Ishq E Laa #3 (HUM) Azaan Sami , Yumna Zaidi , Sajal Ali - Page 72

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Aww Your Most Welcome My Dear Sweet Friend❣️♥️❤️

Your Work itself Deserve all The Love, Appreciation and Motivation and Inspiration

U Are A Wonderful Writer and Very Sweet, Kind And Lovable Person Itself ..

Waoo Updating soon Very Happy Now U Literally Made My Day ❤️

Keep Posting Amazing Chapters and Fanfiction

All the Very Best For Your Heart Touching and Soulful Work..

Aapka Kaam Dil ko Chuta Hai Aur Rooh Ko Sukoon deta Hai..

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But 1 thing I am Very sure about Ki Azka Khud Toh Nahi bataegi Azlan Ko ki Uske Saath Shirin Ne Kya Kiya and Usse Kya Kaha And Shirin Behave In a Bad Way and All

Because That's Not Azka's Character Is

vo Complaining nahi Hai Ki Apne Pati Ko Badkaye Kisi Ke Khilaf

Azlan Ko Khud Hee Dekhke Pata Lagega Ki Majra Kya Hai With Shirin and Azka...

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabmw


Yumna ne aisa bhi nhi ke romance nahi kiya..uske shows dekh lo.even abhi recently Tere bin dekho and aur bhi shows hai jaha wo romance kar rahi hai but ishq e laa me to koi ek romantic scene nahi tha..not like intimate..matalab kuch bhi nhi tha ...koi happy moments nahi the azkaan ke.hum yaha ye baat kar rahe the.

Unka mujhe nahi pata wo maine nahi dekhe...but the shows i watched her of her like pukaar, raaz e ulfat, ishq zahe naseeb, wahan uncomfortable lagti thi

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One More Request From My Side My Sweet Loving Friend

Sorry But U might be Thinking That I Am Becoming Demanding Or Disturbing U But Believe Me i am Only Speaking With My Heart Out To u and Pouring All my Emotions and Feelings Whenever I am Talking With you Because I Felt That Comfort and Connection with u as Your Fan and Admirer

So that's why I am Sharing my views with you

Coming straight to the topic

all i wanna say is Azlan and Azka Ke Kuch Loving,and Light Hearted Moments Bhi Dale Na Apne Azkaan ke Fanfiction mein Please 🥺

because We All Love Azkaan and Ishq e Laa No Doubt on That But Still Azlan aur Azka Ke Sare Moments Drame Mein Bahut Deep , Emotional and Heavy The

Not Once Do Azka and Azlan Share Light Hearted Moments In the Whole Drama

Azlan aur Shanaya Ke Phir Bhi The Kafi Light Hearted Moments like Eating Golgappe , Honeymoon and All

But Azka Aur Azlan Ke Saare moments Bahut Emotional And Heavy the

So Like I am Seeing A Clip Of Yuman's Latest Drama Bakhtavar and In That Drama Yumna Is Dancing On Balle Balle Song Of Bin Roye In a Wedding Premises

And Believe Me Yumna Is looking Soo Innocent Beautiful and Cute in That Scene

Soo Aap Please Apne Fanfiction mein Ye Saare Moments Put Kare Na

Like Azlan Azka Ko Shadi Mein Le Jata Hai Kiski Toh Itni Badi Shadi Dekhke How Would Azka React Naa Because Azlan Toh Kafi Elite Class Hai and how People on Wedding React After Seeing Azka Or Girls or Boys Passing comments or Judgements on The Couple of Azka and Azlan and How Would They Both React to it

and Then Azka Is Dancing in Wedding and Azlan Is Looking at Azka In full Awe and Lovestruck Mode and How It Goes

U can Put Soft Light Hearted Hasi Masti Wale Moments in Azkaan Fanfiction

like They Are In Park Or In Mall Or Something and Azka pulling Alan's Cheeks Just Like Shanaya Used To Do IT..

Like Wife and Husband karte Hai Ek doosre ke Saath and Please please please Azka Aur Azlan Ko Lovey Dovey Mode Mein zaroor Dikhana

We Audience Would Love It Seeing Azka and Azlan In Lovey Dovey Mode Just like Azlan Used to be with Shanaya

u know Kyonki Drame Mein Toh Dikhaya nahi Azlan aur Azka ko Lovey Dovey Mode Mein Hasrat hee Reh Gayi Hamari Toh As An Audience Unko Lovey Dovey Dekhne ki

But Fanfiction mein Toh Imagine Kar Sakte Hai Na Isliye

So Please please Share Azka and Azlan Teasing Flirting and All Light Hearted Moments and Lovey Dovey And All ..it Would be Such a Treat To Read in That Way ..

