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Posted: 1 years ago

Hahaha this Garry is too cute!! 😍 and Angad is totally lattu for sahiba. He just hasn’t raised it đŸ«  can’t wait for their long drive alone đŸ„č amazing update as always!

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Posted: 1 years ago

Sweet chapter! Finally Angad is mellowing down a little.

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Posted: 1 years ago

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Like how you manage to write so flawlessly,smiley32 during the whole song sequence I actually imagined Angad singing.

And I was also listening to that song simultaneously while reading that part of the update....


Oh, the almost kiss would have been scandalous,smiley9 and I am quite sure Brar's would have got these 2 love birds married the next week.


And so.... Manbeer noticed, hoping she speaks to Bebe about Angad-Saheba's Rishta.smiley4



Garry is so cute here,smiley31 the cupid, the love guru & he has set them again.smiley17

I really hope there is a land slide and Angad-Saheba are struck in a beautiful safe hut.smiley27smiley43

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I love the way you have created Serry i.e. Garry-Seerat equation in your story. It was something which was badly missing in the show.smiley9

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CHAPTER 19 - ON THE WAY BACK FROM MANALI


Angad drove on....it was a hilly terrain and the roads were full of sludge...he wanted to focus completely on the drive....he put on some music and they drove for an hour or so....he loved driving...did not do it often but was excellent at it....he turned to look at her...she was enjoying the view while humming along with the music.....silence was also quiet comfortable with her...he did not feel a need to constantly chit chat....he had not expected the drive to go smooth with her...but he was wrong...


He had spoken too soon, just then, as Angad was climbing a steep hill, the driver of the incoming truck, bring a little drunk, lost control of his vehicle....and banged Angad's car with a huge impact!

Angad realised a split second before and tried to turn the vehicle but there was no where to go....Sahiba.aa he screamed....


Before Shaiba could understand what was happening....there was a major impact and the airbags deployed.....the car went over the edge and rolled into the valley....landing on its tyers after few rolls.....


Sahiba was not majorly hurt....she was just too disoriented.....she did not understand what happened for few minutes....and then she heard a groan....Angad! She moved the airbags...he had somehow hit his head and was bleeding a little from his head....he was unconsious...she tried to wake him up...."Angad...Angad...wake up....please.."..scared....she struggled to open the door on her side and got out....she ran to Angad's side of the door and opened it....and...saw a big gash on Angad's arm....he was bleeding profusely ...scared she tried to wake him up....there was no one around...it was deep in the snowy forest and they had fallen from quiet a height...she started panicking....


"Angad...Angad...please wake up...you need to get out of the car... please angad." She begged...


There was fire under the bonnet and she could smell petrol leaking


"°Angad...she continued patting him on his face...then she remembered she had water in her backpack...she opened the rear door and took out her bag....she sprinkedl water on his face....

"Angad....Angad wake up" she was getting scared now...just then she heard him groan...."Sahiba"

"Ya...it's me...get up....get out of the car...the car has caught fire...."

Angad found it difficult to get up...his arm was bleeding...he had hit his head a bit and his foot seemed to have a sprain...but Sahiba would not listen...she forced him...pulled him...supported him and got him to get out of the car....and helped him to a tree a little further from the vehicle...but all that smoke from the car started impacting Angad...he started coughing.....

"Oh my God....where is your inhaler" she asked. Patting his coat pockets desperately

"In my backpack"

Sahiba had got her backpack with them but not his....she quickly ran back to the car...


"No....don't go" he coughed...it was not safe...the car had already caught fire ....


Bur Sahiba would not listen....she knew how important that inhaler was for Angad...she opened the back door and quickly picked his backpack and other small suitcase lying on the seat....she rushed back...got his Inhaler out and helped him take some puffs...


Angad looked at her...she was going through the backpacks and the suitcase to see what all was of use...

"Sahiba I am sorry" he said in-between his coughs..."I..."


