One Punch It Takes *NEW Maaneet Story * UPDATED Ch1@ PG 2|| 18th Jan - Page 2

2800+ words!
Note : So the first chapter is up. After some more chapters it will be clear how many want to read this story. Kindly do check out the CS & other details.
Tagged a few maaneetians for now who have been active recently. Will Pm rest of the members very soon.
Based on your response this story will be continued here(or not)
Hope to hear your thoughts 💜

Tagged users, hi, here is a new story which I have been wanting to post for a long time. Waiting for your response. Do let me know if you want to read it further.

Tagged members,
Hello, Here is the first chapter for my new Maaneet story. Scroll up. Do let me know your thoughts in the comments 💜

Tagged members,
Hi there this is the first chapter for my new Maaneet story. Scroll up. Do let me know your thoughts in the comments 💜

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enjoyed reading

both are equally fierce with high attitude

maan has ego of his status

geet remember how was her first day of school n her fight with maan

Originally posted by: taahir004

Congratulations on your new story

Title is simply Awesome

Originally posted by: taahir004

Interesting Character Sketch

waiting too see what context the nick names

will be used and how

oh I'm just waiting for the story to be revealed

A few have already been revealed. And more will be revealed with upcoming chapters! Kids love nicknames so it's a must!
Thanks for your comment. This is a very kiddish-styled story (similar to Amorous elixir- don't know if you remember that one...) A lot of illogical stuff is on the way from both characters!

I'll read and comment on Chapter 1

in the morning please !!!!

Originally posted by: taahir004

I'll read and comment on Chapter 1

in the morning please !!!!

Sure. Please read only when you are free.

Thanks for updating!

Chapter 1

Dynamic update… greatly written

so Maan and Geet are rivals

of cos they do not like each other

well Maan taunted Geet

amazed that Geet ordered Maan around

as expected Maan insulted Geet

but she gave as good as she got

Maan was indeed sarcastic

liked Geet's comeback

Maan clearly did not like Geet touching him

he was so rude

Geet's anger

as expected Geet put him in his place

however Maan was insulted her again

not surprised that a fight ensued

glad that Rano intervened

Gosh they get physical

Geet's thoughts well portrayed

Past

Geet's dad was happy she got admission in Dryes

Geet's fears were reasonable

hate this arrogant Maan

Maan was so mean to Geet

dismayed with Maan's attitude

oh Geet punched Maan

their first encounter was intense

update soon