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CHAPTER- 14


As soon as Kalyani entered her house got tensed seeing her parents sitting tensely on the sofa.

Kalyani- Papa... Madhuri.... Kya hua sab theek hai na aaplog itne pareshan kyun hain. Aurangabad mein sab theek toh hai na... Aaosaheb Aazobaa sab theek hai na. Aap logon ko mujhse bahut zaroori baat karni thi na. Kya hua sab theek hai naa. Are kuch boliye naaa......

Madhuri smiled and said- Are tu bolna band karegi tabhi toh kuch bolenge hum. Chinta mat kar sab theek hai aur Aurangabad mein bhi sab theek hai.

Kalyani- Tab fir aap log itne tension mein kyun baithe ho. Batao jaldi kya baat hai.. Papa aap hi boliye Madhuri toh kuch batayegi nahi.

Atul- Are baba sab theek hai woh toh maine Madhuri ko bina bataye ladoo kha liye jo Aaosaheb ne bheje the toh issiliye thoda jhagda ho gaya.

Kalyani- Acha toh yeh baat... Jaane dena Madhuri ek ladoo khane mein kya jaata hai Aaosaheb ne itne pyaar se bheje hain

Madhuri- Ek..... Ek nahi chaar.... Abhi sugar high ho jayegi phir kya karenge

Kalyani- Kya??? Papa yeh kya bol rahi hai Madhuri chaar ladoo... Very bad gussa toh karegi hi na aapko pata hai zyada sugar aapke health ke liye acha nahi hai phir bhi...

Atul- Acha baba sorry mere ghar ki deviyon ab pakka se dhyaan rakhunga aur ladooyon ko haath bhi nahi lagauga... Ab kush...

Kalyani smiled and said- That's like a good boy...

The trio smiled after that.

Kalyani- Acha aap dono ko mujhse kuch zaroori baat karni thi na... Bolo kya baat hai...

Madhuri- Are woh baatein baad mein pehle yeh bata kal ki party kaisi rahi maza aaya naa.

Kalyani's expression changed and replied- Achi thi... Bahut Achi thi...

Madhuri and Atul understood from her changed expressions that she is lying.

Madhuri- Acha kiske ghar pe ki aaj party.

Kalyani- Wohh.... Neha ke ghar.... Bataya toh tha bhool gayi kya??

Madhuri- Lekin tune toh kaha tha Palak ke ghar karoge party

Kalyani- Haaa... Woohhh.... Woohhh.... Haan hum Palak ke ghar hi jane wale the par Neha ne suggest kiya uske ghar jaate hain

Madhuri- Acha... Magar tune toh kahan tha Neha ke ghar koi family emergency hai toh woh sirf exams ke liye yahan aai hai uske ghar wale sab out of town hai... Toh fir yeh party... Kuch samajh nahi aaya mujhe usse toh jald se jald apni family ke pass jaana chahiye tha

Kalyani thought- Yeh aaj Madhuri ko kya ho gaya mere saare jhooth yaad hain... Main khud confuse ho gayi hun ki kab kya jhooth bola tha ab kya jawab doon...

Madhuri- Kya hua kya soch rahi hai bata.... Aur yaad aaya ek din mujhe market mein teri colleague Mitali mili thi bahut taarif kar rahi thi tere kaam ki bol rahi thi ki bahut mehnati hai aapki beti bina work pressure ke jab aesa kaam kar rahi hai toh jab work pressure hoga tab toh kamal hi kar degi... Lekin mujhe yeh nahi samajh aaya tu toh keh rahi thi abhi office mein kaafi pressure hai issiliye ghar aane mein late hota hai aur ek din toh tujhe office mein hi rukna pada... Aesa kaun sa kaam karwaate hain tere seniors ki sirf tere uppar hi pressure hota hain tere baaki colleague toh mast chutti lete hain.... Bata zara ek kaam kar apne kisi senior yaa fir sir ka number de main abhi poochti hun... Acha kaam karne ka yeh matlab nahi naa ki saara kaam hi meri beti se karwayen... Chal bata number

Kalyani- Nahii... Madhuri aesa kuch nahi hai.... Wohh Naaa... Haaannn...

Atul- Aur kitna jhooth bolegi Kalyani tu humse... Tujhe kya lag raha hai hume kuch pata nahi chal raha... Tere itne jhooth padke jaane ke baad bhi tu sach nahi bol rahi... Kya yahi parvarish hai humari ki tu jhooth pe jhooth bole ja rahi hai... Kahan toh mujhe lagta tha meri beti toh jhooth bolna jaanti hi nahi hai... Uske aankhon se sab pata chal jaata hai... Par main galat tha Madhuri main galat tha..... Shayad mere pyar mein hi koi kami hai... Aao Saheb sahi kehti thi ki apni beti ko itne bade sheher mein itni azzadi mat do kahin kuch uch neech naa ho jaaye... Lekin main hi pagal bolta tha ki meri beti kabhi kuch galat karne ka soch hi nahi sakti woh mera guroor hai... Lekin main galat that....

After saying this Atul started crying and sat on the near sofa. On the other hand after listening this Kalyani felt really very shocked and guilty and started crying.

Kalyani- Nahi Papa aesa nahi hai.....

Madhuri- Toh kaesa hai Kalyani tu hi bata.... Tujhe kya lagta hai hume yeh saari baatein abhi achanak se pata chali hain... Nahi hume yeh saari baatein tere college exams se pehle hi pata chal gayi thi... Magar humne tab kuch nahi kahan kyunki hum tujhe tere exams tension free hoke dene dena chahte the.... Par uske baad bhi tune kal fir humse jhooth bola

Kalyani while crying- Nahi Madhuri meri baat toh sun......

Madhuri- Kya sune hum bol...... Humari di hui aazadi ka tu aese fayda uthayegi humne kabhi nahi socha tha... Ek baar nahi kayi baar tune humari specially meri aakhon mein aakhen daal ke jhooth bola hai.... Tu toh mujhe apna best friend bolti thi na fir bhi..... Tune ek baar bhi nahi socha hume kaesa feel hoga...

