Originally posted by: KarwaChothThali
Ok - so I watched the ep - ff few annoying dialogues but did.
I am extremely disappointed with writing-
1. The focus is completely on Shalini’s choice. Even Vikrant emphasized on it- ARS already manipulated her, and she will choose not to complain? so Is this why Vikrant be angry at Mannat? I SERIOUSLY HOPE NOT! I hope they are undercover team.
2. The dialogues and execution are so shallow!
Shalini ko kaisa legega, kya lagega- are bhai- a crime happened on the premises of your business, you need to find culprit so this does not happen again! Talk about regardless of what she thinks you cant let such people loose or they will attack someone else!!! I was hoping that is what Vikrant will point with late night cleaning work- they dont want complaint, culprit is free- Mannat and Shalini wont choose to work kate, Malla should, and then point- what if this happened to Malla? But the discussion took turn to Shalini’s choice!!!
3. So many FB scenes of SA! Why? We got it- Mannat was telling her encounter - we rem. Bar bar chalane ki jarurat nahi. So triggering!
What a insensitive approach!
4. The while dialogue about why Mannat, forever etc- even though it was cute but I found it to be a misfit, just considering severity of situation. I wish they brought this scene into some other track- here we are listening emotional reencounter of two SA attempts with FB scenes and thats the time director/writer thought is good for this scene????
They really need to improve on editing- feels like we jump from one scene to another randomly.
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