Lots Of Love 💕🥰

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Hii Eagerly Waiting For The Next Update on Azkaan Please Publish it Soon..

Soory But Aapke Updates Itne Ache Hote Hai Ki Padne Ko Bahut Dil Karta hai ..

Ok dear friend waiting for the Next update On Azkaan take care 😘

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Vaise Dost i Am Just Curious Nothing Else Aapki Fanfiction Mein Chipku Zain Nahi Hai Kya??

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Nice update..

eagerly waiting for the next one..

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Originally posted by: sanabmw

Part 1 51

Part 2 52

Part 3 55

Part 4 63

Part 5 69

Part 6 72

Part 7 75

Part 8 77

Part 9 78

Part 10 79

Par 11 80

Part 12 81

Part 13 83

Part 14 84

Part 15 85

Part 16 86

Part 17 87


Part 18



Part 18

Azka waha se chali jati hai.

Sitwat:kya hua?

Shirin:nahi kuch nahi.

Sitwat:Azka bahot acchi hai Shirin me janti hu tumhre liye Azlan ko kisi aur ke saath dekhna mushkil hai par yaqeen karo Azka se acchi ladki Use koi mil hi nahi sakti thi.Azka ne Azlan ko puri tarah se badal diya hai.

Shirin kuch nahi bolti bas wo sitwat ko dekh ke smile karti hai.

Next scene

Azka kamre me aati hai aur change kar ke bed pe bethti hai

Azka:me jo soch rahi hu kya wo sahi hai..mene Jo mehsoos kiya wo kahi galat to nahi.me kuch jayada hi soch rahi hu aisi koi baat hoti to wo tabhi bol deti.

Tabhi uske room me knock hota hai.

Azka:aa jao

Samra:azka Bibi aapko begam sahiba bula Rahi hai.

Azka:accha tum jao me aa rahi hu.

Azka sitwat ke paas jati hai.waha Shirin bhi hai wo bina kuch bole sitwat ke paas jakar Beth jati hai.

Sitwat:Azka kya baat hai thaki thaki lag rahi ho sab thik hai?

Azka:jee mom ne thik hu bas raat ko late soyi thi aur phir subah hospital ke liye jaldi uth gayi

Sitwat:Azlan ka koi phone aaya dobara?

Azka:ha aaya tha.me jab wapas aa rahi thi ghar tab baat hui thi.

Sitwat:kitne baje ki flight hai?

Azka:11 baje ki.

Sitwat:chalo khair se aaye.

Azka:Ameen.

Tabhi Samina room me aati hai.

Samina:azka Bibi ye Bilal ne aapko Dene ke liye kaha hai

Azka packet leti hai and dekhti hai us me medicine hai.

Azka:aunty ye aapki medicine hai?

Shirin:haa.

Azka:aap ye medicine kyu…

Azka kuch aur bole usse pehle Shirin uske haath se medicine le leti hai.

Shirin:me ye medicine bahot time se le rahi hu.aur waise bhi mene doctor se puch ke li hai.

Azka:par ye bahot strong medicine hai.atlist unko kam mg ki deni chahiye.

Shirin:me ek qaabil aur bahot famous doctor se recommend kar ke ye medicine lee hai.wo koi naya naya docter nahi bana hai

Sitwat ko aise Shirin ka Azka ke saath rude hona accha nhi lagta

Sitwat:Koi baat nhi Azka agar wo bol rahi hai ke usne apne doctor se puch ke Li hai phir koi masla nhi.wo aur uska doctor jayada acche se samjhte hai apni health ko

Azka ye sunkar chup ho jati hai.wo samjh jati hai ke Shirin ko uska aisa bolna accha nhi laga.

Azka kitchen me aati hai aur tabhi usko msg aata hai.wo mobile on karti hai aur dekhti hai ke Azlan ka msg aaya hua hai

Wo msg open karti hai aur dekhti hai ke azlan ne use wo rooftop ki selfies send ki hai.wo bahot khush hoti hai aur pics dekhne lag jati hai.azka wo pic dekhti hai jaha dono ekdusre ki taraf dekh rahe hai.

