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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: PenguinBaby

Absolutely loved it. Abhir has not forgotten his Papa and still lives by his teachings! Akshara Abhimanyu seem to realise that Abhir is not exactly happy but cannot understand the reason. And Abhinav has a daughter! Another sister for Abhir❤️ Cannot wait to see how the story unfolds.

Ps. The story title makes me so sad, why LAST goodbye?😭


@bold: I cannot say anything without spoiling, but no need to that sad. But there is a reason for the title

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: umawanderer

Guys this is just a short story of Abhinav and Abhir relationship...

Tagging the few usernames I know...


Part 1-----pg1


Part 1: The children of good man


"Abhir.. dude.. this is so awesome!!!" Krish shouted as he saw the view.

"I know!!" Abhir also shouted with excitement. Mountaineering was the best decision they had taken so far. Thanks to Ranbir Kapoor from YJHD. Krish being the Bollywood super fan that he was, had to do this after their boards.

Abhir easily got permission from his family... Krish had to beg for a few days. They were in Uttarakhand. They were a group of 20 people for this mountain trip. All from different places and different backgrounds. It was so much fun to interact with many people.

They took some time to reach the camp point. There was a tea stall near the camp point. Krish paid for the tea and brought two cups filled with hot tea to Abhir.

"Here.. take it.." But Abhir did not listen

Abhir was looking at the milkman, who just arrived with his son. The father after taking the money lifted his son off the ground and was walking away. The son was animatedly talking about his Kabbadi match...

"Abhir?" Krish asked. Krish knew that look. Abhir always looked like that when he saw someone similar to his 'papa'. Abhir's 'papa' was the person who raised him for 6 years when his parents separated for some time.

"My papa used to carry me exactly like that.." Abhir said wiping his tear, "In fact, I swear he had the exact sweater...He had very few sweaters.." Abhir laughed but not really.

"I, on the other hand, had all kinds of jackets and sweaters... Every year I got two new sweaters and one new jacket... Papa always wanted the best for me..."

"Abhir..." Krish wanted to console him.

"It's ok Krish!!... Let me remember him at least now.. you know I can not do that at home right?" Abhir gave a weak smile.

Krish sighed.. yeah... Abhir could never remember his 'papa' in his home

"Yaar.. so your papa spoiled you so much.." Krish said joining.

"As if... Mamma was so strict back then.. not at all like now... She would always stop Papa from going overboard... But Papa would somehow convince her.. if it was for me... Once, I wanted a swing... there was a peach tree in front of our Kasauli house...."

The two talked for a long time about Abhir's Kasauli days.

*********

"Abhir... Why didn't you pick up before?" Akshara asked as soon as he picked up the call.

"Mom, I was taking a shower.. we both just reached the hotel.."

He could hear his mom sighing.. His mom was sometimes a worrywart.

"But you could have called before taking a shower right?" Akshara continued. "Why do you like traveling so much... every 6 months, you need to go somewhere.. And you are only 16.. If things go this way.. I don't think you will come back home after you become an adult.."

Abhir smiled as he silently listened to his mother's concern.

"Bhaiyya..." A small shout came from the phone .. apparently, Naira got hold of the phone... "Bhaiya today, the teacher asked me about my favorite animal.. you know what I told her?"

"Tortoise," Abhir said.

"How did you know?" Abhir chuckled... He could actually see his 5-year-old sister's surprised expression in his mind.

"You idiot.. you made me read the tortoise and hare story like 200 times.. and you always cheered when the tortoise wins the race.."

"Yes, the tortoise is really nice... It's so cute... you know bhaiyya.. papa said tortoise can live till 100 years.. That is so cool."

Abhir remembered Roohi having an obsession with butterflies back when they were kids.

"Abhir... Are you all right?" Abhimanyu's voice came next.

"Yes dad.. we had so much fun today.. Do you see my insta page.. the view up there was so good.. Actually, it was breathtaking..."

