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Posted: 1 years ago

Loving your updates...

please make Angad hopelessly in love with Sahiba.. 😃

make him do crazier cheesy things to impress her.. ☺️

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Posted: 1 years ago

Can you please repost the chapter I really want to read it

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Update Update..smiley42

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I was just going to type the same 😂
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Originally posted by: apuni88

I was just going to type the same 😂


I know right this story is the saving grace from the show.

You cry after watching those horrendous episodes and you smile after reading Readerji's stories.smiley27

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I know right this story is the saving grace from the show.

You cry after watching those horrendous episodes and you smile after reading Readerji's stories.smiley27

Seriously this ff makes my day!
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CHAPTER 15

Guys.....apologies for some unrealistic stuff ..but ...taking writers liberty....so this chapter is very filmy...what can't happen in real life....happens in a story smiley1 sometimes I really want Angad's character bashed up...so made up my own scene...if too filmy let me know...Will delete and re-write...


ANGAD'S GUILT

It had been couple of days since his birthday and he could not bring himself to forgive himself....he had had time to retrospect on his complete behaviour with Sahiba since beginning and he found himself despicable.....he had behaved very badly with her right from the start, from insulting her work, her efforts, her and finally forcing himself on her.....he was in agony....felt he deserved much more punishment than what Garry had given him....had someone done this with his family...he would have broken their bones....and here he was scott free...she did not even tell anyone what happened...saving him from any punishment, any hate......he did not know what to do....even Garry and Seerat were upset with him....not talking to him and ignoring him .... not completely so as to raise everyone's suspicion....but enough to make him know......

Everyone was seated around the breakfast table when Seerat and Garry finished early and were leaving.....

"What happened Puttar, you guys are leaving early today....hardly ate anything....u have an early meeting?" Bebe questioned....

"No Bebe.....we are not going to office" Garry responded...

"Then why in a hurry" asked Jasleen "eat properly"

"We are done Ma, we are taking Sahiba to the doctor for her checkup....so we need to go" Garry said....

Angad's head snapped up....he so wanted to know how she was....how was she feeling....Garry and Seerat were not talking with him, neither informing him anything......he had picked up his phone hundred times....thinking of messaging her....but he did not have enough guts....


"How is she feeling now" asked Manveer...


"She is much better mamiji....the doctors had feared of neounomia setting in due to all the water inhalation....but she is fine...it's just that her appetite has disappeared and she finds it difficult to sleep most of the times...troubled by nightmares" Seerat replied emotionally...

Everyone was sombre...."Don't worry Seerat....she will get well soon"

"Yes....it's her one final checkup.....Garry and I have coordinated with the doctor till now....so will take her for this one too" replied Seerat


Though he had been wanting to know how she was, every word spoken by Seerat gave him heartache....in his bitterness and anger...he had caused so much pain and suffering to her....he lost his appetite too....he hated himself and deserved punishment....he was angry....very angry....but this time....his anger was completely focused on himself....he needed an outlet for this anger.....


SOMETIME LATER

Angad had not been here for years......he remembered visiting the place often 8 years back....sometimes to watch and sometimes to participate......to inflict physical pain, which used to help him ignore the pain in his heart.....the noise made by the audience was defeaning and the atmosphere was electric.....the audience were watching something in the centre of the circle....cheering everytime their chosen candidate was successful in their attempt.....it was a boxing fight club! Not the official type one....with barehands and more brutal....he needed to do something to expend this anger in him....and this was the right place to do the same.....


Angad's driver was waiting for him outside the club....wherein Angad"s phone rang....the driver realised that he had left all his stuff in the car....surprising...the phone was from Pam....he thought Sir forgot his phone by mistake and he will go and give the same to him inside....he was extremely skeptical when he went in....the place did not look like what it was from Outside.....it was a place unlike he had ever seen.....with the crowd cheering on.....curious he went to see what was going on and his surprise knew no bounds to see Angad in the middle of the ring.....he panicked...


Rushing out....he did not know what to do....maybe he should call someone and inform them.....the first person that came in his mind was Garry baba......he picked his phone and called him....."Hello".


