An Alternate Version of that "Kaali Raat" - Fanfiction

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Vihaan is done waiting in the hotel room. It's been three hours and Katha is nowhere to be seen. The ray of hope he has been holding onto since morning shines brighter as he moves towards the door. "She didn't show. I was right. She is diff........", his train of thoughts hit a pause as he opens the door. Katha is standing on the other side of it. Without saying a word, she enters the room, turning her back to him.

Vihaan closes the door with utmost disappointment. Gathering himself, he walks closer to her and reaches to part her hair from behind. Katha shudders badly. Vihaan steps back, hope filling him again, may be, just may be she is different, may be he was wrong in judging her so quickly.

Vihaan - Tumhe dekhke aisa lag raha hai jaise main zabardasti kar raha hun, ke tum apni marzi se nahin aai ho. Katha, agar tum comfortable nahin ho toh jaa sakti ho. Main tumhe rokunga nahin.

Katha - Main yahan wapas jaane ke liye nahin aai hun.

And these words crash the castle of imagination Vihaan had just started building. He closes his eyes with despair and disgust slowly building up inside him.

Katha shudders from within as Vihaan inches closer and parts her hair, but she stays firm on the outside, she has to, she does, looking away. Disgust fills Vihaan from inside out as he touches her and she lets him. He pauses in hope that may be she will stop him, she will say no, but she doesn't. He proceeds. "There is no limit to how far a woman will go, just for the sake of money. I was right. I was absolutely right", this was the only thought running through his mind. He moves in closer to her, almost touching her face, it took all the strength he had. She barely stood still, gathering ever last ounce of courage in her. She knew it was going to be the most horrid night of her life, and this was just the beginning of it. And the next moment, to her utmost surprise, he pushes her away. Before she could process what had just happened, his words pierce through her ears, "Disgusting! Absolutely disgusting!". She looks at Vihaan, shell-shocked.

Vihaan - Sahi thha main, bilkul sahi thha, har ek aurat ki keemat hai, bas sahi keemat lagane ki der hai aur bikne ke liye taiyar. Dikha di na tumne apni aukaat. (moves closer) Haan? (pauses and moves back) Ismein dikhana kya hai, puri duniya ko pata hai. (walks towards the bag kept opening the table) Yeh paise chahiye thhe na tumhe. Inn paison ke liye itna niche gir gayi tum. Haan? (closes the bag and throws it on the floor. It lands near Katha's feet) Take it. Take it and leave. Just leave. (and turns away)

Katha is still unable to move. She stands there like a statue. Moments later, Vihaan turns back to see her still standing there.

Vihaan - Yeh bholi surat banana band karo. Please! Band karo yeh maasum banne ka naatak. Dekh li maine tumhari asliyat. Ab koi faida nahin hai iss naatak kaa.

Vihaan picks the bag from the floor, puts it in her hand and drags her to the door.

Vihaan (almost shouting) - Leave. Just leave! Soch lena ki tumne apni keemat chuka di, ki tumhe mere saath raat bita di. Okay. Now leave. (and pushes her out the door)

Vihaan locks the door from inside and drinks himself to sleep. What a irony it was, nobody ever would have been so hurt when proved right. He was right, yes, he always was 

On the other side of the door, Katha stands still, looking at the bag. Vihaan's words ringing in her head, "Soch lena ki tumne apni keemat chuka di, ki tumhe mere saath raat bita di. Okay. Now leave."

She takes a moment to gathers herself, holds the bag tighter and rushes to the hospital, in hope of saving her son.

From next day onwards, Vihaan's overwork and taunting torture starts and continues for a few days, till he hears about the bribe news. Then snapping out of his anger, he notices that Katha's lifestyle hasn't changed. His confusion grows and same events as the show follow.

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