"Shhhh" she kept her finger on his mouth.."it was not your fault...it was an accident....now don't talk....first get ur breath back"


She seemed so calm...even in the face of adversity, thought Angad..

Sahiba was not calm...she had been very scared....seeing him unconscious had been one of the most scariest experience of her life....but she had to be strong...for both their sakes...it was evening time and it was soon going to be dark..


Angad coughed...his cough would not subside because of all the smoke from the car....


"We need to get away from the vehicle"


"But if someone comes searching...this is the best place to be" said Angad in-between his coughs..


"Yes but this smoke is not good for you...also it's getting dark...we need to find some shelter...we don't know when someone will find us...."


She took out a stole from the suitcase and tied it tightly around his upper arm....to stem the bloodflow...

She packed some clothes from the suitcase...water....and whatever she felt was of use in a backpack....

"I will go and see if there is some shelter around..." She said bravely...but looked scared

"No..you are not going anywhere alone" said Angad with a quiet determination...the thought of letting her go alone in this jungle was a strict no....

"It's fine.."

"No its not fine...you are not going anywhere" he said angrily....when another coughing bout hit him..


Sahiba could not leave him like this also....so they agreed that they will go together....Angad would somehow manage....

So they moved away from the car and towards the jungle...after half an hour of walk or so....to their immense astonishment and pleasure...they came across a wooden cabin....the door was shut from outside but Angad managed to break the lock with a rock and they went in....

To their relief...it looked like someone's hunting cabin....there was nothing much.......few blankets, fireplace with very little wood in it and some pots and pans....but it was at least something...better than staying outside...something to protect them from the weather...

Sahiba put out a blanket on the floor near the fireplace and helped Angad sit on it and started exploring the place...she found couple of Maggi packets...an alcohol bottle and matches....she quickly put some fire in the fireplace and managed to lit it up...she then took the alcohol bottle and came towards Angad...."remove your coat and shirt" She said to Angad's astonishment....


"What why..."

"Just do as I say, I don't want any arguments"

Angad kept staring at her....

"Aree...I just want to clean your wound....I found some alcohol...Will wash it with that and then cover it with one fresh piece of cloth...I packed some clothes from the suitcase" She said exasperated


Where all his mind had run....he thought...removing his coat and shirt....the gash was quiet deep...Sahiba took out one of his custom made shirts from the backpack and proceeded to tear it to pieces....she doused the wound with alcohol....Angad flinched....holding her palm in his suddenly.....it burned like crazy .....Sahiba could understand his pain...she let him get his breath and then wrapped the wound in a fresh piece of cloth....his bleeding stopped eventually....


She also managed to clean his head wound...Angad could not believe how brave she was....instead of crying and breaking down...she had taken charge and was taking care of him....had it been any other girl he knew...they would have had panic attacks by now....

"They will find us soon you know...when we don't reach home on time...there will be an alarm and they will send a search party for us..." said Angad...


Sahiba nodded her head......


Angad was only trying to pacify her...he himself was very worried...lost in the jungle like this....he was Injured....it was getting very cold and they were not equipped to survive in this cold...they just had their jackets and couple of blankets to protect them.....he did not see any possibility of rescue till morning, ...as it would most probably snow in the night and the temperatures would go sub- zero....they did not have their phones with them too....left in the car...he just hoped the family raised an alarm soon.....Sahiba was his responsibility....he could not let anything happen to her......


It was dark outside now....Sahiba took some pan...got some fesh clean snow from outside and boiled it on the fireplace....then she got the Maggie packet and made Maggie in it...Angad was amazed at her presence of mind.....


Sahib decided to stop being scared....leave things on babaji.....and just enjoy this moment just as any other moment....she had complete faith in the almighty and did not want to spend the night being scared...and Angad said rescue will come fast...so everything was fine...


She got the Maggie....it smelled amazing...here..".I managed to find a Fork...eat...we will have to share it from the same pan...."

Angad tried but his right arm was hurting too much...he could not lift it...."Leave it" he said....when to his surprise she lifted the fork to his mouth.....he looked at her amazed...