"Yeah, we all saw that.. Really these kinds of trips are so good.. I am so envious of you... I wish I could also go there..."

"Then, Birla Hospital would have to be shut down.." Abhir joked. Abhimanyu also chuckled. Being the MD and HOD of the cardiac department was not easy.

"Ow!! Naira..Papa got hurt!!" Abhimanyu screamed in pain.

"Sorry papa!! This pencil was too sharp.."

"It ok.. my beta!!..my princess.. my fairy.. "

Abhir could hear the conversation going on. "Abhir.." his mother's voice came through.."The father-daughter duo started their drama again.. did you have your dinner?"

"No not yet.. will go down with Krish.. You have a concert tomorrow, right?

"

"Yeah... your dad and Naira will come to pick me up the day after tomorrow.. We thought we will do some Lonavala sightseeing after the concert.. Why did you have to go to Uttarakhand? We rarely get a chance to go out.. all four of us.. Hey? why not ask Dad to send you a private flight and you can come to Lonavala with us.."

"Yes!.. I think I can do that.. It would take only a few hours to arrange it... " His father also joined the discussion. "And besides, It would be so much more comfortable than taking a train.. like you did now.. seriously.."

Abhir stayed silent.

"Abhir.. " Akshara asked.

"Mom, Dad I have been to Lonavala... last year remember?"

"But not with your family... " Akshara said.

"Dad, tell mom.. I am really enjoying it now.. Tomorrow we have plans. "

"But Abhir, This happy family time is also rare.. I have recordings and concerts.. Your father have have his surgeries.. And you both have schools" Akshara countered.

"Abhir, Don't you want to spend time with us..." Abhimanyu asked.

"Bhaiya.. we will go and see Mamma singing" Naira cheerfully joined

Abhir knew.. that deep down his parents also felt that he was distancing himself from them.. The concern they have is evident in their voices. What was happening? He promised his papa to be a good boy.. and good boys don't make their parents feel this worried. He ran his fingers through his hair.

"Abhir..." Abhimanyu talked. "I couldn't spend much time with you back then, I really would want to spend some time with you now"

"Dad.."

"I know.. I am not that great of a father.. I am always busy.. I was not there when you were a kid...but I really love you.." Abhimanyu's voice shook

"Dad I know that.. I love you too.. I love Mom.. I love Naira I love our family.. but I sometimes.. want some space..."

"Space.. did anything happen? Did arohi maasi say something.. Or did Roohi? don't mind her.. she is just a kid... Beta.. I'll explain to her..."

"Dad.. Dad... It's nothing.. No one said anything to me..." Abhir was getting irritated.. Why was this always happening? His dad takes everything way too seriously.

"Dad... I am really fine.."

"Then why don't you want to spend time with us?"

"Dad... It's not like that.. I love to spend time with our family.. but I am already enjoying here.. Krish and I have made friends on the train ride coming here... We have decided to go for sightseeing here.. we have made plans.. Maybe we will also have an evening party with a campfire... It will be fun.."

"Do you think you can not enjoy with us?"

"Dad.." Abhir was tired of this.

"Abhir... I love you and I want to spend some nice time with you.. please can you come tomorrow... For us.."

Abhir knew this would have come here...It always does... He always had to 'prove' that he loves his dad.

"Nikkiji.. your real papa loves you so much.. you have no idea... you are his whole world.. just.. don't overlook his love and affection."

Abhir sighed, "Ok Dad.. I'll come tomorrow"

"Thank you Thank you, Junior... ", Abhimanyu's voice was booming with happiness.

Abhir cut the call. All the happiness just fading away.. He was annoyed. He punched the pillow. He knew, His father loved him.. but sometimes..actually many times.. he never understands Abhir.

He needed to chill.. He messaged Krish that He was going for a short jog and put on a jacket..

*****

"I am so stupid..." Abhir cursed himself as he felt extra hungry in the middle of his jog.