Sahiba was coming back from the Doctor's visit along with Garry and Seerat. She was feeling perfectly fine now...only the nightmare of drowning kept troubling her in the night a

t times......otherwise physically she was good....emotionally was a different matter all together...there were too many emotions churning in her....causing confusion and anger....she wondered what happened....why it happened.....and her reaction to everything.....


Her thoughts drifted to Angad...which had happened many times during the last few days....her emotions seesawed between anger, confusion, rage and so many more....she kept trying to understand what had she done wrong for him to keep judging her all the time....specially with men.....then she knew...

Seerat Di had spent a lot of time with her over the past few days and then told her about what Garry told her, about Angad's ex-girlfriend....who had dumped him during his bad times and married a rich guy much elder to her in age....her heart ached for that young Angad....so in love and shattered .at least now she had some perception on why he reacted the way he reacted ....but that was still understandable initially but later....once he knew her better....why....


She also could not comprehend why she did not tell everyone what she should have....she was very upset with him....he violated her personal space....pushed her in the pool...it was the most horrifying experience of her life.......but still ...when she saw Garry punching Angad.... it gave her no pleasure ...in fact she did not want both the brothers fighting because of her......many times she questioned herself....if that was the only reason....but she had no answer .....


He had come to the hospital the next day....she had been too angry to acknowledge his sorry that time....but he made no efforts to say sorry to her later again....she kept waiting that he would make another attempt to apologise and thats when she would give him a piece of her mind or maybe another slap......but his apology for everything he put her through was over with that one sorry looks like.....what kind of a horrible person was he.....and why did she waste her thoughts thinking about him or ...that kiss.....she was sure it was an aberration, she checked her thoughts and mentally made a note to forget all about him!


Garry's phone rang...."Yes Govind....what...where....share the location with me...I think I am nearby... I will be there right away....don't tell anyone at home!"


"What happened Garry, anything serious" asked Seerat...

"No nothing.....I need to stop somewhere and our driver is waiting there...he will drive you home and i will get down" he said...evading to answer...he rushed to some spot once there he hurriedly got out "Govind our driver will drop you home ...I need to stay back....will see u later"

He looked tensed and went to speak to the driver....then went in towards a building...

"That looks like Angad's car and Angad's driver" said Seerat pointing towards a Mercedes....what was Garry upto she wondered....the place was not exactly a corporate place or anything.....

She asked the driver what was happening....he looked pretty nervous...."nothing...."

"Don't lie....I want to know...otherwise I will complain about you at home....where did Garry sir go....wait let me go and check myself..."

"Mam please don't go....mam" but Seerat would not listen....she got off to follow Garry

"Di wait...I will also come...I don't want to wait alone in the car...."

They both went in....and were extremely surprised to see a crowd surrounding something in a circle and cheering very loudly....it felt as if there was some competition ongoing.....they managed to spot Garry in the crowd...he was standing in the front and looking very upset....the view of what he was staring at was not clear due to the crowd.....


They somehow made their way to him....just before they could go in the front...Garry saw them.....he got wild seeing them there..."Why did you come here....I told you to go home......just leave"

"What is happening...."

"Nothing....just leave " he tried to take them out of there...but just before they turned to leave....the crowd cheered loudly and through a gap in the crowd they could actually see the fight ring......Angad was involved in a fist fight and his opponent had just served him a tight blow!"


Sahiba was shocked....being Param's sister...she had seen her fair shares of fights...wounds....but never so brutal like this....Angad and his opponent were In their vests.....fighting it out...

"You guys should leave" Garry insisted..

"What is he doing....." whispered Sahiba..before they could say anything Angad's opponent managed to land another punch somewhere in the vicinity of his abdomen.....and in that split second when he turned with the impact....their eyes happened to meet.....he stilled....did not turn back......and she could not move if her life depended on it.....she was aghast....he was bleeding from his nose and mouth....just then his opponent approached him....turned him and landed couple of other blows....

"Oh shit..." seeing that the girls were not listening....he went ahead near the ring...Sahiba and Seerat following.....

"What is he doing and why" whispered Sahiba....

"I don't know....he is mad....I myself am going to give him few punches when he is done" said Garry angrily....