Kalyani- Baat toh sun....

Madhuri- Chup bilkul chup ek aur jhooth sunne ki himmat nahi hai humme..... Isse acha hota agar hum Aao Saheb ki baat maan ke tujhe unke pass chodh dete aur woh hi teri parvarish karti.... Kam se kam itna jhooth bolne hi himmat toh nahi hoti....

Kalyani- Bas ek baar ek baar aap dono meri baat sunlo....

Madhuri- Yahi mauka maine tujhe pehle bhi diya tha yaad hai kitna pucha tha ki agar kuch batana chahti hai toh batade mujhe.... Lekin nahi uss wakt bhi kuch nahi kaha aur jhooth pe jhooth bolti gayi... Aur ab jab paani sir ke uppar se jaa chuka hai tab tujhe bolna hai... Agar aaj hum tujhe confront nahi karte toh aaj bhi tu jhooth bolke nikal jaati... Hai naaa....

Kalyani was now crying heavily.

Atul- Ab roke kya fayda.... Tune humara dil toda hai ab tere aansun koi asar nahi karenge humpe.....Chodh do Madhuri hum yahi samajhte hain ki hume shayad bachon ki parvarish karna hi nahi aata.... Aao Saheb bilkul sahi thi... Bilkul sahi thi.....

Madhuri- Tum sahi keh rahe ho Atul.... Tumhe pata hai Atul jab pehli baar mujhe iska jhooth pata chala tha Palak se ki yeh jab hum Mumbai mein nahi the tab humare peeche Neha ke ghar koi pyjama party karne nahi balki kahin aur gayi thi tab toh aesa laga jaese kisi se mere seene mein goli maar di ho.... Ki meri Kalyani mujhse jhooth bhi bol sakti hai... Fir bhi maine socha jaane deti hun bacchi hai koi baat hogi bata degi.... Fir baar baar iska jhooth bolna ki office mein bahut kaam hai issiliye late ho raha hai aur ek din toh ghar hi nahi aai thi aur kaha office mein bahut kaam hai issiliye rukna hoga..... Woh toh Ganpati Bappa ki kripa ki uss din market mein mujhe Mitali mili nahi toh pata bhi nahi chalta ki isne aur kitne jhooth bolen hain.... Are uske baad bhi maine isse pucha ghooma ke par fir bhi isne jhooth bola...... Aur fir toh hadd hi ho gayi apne exams ke time bhi group studies ka bahana banake kahin aur gayi thi.... Aesa mat socha Kalyani ki hum tujhpe jasoosi kar rahe hain bas teri fikar hai hume magar tujhe shayad koi farak nahi padta ki hume kitna hurt feel ho raha hai abhi.... Tujhe pata hai jab tune kal mujhe call karke kaha tha ki tu Palak ke ghar party karne jaa rahi hai main tabhi samajh gayi thi ki tu jhooth bol rahi hai... Aur dekho wahi hua.... Ab toh tujhse baat karne kaa bhi mann nahi ho raha.... Pata nahi ab kaun sa jhooth bolde

Atul- Sach kahan tumne Madhuri.... Aaj mujhe realise hua ki humare bade humpe itna restrictions kyun rakhte the... Taaki aaj jo hum feel kar rahe hain aur jis dard se guzar rahe hain usse unhe kabhi na guzarna pade.... Chalo chodho ab kya fayda jo galat hona tha ho gaya agar isse humari itni si bhi chinta hoti toh aesa kuch nahi karti

Kalyani while crying- Papa please aesa mat boliye main duniya mein sabse zyada pyaar aap dono se karti hun... Please mujhe ek mauka dijiye sab kuch explain karne ka..... Please ek mauka

Atul- Haan taaki tu ek aur jhooth bol sake aur hum teri baaton mein aa jayen... Yeh toh humne dekh hi liya ki tu humse kitna pyaar kati hai....

Kalyani- Please Papa ek mauka bas ek mauka.... Pleaseeee.... Pleaseeeee.......

Madhuri- Ab tere yeh aasun humpe koi asar nahi karne wale ab natak band kar aur chali jaa humare nazron ke saamne se... Jaaa....

Kalyani started extremely crying and just knelt down on the floor- Please Papa..... Please Madhuri.... Maine kuch galat nahi kiya hain meri baat sunlo ek baar main sab sach batayungi... Please.... Mujhpe vishwas karo

After seeing her condition both Atul and Madhuri felt bad but still kept straight face and said- 

Atul- Theek hai ek mauka dete hain.... par sab sach batana

Madhuri- Haan itna toh hume apni parvarish par bharosa hai ki tune kuch galat nahi kiya hoga.... Par fir bhi jo hai sab sach batana....

Kalyani immediately wiped her tears and said- Pakka sab sach batayungi..... Thank You yeh mauka dene ke liye

Atul- Theek hai ab bata puri baat ki tu kahan jaati hai jhooth bolke aur kyun

Kalyani- Actually main ek ladke se bahut pyaar karti hun aur main ussi se milne jaati thi....

Atul and Madhuri- Kyaaaa????

Madhuri- Toh ismein chupane waali kya baat thi.... Tu hume batati toh sahi.... Tu bhi jaanti hai maine kabhi tujhe in sab cheezon ke liye nahi roka.... Balki main khud tujhe bolti thi....

Atul- Yeh kya sikha rahi ho tum humari beti ko Madhuri..... Yeh jhooth bolke kisi ladke ke pass jaati thi abhi yeh sab karne ki iski umar hai kya

Madhuri- Dekho Atul ab itne conservative mat bano main manti hun ki jhooth bolke jaana galat hai par isse umar ka koi lena dena nahi

Atul- Haan magar....

Madhuri- Kuch magar nahi mujhe koi problem nahi agar Kalyani ka koi boyfriend hai toh bas problem hai toh iss baat se ki isne humse jhooth bola

Atul- Madhuri.....

Kalyani- Ab please aap dono ladna band kariye please.....

Madhuri- Acha theek hai... Magar tune jhooth kaha hi kyun tu mujhe toh bata hi sakti thi main khud hi Atul ko samjha deti

Kalyani- Main dar gayi thi....