He sighed again. He looked around there was a small tea shop he bought a cup of tea, a packet of chips, and a cream biscuit packet. He was famished.. After finishing tea, he walked back while eating his chips.

He would just go to the buffet area, he decided after he reached the hotel's parking. The was a commotion near the guest parking... He was curious.. but he was more hungry so ignored it and went inside the hotel.

"Ahh.. listening to music and eating.. the world's best feeling" Abhir sighed as he ate.

He listned to old songs. now it was playing'Thoda hai thode ki zaroorat hai..'' Papa alwyas liked old songs

With his stomach much more full..Abhir's mood became nice. "It is OK. Lonavla with everyone would also be fun".. he reasoned with himself.. "Then Maybe I need to go shopping now.. I have to buy something for Naira.. something which has tortoise.. God!! that would be difficult.."

"Papa..Papa"

He heard a small kid's voice. He looked around. The voice was coming from under the table.

A small girl was hiding down.. She was crying.

"Hello" Abhir said.

The girl ignored him and continued to cry. She inched away from him

"Hello.. what happened.. Why are you hiding here?"

"I am sorry but I should not talk to strangers." She answered as she wiped her tears. Abhir smiled.

"It's Ok.. I will not harm you.. I will only help you..."

"No.. papa said that don't trust strangers.. Mahadevji will help me!!"

"Oh!!! I didn't tell you... Mahadevji sent me.. to help you" Abhir tried. It worked.

"Mahadevji sent you?"

"Yes.. see" He showed her his rudraksh..

"Mahadevji ka locket?" She looked awed.

"Yes..."

"So will you let me help you?" Abhir asked extending his hand.

"You will find my papa?"

"Yes, Now hold my hand and come out...."

She hesitated.

"Why would Mahadevji send you and not my Papa"

"Because you papa is also trying to find you.. But is lost.. I think..Mahadevji knows you need help.. that is why he sent me... He knows I'll help you.. you know why?"

"Why?"

"Because My papa taught me always help people in need."

She smiled, "My papa also says that.."

"Then your papa is also a good man.. just like my papa.. So now will you come out..."

She finally looked convinced. She held his hand and came out. They both walked toward the reception. On the way he asked:

"So let's find your Papa.. Tell me what happened.."

"My papa brought the tourists to the hotel He asked me to wait.. I was waiting like a good girl.. But then.. Two dogs jumped at me.. I got scared and ran inside..." She clutched his hand tightly as she remembered that incident.

"Don't worry.. I will protect you from dogs."

"But Papa was not inside. I got scared..I tried searching for Papa but he was not here.. " She started crying again.

"Oh no don't cry... Ok, take this biscuit.. "

"I should not eat anything from strangers without my Papa's permission" She cried again.

"That is correct... Ok... Then How about a story... That will cheer you up.. My sister loves the tortoise rabbit story... " Abhir fumbled when she cried more.

"The tortoise and rabbit story?" She asked. She looked so innocent looking up at him

"Yes, do you also like the tortoise"

"Nope," She shook her head so that her pigtails flew like a merry go round.

"I love the rabbit.. poor guy.. he lost because he was sleeping.. I also like sleeping.. I always sleep with my Papa..When Papa hugs me in my sleep.. Then I have no bad dreams.."

"I used to sleep with my Papa.. I wouldn't be able to sleep without him.." Abhir said as he remembered Abhinav.

"Why don't you sleep now?" She asked.

"Because I became a big boy.. Big boys cannot hug and sleep with papa"

The girl looked horrified, "Then when I will become big, then I should also not sleep with Papa?"

"Hmm... " Abhir pretended to think a lot. "No.. maybe you can.. There is a rule thats little girls with dimple can sleep with their Papa.."

"I have a dimple!!" She said happily

"You have? let me see it?" She gave him a wide smile and showed him her dimple

"Wow!! what a beautiful smile.. And what a nice dimple.." He praised her.

"Thank you.. ummm.. What is your name?" She asked.

