Nafrat hai mujhe Mohobbat se ~ Maaneet FF ~ Part 5 - p.n.9 ~ 1 Jan 25 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Wonderful update dear

Feeling sad for geet

Watting for update

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Watting for update dear

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Beautiful update... in all this Rajeev actually seemed good... what is handas problem.

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Part 5


Geet stood outside the door, her heart racing as she knocked softly.

“Come in,” Maan’s voice came through, casual yet commanding.

Taking a deep breath, Geet stepped inside, her eyes flickering toward Maan for just a brief moment. The sight nearly made her gasp; Maan was wearing nothing but a towel wrapped snugly around his waist. Embarrassment flooded Geet’s cheeks, and she quickly averted her gaze.

Maan, suddenly aware of his state, narrowed his eyes at her. “Spit it out,” he said, his tone sharp.

In a flurry of movement, he grabbed a white shirt, hastily pulling it over his head, as if trying to cover himself before Geet could see more than she already had.

Geet, flustered, runs toward her tiny trolley without looking at Maan.

She opens her trolley and pulls out her notebook, flipping to an empty page.

Maan, still in the process of dressing, glances in her direction.

Maan (thought): Why is that notebook in such bad condition? Can’t she afford a better one?

Geet begins to write something on the empty page. without looking, she moves toward Maan.

He looked into the paper.

“I'm sorry. I know a simple 'sorry' will not do anything... I couldn't talk or answer because I was afraid, and I can't speak; I'm mute.”

“I know I'm not someone who deserves you and all this. Just treat me like a servant.”

Maan's expression shifts as he processes Geet’s words.

Geet: “Mr. Khurana is calling you for breakfast.” She wrote on another page before handling it to him.

Maan: “Huh!?”

Geet bows and quickly runs from the room.

Once alone, Maan scoffs, his frustration boiling over.

Do you think I will melt seeing all this emotional trap?”


He shakes his head, anger simmering beneath the surface. “My father, you, and your family... you literally ruined my time and life. I'm not forgiving you that easily.”

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Maan comes down the stairs for breakfast.

“Come on, Maan... I was waiting for you.” Dadima called out.

Maan remains silent, his expression unreadable.

Geet glances up, her heart racing at Maan's presence.

Geet: (thinking) “He looks so handsome.” She quickly looks down, avoiding eye contact.

Maan: “Dadima, when did you plan to tell me that my so-called wife is mute as well!?”

“M-Maan, how can you say something like that in front of her?!”

Maan: “Why isn't that the truth?”

Dadi : “Maan!!!”

Maan: “What!? “Is business deals that important to you that you literally sold your son’s happiness by marrying him to a mute girl? All because the bride went missing!?”















Geet’s eyes well with tears, hurt evident on her face.

Dadi : “Do you think that lowly of me? That I would sell your happiness for some deals or money? Speak respectfully to Geet. It doesn’t matter if you accept her as your wife or not.”

Maan:“Huh! Respect? I’ll do whatever I like. You wanted me to have a partner, right? Now your wish is fulfilled, and I’m free. So it’s my choice how I want to proceed!”

Maan: “First a substitute girl, then a freaking mute... Everyone is a fraud.”

He glares at Geet, his disgust apparent.

Maan: “Just by looking at her, I’m disgusted. Let alone accepting her as my partner.”

Dadima : “Maan!!!”

Maan: “And you!? Whatever your name is... Yes, I’ll treat you as my servant.” He finally looks at Geet, whose tears are flowing down her cheeks.

Maan: “I’m out!”

Maan: “Have a very good day, you two.”

His sarcasm reaches its peak as he storms out, leaving the tension hanging thick in the air.

Dadi : “I’m really very sorry for Maan’s behavior towards you, Geet... He just needs some time.”

“I’m also wrong for the sudden wedding of you two... I had no choice either. I hope you can forgive me for that.”

Geet looks at dadima with teary eyes.

Geet: ( in sign language) “It’s okay, ma’am. I understand.”

Dadima heavily sighs, the weight of the situation clear on her face.

Geet serves dadima her breakfast, trying to maintain a sense of normalcy.

Dadi : “You should eat, Geet... I no longer have any appetite left.”

With that, dadi leaves for work, leaving guilty geet behind.

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Rahul : “Yes, ma’am.”

Dadi : “Make sure Maan eats something... He didn’t touch any of the breakfast Geet made. I’m going on some personal trip for months. Please take care of Maan and Geet for me.”

Rahul : “Alright, ma’am. I’ll do my best.”

Dadima : “I’m trusting you with this, then.”

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Geet sat in silence, tears streaming down her face. She hadn’t eaten anything, consumed by her thoughts.

Geet : He must hate me so much... so much that he feels disgusted every time he sees me.*

I ruined their relationship as well...*

Is he disgusted because I cannot speak?

I shouldn’t appear in front of him too much... I don’t want to ruin his mood again and again.*

Nanny, I miss you so much... I’m not feeling good...*

Geet sat there, lost in her thoughts, drowning in a sea of misery.

**Ding Dong**

The doorbell rang, echoing through the quiet of the Khurana Mansion. Geet, still alone, had finally fallen asleep after hours of crying.

Geet : (looks at the door, still feeling sleepy)

Quickly, she rubbed the dry tear marks from her face and glanced at the doorbell camera.

Geet : It's that man from yesterday...*

Without hesitation, she opened the door.