Samra:Azka Bibi aap kya dekhkar itna khush ho rahi hai

Azka:kuch nahi bas photo hai.

Samina:kiske photo hume bhi dikhaye.

Azka:Azlan sab ne bhejhe hai.

Samra:phir to aap hume nahi dikhayegi.

Azka:are kyu nhi dikhaugi..ye dekho.

Azka unko one by one photos dikhati hai

Samina:Azka Bibi ye wali sabse acchi hai

Azka:kaunsi??

Azka dekhti hai wo pic jaha wo aur azlan dono ekdusre ki taraf dekh ke muskura rahe hai.

Azka:ha ye wali mujhe bhi sabse jayada pasand hai

Samra:aap dono kitne khush hai na yaha..Allah buri nazar se bachaye

Samina:ha begam sahiba aap dono haste hue bahot acche lag rahe ho.Azlan saab ko aise haste hue mene pehli baar dekha hai

Azka:bas karo ab aisa bhi nahi hai ke wo kabhi haste hi na ho.

Samra:begam sahiba haste the par kabhi kabhi wo bhi sirf begam sahiba ke saath jab se aap aayi hai tab se wo hum sabke saath bhi acche se baat karne lage hai.

Samina:aur ye sab aapki wajah se hua hai.

Azka unki baate sunkar muskurane lag jati hai.

Azka:accha thik hai chalo ab jaldi se dinner bana lo.jaisa mene samjhya hai bilkul waisa hi bana na thik hai.

Azka ye bolkar jane lagti hai tabhi use darwaze pe Shirin milti hai

Azka:aapki kuch chahiye aunty?

Shirin:me Pani lene aayi thi.

Azka:aap kyu aayi hai kisi ko awaaz de deti.samra tum jao pehle inke room me pani rakh ke aao.

Samra:Bibi ji me laa Rahi hu.

Azka:aapki aur kuch chahiye?

Shirin:mujhe to kuch nahi chahiye par jo log chaah rahe hai waisa bhi kuch nahi hoga.

Azka:jee??

Shirin koi jawab nhi deti aur chali jati hai

Next scene

Azlan comes to the hotel room he is very tired. He sits on the bed and closes his eyes and lies down.He sees Azka's face. He opens his eyes and starts smiling.He remembers everything about Azka how he met her for the first time at the dining table. How he got angry with her.How he used to get angry on Azka every time. How he used to stare at her.

Azlan:Azka mene tumhe bahot tang kiya hai na.hamesha bina wajah gussa Kiya hai.bina tumhe samjhe bina tumhe jane.aur ab me ek din tumhre bina nahi reh paa raha.kaise tum mere dil aur dimaag me bas chuki ho.

Azlan apna phone bahar nikalta hai aur Azka aur apni wo rooftop ki selfies dekhne lag jata hai.wo Azka ke chehre ko touch karta hai.

Azlan:kya tum bhi mujhe aise hi Miss kar rahi ho jaise me kar raha hu?kya tum bhi mera waise hi intzaar kar rahi hu jaise me kar raha hu.Azka kya tum bhi mujhe utna hi pyaar karti ho jitna me karta hu.

Azlan Azka ki pic ko kiss karta hai aur apne cell ko apne seene se lagata hai.

Azlan:Azka How can I tell you what I feel for you,i am madly in love with you.

Azlan phir se Azka ki pic ko dekhne lag jata hai

Azlan:Azka me kab tak aise tumhri tasweer ko pyaar karta rahuga,I want to love you Azka,I want to hug you, bas kuch der ki baat hai, then you and I will be together.

Azlan Airport ke liye nikal raha hai.tabhi usko call aati hai.

Azlan:jee Mr Faiz

Faiz:sir i m so sorry ek mistake ho gayi hai.

Azlan:kya?

Faiz:sir mene abhi aapki tickets dekhi hai aapki tickets 14th ki nahi 16th ki hai.

Azlan:WHATT? HOW'S THIS POSSIBLE?

Faiz:sir i don't have any idea.ye mistake aapki Islamabad ki team se hui hai.

Azlan:aur ye baat mujhe aap ab bata rahe hai?

Faiz:sir mene khud abhi ticket dekhi hai.

Azlan:aap meri aaj ki flight ki ticket booking karaye.

Faiz:sorry sir aaj ki flight me koi ticket available nahi hai ne pehle hi check kar chuka hu.