"My name is Abhir Birla..You can call me Abhir Bhaiyya.. my sister calls me that.. And what is your name"

She looked doubtful.

"When Mahadevji sent you.. he didn't tell you that my name is Anchal Sharma?"

"Oh!! my god.. This innocence is so cute" Abhir thought.

"Oh.. It was an urgent mission right?.. Mahadevji said me your name.. but I forgot.. Sorry Anchal.."

Convinced, she smiled. "It's ok Abhir Bhaiyya.. Now let's go to Papa.."

"Yes, Your Papa must be waiting for you in reception area.. If not.. we will call him.. You know his numeber right.."

Anchal nodded violently..

There was a huge crowd near the reception

"My daughter is missing.. because of your carelessness.. why couldn't you control your dogs.."

Abhir heard a familiar voice.

"Sir, please calm down..."

"Mu meethiji.. my daughter..."

Anchal let go of Abhir's hand and ran towards her Papa. " Papa!!"

"meethiji" Her papa picked her up and kissed her.

"Papa.. don't worry.. Mahadevji sent Bhaiyya to help me"

He looked at his daughter's helper. The boy was stuck in that place.

"Thank you!!.. You look so familiar. Have we met?"

"Papa?"

Abhir could see the realizating dawning on him. The man's eyes watered.

"Nikkiji?"

To be continued

I love this! I can't wait to read the rest and Abhir reminds me so much of young Abhimanyu and how we met him on the trip too.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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I'm glad to hear that you loved it! It seems like Abhir is still holding on to his father's teachings, which is great to see. It's interesting that Akshara and Abhimanyu have noticed that he's not completely happy, but they don't know why. And it's exciting to hear that Abhinav has another daughter, which means another sister for Abhir!

As for the story title, I'm not sure why it's called "LAST goodbye." Perhaps it's meant to be a teaser for what's to come in the story. I'm curious to see what happens next as well!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: umawanderer


@bold: I know it is ironical that me, the one who already promised myself to order a chocolate pastry on Nav's death day, to write a story about him not dying... But I don't think makers will leave him that easily...


@italic... Oh so Krish was already existing in YRKKH universe? I didn't know that... I just chose it because it was easy to type...

To be fair this show is running for 14 years... They will have already used most of the names 😁😉


Phir ho gaye shuru nav ke death ka gaan! But socho if they can kill Naira and get Kartik remarried toh Nav needs to be that loved to deserve legacy death...


So far, he isn't..! I cannot wait to read this further...


Yes, there was another girl named muskaan in this show and ab toh show mein bhi names repeat hone lage hai 😆

Krish was officially ghar ka chirag of Singhania, urf Naksh ka laal. Krish was temporarily adopted by Kartik and Naira when they thought Naira's elder daughter, urf Kaira, was dead. Kartik chup chaap changed kids to save Naira from trauma. He took Naksh ka beta and gave him to Naira as his own child till Sister Keerti lied in comma🤪 phir Naira returned Krish to his original parents... Not even sure if you would be interested in that 🤣 but thought to tell you of one theory that runs on Twitter that Abhinav can marry long lost badi behen of Akshara - Kaira. Who was also known as Krishna in childhood because Kaira adopted her unknowingly 🤣and then they started dropping clues ke woh actually Kaira hai... Kaira ka track was cut short kyunki lead to Akshu ko hi bana na tha🤣



Pls. Don't ask me why do I know this... Because Even I don't know why? toh if RS ever decided to restart this whole generation after Abhira disaster, Kaira can be brought in as a legacy kid.


Chalo bye bye.. Update soon!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Note: This is somewhat my favorite chapter.. but I know Many people will not like some things in this chapter.. It does not have my signature happy happy feeling. I tried to simplify the structure.. but It may confuse some people.. People who are looking for clues.. you may find the some clues scattered across the chapter.. maybe.. special point for guessing who is my favorite character in this chapter😉

Again tagging people I remember..