Madhuri- Ismein darne waali kya baat hai.... Tune woh gaana nahi suna Jab Pyaar Kiya Toh Darna Kya??

Atul- Madhuri yeh sab kya seekha rahi ho tum isse... Abhi bacchi hai....

Madhuri- Haan aur yahi bacchi kuch mahinon mein 20 saal ki hone waali hai.... Ab please Atul itne baba aadam ki zamane ke mat bano.... Please....

Atul- Acha baba theek hai.... Kalyani mujhe yeh bata woh ladka hai kaesa Marathi toh hai naa....

Madhuri- Chiiii Atul!!! Ab tum caste dekhoge... Kaun se zamane ki baat kar rahe ho agar Marathi nahi hua toh kya??? Tum reject kar doge....

Atul- Nahi aesa nahi hai main toh waese hi puch raha tha.....

Kalyani- Ab please aap dono ladho mat.... Papa don't worry woh ladka Marathi hi hai aur bahut ache hain.... Mujhse bahut pyaar karte hain.......

Madhuri- Ohho.... Bahut Pyaar karte hain.... Dekh rahe ho Atul abhi se hi kitni izzat di jaa rahi hai.... Waese kab se chal raha hai yeh sab aur mili kab tu usse.... Teri office mein hai kya.... Kahin woh Atharva toh nahi haan uska bhi toh pura naam Atharva Bapat hai Marathi hi hai.... Haan wahi hai kya.....

Kalyani- Nahi Madhuri woh sirf mera colleague hai aur acha dost usse zyada kuch nahi....

Madhuri- Phir hai kaun jaldi bata.... Kahan mili....

Kalyani- Hai kaun yeh toh surprise hai app dono ke liye.... Haan kab mile yeh bata sakti hun hum mere 18th birthday par mile the....

Madhuri- Toh 2 saal se yeh sab chal raha hai aur tune bataya bhi nahi

Kalyani- Nahi Madhuri hum bhale hi 2 saal pehle mile but relation mein aaye abhi sirf 5- 6 mahine hi hue hain...

Madhuri- Acha tab theek hai...

Atul- Kya theek hai... 5- 6 mahine se yeh sab chal raha hai.... Kaun hai... Kya naam hai... Kya karta hai...

Madhuri- Are aaram se Atul itna hyper kyun ho rahe ho tumhari tabyat bigad jayegi....

Atul- Kuch nahi hoga mujhe.... Mujhe milna hai usse ek kaam karo kal Sunday hai kal hi bulao usse main milna chahta hun....

Kalyani- Lekin Papa itne short notice mein.... Next week ka rakh lete hain....

Atul- Mujhe kuch nahi pata milenge toh kal hi... Abhi tune hi kaha na bahut pyaar karta hain tujhse toh kya tere liye tere parents se kal aake mil nahi sakta

Kalyani- Nahi Papa.... Aesi koi baat nahi hai.... Woh toh bas...

Atul- Bas baat khatam kal milte hain tere boyfriend se aur agar mujhe kuch bhi galat laga toh ussi wakt yeh rishta khatam

Kalyani- Are magar... Dekhna Madhuri....

Madhuri- Yeh kya baat hui Atul tum as a father apni beti ki chinta karte ho issiliye uss ladke se milna chahte ho main samajh sakti hun par yeh koi baat nahi hui ki agar kuch bhi galat hua toh rishta khatam..... Atleast yeh toh dekho ki humari beti aur woh ladka ek dusre se kitna pyaar karte hain....

Atul- Acha theek hai magar fir bhi kal ka test bahut difficult hone wala hai

Madhuri- Kalyani tere Papa kisiki nahi sunne wale tu use bula kal baaki ab sab kal hi pata chalega...

Kalyani- Ok.... Thanks a lot mujhe ek mauka dene ke liye aur maaf karne ke liye

Madhuri- Hurt toh hum ab bhi bahut hain ki iss baat ke liye tune humse itne jhooth bole... Agar sach pehle hi bol deti toh baat itni aage badhti hi nahi....

Kalyani- Sorry.... Main sach mein bahut dar gayi thi aap dono kis tarah react karoge.... I am really very sorry....

Atul- Theek hai ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya.... Apne us so called boyfriend ko bolo kal ke liye ready rahe

Madhuri- Atul.......

Atul- Ok fine....

Kalyani- Haan abhi call karke bolti hun unko

Atul and Madhuri- Ok

After that Kalyani went from there to her room and called Malhar-

Malhar- Hello Baby!!!! Kya hua abhi toh mile the itni jaldi meri yaad aa gayi

After saying this Malhar laughed.

Kalyani- App toh mere dil mein rehte hain aur yeh dil toh hamesha mere pass hi rehta hai, toh door toh main aapko khud se hone hi nahi deti fir yaad kaese aayegi

Malhar- Awww.... That is why I Love You Soooo Much..... Har din mujhe tumse pehle se bhi zyada pyar ho jaat hai

Kalyani- I Love You Tooo.... Sorry abhi aapke kaam ke wakt aapko disturb kiya but bahut hi zaroori baat karni thi....

Malhar- Are sorry kisliye tumhara jab man kare tum tab hakk se phone kiya karo main scene ke beech mein bhi tumhara call uthayunga.....

Kalyani smiled and said- Nahi aesa karne ki koi zaroorat nahi Work Comes First

Malhar- No Work Comes After You

Kalyani blushed and smiled and said- Accha suniye bahut zaroori baat karni hai mujhe aapse

Malhar- Haan bolo main sun raha hun

After that Kalyani said him everything that happened today in her house.