"What? You are hurt...so I am just helping you....eat"

So they shared the Maggie, the pan and the fork...

"You are not so bad you know" She said once they were through with dinner

"What do you mean"

"When we first met....you were an absolute Khadoos....but seem to be better now'

He was amused...she was calling him a khadoos in his face...girls were always trying to impress him...but he should not be amazed he thought, Sahiba always managed to puncture his ego...


"Were you always like the ATM angad and are now changing or how? I can't imagine you as a child.....full of attitude and looking down upon other kids" she laughed at the mental picture....


"No I was not always like this....let me tell you...I was a very happy go lucky kid...most popular always...loved sports and music...completely carefree" he replied remembering his childhood...


"What happened then...."

Angad suddenly went quiet...remembering his heartbreak....he did not want to speak about it....

"Simmi"

Angad was shocked...he looked at her...how did she know about it...he was feeling angry...

"Ummm after that pool instance, Garry told Seerat Di and she told me..that's how I know.....you want to talk about it...." She was not sure why she was pursuing this...but she suddenly had this deep need to know....


Angad had not spoken about Simmi to anyone in years.... and his family tip toed around him on this topic...other than Garry few months back....but looking at Sahiba....he felt a sudden need to share.... it felt OK speaking about this with her...."She was very beautiful....was way shorter than me...used to feel like my doll....we grew up together.....she was the most popular girl in school and college.....I was crazy about her...she seemed too....till....." he spoke about the valentine's day instance....there was silence for few minutes post that....both processing their feelings....

"Duffer" She muttered

"What" Angad was amazed....she had no sympathy for him...

"Nothing"

"Don't lie....tell me what you are thinking"

"Nothing...you won't like it..."

"Tell me" Angad insisted....

"You were so dumb!" She said to his astonishment...

"You are speaking about your one true love and all you had to say in the first few minutes is how beautiful she was....what else...nothing about her nature....nothing..in fact you are speaking about how u used to buy stuff for her.....man....typical male mentality...you see a beautiful face and you are gone....not realising what a terrible person the girl is"


Sahiba had felt something akin to jealousy when Angad was speaking about his girlfriend....hence the outburst..she was not consiously aware......


Angad just stared at her...."You are so dumb you know....for a mistake done by that girl...you have been punishing yourself and your family for so many years...if I were you...I would have counted my lucky stars for being saved from that goldigger but no...Mr. brawn has no brains....only...." She stopped...upset with him...


No one...no-one had ever spoken to him like this...everyone had always sympathized with him...for that instance.........but Sahiba made it sound like how stupid he had been....like ........like....."What should I have done according to you!" He asked angrily


"Well you should have thanked Babaji that you came to know her true colours way before if was too late and not wasted so many years being bitter and glum!"

Angad did not know how to answer her....."You would not know....I am sure you have never loved anyone" he said ...refusing to accept her logic...

"I don't need to ....anyway all men are idiots...like you"

"How would you know....I am sure men run away from you, with that attitude of yours!" He said upset at being insulted.....

"No they don't...let me tell you many boys were after me in college...I only didn't give them any bhav.....and then there is Amrinder....he is crazy about me, he will come running if I click my fingers" She tried to show off to Mr. AtM...


Angad was not sure he was happy hearing about other men panting after Sahiba...."Who is this Amrinder" he asked

"Oh he lives in our colony....is obsessed with me.." She said showing off

"Then why aren't you with him" he asked quietly

"He gives me the creeps....you know what I mean.....he is very good looking and all but feels very sleazy....uugh"

Angad's mood improved....but who was this guy...if he was making Sahiba feel uncomfortable....

"Anyway I think you were very lucky.....getting away from that Simmi...just be happy about it...enjoy life with family and friends.."

"I don't have any friends...only one and he lives in UK"

"So make some...."

Angad looked at her....her solutions were so simple....she looked at him as if he was being the most stupid person on this earth......