Part-2: The hug which he missed a lot


Abhinav couldn't believe his eyes. His Nikkiji.. is in front of him after all these years...

"Nikkiji... Is that really you?.. I cannot believe it"

Tears were welling up in his eyes. How long was he waiting for this day...

"Papa?" Meethiji called him.

Abhinav wiped his tears. "Meethiji.. didn't I tell you about your big brother?"

Anchal nodded...

"He is that Big brother.. Abhir... Your Abhir bhaiyya.. my Nikkiji.."

Anchal looked confused but then she smiled.

"Can you get down... I'll go and meet your brother..."

Anchal nodded and got down from her papa's shoulder.

Abhinav went straight to Nikkiji... Nikkiji was like a statue.

"What happened Nikkiji? Why are you so shocked? I should be the one who should be this shocked.. right? I can't believe you have grown so much...Well, it has been 9 years... I shouldn't be shocked...But I couldn't even get your photo... You are already on your way to look handsome like Bhaiji. You used to be so golu molu... In a few years, you will not need any pen to draw abs... Oh, you even have a tiny mustache... Did you grow taller than me? You are not wearing your specs.. does that mean you had that surgery to improve eyesight?.. I don't remember the name of the surgery.. or are you wearing contact lenses... Can kids like you wear them?.. Maybe You think that I should stop calling you kid.. but what to do? You will always be my kid... I can't stop my tears... Do you still like stars?.. I want to ask so many questions.. wait we didn't even hug..."

Abhinav stopped his blabbering... There was no response from Nikkiji... Abhir was still standing.

Abhinav could see Abhir sweating profusely... Abhir was breathing so fast and shallowly...He was also slightly shaking. His face was getting pale.

"What happened Nikkiji? Did you not come to meet me?" He asked slowly.

Abhinav did not know what was happening... He saw Abhir's eyes... Why were they so sad?

"Nikkiji.. are you alright? What happened?"

"Stop.." Nikkiji whispered

"What happened? Are you upset with me?" Abhinav asked...

"Stop..." Abhir said it louder

"Nikkiji... breathe..."

"Stop"

"Breathe.. first.."

"Stop"

"Sit down... you don't look well"

"Stop"

"Drink some water.." Abhinav searched for water. He took a bottle of water from the reception.

"You were dead..." Abhinav heard Abhir utter it quietly.

"Didn't your parents tell you?.. Now is not the time... Drink some water"

"Did you.. did you... fake your death?" The question was louder this time.

"What?"

"to get rid of me?" Abhir's voice was getting louder

"Nikkiji... Calm down.. first"

Abhinav put his hand on Abhir's shoulder to calm him down. Abhir pushed him so hard that he fell across the room. A vase fell on his head...

"PAPA!!!" Anchal cried as she saw her father fall onto the floor. She ran towards her papa...

Abhinav tried to pacify her, "Don't worry... Meethiji.. nothing happened..."

"Blood" She whispered and pointed towards his forehead. But Abhinav only had eyes on Abhir... Abhir was crying.

***

"It was Neelamma's phone... The bus in which Sharmaji was traveling fell into a river.."

"Nikki ji I will always be with you... Promise"

"Poppy told me that your fake papa died.."

"Nikki Ji.. my morning never starts without seeing your face.."

"No one survived that accident"

"Wow! Nikkiji your new room is so beautiful... look at you!! You are now acting like a true prince!"

"Abhir, Your papa is calling you... Don't take too much time ok? He is leaving for Bua's Rishta right?"

"My grandson will not perform the last rights of that person."

"Junior... You got Birla's spelling wrong... I'll teach you... don't worry..."

"Nikkiji... I better leave... If I miss this bus then I'll have to wait till tomorrow.. "

"Abhir... In Birla's house... you can do whatever you want... No one will stop you.."

"Abhir.. your Dadi wants to spend some time with you this vacation. so we need to cancel

Kasauli trip... Don't worry...We will send you there next vacation.. mumma promises you... ok?"