Azlan:iske baad ki karaye..jo bhi next flight hai unki karaye.

Faiz:sir fog ki wajah se late nights sab flighs cancel hai 15 th December se.

Azlan:u mean to say mujhe yaha 2 din rahna padega.

Faiz:sir unfortunately we don't have any option.

Azlan:damm it.

Azlan gusse me call cut karta hai.aur kisi ko call karta hai.

Azlan: Hello Danish saab

Danish:good evening sir

Azlan:meri tickets Kaha se book hui hai?

Danish:sir mene aapko bataya tha na Mr Umair ki company ne booking karwayi thi.

Azlan:mujhe pehle hi unpar trust nahi tha

Danish: anything wrong sir?

Azlan:me aapse kuch der baad baat karta hu

Azlan phone cut karta hai aur Umair ko call karta hai.

Azlan:mujhe pata tha ye zarur kuch na kuch karega.aur ab ye phone bhi nhi utha raha.koi nahi me bhi dekhta hu kaise nahi uthayega.

Next scene

Azka pool Area ke paas bethi hui hoti hai.aur wo apne aur Azlan ke pics hi dekh rahi hoti hai.

Azka:mene Azlan saab ko pics ka reply bhi nahi diya.hmm kya likhu?nice pics likh deti hu !!! Nahi ..thank you likh deti hu.

Azka kuch der sochti hai aur phir Azlan ko msg karti hai

Massage box

Azka:NICE PICS WAISE KOI MUSKURATE HUE BAHOT ACCHE LAG RAHE.KAHI YE SAATH KHADI LADKI KA TO ASAR NAHI 🤔☺️

Azka massage send karti hai aur khush hoti hai

Azka:me aur azlan saab ek saath aur wo bhi muskurate hue kitne acche lag rahe hai.waise hum saath me bure nahi lagte bahut acche lagte hai.

Shirin:tum itni tez niklogi mene socha nhi tha.

azka peeche mud ke dekhti hai waha Shirin khadi hoti hai

Azka: jee?

Shirin:tum jaisi mauka parst ladki mene Aaj Tak nhi dekhi

Azka apni jagah se khadi hoti hai aur Shirin ke paas jati hai

Azka:me samjhi nhi?

Shirin:itni bholi to nahi ho jo meri baat ko na samjh paa rahi ho.mujhe bahot Khushi hui thi jab mujhe pata chala tha ke Azlan shadi kar raha hai.apni zindagi me aage bhadh raha hai.par mujhe nhi pata tha usne tumse shadi ki hai.

Azka:aap ye sab ..matlab mene aisa ku..

Shirin:Koi safai dene ki zarurat nahi hai.meri Shanaya ki jagah lee hai tumne.me nafarat karti hu tumse.

Shirin ye bol kar waha se chali jati hai.Azka wahi khadi reh jati hai.

Next scene

Umair apne kamre me hai aur football dekh raha hai.wo azlan ke phone ko janbujhkar recived nahi kar raha.

Umair:yaar ek to ye match fasaa hua hai aur ye azlan baar baar phone kare jaa raha hai.isko Dubai jakar bhi chain nahi hai.nahi uthauga jab tak goal nahi hoga nahi uthauga phone.

Tabhi goal ho jata hai

Umair:YESSSSS .Azlan not bad hamesha ki tarah yaha bhi tumhra luck chal raha hai.come on 1 more and than we win the game.

Azlan phir se call karta hai

Umair:yaar ye Attantion Seeker meri jaan nahi chodega sun hi leta hu iski bhi baat..bechare ko abhi tak news mil gayi hogi.

Umair hasta hai aur phone recieve karta hai.

Umair:yaar tum mujhe sukoon ke do pal nahi dena chahte.

Azlan:shut up just shut up…ye jo tumne kiya hai na

Umair:are are ….relax na salam na dua hamesha ladne ko ready hote ho itminaan se bolo kya baat hai

Azlan:look ye drama mere samne mat karo mujhe pata hai tumne ye sab jaan bujhkar kiya hai

Umair smile karta hai

Umair:mene kya kiya ab?

Azlan: don't act smart i know ye tumne kiya hai.

Umair:me to Aaj office gaya hi nhi

Azlan:juth mat bolo umair.

Umair:are tumhe mujh pe yaqeen nhi hai..ok Azka ko puch lo aaj me puri shaam uske saath hi tha.

