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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Hey Shiri, can you do like a summary of this story so far? You can quote my character sketch post and add on to it if that makes it easier.

Edited by LizzieBennet - 2 years ago
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Dream Weavers

Posted: 2 years ago

Segment #14


The music in the club was really groovy. Chahat was enjoying dancing on the dance floor. If anyone from the uni saw Chahat now, they wouldn’t dare to call her a ‘nerd’. She was like a carefree bird. A part of her happiness was brought by the music – the DJ of the club seemed to have a great taste. And the rest of her happiness was because of seeing Aryan happy. He had been through a lot in the past few days, he deserved to be happy.


As she watched Aryan and Gautam groove to the music, she hoped her plans to set the duo up worked. Riya was also dancing with the trio, but soon her phone pinged and she left to meet her boyfriend in another corner of the club.


If only Saheel would drop in too. Chahat sighed. She had taken extra care to put on her make-up and get ready in hopes that Saheel would notice her. She had also put on her favourite white dress. But there was no sight of Saheel.


Chahat decided to distract herself with a drink. Besides, she did not want to be a third-wheel between Aryan and Gautam.

“Where are you going? Do you have a secret boyfriend too?” Aryan joked.

“That should be my question after you were hiding your phone.”

Aryan blushed and Chahat took a pity on him.

“I am just going to get myself a drink. You guys carry on,” she said.

“Wait,” Aryan stopped her. “I’ll also go, I want a drink too.”

Aryan was still concerned about the threat message that Chahat had got.

“No, you don’t. I know why you are doing this. I can take care of myself. Stop acting like Prateek and go enjoy your date.”

Gautam, who was dancing within an earshot, caught the word ‘date’ and turned pink,.

“It’s not a date,” Aryan squinted his eyes.

“Whatever let’s you sleep at night,” Chahat teased him.


Maybe it was her imagination that the music around her faltered for a second as she left the dance floor and went towards the bar.


Gautam was a nice guy. It was easy to talk to him and Aryan was aware that he had a crush on him. But Aryan’s heart only had Saheel, he didn’t think he and Gautam could be anything more than friends. He missed Saheel. Saheel made everything so much fun, even the punishments. Aryan had secretly hoped, this evening they could turn into something more. But there was no sign of him.


Gautam, who was oblivious to Aryan’s train of thoughts, grooved with the rhythm. He looked very happy, and in that moment Aryan realised that he should not keep Gautam in the dark about how he really felt.


When Saheel walked into the club, he immediately regretted coming. Riya’s friend, Gautam was dancing with Aryan and Aryan was giving him a lost look. He was about to turn back but Chahat stopped him.


“Wow, what a pleasant surprise!” Chahat exclaimed.

Chahat looked extra pretty today. He hoped some deserving boy noticed her and asked her out.

“Come join us on the dance floor,” Chahat said and pulled Saheel with her.

Aryan, who was dancing with Gautam, looked dazed when he saw Saheel. Then one look at Chahat’s happy face and his heart sank to the pit of his stomach.

Aryan simply nodded at him. Saheel looked at Aryan and took Chahat’s hand for dance. The music turned into slow romantic numbers.

“For all the pretty girls on the dance floor. Especially a girl in white,” The DJ said on mike. There was a scream of excitement in response.

Saheel indicated towards Chahat’s white dress, she dismissed him.


Somewhere in the middle of the dance, their partners got exchanged and Aryan was dancing with Saheel, Gautam with Chahat.

The chemistry between the two boys was palpable. With the beats of the song, their hearts beated and their breaths threatened to invade into each other’s space. Looking at the duo, Chahat finally understood what Aryan was hiding in his phone. She ran out of the dance floor. This time the music faltered and changed noticeably.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Aahh.... This is perfect, though I wanted Saheel.tp be more jealous, but sure❤️

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Dream Weavers

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

Aahh.... This is perfect, though I wanted Saheel.tp be more jealous, but sure❤️

There could be more jealousy during the dance scene, but I realised it would have exceeded the requisite word limit. I hope the next writer gives us a good Saheel-Aryan scene

Btw, Chahat’s got a secret admirer too 😆

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 2 years ago

Aahaaa, wonderful update dear! Mazaa aa gaya! Ye secret admirer humare DJ Babu hai na 😆


Saheel Aryan? You asked for it. 😆 lemme try. Romance isn't my forte but y'all can take the torture 😆

Now now.. the balls in my court... This is gonna be fantastic



Idk what to do 🤣

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 2 years ago
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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

Aahaaa, wonderful update dear! Mazaa aa gaya! Ye secret admirer humare DJ Babu hai na 😆


Saheel Aryan? You asked for it. 😆 lemme try. Romance isn't my forte but y'all can take the torture 😆

Now now.. the balls in my court... This is gonna be fantastic



Idk what to do 🤣

This is perfectly set up for something I wanted to write but you’re doing the next segment? 😞🤷🏽‍♀️ Too late. Take it away.I think T ke fic mein bhi yehi hua- am too late to claim my segment and now I fear I won’t be able to execute my idea 🤢
Edited by LizzieBennet - 2 years ago
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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

This is perfectly set up for something I wanted to write but you’re doing the next segment? 😞🤷🏽‍♀️ Too late. Take it away.I think T ke fic mein bhi yehi hua- am too late to claim my segment and now I fear I won’t be able to execute my idea 🤢

I haven't started yet so if you want I can do right after you.

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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

I haven't started yet so if you want I can do right after you.

Cool! I’ll do segment # 15 then and you’re doing #16? Unless there was someone else in queue after you. In that case I don’t wanna butt in.
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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Cool! I’ll do segment # 15 then and you’re doing #16? Unless there was someone else in queue after you. In that case I don’t wanna butt in.

Shibu said she'd do next but I guess she may also not mind waiting a turn.

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