Malhar- Maine tumhe pehle hi kaha tha ki hume sab kuch bata dena chahiye tumhare parents ko lekin tumne suna hi nahi mera

Kalyani- Sorry... Ab ho gayi galti kya karun aur kitni maafi mangu

Malhar- Acha sorry ab ro mat already bahut ro chuki ho aaj.... Kaash aaj main tumhare saath hota wahan toh rone hi nahi deta tumhe

Kalyani- Koi baat nahi Malhar Ji waese bhi meri hi galati thi

Malhar- Toh mere Sasurji kal mujhse milna chahte hain aur mera test lena chahte hain

Kalyani smiled and said- Haan.... Lekin agar aap kal free nahi hain toh koi baat nahi main kisi aur din ke liye mana lungi

Malhar- Haan kal mujhe dubbing ke liye aana tha par koi baat nahi I'll manage

Kalyani- Are koi baat nahi main next week mein jab aap free hon tab ka meeting rakhwa lungi Papa ko bolke

Malhar- Nahi iski koi zaroorat nahi meeting toh kal hi hogi aakhir mere Sasurji ne challenge kiya hai ki agar main tumse pyaar karta hun toh kal milunga unse.... Main apne pyaar pe koi sawaal nahi uthne dunga..... Don't worry I'll manage unse kehena challenge accepted.... Aur waese bhi maine tumse kaha tha ki jab bhi tumhe meri zaroorat hogi humare rishte ke baare mein apne parents ke saamne baat karne ke liye toh main tumhare saath khada rahunga toh tumhe diya waada kaese tod sakta hun

Kalyani- You are best Malhar Jii... I Love You Very Very Very Very Much....

Malhar- But I Love You More.....

Both laughed.

Malhar- Don't worry Kalyani kal sab theek hoga.... Main tumhe zara bhi let down nahi karunga...

Kalyani- I very well know Malhar Jii..... Bas ek hi cheez ki tension hai

Malhar- Woh kya??

Kalyani- Rehne dijiye ab kal hi hoga jo hoga

Malhar- Acha ok.... Ab mujhe jaana hoga mere scene ka time hai.... Byee and take care and don't worry sab acha hoga

Kalyani- Haan Hope soo... Bye and good luck

Malhar- Acha suno....

Kalyani- Haan....

Malhar- I Love You....

After saying this he kissed his phone.

Kalyani started blushing and smiling.

Malhar- Ab sirf blush hi karti rahogi yaa jawab bhi dogi

Kalyani was amazed- Aapko kaese pata main blush kar rahi hun

Malhar- Kyunki main tumhe tumse zyada jaanta hun... Ab jaldi se jawab do mujhe scene ke liye late ho raha hai

Kalyani- I Love You Too.....

After saying this she too kissed her phone. And then both disconnected the call. At that time Madhuri was standing near her door and listened there last lines and was smiling. Kalyani as soon as saw her got a little embarrassed and said-

Kalyani- Madhuri tuuu....

Madhuri- Are carry on carry on sorry for disturbing you guys....

Kalyani- Madhuri..... Aesa kuch nahi hai

Madhuri- Beta jab main aur Atul aese date kar rahe the tab hum bhi issi tarah baat karte the aur sharmate the toh mujhe toh kuch seekha hi mat

Kalyani- Sorry Madhuri maine tujhe yeh sab pehle nahi bataya.... Main batana chahti thi par himmat nahi hui dar lag raha tha

Madhuri- Ismein darne ki kya baat thi bata... Hurt toh mujhe hua hai par tere face pe uss ladke ke liye pyaar aur smile dekh ke sab choomantar ho gaya.... Main hamesha se chahti thi ki Mere aur Atul ke jis pyaar ki nishani tu hai tujhe bhi waesa hi yaa yun kahun usse bhi zyada gehra aur anmol pyaar naseeb ho... And I am happy ki aaj tu uss feeling ko jee rahi hai

Kalyani- Magar Papa....

Madhuri- Tu Atul ki chinta mat kar... Woh bhool raha hai ki aaj jis jagah tu khadi hai ussi jagah kuch saalon pehle woh aur main bhi khade the... Aur agar kal zaroorat padi toh main usse yeh baat yaad dilaungi

Kalyani hugged her mother and said- Thank You Very Much Madhuri... Par mujhe unpe aur humare pyaar par pura bharosa hai woh sab handle kar lenge....

Madhuri- Waah itna confidence acha laga jaanke.... Main dua karungi ki tum dono ka pyaar aesa hi bana rahe

Kalyani- Thank You.... Bas chinta agar hai toh sirf ek hi cheez ki

Madhuri- Woh kya???

Kalyani- Kuch nahi kal sab pata chal jaayega

Madhuri- Ok now smile and don't panic

Kalyani- Ok.... But fingers crossed ki kal sab theek ho

Madhuri- Sab theek hoga.... Main jaake Atul ko bata deti hun ki kal woh ladka aa raha hai aur fir kal ki taiyaari start karti hun pehli baar aa raha hai toh sabkuch best hona chahiye humara ghar... khana and everything. Bahut kaam hai chal main chalti hun aur tu bhi ab rest kar

Kalyani- Haan.....

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Finally Malhar is coming to meet Kalyani's parents 😍

Madhuri is such a cool and supportive mother

Excited for the next chapter 😍

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Beautiful Shruti. 

Madhuri is such a wonderful mom.

Atul wants to test Malharji..πŸ˜†

Typical beti ka baap 

And last me Kalma phone Convo ❀️❀️❀️

Let's see what happens between hone wale damaad and sasurπŸ˜†

Thank you for writing Shruti.. I was missing your update..

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Thanks a lot for such a beautiful comment πŸ€—πŸ€—

And really very sorry for keeping you wait for so long 😟😟

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Originally posted by: shrutiberlia

Thanks a lot for such a beautiful comment πŸ€—πŸ€—

And really very sorry for keeping you wait for so long 😟😟


It's ok Shruti. I'm glad atleast you took time to still come and update it. πŸ€—

The entire deshmukh Convo was worth the wait. 

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Actually the thing is I have started writing this update 2 weeks before but due to some urgent work I was not able to complete it. That is why it took so much time.

Yes I have actually written all the Deshmukh Conversation with all my heart and I am glad you liked it.

I am eagerly waiting for your next update.

By the way where is Jara... Why isn't she updating her stories.... Is everything fine....

