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2800+ words!
Note : So the first chapter is up. After some more chapters it will be clear how many want to read this story. Kindly do check out the CS & other details.
Tagged a few maaneetians for now who have been active recently. Will Pm rest of the members very soon.
Based on your response this story will be continued here(or not)
Hope to hear your thoughts π
Tagged users, hi, here is a new story which I have been wanting to post for a long time. Waiting for your response. Do let me know if you want to read it further.
Tagged members,
Hello, Here is the first chapter for my new Maaneet story. Scroll up. Do let me know your thoughts in the comments π
Tagged members,
Hi there this is the first chapter for my new Maaneet story. Scroll up. Do let me know your thoughts in the comments π
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enjoyed reading
both are equally fierce with high attitude
maan has ego of his status
geet remember how was her first day of school n her fight with maan
Oh I am so glad you liked the title Taahir! It's unconventional! But I prefer it
A few have already been revealed. And more will be revealed with upcoming chapters! Kids love nicknames so it's a must!Originally posted by: taahir004
Interesting Character Sketch
waiting too see what context the nick names
will be used and how
oh I'm just waiting for the story to be revealed
I'll read and comment on Chapter 1
in the morning please !!!!
Sure. Please read only when you are free.
Thanks for updating!
Chapter 1
Dynamic update⦠greatly written
so Maan and Geet are rivals
of cos they do not like each other
well Maan taunted Geet
amazed that Geet ordered Maan around
as expected Maan insulted Geet
but she gave as good as she got
Maan was indeed sarcastic
liked Geet's comeback
Maan clearly did not like Geet touching him
he was so rude
Geet's anger
as expected Geet put him in his place
however Maan was insulted her again
not surprised that a fight ensued
glad that Rano intervened
Gosh they get physical
Geet's thoughts well portrayed
Past
Geet's dad was happy she got admission in Dryes
Geet's fears were reasonable
hate this arrogant Maan
Maan was so mean to Geet
dismayed with Maan's attitude
oh Geet punched Maan
their first encounter was intense
update soon
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