"Get it stopped....."

"Let me try" said Garry...moving towards the guy who organized the ring...

Angad got another blow, he was not trying very hard to defend himself neither was he going offensive.....he was just getting beaten up.....Sahiba was not sure she could see him getting beaten up more.....she was angry with him....very angry....but this ...seeing him hurt did not give her any pleasure...in fact it felt as if everyblow to him hurt.....she wanted it to stop ......she winced everytime he got hit.....their eyes met a couple of times....and it felt as if he was looking straight at her and trying to say something......


Garry somehow managed to agree to pay a very heafty sum to the organizer and got the opponent declared as the winner.....cutting the fight short....Angad slumped against the ring....not coming out....Garry was very upset with him...


"You have lost your mind....why cant things be normal ith you.....why are you always extreme......I am in two minds of giving you couple of punches myself....what do you think you were doing.....have you looked at yourself .....oh my god....I should really slap you" Garry went on and on....extremely upset to see Angad like this....he was almost screaming ....."do you know how much it cost to get this shut....and what were you doing not defending or reacting....." Garry gave Angad a earful but Angad did not react....he just sat on a nearby stool and kept his head down....


"Oh God....we need to take you to a doctor" said Garry....he was extremely uncomfortable with blood ...

"No I am fine"

"What do you mean you are fine" Garry asked the driver to get some first aid from the nearby store...

"Let's go" said Garry...brining Angad's shirt....Angad winced as he wore it ...he had a bad cut on his forehead near the eye, his nose and mouth were bleeding and his knuckles were raw too...


Sahiba did not know what to say to the bafoon....he was all brawn and no brain....she was already angry with him and this made her angrier.....she glared at him but he did not meet her eyes....just avoided looking at her as he headed out.....

"We are going to a doctor" stated Garry as they neared the car....

"No....I am fine...I just need some cleaning up and I am good"

The driver got the first aid and gave it to Garry....

"Angad you need a doctor"

"No"

"Ok then let me clean you up" he pulled Angad and made him sit on the bonnet

Even though Garry tried...he was too squirmish at the sight of blood....he could not do it...

"Leave it....I will manage"

"Give it to me...I will do it" said Sahiba curtly surprising everyone...

"You don't have to" said Garry

Angad was shocked...he snapped his head and looked at her....she was full of fire ...glaring at him...

"No...it's fine...."

She snatched the cotton and antiseptic from Garry's hand and advanced towards Angad....

"No...I am good" he repeated....getting up...

"Sit" She ordered in an angry voice

Angad sat down quietly....not knowing what to do...

She Splattered some antiseptic and jabbed him near the eye....

"Ouch" as luck would have it....the driver got the antiseptic which stung the most!

Sahiba showed no mercy....cleaning his forehead injury...jab

"Ouch"

"When you do something foolish...you have to bear the consequences" She said angrily.....

Garry and Seerat were amazed at these two...despite being angry at Angad....Sahiba was helping him and Angad was quietly listing to her...getting his wound cleaned...they looked at each other....and decided to keep quiet...


Another jab...Angad winced....meeting her eyes....she had no mercy...

"If you don't know how to...why do it" She Scolded him...

"I know how to box....used to train till I was 20...i still practise when i get time." he said quietly....surprising her...

"You obviously trained badly...." She took some more cotton and doused it with liberal amount of liquid before attacking the wound near his mouth....


"OUCH"

"All brawn...no brains....dunno who made him a CEO...instead of Angad Singh Brar ... his name should have been Angry Singh Brar....brainless duffer" She kept murmuring as she cleaned his wound....he could hear everything but kept quiet...statring at her...getting his wounds cleaned quietly


Sahiba looked at him....she was very angry with him....for everything....for what he did with her....for this...."why did you do this"

He did not answer

"Why"

"Just"

"Why can't you be normal....and just say sorry like a normal person...." She asked him quietly....

"Because what I did was not normal or forgivable." he said quietly...."You were not supposed to be here...."

"Good anyway....you were due for a good bashing....I am glad someone did the job, otherwise I was going to send Param after you" She said curtly as she ruthlessly worked on his face....


