🌿Parineeta huyi re || Sahan OS | part 2 ;, pg3 - Page 2

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Posted: 2 years ago
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XCUSE MEEE???!


What in heaven's name just happened???!


HOLY LORD-


This is a teaser right? RIGHT?? Cos I don't think I'm satisfied with ittuuu saa. Gimme MORE. Gimme Gimme MORE.


Babe please continue soonnnn I can't wait for this one ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Interesting , keep writing and update soon and tag me too when you update the next chapter👍🏼

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That is a nice start to a story. There aren’t much grammatical errors I feel, just some misspelled words. The flow is otherwise good. Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wow.. Wowww.. Wowww.. 🔥🔥🔥

Interesting start. Can't wait to see more of smitten sahiba.. 😂

Please update soon ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Loved the one shot.

Do continue this.

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Team #SaHan

Posted: 2 years ago
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Looks promising to me and as far as grammar is concerned, it will get better as you write more and read more. Trust me. Keep going, buddy! Looking forward to read more from you! ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Please update it soon, can’t wait 😜

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Please update soon , you write so well ✨🍃

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Love it

Cont soon

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She has little innocent demons inside her eyes and they recklessly play with matches.


Part 2


She wakes up with a hand resting on her waist. She recognised the familiar muscular hand and looks beside only to find Angad sleeping peacefully. She was taken aback that night when he entered in her room, intoxicated and with a rage to destroy her.


He was taking steps towards her while she was taking back steps untill her back hits the wall. He pins her around the wall, he leans, so carefully. Breathing and not breathing wasn't the matter, but the beating of heart of us definitely took the matters. Her legs stopped working, as she could feel the him so close.


"You have no right to come closer to me", She ask.


"Why your heart is pounding so fast when I haven't touched you?", He ask.


"How do you know that ...?"


He pulls her closely and said in her ears " Because mine is " leaving her breathless.


"What do you want ?", She demanded.


"You, i want you. You have Bewitched my soul from the day i watched your eyes. Those eyes of yours, i never felt so seductive towards me. I never felt that way you made me every moment. Look at me, Sahiba ", his face softened.


" Iwish you would have love me ", she let out.


"It doesn't matter, it makes no difference now. I have always loved you. And today you can't stop me from showing you What Angad Singh Brar can do for SAHIBA Kaur Monga, neah, Mrs Brar", he said.


You are lying. You never love me. You loved my sis ..


She stopped as His fingers lingers on her lips and face, he looked at her lips and before she could protest, he kisses her, it almost felt like a stamped yet soft in return.


Her eyes closed feeling the moment, this moment where only she and he could be together. She was his today, as she said herself. The eyes getting moist and him falling on her shoulders finally closing the intimacy.


She regain herself, finding in present that she has never told him these things. Because their relationship would be questioned and most importantly her character. That night she became his with this little act of him. She removes the hand and left the room feeling suffocating.

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