Karta nahi kyun tu mujhpe yakeen? ShaLki PreeRan SS - Page 10

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Posted: 10 months ago
#91

Part 9

Fantastic Update

Shaurya is very possessive over Palki

so his cousin Reyansh has come and now the Engagement can

carry on but is Shaurya still mentally ill

hope he is honest that he really wants Palki

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Posted: 10 months ago
#92

Part 9

Fascinating and so Awesome Update

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Posted: 10 months ago
#93

Finally Palki Left Shaurya

Nice She Met Rajveer Her College Friend

Sad That Shaurya Is A Mental Patient.

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Posted: 10 months ago
#94

Karta nahi kyun tu mujhpe yakeen?...Why don't you have faith in me? Part 11

Shaurya:Preeta aunty,you know what your husband did to my dad?

Preeta:Yes,I know.

Palki was also shocked.

Palki:Mom!

Preeta:Palki,you were very small that time.So you don't remember anything.Shaurya...Raghav was a very sincere Judge.He made the wrong judgement because I asked him to do so.So I am the real culprit.

Shaurya and Palki were shocked.

Preeta:Raghav and I had late marriage.So we had children late.We had twins.Palki and Pihu.

Palki became emotional.

Palki:Pihu!

Preeta remembered carrying her twin babies Pihu and Palki in her arms.

(The credit for the edit goes to Preeti Queen).

Preeta:The rapist was Raghav's friend Rakesh.Raghav decided to punish him.So Rakesh kidnapped our daughters and blackmailed Raghav.

Flash back....

Rakesh:You forgot our friendship so fast Raghav.

Raghav:I am ashamed to have a friend like you.You are not my friend anymore.When it comes to honest and right judgement,I don't care about relationships.Only truth matters.I will stand for truth.

Rakesh:Is truth more important than your precious daughters?

Raghav became upset.

Raghav:How much you blackmail me,I won't save you by punishing an innocent person.

Rakesh smirked:Then you will face the consequences Raghav.

Present...

Preeta:So Rakesh killed Pihu and sent her body to me.

Preeta was in tears.

Flash back....

Preeta cried watching the lifeless Pihu on her lap.

Preeta begged Raghav crying:Raghav,Rakesh killed our Pihu.Please do what he asks you to do.

Raghav:No Preeta.I can't cheat myself.I can't cheat law.

My profession is my life.I cannot stand with lies.Don't you understand that?

Preeta:He will kill our Palki also.Do you want Palki also to get killed like Pihu?Don't you love our daughters?

Raghav burst into tears.

Preeta:As a mother I am begging you Raghav.Please save Palki by obeying Rakesh.I beg of you again and again.

Raghav:Alright.I will do what you say.Raghav Jindal who always stood for justice is going to support injustice for the first time for his own selfishness. Nobody should have my fate.

Raghav embraced her crying.


Raghav saved Rakesh and rescued Palki from Rakesh.


Raghav and Preeta hugged Palki.

Preeta:Palki,are you alright?

Palki:Yes.But where is Pihu?I miss her.

Raghav and Preeta became upset.They tried hard to hide their tears.

Raghav:Pihu has gone far beta.

Palki:Why?When will she come back?

Raghav and Preeta hugged her weeping silently as they were unable to answer her question.

Present....

Preeta:That's why Raghav made the false judgement.I know that Raghav was wrong.I was equally wrong.I know that we don't deserve any pardon.But Shaurya...any parent will do a sin or a crime to save their child.

Shaurya became very upset.

Shaurya:I can understand your situation.But please think from my position?Is it easy for a son like me to forgive the people because of which my parents died?

Preeta and Palki cried.



To their shock,Raghav surrendered to the police by confessing his crime and he got arrested.

Preeta and Palki visited him in the jail.

Palki:Dad!

Raghav:Palki...please don't hate your dad.

Palki cried:No dad...

Preeta:Sorry Raghav...because of me you are in the jail now.

Karan caressed her and said:Don't blame yourself Preeta.You did that to save your daughter which any mother will do.I also went against my profession to save my daughter.But we both forgot that our selfishness snatched the parents of an innocent child.So we need to be punished.

Preeta and Raghav wept.



Shaurya met Palki.

Palki:You used me Shaurya.You betrayed me to take revenge on my dad.

Shaurya:Palki,I am wrong.But my love for you is true.

Palki remembered Shaurya fighting with other men for her.

Palki:It was not love Shaurya.It was obsession.