"See? The momos here are also good, right? Junior?"

"This sweater is too old Abhir beta.. Dadi will bring you a new one... A bright beautiful one.. "

"Yaara... Don't worry...see.. just like it took some time for you to adjust from LKG to UKG... It will also take some time to be Abhir Sharma to Abhir Birla... Don't worry... Everyone, including Papa, will help you"

"All his features remind me of my Abhi... Abhir Abhimanyu Birla."

"Abhir... I am sorry...But your Papa would also not want you to be this sad.. right.. Mumma is with you..."

"I knew it... My Nikkiji is the best.. of course, you will be selected for the football team."

"Manjiri... Explain to Abhir that he needs to act like a Birla now.. not like some driver's child"

"Abhi... I already told you that Abhir and Abhinav share a deep bond... But Abhir also loves you... I am his mother... I know it.."

"See... Nikkiji... Neelamma's new sari.. She will wear this during Muskaan Bua's engagement... Beautiful right?"

"Poppy never lies.. your fake papa died.."

"How come you have two fathers? You are lying.. no one has two fathers.."

"Good night Nikkiji.."

"Akshu... I am not comparing myself with Sharmaji... But I am his father... Can't I have any feelings?"

"Abhir... Roohi.. you both are brother and sister... You cannot fight like this.."

"Yaara... I am already on the bus... Good night.. will call you tomorrow!!"

Memories swirled in Abhir's mind... They just came one after the other... There was no order or reason... It was just many clusters of memories...Maybe it was because of this... He couldn't understand anything nor could he feel anything properly... His heart was beating fast.. why was he sweating? His fingers tips felt cold as ice. He was feeling it difficult to breathe.

This man in front of him... There is not much difference except for some scars on his face... He looked almost the same as 9 years before.

"Nikkiji.. you are my greatest treasure.. how will I live without you?"

He used to hold him exactly like he held his daughter now... His smile is also the same.

"I think we need to send Junior to boarding school with Shivu.."

Abhir saw him talking to him... But he couldn't hear anything... All he could see was care and affection in those eyes... He wanted to see those eyes for 9 years. His 'Papa' was crying and smiling again... Even his 'this' habit didn't change... His papa was always an emotional person

"Nikkiji... I promise... I will be with you whenever you need help... Ok"

"Stop" He whispered... His ears were ringing.

"Nikkiji... I will come to Udaipur whenever you call me"

"Stop..." Abhir said anger rising

"Yaara.. did you eat your medicine... If you not then I'll come to Udaipur and make you eat it"

"Stop" Yes, stop with the lies...

"I am thinking to come to Udaipur.. to see your match.. when is it.. next month?"

"Stop" No.. he never came.. he never came.. he never ever came. He left him.

"See, this sweater... I knit it for you... winter is coming.. I'll send it to you next week"

"Stop" He couldn't even hold onto that sweater... It was thrown out a few months after his papa's 'death'. He couldn't even mourn properly. Dadi already threw away all his things from Kasauli and replaced them with new ones. He pleaded to keep his sweater.. but no one could stop Dadi. He was a bad son. He couldn't even protect that sweater.

"You were dead..." Abhir's anger rose slowly... All that pain.. all that resentment.. all was for nothing?

"Didn't your parents tell you?.. Now is not the time... Drink some water" He saw him with a water bottle. The little girl was behind him. Did he leave him for her?

"Did you.. did you... fake your death?" Was he a burden to his papa?

"What?"

"to get rid of me?" He shouted .. but those words hurt only himself the most...

"Nikkiji... Calm down.. first"

Why? Why? Why was he still looking at him with those love-filled eyes... Why was he still thinking about him... He left him... His papa held his shoulder... The touch had a gigantic effect...

All his frustrations.. anger.. sadness.. resentments grew exponentially... He pushed that person...

Seeing his papa on the floor.. his forehead bleeding... He was feeling regret.. but he was hurt...

