A Tale As Old As Time [COMPLETED]- Page 14

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Posted: 1 years ago

You just couldn't end this chapter at this cliffhanger. But both her and Ansh are fools in love and I love them for it. Neither of them wants to give up. That's perfect.

I'm really sorry for not replying before. Life has kept me very busy. I hope you update soon. I think the fic is heading towards the end now?

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Posted: 1 years ago

Finally ansh jumps into action. Seeing the consequences of their actions brought it all home. He wasn't ready to believe, but now has no choice.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: HeirofSharingan

You just couldn't end this chapter at this cliffhanger. But both her and Ansh are fools in love and I love them for it. Neither of them wants to give up. That's perfect.

I'm really sorry for not replying before. Life has kept me very busy. I hope you update soon. I think the fic is heading towards the end now?

No problem dear. I'm eternally indebted that you still took the time out, read the chapter and gave your feedback. smiley27 smiley27 smiley27 I know it's not easy to keep track, specially when the updating is so irregular. smiley12 smiley12 smiley12

The fic is definitely heading towards the end. The next chapter will contain the ultimate showdown. smiley15 smiley15 smiley15

I really hope you'll enjoy reading it. smiley9 smiley9 smiley9

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

Finally ansh jumps into action. Seeing the consequences of their actions brought it all home. He wasn't ready to believe, but now has no choice.

Yeah, to be fair, he did try to hold onto Piya. But the illusion was too strong and with the Reevavanshis continuously shuffling between the two worlds, it became infinite times more difficult for him to have any sort of clarity. Now that he's aware of what's happening, he'll do everything in his power to set everything right.

The next chapter will contain the ultimate showdown.

I really hope you'll enjoy reading that. smiley9 smiley9 smiley9

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Posted: 1 years ago

This story has been migrated to the FANFICTIONS forum...


https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/5310

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Posted: 1 years ago

If anyone can convince her, its her mother. She needs to let the words sink in.

Ansh has finally come around too. He will do his best to save her.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

If anyone can convince her, its her mother. She needs to let the words sink in.

Ansh has finally come around too. He will do his best to save her.

Hey, I kept updating the chapter and now it's completed. You can refresh the page check the latest version to see if you have missed anything. smiley1

Edited by Nush_Rat - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

This was such a lovely and powerful chapter. The conversations, the emotional conflict, and the fear and desperation was so well done. I'm really looking forward to the next updates and what happens next.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: HeirofSharingan

This was such a lovely and powerful chapter. The conversations, the emotional conflict, and the fear and desperation was so well done. I'm really looking forward to the next updates and what happens next.

Thank you so much dear! smiley31

I was really skeptical about this chapter as there were a lot of references from the original show and the logic behind fate playing its game was a bit puzzling, even for me. smiley17

But... I had so much fun writing it. Ansh leaving Piya was one of the most unrealistic storyline in the show. And when Nikki and I originally started writing this fic years ago, even we weren't convinced that such a situation can arise.

Now that I have seen life a bit more and can think of more complex emotions, I think this time the plot fitted well and did full justice to the original characters. smiley1

Even if I can't finish the story now or take a REALLY long time to update the last couple of chapters, I am glad that at least I have been able to tie all the loose ends and any of my reader won't be left wondering what could have happened.

Piya and Ansh were always supposed to find their way back to each other and they did... smiley27 smiley27 smiley27

All that remains is them getting back to their world and I really hope I don't take forever to write it. smiley24

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Posted: 1 years ago

Went back and read it again. She came back and even he is OK. She got to see her family, even if they can't be with her now. She saw them, talked to them. Its something.

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