GHUMAR O GHUMAR 21.11 - Page 13

Pace is good enf ..I will read anything intresting..that does not show the leads as mahaan

Maybe kaira helps tani and krish bond in reality one last shot ..he does seem to like her ..but not love ..else leave and tani deserves better

Kia also should get the reality of her ab and ar , maybe abir getting custody ..after fighting with ab ar since he knows their reality now

U can write how much ever u eant

Originally posted by: A_Star39

I cant let Aaryan and Kaira seperate lol.They are the main USP of my FF.I do have in mind to explore the Birla side.

Oh great

Aryan needs to cut off his parents or change Manish Manoj . I can't tolerate poddar with goenkas lol

https://youtu.be/Ue8a8Pff3AE?si=2D9-3bjNwZxiWJy3

Originally posted by: A_Star39

one question to ask those reading my FF

Do you want me to go slow or you need some pace in story?

Do you want me to end the FF by Mid December of by New year?

Also what are your reviews or suggestions? Do you want a particular focus on any character?

Im going to write major part over weekend so let me know!

Pace is perfect..... Story is too good so far....... Bas Gabheera aur uske sillyboy ki bhar bhar ke beizzati by Gv, Ruhi, AbhiR & Birla's.... Please add AbhiR realise Achaara reality like muskaan.... Jaise introduction wali AbhiR show me aayatha uska charecter waisa hi ho.....

Please try to explore Maheshwari's & Singhania's..... Were pretty much fun when were in the show...

Originally posted by: Mehersudha

They kept the pot. And others saw their love and said let God keep happy always🤣🤣 ho gaya bhagwaan unko humesha kush rakhe.

Vidya tells abheera after ghumar winning that she wants to talk to buasaa. Mental abheera gets excited and makes ar too crazy with her in that she lost her nath ring away from nose.

Abhir comes there says STAR COUPLE should come and dance all are waiting for you.

Abheera sets her nath again and go for a dance with family.

Losing of nath is for biwi ka darja and next sets it. On her own.

Let's see the affect of star couple next. In BSP time ar showed their couple as star ⭐ couple people will remember them always.

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Originally posted by: AgniShiva

Nath is for pregnancy too naa. May be khud ki galti ki wajah se bacha jayega iska. Vidya k dupatte mein aag lagi and ye help kar rahi thi tab bhi nikli thi sayad.

So iska matlab respect as biwi and bahu jaayega ab ka as she will do major kaand

Originally posted by: Krish58

So iska matlab respect as biwi and bahu jaayega ab ka as she will do major kaand

https://youtu.be/T657N6ycJvc?si=QJYe8Joqqyx5X9O3