SS : When Life Gives You a Second Chance Ch4-pg14 - Page 7

Really well written work. Your story is a fascinating journey with its emotional intensity, beautifully chronicling the unexpected arranged marriage of Abhimanyu and Priya. Abhimanyu's distress, given his situation, is portrayed with incredible authenticity. His resistance to the abrupt arrangement and his deep concern for Priya's happiness are palpable throughout, turning him into a character with whom readers can deeply empathize. On the contrary, Priya emerges as a strong, resilient character. Her quiet trust in her father's choice, contrasting sharply with Abhimanyu's outspoken resistance, adds depth to the story.

Vipul's heartfelt plea to Abhimanyu and his devastating decision to conduct Priya's Kanyadaan before his risky surgery serve as powerful moments.

Waiting for the next part since your writing skills are too good!😊

Hey Kriti,

Loved your writing. This is a good story.

Loved the way you described Abhimanyu's thoughts.

Loved it❤️

The detail conversation between all 4 characters is well written ..

Originally posted by: mickeym

thank you much dear !! 😭 .. i want the same thing in the story now .. abhi needs a real love , who understand him , his anger , his love .. and forgive him if he does any mistake also ,, i hope Priya will be like this .. and i want Mrs.sharma to see this and understand what she missed , where she was wrong .. make her jealous dear .. 🤪

He always had been right in thinking that Akshara was never an ideal woman for his son Abhimanyu. The girl, who cheated to make her family win a stupid dance competition by throwing marbles under Abhimanyu's feet. That day he could get badly injured but that thought never come into her mind she just wanted to make her family win anyhow.

loved this part .. brilliant .. !❤️

I'll defo make her envy n realised what she has missed in her life in her ego n revenge

Mana abhi was wrong but she was also not right

And two wrongs don't make a right

Thank you Mickey ki Minnie 🤗

Originally posted by: LoveHC

Lovely!! You indeed are a great writer!

Thanks 🙏

Originally posted by: DashOfSass

Now that I think of it, I can see all the red flags in akshara her constant Aaru and family jaap and ignoring Abhi, never prioritising his love. our Abhi deserves better ❤️

Hope Priya brings happiness in his life

Yeah Akshara character is full of red flags but her innocent face make all those flags invisible for some viewers

#Abhipriya FTW🥳

Originally posted by: SejN

love it 😍.. question did you mention what happened to his engagement with Arohi? Or in this it’s just assumed Abhimanyu broke it off? Sorry if you mentioned it in part one 🫣

Originally posted by: Hopefaith

You are very talented Kriti 🤗🤗 loved the way you narrate the story and the flow

Was a little sad that the uncle passed away but he died before surgery so that’s okay and I am curious to know what happens to Aru.

you should write more often ( read both the chapters in one go)

I am reading it as a standalone story too, not connected to Yrkkh and AbhiMRa I love both Ab and Akshu and for me no one can take Akshu’s place in Abhimanyu’s life.

I know this story is only Abhimanyu’centred so reading it as such.

That being said a very well written start to the series. 💕💕

Thank you Nitya 🤗

Aru ka toh kuch nhi ho sakta

You and Nisha are saying the same thing 😆

Originally posted by: --Priyaa--

Really well written work. Your story is a fascinating journey with its emotional intensity, beautifully chronicling the unexpected arranged marriage of Abhimanyu and Priya. Abhimanyu's distress, given his situation, is portrayed with incredible authenticity. His resistance to the abrupt arrangement and his deep concern for Priya's happiness are palpable throughout, turning him into a character with whom readers can deeply empathize. On the contrary, Priya emerges as a strong, resilient character. Her quiet trust in her father's choice, contrasting sharply with Abhimanyu's outspoken resistance, adds depth to the story.

Vipul's heartfelt plea to Abhimanyu and his devastating decision to conduct Priya's Kanyadaan before his risky surgery serve as powerful moments.

Waiting for the next part since your writing skills are too good!😊

Thank You for your good words

such types of reviews always motivate an author to write more

Originally posted by: chaipaani

Hey Kriti,

Loved your writing. This is a good story.

Loved the way you described Abhimanyu's thoughts.

thank you mickey 🤗