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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: Moonks

Yuvika is his wife?


Sanskar Bhavan (only this can be go to place of yuvi and bhumismiley37)


Super duper excited for some horror stuffsmiley41

Yup here Neil is Bhoomi and Vidur's SON and Yuvika is his legally wedded wife smiley9

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: Effervescent_R

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How do I not know that you wrote an OS too?

Can I have a link?

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/163833367

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Please update next part of your os

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Posted: 1 years ago
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I like the title and introsmiley27

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Posted: 1 years ago
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I must agree Gurdeep ma'am and Ali sir have a chemistrysmiley9

would be fun to read this! At least NeiVika are married heresmiley42

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Posted: 1 years ago
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First part is ready smiley9

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Chapter 1 - The Nightmare


"Humare Neil ki Shaadi Yuvika se karake humne koi Galati tho nehi kar dia na?" - Vidur asked

Bhoomi looked at her husband in bewilderment

"Yeh aap kya keh rahe hain? Kuch hua hai kya? Yuvika se koi Galati hui hai?" - Bhoomi asked her husband

Vidur took a deep breath and continued

"Nehi, baat Yuvika ki Galati ki nehi, humare Galati ki ho rahi hai, kahi humne...."

Before he could finish Bhoomi interrupted

"Mujhe nehi samajh aarahi hai AAP bol kya rahe hain aur kyun bol rahe hain? Yuvika tho sabse jaida ladli aap hi ki hai, Baachpan se lekar Aaj tak woh Prem Bhaisaaaaab k baad AAP hi k kareeb rahi hai, konse school jana hai, konse subjects lene hain yeh SAB tho humesha AAP ne hi decide kia hai Yuvika k liye. Aur rahi baad Shaadi ki tho woh humne decide nehi kia tha it was a LOVE Marriage of Neil and Yuvika, aur Yuvika k liye Neil se behtar....."

Vidur stood up from the chair & moved near his study table

"Koi nehi ho sakta tha janta hnu, par Neil k liye Yuvika se behtar bohat ladkiyaan mil jati"

It took some time for Bhoomi to grasp Vidur's words, she wasn't definitely expecting a statement like that.

Bhoomi slowly walked towards Vidur and placed her hands on his shoulder after handing over his coffee to him

"Yuvika apke Dost ki Beti hai...."

Vidur couldn't take anymore & shouted

"Aur Neil MERA APNA BETA hai Bhoomi"

Bhoomi was taken aback!


• There was suddenly a pin drop silence •


Bhoomi could feel her hands shaking, she picked the cup held the dear cup of her morning chai more tightly

"Yuvika serf 11 Saal ki thi jab Prem Bhaisaaaaab Chale gaye, Malini Bhabi tho Yuvika ko yaad bhi nehi, 2 Saal ki thi woh tab, ush aanath ladki ko aap hi ne apni Beti banake rakha phir Aaj aachanak AAP yeh SAB kyun?" - Bhoomi couldn't hold back her tears

Vidur held her arms softly and uttered

"Beti banake rakha, zindagi bhar Beti hi banake rakhna chahta tha, aur sayed wohi thik hota. Yuvika ek bohat aachi Beti hai par Bahu nehi banana chahiye tha!"

"Aaj aachanak Apko aisa kyun lag raha hai?" - Bhoomi was curious as well as terrified

"Kyun ki Kal Neil 28 Saal ka ho Jayega Bhoomi aur" - Vidur revealed

Bhoomi instantly placed her hands over his lips and shouted

"BAS! Ek Lawyer hokar AAP ush Pandit ki baatoon mein aarahe hain? Bakwas hai woh SAB. Kuch nehi hoga humare Neil kooo, apke ush Pandit ne yeh bhi kaha tha ki Yuvika ka kuch Pitra Dosh hai jishke liye ushe Apne Bhai K Saath Milke koi hawan karni hogi par Yuvika ka tho koi BHAI hi nehi hai, she is a single child phir bhi aap....." Before she could finish Vidur walked away from her towards his room without giving a damnnn to her explanations

Bhoomi kept looking at him in utter disbelief while suddenly the cup slipped from her hand....


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Bhoomi woke up from her SLEEP with a jerk

She could feel her whole body wet due to sweat, she was breathing heavily

Vidur ran towards her,

"Kyaaa huaaa Bhoomi? I am sooo sorry woh Mujhse Galati se woh Pani ka Glass gir geya"

Bhoomi was confused,

"AAP se gira? Par cup tho Mujhse gira tha...."

"Konsa cup? Tum tho soo rahi thi Bhoomi" - Vidur asked in confusion

Bhoomi looked around her, yup it was her bed and that wasn't morning but night

"SAPNA tha?" Bhoomi asked herself

Vidur laughed in amusement,

"Tum abhi abhi tho sayi thi, SAPNA bhi dekh lia? Jarur sapne mein bhi jhagda hi kar rahi hogi mujhse"

Bhoomi took a deep breath and continued

"Han AAP baat hi aise karte hain, aacha suniye woh apke aur Yuvika k beech SAB thik hai na, matlab Apko koi, koi problem hai Yuvika se?"

This time Vidur laughed more loudly

"Problem? Mujhe? Yuvika se? Kaisi baatein kar rahi ho Bhoomi? Mujhe problem tumhare ladle Neil se jarur ho sakta hai par apni Yuvika se kabhi nehi"

Bhoomi smiled in relief, "Nehi kuch nehi woh bas ek Bura SAPNA tha, chaliye soo jaate hain"

"Han tum so jaoo, main bas woh glass k tukdoo ko saaf karke aata hnu" - With this, Vidur placed a Soft Kiss on Bhoomi's forehead.

Bhoomi was glad that it was just a Nightmare


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Next morning, as always Bhoomi was preparing Tea for herself and Coffee for Vidur when her eyes got stuck on Vidur's attire, he was in that same Grey T-shirt that Bhoomi had seen in her nightmare, Bhoomi quickly looked at those cups and yes her cup was the same cup that.......

She finally looked at the Calendar,

Yup the date was 14 November, therefore next date 15 November, Neil's Birthday

She refused to think anything more & just went with the flow, with great difficulty she prepared Tea for herself and Coffee for Vidur & started walking towards Vidur's study room with the tray.

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Vidur was sitting on a chair near the window, placing the tray on his study table, Bhoomi moved near him.

"Humare Neil ki Shaadi Yuvika se karake humne koi Galati tho nehi Kar dia na?" - Vidur asked

But this time Bhoomi wasn't shocked or surprised, she saw that coming, she legit saw that coming.....



Precap :

Neil pulled Yuvika closer to him & softly murmured "Sooch raha hnu, NeiVi ki planning kar hi lete hain" smiley43 smiley17 smiley37

Edited by A_for_Arpita - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#19

Ufff

Such a Bhidur-licious chapter...smiley36

First scene was thrilling...my heart was on my mouth...

& Bammm it was just a dream...

Uff is it gonna have some supernatural element...Jo bhi ho I am excited...

You have captured the subtle intimacy of married couple...

But I laughed hard on "PREM BHAISAAB"

Pete tumhari saari khunnas nikal gayi...smiley37

Party do ....

Posted: 1 years ago
#20

Prem Bhaisaaaaab made me crack upsmiley37

First chapter was sooooo amazing smiley27

Waiting for the next chaptersmiley42

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