April 10th
[Another 'whatever' episode. yaaaawwwn. will try to spice it up in the update.]
Nimmi baby a bit worried it can be risky. Ahujas sure the plan will work and Ammu sure they will trap them in the same house that they tried to burn [but doesn't seem likely, since Karma is busy sunbathing on a beach.]
Rajeev and Manvi already in Ahuja house even before Ahujas are in... Rajeev doesn't want to go ahead but has to because its Manvi - mother of my kid. [Hmm... Rajeev.... you were better off with Tara Baby... kyu? kyu dhokka diya bechari ko? ab bhukto!!!! ]
he enquires with another person as to what is going on... he explains shanti pooja after 2 hours ... [achcha hai... kisi ke ghar pe hein... public property me nahi... no one seems to know that.]
Manvi learns about it... and is given space for a monologue.
Space given for VA for a chem scene too, with jhumka... he applies bindi too. She does get some fb's of bindi on his hand.. oh... they had to remind that the same thing happened after holika .. and it was said he will make her wear the bindi when he comes back to his home.
Now when she goes a bit sweet, he goes... Manvi, Rajeev...
[Sweet hone ka haq sirf mera hai].
Ahuja house pooja.
Manvi and Rajeev look through a window... Rajeev finds excuses to convince her not to go... Police checking ids... "Mein to jaa rahi hu... tum yahi ruko" - but didn't get if Manvi went in or out.
Pooja starts and ek bade mantra ke baad khatam bhi hua.
[was surprised itna bada mantra kyu sunaya... but it was to show the whole pooja is done.
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Bebe announces she has called some poor ladies for daan, dakshina... Virat asks why... aise haalath mein bhi? [Well... isnt that what he wanted - that Manvi and Rajeev come here? So isn't she helping even if unintentionally? Kaun likhta hai aise dialogues?]
Line for daan dakshina...
They notice a good quality chappal on someone... [but why is everyone hiding their faces??? ghoonghat? think even men. Muh dikhayi nahi karvani hai. ya daan lete huve sharam aa rahi hai?]
Manvi enters. has a knife. focus on Ammu... Oh... Bhavani explains to Nimmi that a few people in this daan team are Police too.. [the reason for all the ghoongats... but still looks really odd.]
Rajeev wants to come in [some weird make up... like SRK Jawan...] but notices police shoes... in the line... wants to inform Manvi...
Manvi loses focus when Babs says "hope Rajeev and Manvi die... I will make bharta of them if I see them"... she goes towards Babs... much to Rajeev's annoyance.. also attracts Ammu's attention... Ammu has a long pause after she sees the knife... but comes in b/w when Manvi attacks... and gets hurt on her wrist.
Manvi is caught. Rajeev thinking whether to save himself or save Manvi...
Manvi goes "Rajeev help me"
[Confidence achcha hai bandi ka]
Angry that he isn't coming.
Goes to attack Ammu.. But babs slaps her. Dont know why she hasn't been handcuffed yet. [bhaag ke kaise jayegi????]
Ammu trying to explain about ex's death and what she did..
"will destroy you all.." and yada yada from Manvi again...
well... same thing your sis did isn't it? from Ammu...
She has to tell the police to take her away...
waise bhi ab dialogues khatam huve
(Ooo... away and huve... kind of rhymes.. so thokko taali.)
Manvi is taken away... not handcuffed...
Oh... she is handcuffed when she is downstairs... Still shouting for Rajeev.
Rajeev knows how to get her out of jail... of course no one notices him... and he has to have his monologue too... and some antics.
Family meeting / reunion... over tea. [But everyone is relaxed... ab to aadat si hai aise jeene mein].
Bebe announces she will distribute jalebi to the whole society when Rajeev is arrested / dead.
[well.... kuch kuch hua in the ep... but is there any point? bass... events after events nikal gaya .... waise hi show ka last ep bhi la do yaar!!!! kab tak kheechoge??????]
Chalo... thats the best I could do in spicing it up too. pathetic attempt in that... just like the writers.
Edited by Adiandsid - 6 months ago
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