"Will you be my friend" he asked surprising them both...

"Me....are you not too old to be my friend" she asked....

She was too much he thought....always saying things to put him down...he was irritated and about to say something when she laughed....

"I am pulling you leg.....but how can we friends...we are so different...."

"Well we can try....so friends" he put his hand forward for a handshake.....she gave this a thought....then shook his hand...giving him a smile....


MONGA HOUSE

Santosh was getting very restless....it was 8 in the night..Sahiba was supposed to be back by now and her phone was also not reachable....she called Seerat..

"Hello Mummy"

"Seerat what time are you guys reaching..."

"Mamma I have stayed back....Sahiba is coming back with Angad..."

"When will they reach....her phone is switched off" Santosh got agitated for some reason

"She should have reached by now....let me call home or check with Angad"

That's when the family got alarmed....even Angad's phone was switched off and they should have reached a couple of hours ago....everyone at Brar Mansion also got very stressed...


MANALI

Garry was in anguish ..."this is all my mistake"

"No....it's not.. I am sure they are fine....don't worry" Seerat tried to pacify him

With the help of the hotel they had got in touch with the local police and after few hours they came to know that Angad's car did not cross the toll also.....hence they obviously had an accident in the hills only.....They decided to put together a search party and look for them....but it was very tough....it was night and was snowing heavily.....


BRAR MANSION

It was midnight ....Somehow the local news channels had got hold of the news....and they started covering it...

"Mr. Angad Singh Brar....one of the most prominent business man of Punjab is missing....it is speculated that his car met with an accident .....he is with Ms. Sahiba Kaur Monga....." the news channels went on and on about who Sahiba is...what might have happened to them...etc


Inder took the remote and switched off the TV.....enough....this is not helping...."Garry has managed to get together a search party and they are going to begin the search"

Manveer was almost hysterical...they had given her a sleeping injection and put her to sleep....others were trying to stay calm but it was a sombre environment at home....


At Monga house the neighborhood had come to know that Sahiba was missing with Angad....they came home to speak to Santosh, pretending to sympathise but were actually questioning Sahiba for being alone with Angad and her intentions....finally Param asked them all to leave...saying that they are very tensed and want to rest.....

"I want to break their necks foe implying things for Sahiba" he said angrily....shutting the door behind them.....

Ajit knew it was no use getting angry right now....there was damage to Sahiba's reputation but all that was not important....his daughter's safety was the most important thing for them right now.....he was in touch with Inder and it was agreed that they will leave for Manali in the morning


POST MIDNIGHT

Angad and Sahiba had spoken for long ....about general things...keeping fear at bay...but it was getting colder and they had burned whatever wood was available....Sahiba did try to go out and look for more wood but it was snowing heavily.....she was back inside and shivering very badly.....

They burned everything possible and decided to sleep as close to the fire as possible....Sahiba spread one blanket for herself and used one to cover herself.....but the thin blankets were not protection enough against the freezing cold....they had few sips of the alcohol also to keep themselves warm....but that did not help much....

She was now very sleepy but was very cold....Angad was also feeling quiet cold...he could think of only one solution as he saw her shivering under her blanket. .

"Sahiba....Sahiba" he called her few times as she was sleeping...

"Hunhhh"

"Listen...this is not working....it's getting too cold and will get colder....I think....I think....we should share the blankets..."

"What....no!"

"Listen please... I don't want either of us to get hypothermia.....we will be able to use three blankets on us rather than one each right now and we will be sharing body heat too....." he said, trying to convince her....

"No...but...."

"Listen trust me.....trust me....we will just share the blankets and it will help us stay warmer....trust me" he said looking in her eyes...."Please......" he was very worried for her and could suggest the best possible solution he could think of....only thing he wanted was to keep them warm till rescue came....


"But...." Sahiba was very hesitant...she was very cold...what he was saying made sense too but to be so close to him....trust me, please....he said....


"This is most practical solution....and you are always so practical ..please, I will not break your trust....I promise....I just want to keep you warm and safe" he urged....