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Originally posted by: shrutiberlia

Actually the thing is I have started writing this update 2 weeks before but due to some urgent work I was not able to complete it. That is why it took so much time.

Yes I have actually written all the Deshmukh Conversation with all my heart and I am glad you liked it.

I am eagerly waiting for your next update.

By the way where is Jara... Why isn't she updating her stories.... Is everything fine....


Same, I've also started to write an update  but still unable to finish it. 


I'll try to post soon


About Jara... Maybe she's busy with her studies. 

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CHAPTER- 15


Next day at Kalyani's residence her mother was arranging everything so that everything looks good in front of her daughter's boyfriend and after asking Kalyani she prepared all the favorite dishes of Malhar.

Madhuri- Dekh na Kalyani sab theek toh lag raha hai naa.... Usse pasand toh aayega naa

Kalyani- Sab kuch bahut acha hai.... Unhe definitely pasand aayega.... Don't worry.....

Atul- Mujhe toh ek baat samajh nahi aa rahi hai ki Madhuri tum itna taam jhaam kar hi kyun rahi ho.... Woh yahan koi Kalyani ka haath nahi mangne aa raha hai........ Waese bhi kya pata yeh nobat kabhi aayegi bhi ki nahi....

Madhuri- Mujhe toh aesa lagta hai Atul ki tumne use reject karne ka pura plan bana rakha hai

Atul saw Kalyani's pleading expression and said- Nahi aesi koi baat nahi hai...

Madhuri- Rehne do mujhe sab pata hai.... Tum bhi meri ek baat ache se sun lo bina use fair chance diye agar tumne use reject kiya toh mujhse bura koi nahi....

Atul- Are yeh kya baat hui...

Madhuri- Yahi baat hai...... Aur waese bhi meri Kalyani ki pasand ghar aa rahi hai mera bas chale toh main duniya ki saari cheezen uske saamne rakh doon..... Phir yeh toh kuch nahi hai...

After listening this Kalyani hugged her mother and said- Thank You Very Very Much Madhuri.... Tu na world ki best Maa hai..... I Love You Very Much...

Atul- Aur main....

Kalyani came near her father hugged him and said- Aap bhi Papa world ke best Papa ho.... Infact aap dono world ke best parents ho.... Bas Papa ek hi request hai ki aap please unke saath zyada harsh mat hona.... I really love him a lot and I don't want ki mujhe aap dono mein se kisi ek ko chunna pade..... Please....

Atul smiled and kissed her daughter's forehead and said- Ab tum dono ke saamne meri kahan hi chal sakti hai.... Mujhe tum dono galat mat samjho lekin main bhi toh ek beti ka Baap hun aur hamesha apni beti ki khushi hi chahunga aur jab tak main puri tarah se satisfy nahi ho jaata iss rishte ko manzuri nahi de paayunga...... But don't get sad jaesa ki Madhuri ne kaha main use pura fair change dunga..... Pakka promise.....

After listening this the trio smiled and came forward for a family hug and hugged eachother......

Madhuri- Acha ab zyada emotional mat ho abhi aur bhi taiyaari karni hai mujhe.... Are Kalyani jaa tu abhi tak taiyaar nahi hui hai jaldi se taiyaar ho jaa....

Kalyani- Haan bas jaa hi rahi hun...

After that Kalyani went to her room and got ready in Malhar's favorite blue color dress. And just when she was putting makeup Malhar's message popped up on her phone.

Malhar- Hello..... My Love❀️❀️ Main bilkul confused hun ki kya pehnu.... Please help naa main nahi chahta ki main apna first impression kharab karun apne sasurji ke saamne😞😞

Kalyani- Awwww......πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

Malhar- Ab zyada mazak mat udao πŸ˜’πŸ˜’ Main photos bhej raha hun jaldi select karo aur batao....

After that Malhar sent her his few suits, shirts, pants and jeans photos from which Kalyani selected a simple white shirt and a blue jeans.

Malhar- Pakka yeh pehen lun.... Zyada simple nahi ho jayega naa....πŸ™„πŸ™„

Kalyani- App kisi shadi mein nahi jaa rahe hain.... Bas mere Papa se milne waale hain aur uske liye yeh bilkul perfect hai.... Aur waese bhi aap white mein kaafi hot lagte hain🀭🀭

Malhar- Acchaa..... πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ Abhi message mein toh kaafi flirt kar rahi ho aur jab saamne hota hun toh bas sharmati ho....😏😏

Kalyani- Malhar Ji.....☺️☺️ Acha ab mujhe bhi ready hona hai so do not disturb....🀫🀫

Malhar- Ok 🀐🀐

After half an hour Malhar got ready and sent his pic to Kalyani for approval.

Malhar- Dekho toh correct lag raha hun naaπŸ€”πŸ€”

Kalyani- Jaesa ki maine pehle hi kaha tha bilkul hottttt..... 😍😍

Malhar- 😘😘 Acha ab jaldi se apni bhi pic bhejo main bhi toh dekhun tum kitni pyaari lag rahi ho 😜😜

Kalyani- Nahii..... 😁😁 Mera look aapke liye surprise hai..... πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Aap jab aayenge tab hi dekhne ko milegaπŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹

Malhar- Are yeh kya baat hui.... πŸ˜’πŸ˜’ Bahut hi galat baat hai main itna der kaese intezaar karunga.... πŸ™„πŸ™„ Please bhej do naa....😟😟

Kalyani- Nahiii..... 🀫🀫Bilkul bhi nahi.... 🀫🀫 Sirf adhe aur ghante ki baat hai jab aayenge tab hi dekh lijiyega... 😏😏

Malhar- Yeh tum bahut galat kar rahi ho Kalyani..... πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯ Ek pyaase ko bina paani pilaye maar rahi ho 😭😭

Kalyani- Chiii.... Kitna ganda dialogue tha..... 😱😱 Have patience Mr. Rane.... Sabr ka fal meetha hota hai 😝😝

Malhar- Uff.... 😞😞 Ek toh yeh tumhara sabr kisi din meri jaan naa le le πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

Kalyani- Kaise baatein kar rahe hain aap....😠😠 Aapko kitni baar bola hai aesa mat bola kariye..... 😑😑

Malhar- Acha baba sorry.....😒😒 Ab main jaldi hi aata hun tumhare paas.... πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ Bye my Princess 😚😚

Kalyani- Haan Bye.... πŸ₯°πŸ₯° Jaldi aa jaaiye main wait kar rahi hun aapka... 😊😊

Malhar- 😘😘

After that when Kalyani got fully ready and was just checking her look in the mirror Madhuri came.

