all her answers. Much neeeded.

exactly - tulsi needed answers - all the missing pieces - and this is not something even Mihir could ever have explained to her - dekhna hi zaroori tha

Holika Dahan: good wins over evil. All negatives were burnt and a new beginning with a light heart started. More apt here, again the writers smartness here, Mitali and Pari opening up, accepting their mistakes, blunders, learning new lessons of life.

Thank you for calling me a smart writer😊

The confession of Pari and Mitali was detailed, infact they counted all their evil plans, how they executed and how it effected every one in Virani family. Especially, what costed Tulsi n Mihir's life.

Pari- Mitali - Other missing pieces of the puzzle for tulsi to solve the puzzle

Then comes Gayatri chahchi apology and Tulsi taking her blessings.

That scene I actually copied from the show itself - exact dialogues of tulsi too according to my memory- they met naa during Ritiks suicide attempt

And then Pari's request to forgive n accept her Papa. Mihir staying quiet.

Yes Mihir and Tulsi both told her to basically shut up

The last thing Holi scene was perfect, at the end, it was nail biting, you again stopped at the crucial point so that curiosity barkarar rhe

😂😂

Ye lo kar lo baat!! Isse zyaada happy ending kya hi hota iss chapter ke liye and u say nail biting 😜😂

Tulsi's absence: you smartly do it writer, make Mihir yearn for her, he almost behaves like jal bin machli😜 considering it as his punishment😂. ❤️

Let me admit - I loved punishing Mihir here and making him sad repeatedly in my story - saari bhadaas Nikaal lee😂😂🤣

Show me Mihir’s not being punished at all or even naming /acknowledging his failures

You justify everything including why Mihir didn't find Tulsi's whereabouts, how he felt disgusted by Noina's mere touch, how he never had any feelings for any other women, he never looked upon Noina the way he looks at his wife, he was systematically trapped, and then Gayatri chachi's advise to do justice with Noina. You justified, why the divorce was never processed by Mihir (you are way ahead than BT writers🙄, they just don't pay attention to detail and never give a logical answer why it was done the way it is done.), he never intended to divorce, that's probably he never visited Anjar. so that Noina cannot emotionally pull out her drama to get married and permanently separate them. What he failed to do is not to find any proof of her past and the ONS she claimed. He led a lone, guilty, remorseful, sad, painful life the past 6years. Till now Tulsi was feeling sad only at the surface level only she calculated herself respect, her pain, she felt cheated, belittled and almost felt Mihir has forgotten. after hearing how Noina drugged him in US tried to be close( this news is new thing for Mihir as well, he must be disgusted and shocked, what kind of a woman is she to claim her love😡) Tulsi has got the picture perfect clarity, he had looked upon Noina as a friend and Business partner alone, never in his dream thought of having an affair, life or marriage with her, Mihir has clarified this when Tulsi asked about their nest "what kind of a person do you think I'm" and the way he protected their bedroom, their memories, their 38years of life ki poonji. So, now she broke down not just for herself but for Mihir too, who got punished for no fault of their, but succumbed to a systematic plan of someone, you rightly said the evil architect. Tulsi's absence, his balcony waits aisa lag rha tha ki kuch haath laga hua hai ye mehsoos hone se pehle fisal gayi aise hi. He can only do one thing respect her choices, as a life partner he can only do this -wait

Yeah till now she didn’t really feel any pain for him - after knowing everything she realized he was in a worst pain than herself and yes that’s also why she broke down.

Mitali:

Mitali n Ritik finding ways to start from the scratch was a good move❤️ appreciate it.

Ritik Mitali and Munni - I had been planning something unique for them but not sure if I can pulll it off - try karoon Kya?

Angad looking at Mithali in a respectable manner now. She earned it by confessing at the right time, he didn't grudge her for him loosing 6years without SN family.

Angad vrinda and Ritik are still reeling from everything Pari and Mitali did - the dinner scene was rife with that tension

Shuchu surprisingly once in a life time took right decision of supporting her daughter for her well being. Afterall, mother's priority is always her child, probably for the first time she felt to think of her daughter than her di. Instead of acting a pawn for Noina's bad game plan, she chose the hard, but at peace. At least, mother's cannot be selfish ( credut to writer here).

Yes Mitali managed to open her eyes about a lot of things:

Sahi Galat

Maa Kya hoti hai

You two sisters have no sense or shame

Ritik n Angad: oye pehli baar ye log kuch sensible kiye hai, only in your FF it made sense, (in serial, why they pulled that drama, what is the outcome is unknown, looked weird and silly. 😂) here they used their so called brain and took back the shares of both Angad and RV back. Kudos to you for using that scene, while Angad waa about to sign the transfer agreement, Rithik appeared and you rightly used this and put sensibly, unlike serial.

Arre I kept waiting in serial ki iss ke baare me kya end result dikhaaenge but they forgot about it as usual. -

Glad my version made sense

Thank you so much dear. My replies in red.

Originally posted by: bpatil3

This song::

तुम्हारी नजरों में हमने देखा

अजब सी चाहत झलक रही है

तुम्हारे होठों की सुरखियों से

वफ़ा की शब्नम छलक रही है

तुम्हारी उल्फ़त में जान-ए-जाना

हमें मिली थी जो एक धड़कन

हमारे सीने में आज तक वो

तुम्हारी धड़कन धड़क रही है

तुम्हारी नजरों में हमने देखा

अजब सी चाहत झलक रही है

Wow!! These words truly touched my heart - wanted to reread them to analyze their depth at leisure so waited till now to respond!! Kya words hain!! Simply awesome!!