Once she had done cleaning....she taped up the cut on his head... "There done..."

Just as she was turning away...

"Sahiba..." he said quietly

"I am sorry....I don't deserve to be forgiven.. for my behavior or putting your life in danger.....I promise I will never trouble you again..." he said quietly...

She nodded her head and walked back to where Seerat and Garry were standing....

Angad turned to leave...

"Wait...where ru going" Garry called him..

"Office"

"I am serious Angad....you have lost your mind....you are coming with me....once we drop Sahiba....you are going home with me...i dont trust you...."

"No I have some meetings"

"Just shut up and sit in the car..."

Angad sat down in the car....with Sahiba and Seerat sitting in the back seat....his gaze kept drifting to the rear view mirror where he got a clear view of Sahiba. ...their eyes would meet every now and then and she would glare at him....


They dropped Sahiba, post which Garry dropped Angad home...with strict instructions to rest...


On their way to office...Seerat shared her confusion with Garry...."I don't understand Angad....he did not look like he knows how to box....so why even try and get beaten up"

"Angad trained for many years and still trains at times....he is a very good fighter....I think he did not defend because he did not want to" reflected Garry...

"What do you mean....why would he get beaten up deliberately"

"He is a very complex man...like I told you...everything is in exteme...if I guess correctly he was most probably punishing himself...."

Seerat was dumbstruck....she could not imagine someone getting beaten up so badly and deliberately..."What kind of a guy is he"

"As I said complex and someone with very deep emotions....I have not seen his emotions so triggered for years now...as I said I think he reacts to Sahiba" he said ..."I was amazed at Shaiba too"

"Ya me too...she was so upset with him....and now she was helping bandage him...though I felt pity for him few times when she ruthlessly jabbed him..." Seerat said smiling..."Whats going on with these two"

"I am not sure.....let's wait and watch"


ANGAD'S ROOM

Angad did not inform anyone at home...he quietly went to his room and rested.....mom and dad knew he boxed at times....so he will manage them....rest of the others he will avoid for few days he thought...


His body ached....but it was less than what he was feeling till morning....the heartache.....the pain of what he had done did not go away...but meeting Sahiba...seeing that she was fine....speaking to her and apologizing had lessened it a bit...he did not question the feeling....assumed it was guilt at his behaviour and vowed to keep his promise of never troubling her again....


SAHIBA'S ROOM

Sahiba was resting in her room....thought she felt fine n was now getting restless...mummy had forced her to rest for today.....lying down...alone on her bed...she thought about the fight...she had been so angry with him....wanted to slap him...abuse him...but seeing him getting beaten up had given her a different type of pain....even though he had hurt her....she had thought she would hurt him back....but the sight of seeing him getting hurt did not give her any satisfaction....she did not question this feeling and chalked it off to her nature in general, wherein she could not hurt anyone mostly and forgave easily.....anyway he had promised not to trouble her anymore.......

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Posted: 1 years ago

OMG! Agreed this was filmy and angsty… but I absolutely loved it! I’m all for angst!! And this chapter was full of it 🤩

All brawn...no brains....dunno who made him a CEO...instead of Angad Singh Brar ... his name should have been Angry Singh Brar....brainless duffer

This was hilarious! I was laughing so much through the whole first aid scene. Haha Angad reduced to mute by Sahiba! That would be a sight to behold.


You are an amazing writer, capturing emotions and the slow burn so perfectly.

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Agree with you.. this was filmy.. but it was needed to humanise Angad..

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Originally posted by: apuni88

OMG! Agreed this was filmy and angsty… but I absolutely loved it! I’m all for angst!! And this chapter was full of it 🤩

All brawn...no brains....dunno who made him a CEO...instead of Angad Singh Brar ... his name should have been Angry Singh Brar....brainless duffer

This was hilarious! I was laughing so much through the whole first aid scene. Haha Angad reduced to mute by Sahiba! That would be a sight to behold.


You are an amazing writer, capturing emotions and the slow burn so perfectly.

True... True. Right now her FF is the only thing that's connecting me to Sahan. U r amazing Readerji😍.

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