Shaurya became upset.

Shaurya:Please believe my love Palki.Please try to understand the condition of my heart.

Palki:You are the last person I can believe Shaurya.

Shaurya was shattered.

Shaurya:Why don't you have faith in me Palki?

Palki:You yourself destroyed the faith I had in you Shaurya.

Shaurya:I can prove my love to you Palki.

He took a knife from the nearby table and injured his hand.Palki got terrified.

She remembered Shaurya writing her name on the door with his blood.

Palki took Shaurya to the hospital.



After some time...

Shaurya's hand got bandaged.

He smiled at Palki:You really love me.That's why you saved me.

Palki:It was not love Shaurya.It was humanity.You are mad.That's why you thought that you can regain my love by shedding your blood.A girl gets scared of such men.A girl can never love such a mad person who can harm himself.If you really loved me,you would have lived for me.But you tried to kill yourself.It is only obsession,nothing else.

Shaurya became very upset.

Shaurya:Palki...I am sorry.I will change.

Palki:If you genuinely want to change,take treatment properly.That's the only good thing you can do now.Good bye forever Shaurya.

Palki walked away.

Shaurya cried loudly.

Shaurya got admitted in the mental asylum.



After 2 years....

Palki and Rajveer exchanged rings in the engagement ceremony.

Preeta:God bless you both.

Raghav:Both of you live together happily for hundred years.

They smiled.

Suddenly Palki got a phone call.

"Hello Palki".

Palki recognized his voice.

Her lips shivered:Shaurya!

She blocked his number painfully.

Seeing Palki's face becoming dull,Preeta asked her:What happened Palki?

Palki:Nothing mom.

Palki smiled artificially.

Shaurya became upset that Palki ignored his call.

Reyansh told him:Accept the fact that Palki has left you forever and has moved on.You have to live without Palki.This time get a hold on yourself.You should not lose your mental balance again.

Silently Shaurya shed tears.

Palki remembered her moments with Shaurya painfully and shed tears.

She said in her mind:I still have feelings for you Shaurya.But I want sukoon wala pyar which is Rajveer's,not your junoon wala pyar which is toxic.

The end

Thank you friends for supporting this SS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scene,favourite jodi,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.

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Posted: 10 months ago
#95

Interesting update dear 🙂

Dramatic end to this emotional journey

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 10 months ago
#96

I Loved This Story

Glad Palki Got Married To Rajveer

Not Shaurya He Needed Help And Got It

Requesting Another Story From You Jasmine

Paras And My Favorite Tv Actress Surbhi Jyoti

😍

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Posted: 10 months ago
#97

Surprising that Palki has a twin Pihu. Twins edit is so cute. Sad that their daughters got kidnapped. Shocked to see KV as Rakesh as u said u r fed up of seeing him in negative roles. Rakesh is so cruel to kill an innocent baby. Pihu's death was painful. I wish Pihu was alive. Feeling sad for Raghav and Preeta. Poor Palki was too innocent to understand anything. Poor Raghav got arrested. Fed up with Shaurya. I am so happy u made Rajveer Palki as endgame. Perfect pics. Favorite scene is Palki ditching Shaurya. Favorite character is Preeta because she can do anything for her children. Favorite couple Preeran.

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Posted: 10 months ago
#98

I cast KVB only because he was the main villain opposite Raghav in SB2.Prithvi from KDB did not not come into my mind.

Since u said u want Pihu alive,I am thinking whether I should write its sequel with Pihu alive.

It's not Preeran.It's Raghav PreeGav.

Thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: salley145

Surprising that Palki has a twin Pihu. Twins edit is so cute. Sad that their daughters got kidnapped. Shocked to see KV as Rakesh as u said u r fed up of seeing him in negative roles. Rakesh is so cruel to kill an innocent baby. Pihu's death was painful. I wish Pihu was alive. Feeling sad for Raghav and Preeta. Poor Palki was too innocent to understand anything. Poor Raghav got arrested. Fed up with Shaurya. I am so happy u made Rajveer Palki as endgame. Perfect pics. Favorite scene is Palki ditching Shaurya. Favorite character is Preeta because she can do anything for her children. Favorite couple Preeran.

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Posted: 10 months ago
#99

Part 11

Tremendous update.... splendidly written

great end

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 10 months ago

Part 8

Its difficult to tell what Shauryas real intentions are towards Palki....Does he really love her or is he just a psycho?

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