A TuHir FF: Never Your Wife Again!! Ch-2 on Pg-3 - Page 4

Beautiful ... Hope even Mitali gets justice served. Enjoyed the last scene... where she knew his steps... Do continue

Originally posted by: TianaWrites

Beautiful ... Hope even Mitali gets justice served. Enjoyed the last scene... where she knew his steps... Do continue

thank you so much? But a request to you and all my readers! I would be happier if you could please write longer, analytical/critical reviews!!

About Mitali - what do you want? Do you think she’s irredeemable?

Did not many like chapter 2?

Hi, I am bit unwell, will get back to ur story!

Originally posted by: luvumjht

Hi, I am bit unwell, will get back to ur story!

Please take care!

Hrithik tulsi scene was nice.I liked tulsi saying that shanti niketan is pure as it was built by Baa and husband with love and it can't be impure.Hrithik saying that mitali is not a woman but a poison was painful. Did he realize that mitali too played a dirty game to get him?

Originally posted by: ElitePerfumer

thank you so much? But a request to you and all my readers! I would be happier if you could please write longer, analytical/critical reviews!!

About Mitali - what do you want? Do you think she’s irredeemable?

I don't think she is irredeemable but at any case I don't want her with Rithik. She needs to be out of his life. Also pre leap I liked Rithik the best of gen z kids and was rooting for him with Munni. But post leap I am not so sure. From this fiction I would want to like his character again. His bond with Tulsi was so good... I would love to see more of them

Ritik tulsi scenes on screen and here has so much innocence and hurt

Many calls him loser but ritik was always sheltered very sensitive kid. He was suddenly thrust into adult life, wife kid and business. His idea of marriage was gone. His wife wanted his older brother. The business is going dead. His pent up emotions only comes in front of tulsi. Him begging for her to stay cause that's the only thing he know will keep him sane and the family

I really liked her moving into baa's room and the description, symbolic that she's in that stage in her life and family. Her main agayi and main wapas nhi ja sakti us kamre mein

I had said that in edt but makers should copy scenes from this fic line by line. Change nothing

Mihir is in guilt and he's giving the space to tulsi but I hope these two talk. How tulsi had been hurt since a long time - her dream husband was shattered thanks to mandira, then again, and how she can't step into the room despite noyona doing drama, and mihir letting out what's going through his head, him showing love care for tulsi from distance. It will be beautiful to read.

Update soon!

Thank you both of you for the detailed comments that I requested and needed to stay motivated to continue with this at the pace I am going!!

Will respond individually to both of you later!! Having a busy day and not feeling that good too!!

Chapter 3 is almost ready - needs an hour’s editing and finishing touches only! When do you all want it?

Even chapter 4 most of the scenes are ready! I’m really excited about a particular scene of chapter 4 since it’s come out so well!!