He started crying without his knowledge.

"WHY DID YOU ABANDON ME?" He shouted at the man... He saw the father consoling the daughter and getting up... The same way he used to console him before.

"NO.. DON'T COME NEAR ME".. Nothing was in his control now... He was not even saying these things .. the words are just coming out on their own... He wanted to stop himself... but he couldn't.

"IF YOU DIDN'T LOVE ME... THEN YOU COULD HAVE TOLD ME SO... WHY DID YOU LIE?"

He was getting breathless... And his stomach was feeling funny...

"Abhir.." He heard him call him...

"NO... DON'T CALL ME... DON'T COME NEAR ME... DON'T..."

And before he could say something else, he vomited. He vomited so much that he was on all fours with his tiredness... His legs felt weak.. he couldn't move an inch...

Abhinav came near him... Abhinav crouched beside him. Abhir did not even have the energy to shove him away. Abhinav made him drink water.

Why was he still doing this to him... The fake love.. the fake concern... But why is he still feeling them as real...

Abhinav then wiped Abhir's face... Abhir looked at him. This man was still bleeding from the forehead... But look at him.. all concerned about a teenager's vomit-filled face.

"Why?" Abhir asked why he retained some energy.

In response, Abhinav hugged him tightly. Abhir tried to move away... His clothes were still covered in vomit. But Abhinav did not budge... He kept on hugging. This hug... He did not get this for 10 years... This warmth.. he did not experience it for 10 years... Why... Was he still yearning for it? Didn't he get used to its absence in these 10 years?

"Abhir... I don't know what is happening... But I promise you... We will find a solution... But first, calm down..." he heard his father whisper to him... They were still hugging.

Abhir did not understand anything. But somehow it calmed him. His father always knew how to calm him. He hugged his father back and cried more. He didn't know... How long they were in that position.. or how long he cried... But the last thing he remembers was calling him "Papa"

Then it became dark.

**

Bluebell Club was unusually crowded today. He was sure she wouldn't be able to hear her phone ring with this loud music. He had to look around the old-fashioned way. Why did he have to do all the troublesome things?

Tania saw him first. Looks like Udaipur is still not short of handsome men... He does not look that old or that young...She wanted him to look at her.. but it seems like he is searching for someone.

"OH, My! What a hottie," Anita said as she saw him.

"I saw him first" Tania had to say dibs

"Oh come on!.. He has this rugged bad boy look.. of course he is not your type" Anita said

"You don't have to trouble yourself with my type... Right, Rolz?"

Roohi, who was busy with her phone just said, "Hmm"

"Oh!! He is looking towards us!" Anita couldn't handle the excitement.

The boy was indeed looking at them... Then he smirked... He took Roohi's photo.

"Hey!!" Tania shouted.."Rolz!! He took your photo without your permission"

"What kind of a jerk..." Roohi looked up from her phone...She stopped her sentence midway.

"Hey," He said as he approached them.

"What are you doing here?" Roohi asked.

"As a legal adult, I can be here.. what about you? How come a 16-year-old kid is here" he asked as he played with her bag.

"Oh shut up!!" She said as she snatched her bag back. "Tania's father owns this club... So we are allowed"

"Oh is that so?.. by the way the skirt is too short," he said in a bored manner.

"Just grow up.. will you? And what are you doing here?" Roohi was already irritated.

"Rolz, who is he? Your boyfriend?" Anita asked.

Roohi rolled her eyes with exasperation while the boy gagged...

"Eww...Anita... What's wrong with you? He is my brother, Shivansh Birla"

"Before you irritate me more.. why did come here.." Roohi asked again.

"Come with me.. we are going to Birla Hospital..." He said as he pulled her out. Roohi knew there was no arguing. so she just nodded bye to her friends and walked with Shivu

"Why?"

"Well, Gopichand might try to kill me for calling him to work at odd hours. if that happens, I might need a bed in our hospital.. if that doesn't happen, we are flying to Uttarakhand."