Rahul : "Hello!"

Geet looks down nervously.

Rahul : "You’re alone in the house?"

Geet nods her head intensely.

Rahul : "I’m here to grab some food, and please pack some for Maan too."

Her face brightens up.

Rahul : "Let’s see what we have in the kitchen." He starts walking toward the kitchen while geet followed him quietly.

Rahul : "Wowwwwww!!!"

Geet flinches hearing his sudden scream.

Rahul : "You made these!!!?"

Geet nods.

Rahul : "Can I have some?"

Geet : (nods again)

Rahul : "You can answer me in sign language... I’m learning!" 😌😁

She finally smiles.

Rahul : "Thank you for the food!" 😌

Geet watched as he ate peacefully.

Rahul : "Whoa... so delicious!" 😋 "Should I start having meals here every day?" (looks at Geet)

Geet :Of course, brother! (in sign language)

Rahul : "Did you just call me sir?!... Wait, let me check Google."

He started to search for "sir" in sign language while eating. He realized Geet had indeed called him "sir."

"Geet... I’m your brother, not Sir, okay? Call me bro!"

She looks at him, dumbfounded.

Rahul : "Damn, this is so delicious... definitely one of my favorites."

She looked at him with wet eyes.

"Are you crying?! Oh no, I was just joking... you don’t have to call me bro if you’re uncomfortable." He said softly.

Geet shakes her head to say no.

Geet : Thank you, bro. (in sign language)

Geet felt overwhelmed by how Rahul was enjoying her handmade meal and how Rahul was one of the few people who treated her like a human.

Rahul : "Don't cry... please don't cry."

He was worried.

Geet : Thank you, bhai. (in sign language sobbing intensely)

Rahul : "Aww, you finally called me bro... I'm so happy!"

Rahul : "Let’s pack Maan’s meal now. He hasn’t eaten anything yet."

Geet nods innocently. She ran toward the kitchen and started packing the meals for Maan.

*I hope you’ll be much happier in the future... you don’t deserve any of this. Those dried tear marks don’t look good on an angel like you.* Rahul thought looking at her, feeling a mix of concern and hope for Geet's well-being.

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**In Khurana Constructions**

Rahul : "Maan-ahh!"

Maan: "What, bro?"

Rahul : "Look what I got you here!" (smiles)

Rahul opens all the food Geet prepared with big smile plastered on his face.

Maan : *Looks so good.*

"I don't want to eat, bro. I'm in a bad mood right now."

Rahul : "Don't be like that, Maan... eat something."

Rahul : "It's my favorite restaurant's food!"

Adi : "Yes, Maan, eat something, or else I’ll finish it."

Maan's stomach growls.

Rahul : "Hahahaha!" 🤣

Maan : "BRO!!!!!"

He was embarrassed.

Rahul : "EAT! EAT!"

Maan takes a bite. ‘FQCK, so delicious!’

Adi : "Maan, can I have some too?"

Maan eats without a single word, like a hungry child.

Adi extends his hands toward the food just when Maan slaps his hand.

Adi : "ACK! Can you eat everything? Give me some, Maan!"

Maan :"I can eat everything in here."

"If you're hungry, grab your phone and order the same food from the restaurant."

He starts to devour the food again.

"What's the name of the restaurant, bro?!" Adi looks at Rahul)

Rahul : "Ahhh..." 😅 he stammered.

Adi : "Come on, bro! I'm hungry!"

Rahul : "Chef: Geet Maan Sigh Khurana."

Maan stops eating and adi looked at him.

Maan almost finishes eating everything before hearing the name of the chef.

Maan : "Is that!?"

Rahul smiles brightly, "Your wife."

Maan : "FXCK!!"

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Nikita calls her daughter - Baby how are you!? Are you doing well?

Riya - Yeah, mom I'm good...I'll at home by tomorrow

Nikita - That Maan is actually very rich Riya... Geet must be drooling over him...that trash

Riya - But Rajeev Is more handsome...don't worry mom if I like Maan more than Rajeev I'll take him from that disabled trash..she said with smirk.

Nikita - I have a great plan baby...you just wait and watch, I will make that pet’s life a living hell.’ and she grins evilly.


To be continued.....


Happy new Year friends...smiley31I was thinking to wish you guys happy new year just..then thought of giving an update of this...also thank you so much for waiting for me here...thanks for being here friends... wish you and your family happy new year again...smiley40 hopefully will come up with saajan update also... smiley17



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Posted: 7 months ago
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Wah

Wapas aa gyi

Happy new year 🎊

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Wonderful update dear

Feeling very bad geet,

''After so long dear I am truly watting for you "

Welcome back hope all is fine with you

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Posted: 7 months ago
#89

Wonderful update dear 🙂

Just loved it 🤗

Well Maan is quite angry on Geet & his entire family as when he comes to know that Geet is mute it made things more difficult

Maan is reacting disrespectfully to her but he isn't aware of the situation in which she was pushed in by her family too

Geet listening to all this was broken 💔 but finally Rahul who actually understood her plight gave her support & courage she needed to come over this fuss

He also make Maan realise that what he is doing by hurting Geet ... Hopefully once Maan is in sane mind he can understand that she is also pawan in the game like Maan was

Now these 2 are planing something else to destroy their relationship ... How creey ... Hopefully Maan understand their plan

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗

Wishing you & your family a very happy new year 🕛

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Good update, happy new year everyone

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