Madhuri- Are waah.... Kitni pyaari lag rahi hai meri beti..... Vishwas hi nahi ho raha ki tu itni badi ho gayi hai... Yeh color kitna acha lag raha hai tujhpe...

Kalyani- Haan unka favorite color hai.... Issiliye yeh pehna...

Madhuri- Ohhhh.... Bada khayal rakhe jaa rahe hain abhi se hi unkeeee.... pasand naa pasand kaa....

Kalyani started blushing and said- Madhuri ab tu bhi mujhe mat chedh naa....

Madhuri- Are main toh bahut hi khush hun tere liye ki tum dono ek dusre se itna pyaar karte ho

Kalyani smiled and said- Lekin Madhuri aaj sab acha hoga naa..... Kahin Papa.....

Madhuri- Tu bilkul bhi chinta mat kar teri Madhuri hai naa sab sambhal legi.... Lekin sach kahun toh main bhi Atul ki baat se sehmat hun main bhi pehle check karna chahti hun ki woh kya sach mein tere liye sahi hai yaa nahi...

Kalyani- Tu bilkul bhi chinta mat kar.... Tu bhi jab unse milegi naa samajh jayegi ki woh mujhse kitna pyaar karte hain aur main unse....

Madhuri- Tera pyaar toh teri aankhon se hi jhalakta hai.... Bas ek baar yahi pyaar mujhe uski aankhon mein bhi dikh jaaye toh main sab se ladh loongi tum dono ke liye

Kalyani- Dikhega tujhe unki aankhon mein bhi dikhega....

Madhuri- Acha ab kya yahin baatein karte rahenge hum dono chal meri thodi madat kar.... Aur kab tak aa raha hai woh....

Kalyani- Bas nikal hi gaye hain pahuchte hi honge......

Madhuri- Theek hai

After half an hour Malhar arrived at Kalyani's house and nervously rang her door bell. After listening the bell Kalyani ran towards the door but Atul stopped her and instead asked Madhuri to open the door. And when Madhuri opened the door got shocked seeing Malhar Rane there.

Madhuri- Aap.... Mr. Malhar Rane

Malhar- Namaste!!!

Madhuri- Namaste!!!! Aaiye andar aayiye....

When Malhar came inside Atul also got shocked seeing him there.

Atul- Are aap toh wohi hain na woh kaun sa serial hai naa jo Kalyani, tu aur Madhuri dekhte hain kya naam hai uske toh aap hero hai naa.... Yahan kaese.....

Madhuri- Haan main bhi wohi soch rahi hun Atul ki itne hit show Pyar Tujhi Se ka hero Malhar Rane yahan kaese..... Kalyani tune kya koi contest mein participate kiya tha kahin uska prize toh dene nahi aayen hain aap.... Bol naa

Kalyani- Nahi Madhuri aesa kuch nahi hai.... Aap dono jiska intezaar kar rahe the yeh wahi hain.... Mere boyfriend Malhar Ji....

Atul and Madhuri- Kya????

Madhuri- Tu koi mazak kar rahi hai naa..... Sach sach bata....

Kalyani- Nahi yeh koi mazak nahi hai....

After saying this Kalyani went towards Malhar and held his hand and said-

Kalyani- Papa..... Madhuri..... Miliye inse yeh hain Mr. Malhar Rane..... Duniya ke liye ek famous actor par mere liye mera sab kuch mere Malhar Ji....

After listening this Atul held Madhuri's hand and took her inside their room leaving Malhar and Kalyani alone in the hall.

Malhar- Kalyani.... Kya hua tumhare parents ko... Kahin main inhe napasand toh nahi naa

Kalyani- Aesa kuch nahi hai Malhar Ji.... Woh bas thode shocked hain aakhir agar unki beti achanak se ek famous actor ko laake khada kar degi unke saamne aur bolegi miliye mere boyfriend se toh iss cheez ko digest karne mein time toh lagega hi naa...

Malhar- Haan yeh toh tum sahi keh rahi ho..... Waese tum kitni kamal ki lag rahi ho mere favorite color mein.... Issiliye tumne mujhe photo nahi bheja naa taaki mujhe pata naa chal jaaye.....

Kalyani- Haan surprise tha aapke liye.... Kaesa laga achi toh lag rahi hun na....

Malhar- Achiii..... Are mere toh hosh hi uda diye tumne......

After saying this he came close to her and gave a small peck on her cheek.

Kalyani blushed and said- Yeh kya kar rahe hain aap Malhar Ji..... Papa ne dekh liya toh.....

Malhar smiled and said- Dekh liya toh dekh liya..... Apni girlfriend ko kiss diya hai aur ab toh unhe bhi yeh baat pata hai.....

Kalyani- Haan.... But abhi tak aapko unka approval mila nahi hai....

Malhar- Ek toh pehle se hi main itna nervous hun tum yeh baat bolke aur tension mat do mujhe....

Kalyani- Achaa okk....

Malhar- Waese kya ho raha hoga andar

Kalyani- Kya pata

Inside Atul and Madhuri's room-

Atul- Yeh kya hai Madhuri.... Kalyani ne toh hadd hi kar di hai.... Ek Television Actor ko apna boyfriend bata rahi hai... Yeh kya hai....

Madhuri- Shant ho jaao Atul....

Atul- Kaese shant ho jaaun main batao.... Abhi tak mujhe lag raha tha shayad uske college yaa fir tuition ka koi ladka hoga.... Par yahan toh isne seedhe ek actor ko hi pasand kar liya.....

Madhuri- Haan toh ismein problem kya hai....