"Uttarakhand? Why?" They got out of the club

"Krish called... Abhir Fainted." They walked toward the parking lot

"But Abhir never fainted in these 7 years.."

"That is not the surprise element here.."

"What happened"

"His Papa who died 9 years ago.. apparently faked his death.."

"What?" Roohi stopped walking because of the shock.

"Yep.. he has a family now... They are in Uttarakhand. Abhir met him." Shivu turned and looked at her. Seeing the truth sink in her mind.

"Oh, My god!!" Roohi really cannot believe it.

****

Akshara tried to sleep, but couldn't. She felt restless... Abhi was still working on his laptop. She caressed the sleeping Naira. Her life was finally peaceful again. But why did she have to feel restless now? It was a storm is about to come.

"What happened?" Abhi asked startling her.

"Nothing... I just couldn't sleep."

"Maybe you should also drink hot milk like Naira to sleep peacefully" Abhi smiled.

A notification sound came from Abhi's mobile. He sighed as he saw the notification.

"What?" Akshara asked.

"Shivu took the helicopter again... Taiji should stop pampering him... He is already 18."

"Where is he going?" Akshara asked.

"Uttarakhand.. hmmm? He is going to meet Abhir?" Abhi suddenly realizing

"It's probably nothing... The brothers might have planned something" Akshara said.. Although not properly convinced herself.

Akshara's phone rang...

"It's an unknown number.."

But she decided to pick it up anyways.

"Hello"

There was a silence

"Hello?"

"Akshara... I am Abhinav" Akshara's heart stopped. The next words she heard brought a storm in her life.

"I met Abhir...Why did you lie to me? Why didn't you tell Abhir anything?"



To be continued...

Posted: 2 years ago
#26

So, Abhira lied about Abhinav s death. Why am I not surprised? 😆

It seems like Abhir and Abhinav separated long before the latter s "fake" death. My heart breaks for the father-son duo

Why is Birlas so cruel? 😭

Nothing has changed. Majari is still Manjari . Absolutely cruel. Abimayu is a still selfish mama s boy. But I am surprised, that even Akshara joined them, in their endeavor to erase Abhinav from Abhir s life

They did not even let him keep a simple sweater. Shame on a lot of them 😡

Abhimanyu wanted to send Abhir to boarding. Seriously?? All haq went out of the window just like that

But I hope Roohi-Abhir managed to bridge their gap. It will be nice if Abhir has allies in Roohi-Shivu in that madhouse

Aanchal is such a doll. Concern about her Papa.

I can wait to read further. Update soon

Thanks for the tag

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wow it’s too good. Can’t wait for the next update

Posted: 2 years ago
#28

Though I was little disappointed with Abhiras union in first part but loved second part as it makes sense now. You kept them true to their characters. Selfish people.

Loved Abhir and Abhinavs talk but feel sorry for what these two went through because of selfish Abhira.

Excited to see why Akshara lied. Nice part ❤️❤️

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Oh my God! Hating the Birlas so much! How can they tell a child that his parent died???? They're so heartless. Not surprised that Akshara agreed to this bullsh*t plan. And Abhimanyu, Manjari are SO FREAKING SELFISH.

I hope the younger Birlas have a heart and help Abhir Abhinav bond again. Looking forward to read more!

This was👏

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Posted: 2 years ago
#30

Pls. Tell me Manjiri is dead now...

And ooh wait whom did my fav. Muskaan marry? Please tell it's, Dr. Rohan!



I soo loved reading this one! Thank you so much for updating it... Abhir is shocked to see Papa, who was assumed to be dead? And that's the saddest thing one could ever do to a child. But I am so glad that AbhiRa are negative heresmiley37


I am or am I not looking forward to understand Roohi and Shivansh's characters!


So excited to read more😎 gonna see what excuse is now Mrs. Birla gonna give!!!


This was indeed a great chapter but I will decide my favorite once I read it all..

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