Though hesitant, Sahiba nodded her head...she spread her two blankets over Angad and joined him under them on his good side....she squeezed into herself trying not to touch him. It was definitely warmer......

Angad could feel her hesitation....being the kind of person she was....she must be very uncomfortable right now being with him ....but this was needed to stay warm.......


It got colder over the night and in her sleep....Sahiba automatically gravitated towards Angad's body heat and they both slept....hugging each other tightly under the blankets......completely unaware of the picture they presented....they both became semi unconsious after a while...suffering from hypothermia....only thought being to hold on to the heat....


IN THE MORNING

Garry was ready to have a breakdown....they had been searching for hours.....when they had found the car and his heart had almost stopped when he saw the condition of the car....it was badly damaged and burnt.....he ran towards the car but to his relief there was no one inside....."Thank you babaji" he prayed.....


It was morning now and still no sign of them...but finding the car indicted they may be nearby.....as they could not have gone far in the snow....that's when one of the locals from the search party mentioned about a cabin nearby......with a glimmer of hope....they hurried towards the cabin....the door was locked from inside but....to his immense relief...he saw them both inside.tbrough the window...his tears...held till now...spilled over...."Angad! Sahiba!" He screamed but they did not respond.....worried they broke open the door....

The two of them were fast asleep....hugging each other tightly....to any other viewer it may have given a wrong picture....but Garry knew them both and only thing he could feel was relief like he had never felt before.....


They tried to wake them up but both were extremely drowsy....."they have hypothermia due to the cold" said one the rescue worker...."we need to rush them to the hospital" .....and they did....


Manveer started crying when she heard the news...wanted to goto Manali but Inder had already left with ajit....they promised to get the kids back asap....


Angad came awake....and realised he was in a hospital....."Sahiba" he said....fear taking over when he did not find her near him...he tried to get off the bed.....when Inder stopped him...."Angad puttar...you are awake"

"Papa Sahiba." He asked scared

"She is fine...has not got up till now but is fine....don't worry...you rest"

"I want to see her"

"Yes. Seerat and Monga Sahab are with her....let her wake up and then you can meet her"


Sahiba woke up sometime later too and was very disoriented...."Angad" She called out....

"Sahiba" it was Seerat Di....what was she doing here....

"Di?"...."Where am I, where is Angad" worried for him...

"He is fine....you are in the hospital...Garry and the rescue workers found you....you are fine now....rest"


Both of them were restless till they saw that the other was fine....they had been through such an ordeal together that it had forged an unspoken bond between them....they were kept in the hospital for couple of more days....Angad got stitches in his arm...otherwise they both were perfectly fine as they left for Ludhiana.....completely unaware of the storm that awaited them....

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Posted: 1 years ago

There you go, terrific and stupendous update.smiley20

Gosh you elevate your writing skills, your thought process and your story with every update.smiley32


The eye-catching part was Angad discussed about his ex with his would be and she made Angad see the reality.smiley17


I am glad that Angad was able to see for the person she is and her ability to move through and grow from difficult times; Resilient & Strong.


And that passionate hug while sleeping together as if they found their calm amidst the chaos.smiley27

Edited by Reader17 - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

Great update. I hope Sahiba isn't gonna have to deal with the judgemental people now after this ordeal.

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Storm??? đŸ„șđŸ„ș.. Okay shall wait. But amazing update as usual. Making an official plea to TMzmD makers to appoint Readerji as their writer... Such dreamy stuff!! 😍😍😍... And regular updates too... Thanks a ton Readerji... U the best!

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OMG!! The outcome of the cabin in the woods we were all waiting for (but disappointed by the makers). Thank you for the wonderful update I’m just so in love with the way you write. Loved the special bond they have now. Hope they can face all the adversity that awaits together! I’m sure Angad will support sahiba. đŸ˜đŸ«¶đŸŒ

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Posted: 1 years ago

Loved reading this chapter

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