Umair Jaan bujh ke Azka ka name leta hai aur Azlan ko aur gussa aata hai.

Azlan:naam mat lo meri biwi ka !!! aur puri shaam wo tumhre saath nhi thi.i know tum usko ghar drop karne gaye the so stop lying.

Umair:biwi??? Ohh u mean to say contract biwi

Azlan:Umair ab agar tumne Azka aur mere rishtey ko lekar kuch bhi bola to mujhse bura koi nhi hoga

Umair:are me to bas bata raha tha ke tum usse puch lo humne saath me milkar sandwich khaye the .kya kamaal ke sandwichs hote hai tum khaoge to tum wo England ke "The Ledbury" ko bhul jaoge sacchi.

Azlan:to hell with ur sandwich

Umair:hell ..waise hell me to tum ho abhi 16 tak.

Azlan:look tumne khud qabul kar liya..so me sahi tha.

Umair:haha…tum mujhe kitni acchi tarah se jante ho azlan ye hoti hai sacche dost ki nishani.

Azlan:kitni baar kaha hai mene hum dost nahi hai.

Umair:Accha nahi hai dost,phir aaram karo waha aur hume bhi yaha aaram se rahne do.

Azlan:mujhe pata tha ye tumne janbujh ke kiya hai.mujhe tabhi doubt ho gaya tha jab tum mujhe yaha rukne ka bol rahe the.

Umair:kitne acche se jante ho tum mujhe azlan.phir bhi mujhe dost nahi mante.

Azlan:bakwaas bandh karo aur batao kyu kiya tumne ye?

Umair:yar 15 th December se na Dubai me Super sell lag rahi hai so mene socha tum gaye hue ho so apne liye kuch cheeze mangwa lu.

Azlan: UMAIR look

umair:Goal ..hahaha so finally game over.

Azlan:tum wait Karo mere aane ka bas.

Umair:Abhi to tum thanda Pani piyo aur Dubai shopping mela enjoy karo.kyunke agale 2 din tak to tum yaha nhi aa sakte.me chala sone kyunke mene subah hospital Jana Hai azka se milne ok bye.

Umair ye bolkar phone cut kar deta hai.

Azlan:Ye pitega mujh se ek din.Azlan Danish saab ko call karne lagta hai aur uski azka ka msg nazar aata hai.wo use open karta hai.

Azka:NICE PICS WAISE KOI MUSKURATE HUE BAHOT ACCHE LAG RAHE.KAHI YE SAATH KHADI LADKI KA TO ASAR NAHI 🤔☺️

Azlan msg read karta aur muskurane lag jata hai.

Azlan:Asar to ho gaya hai mujh par tumhra puri tarah se Azka,kaise Tumhre ek msg se mera sara gussa chala gaya.ab bas tum par apne pyaar ka rang chadhana hai.

Next scene

Azka is walking towards her room, She is remembering the words spoken by Shirin.

She enters the room and closes the door and stands there with her eyes closed.

Azka:(to her self):Unki aakho me mere liye nafarat hai.wo mujhe pasand nahi karti.wo mujhse abhi tak nafarat karti hai.

Azka opens her eyes and stands near the dressing mirror. She is looking at herself in the mirror.

Azka:wo kyu tumhe pasand karegi Azka.koi wajah hai unke paas tumhe pasand karne ki?? Par ha tumhe nafrat karne ki sau wajah hai unke paas.tum zimmedar ho Shanaya ji ke na hone ki aur aaj tum unhi ke ghar me unhi ke kamre me unhi ke shohar ke saath rahti ho.wo kyu khush hogi tumhe dekh kar.

Azka starts crying saying this.And just then she gets a call from Azlan.she wipes her tears and quickly picks up the phone

Azka:aap pahoch gaye?

Azlan:....Nahi..wo ek problem ho gayi hai.

Azka:Kkyyaa problem?

Azlan: tickets ka kuch issue ho gaya hai.to me aaj nhi aa raha do din ke baad aauga.

Azka gets upset hearing this. And she feels like crying. But she stops herself from crying like this in front of Azlan.

Azka:2 din baad.

Azlan:ha wo bas ticket ko lekar kuch misunderstanding ho gayi thi and …

Azlan baat kar raha hai tabhi use mehsoos karta hai ke azka ro rahi hai.

Azlan:Azka …tum to rahi ho?