Atul- Problem kya hai..... Yeh tum bol rahi ho.... Are woh kam se kam 10 saal bada hoga humari beti se....

Madhuri- 10 nahi 12... Maine google mein padha tha iske baare mein

Atul- Yeh lo mujhe toh laga 10.... Are yeh janne ke baad bhi tum aesa bol rahi ho....

Madhuri- Are toh kya hua tum yeh mat bhoolo tum bhi mujhse 8 saal bade the jab mere ghar walon se humare baare mein baat karne aaye the.....

Atul- Tum ab humare rishte ko inke rishte se compare karogi??? Haan main hun tumse 8 saal bada lekin tumhe 8 aur 12 mein koi farak nahi lagta kya batao.... Aur waese bhi humari shadi jis time hui thi uss time itna age gap ok hua karta tha..... Par aaj ke time.... Aaj kal toh 2 saal bade ladkon ko bhi ladkiyan reject kar deti hain.... Aur humari beti ko dekho....

Madhuri- Tum sirf age ke basis pe kisi ko judge nahi kar sakte.... Are sirf age gap hi sab kuch nahi hota

Atul- Chalo bhula deta hun age gap..... Par kaam kaam ka kya are ek Television Actor hai pata nahi kab tak show chale nahi chale fame rahe nahi rahe humari beti financially kabhi bhi uspar dependent nahi ho payegi

Madhuri- Acha agar kisi movie ka actor hota toh tumhe chalta hai naa....

Atul- Nahi main woh nahi bol raha hun.... Par ek financial stability bhi toh zaroori hoti hai naa

Madhuri- Are kis sadi ki baat kar ho tum.... Humari beti CA kar rahi hai CA woh khud ke kharche toh kya apne pure parivar ke kharche akele utha sakti hai..... Use kisi bhi tarah ki financial stability ki zaroorat nahi hai

Atul- Tum sahi keh rahi ho par....

Madhuri- Par war kuch nahi..... Mana ki main bhi ek baar ko shocked thi Malhar ko yahan dekh kar par tumhara concern yahan par yeh nahi hona chahiye ki woh humari beti se kitna bada hai yaa fir kya kaam karta hai.... Tumhara sabse pehla question hi yeh hona chahiye ki woh humari beti se kitna pyaar karta hai aur kya khush rakhega yaa nahi humari beti ko

Atul- Yeh bhi toh is industry ki khasiyat hai ki aaye din kisi naa kisi ke break up ke baare mein sunte rahte hain.... Kahin kal ko aesa kuch humari beti ke saath hua toh.... Tab kya karogi batao....

Madhuri- Jo cheez abhi tak hui bhi nahi hai tum uss cheez ke baare mein soch rahe ho lekin tumhe Kalyani ki khushi nahi dikhi na Malhar ko hume introduce karate wakt bolo.....

Atul- Nahi aesa nahi hai...

Madhuri- Mujhe ab kuch aur nahi sunna.... Chup chap bahar chalo aur Malhar ko ache se greet karo and usse sawal karo jo tumhe karna hai..... Par dhyaan rahe kuch bhi ulte seedhe sawaal mat karna.....

Atul- Theek hai chalo.....

After that both Atul and Madhuri came outside, there they saw both Kalyani and Malhar were sitting on the sofa holding each other's hands. Immediately after seeing Kalyani's parents Malhar left Kalyani's hand and stood up simultaneously Kalyani also stood up.

Atul- Are waah itni sharam hai tumme ki hume dekh ke humari beti ka haath chodh do aur khade ho jaao

Madhuri- Atul.......

Malhar- Nahi woh sorry Uncle....

Atul- Uncle.... Itna jaldi informal hone ki koi zaroorat nahi.... Call me Mr. Deshmukh only Mr. Deshmukh

Malhar- Ok Mr. Deshmukh

Madhuri- Atul....... Par beta tum toh mujhe Aunty hi bulana kyunki itna formal Mrs. Deshmukh mujhse toh bilkul bhi handle nahi hota....

Malhar smiled and said- OK Aunty......

Atul- Kalyani apne room mein jaao hume Malhar se akele mein kuch baat karni hai....

Kalyani- Par Papa....

Atul- Beta koi toh baat maanlo humari..... Jaao jaldi....

Kalyani saw Malhar with concerned eyes and said- Theek hai Papa..... Par aapko yaad hai na aapne mujhe subhah kya promise Kiya tha....

Atul- Haan yaad hai don't worry...... Apne Papa par itna toh trust karo...

Kalyani- Theek hai

After saying this Kalyani went to her room.

Atul- Toh tum ho Malhar Rane, that famous Television Actor

Malhar- Ji....

Atul- Tumhari age kya hogi.....

Malhar- Ji 32...

Atul- Aur humari beti abhi tak sirf 19 saal ki hai kuch mahinon mein 20 saal ki hogi

Madhuri- Atul..... Humari baat ho chuki hai naa iss baare mein

Atul- Ek minute Madhuri.... Mujhe baat karne do.... Toh batayiye Mr. Rane humari beti aapse umar mein itni chotti hai fir yeh pyaar yeh relationship app dono kaese sambhalenge..... Batayiye

Malhar- Dekhiye Mr. Deshmukh jab main pehli baar Kalyani se mila tha mujhe pehli nazar mein hi usse ek anokha sa raabta mehsus hua tha tab uss wakt maine yeh nahi socha tha ki uski kya umar hai yaa fir meri kya umar hai...... Aur rahi baat aapke sawaal ki toh pyaar umar kahan dekhta hai woh toh kabhi bhi kisi bhi wakt kisi se bhi ho jaata hai..... Yeh toh aap mujhse zyada behtar jaante hain after all aapki aur Aunty ki bhi toh love marriage hui hai......

Madhuri smiled listening his answer and said- Ek dum sahi kahan tumne beta.... Main bhi Atul se 8 saal choti hun par sachmein jab pyaar hota hai na toh yeh sab kuch samajh nahi aata....

Atul- Yeh saari baatein abhi ke liye bahut pyaari lag rahi hain par future ka kya.... Aye din tumhare industry ke baare mein sunne ko aata hai iss actor ka uske saath chakkar chal raha hai..... Iss actor ka apne long time boyfriend ke saath break up ho gaya hai...... Wagera wagera...... Humari beti bahut masoom hai yeh sab nahi samajhti kal ko agar uske saath aesa kuch hua yaa fir tumhare baare mein yeh saari news aayi tab kya karoge.... Meri Kalyani toh toot hi jaayegi aur main apni beti ko toot ta hua nahi dekh sakta.....

Malhar- Aap bilkul sahi keh rahe hain..... Aapki tarah main bhi Kalyani ko kisi bhi dard mein bardasht nahi kar sakta..... Future kaa toh pata nahi naa hi main yeh guarantee de sakta hun ki mere aese rumors nahi aayenge par itna zaroor keh sakta hun ki main bahut zyada pyaar karta hun Kalyani se aur woh bhi mujhse toh mujhe mere pyaar par pura bharosa hai ki Kalyani inn rumors par nahi balki humare pyaar par mujh par bharosa karegi..... Raha sawaal break up ka toh main khud ko Kalyani se ek minute bhi door bardasht nahi kar sakta toh break up ke baare mein sochne se pehle main chahunga ki meri jaan chali jaaye taaki aapne aakhri wakt mein bhi main Kalyani ka hi banke rahun

Madhuri- Waah beta aaj pata chala Kalyani tumse itna pyaar kyun karti hai.... Tumhari baaton se toh kisi ko bhi pyaar ho jaaye..... I am glad ki tum meri beti ke life mein ho.......

Atul- Yeh saari baatein abhi bahut pyaari lag rahi hain par kal kya hoga kise pata....... Financial Stability ke baare mein kya khayal hai tumhara...... Tum jis industry mein ho usmein aaye din naye shows aate hain aur kai purane band hote hain.... Jahan tak mujhe pata hai yeh shayad tak tumhara pehla as a lead role koi show hai aur kitna time hua hai iss show ko aaye....

Malhar- Kareeb 1.5 saal....

Atul- Toh 1.5 saal.... Zyada se zyada aur 5 saal chal sakta hai yeh show yaa fir 10 saal.... Zindagi bhar toh nahi rahega naa toh yeh show khatam hone ke baad kya..... Kya guarantee hai ki tumhe turant koi acha kaam milega yaa fir milte rahega.... Tab tum kya expect karte ho ki meri beti kaam kare aur tumhe aur tumhare ghar ko bhi chalaye..... Aur tumhare taraf se koi bhi financial stability naa mile usse...... Batao...

Malhar- Bilkul sahi kaha aapne Mr. Deshmukh par aapko shayad pata nahi par mere Baba ek bahut bade lawyer hain aur meri Aai bhi NGO's mein kaam karti hai aur unki help karti hai in dono ka beta hun main.... Main easily apne Baba ki tarah ek lawyer ban sakta tha par mujhe mere passion ko pursue karna tha aur mere parents ko pura vishwash tha mujh par aur support bhi kiya mujhe aur aaj dekhiye kareeb 8 saal ke struggle ke baad mujhe mera dream role mila aur ab jab mujhe iss industry mein 10 saal hone ko aaye hain maine woh mukam finally apne mehnat aur ghar waalon ke aashirvaad se haasil kar liya hai.... Aur aage bhi mujhe khud par aur apni mehnat par pura bharosa hai ki main apne career ko issi tarah successful banata rahunga..... Aur raha sawaal Kalyani ki financial stability ka toh uski aap bilkul bhi chinta mat kariye duniya mein sabse zyada mujhe ussi ki hi chinta rehti hai aur usse kisi bhi tarah ki koi bhi takleef main kabhi bhi nahi jhelne dunga apna khoon paseena ek kar dunga uske liye......

Kalyani- Aur main aapke liye Malhar Ji.....

After listening Kalyani's voice everybody turned towards her direction, she came there and sat beside Malhar and held his hand and said-

Kalyani- Main bhi apne aur Malhar Ji ke ek better future ke liye apna khoon paseena ek kardungi..... Akhir kyun yeh zimmedari sirf ek mard ko hi nibhana padta hai..... Aur Papa aapse iss tarah ke sawaal ki mujhe zara bhi ummeed nahi thi..... Aap hi ne kaha tha mujhe ki jab aap aur Madhuri Mumbai aaye the uss wakt shuru shuru mein aap dono ko kitni financial problems face karni padi thi par uss wakt agar aap Bank jaake wahan ka kaam dekhte the toh yahan Madhuri ne ghar bhaithe kitne saare interior designing ka kaam sambhala tha taaki woh aapko support kar saken..... Aur aap yahan aesi baatein kar rahe hain..... Are yeh toh couples ki duty hoti hai ki agar ek kamzor pade toh dusra usse sambhale aur support kare toh aap yahan sirf mere baare mein kaese soch sakte hain.....

Madhuri- Kalyani bilkul sahi keh rahi hai Atul.... Mujhe garv hai apni beti par..... Are tum sirf Kalyani ke Baap hone ke nazar se Malhar ko dekh rahe ho ek baar use sirf ek aese ladke ki tarah dekho jo humari beti se bahut pyaar karta hai aur use khush rakhne ki guarantee dene ko taiyaar hai..... Tumne itne sawaal kiye isse par ek bhi sawaal yeh nahi tha ki kya woh humari beti se pyaar karta hai.... Par fir bhi usne tumhare har ek sawaal ke jawaab mein baar baar ek hi cheez kahan ki woh Kalyani se bahut pyaar karta hai aur use khush rakhega humesha.... Are yahi sabit karta hai ki woh Kalyani se kitna pyaar karta hai samjho isse....

Atul- Abhi tumlog meri baatein nahi samajh rahe wakt aane par samjhoge ki main kyun aesa keh raha hun

Madhuri- Kalyani.... Malhar ko leke apne room mein jaao mujhe Atul se kuch baat karni hai

Kalyani- Haan ok

After that both Kalyani and Malhar went to her room.

Edited by shrutiberlia - 8 months ago