Azka:....

Azka kuch nahi bolti par uski saanse aur uska aise chup rahna sabkuch Azlan ko bol jata hai.

Azlan:Azka kya hua hai sab thik hai?mujhe batao Azka?

azka starts sobbing and said

Azka:kuch nahi bas,aap jaldi aa jaye.

Azka ye bolkar phone rakh deti hai.

Azlan:Azka hua kya…Hello.. Hello Azka.

Azlan samjh jata hai ke azka ne phone cut kar diya hai.wo pareshan ho jata hai azka ko aise rota hua sunkar.

Other side

Azka bed pe bethi hui ro rahi hai

Azka:Azlan saab nahi aa rahe..me kaise rahugi yaha unke bina.Ya Allah ye kaisi Aazmaish me daal rahe hai aap mujhe.Me nahi reh sakti yaha is kamre me rakhi har cheez mujhe ye ehsaas dila Rahi hai ke in par mera koi haq nhi hai.

Azka kuch sochti hai aur waha se chali jati hai.

After some hours

Guard open the gate and Azlan enter the house

Guard: Asalamualaikum Sir aapne bataya nahi aap aaj hi aa rahe hai gaadi aapko lene aa jati

Azlan: Walekum assalam nahi mene Airport se texi le li thi.tum jao aaram karo mene bas gate open karne ke liye call ki thi.

Guard:thik hai sir Allah hafiz

Azlan:Allah hafiz.

Azlan ghar me enter hota hai.rat ke 4 baj rahe hai aur sab soye hue hai

Azlan:Allah ka shukar hai mene Danish saab ko jane se pehle kaha tha ke wo apni taraf se bhi Tickets ki booking kar ke rakhe.mujhe pehle hi Umair aur uske staff pe trust nhi chalo thoda late sahi par aa to gaya.I m sure Azka mujhe dekh ke bahot khush ho jayegi,kaise udaas sound kar rahi thi wo mere na aane se

Azlan slowly room ka door open karta hai aur andar aata hai wo dekhta hai ke bed Khali hai.Azlan ko bed pe Azka ka duptta Nazar aata hai.wo washroom ki taraf dekhta hai waha bhi lights off hai.

Azlan:ye ladki bhi na,me nahi tha yaha to upar wale room me chali chali gayi hogi.

Azlan apna bag rakhta hai aur fresh hokar upar wale room me jata hai.

Azlan:yaha bhi nhi hai?kahi mom ke paas to nhi.

Azlan sitwat ke room me jata hai aur azka waha bhi nhi hoti.wo pareshan ho jata hai.wo bahar pool side aata hai

Azlan:Kaha chali gayi Azka?yaha bhi nhi hai.mom ko akela chodkar wo apni Amma ke ghar to nahi jaa sakti phir kaha Jaa sakti hai.

Azlan gets upset, he starts searching for Azka everywhere, suddenly his eyes go towards the rooftop.He thinks for a while and then goes to the rooftop.

Azlan comes to the rooftop it is dark he cannot see anything he goes a little further and sees Azka who is sitting on the swing.

He relaxes after seeing Azka. He quietly goes to her. He wants to surprise Azka.But as soon as he goes near her, he sees that Azka is asleep

Azlan:to meri need uda ke ye yaha aaram se so Rahi hai.

Azlan comes close to Azka and keeps looking at her for some time. Azka is looking even more beautiful to him in the moonlight.Azka's hair is open and her face is inclined towards the right side.Her lips are slightly open.Azlan comes near the swing and bending a little, now he comes very close to Azka's face,He smiles at her and then touches her hair and then brings his hand to her cheek.

Azlan:Kitni masoom ho tum Azka.tumhe nahi pata main kaise khud ko tumhre kareeb aane se rokta hu.mera dil chahta hai ke..

Azlan brings his hands to Azka's lips.And as soon as he does this, Azka wakes up from sleep, she opens her eyes and Azlan's hand stays on her lips.Their eyes meet. Azka looks at Azlan for a few seconds and then her eyes widen in surprise.Azlan smiles seeing her like this.

Azlan: SURPRISE!!!!

Azka:Aap sach main wapas aa gaye hai??

Azka hugs him before Azlan can say anything.Azka's sudden hug makes the swing shake Before the swing falls,Azlan grabs Azka to stop himself from falling and than He hugs Azka.Both are on the swing and hugging each other and the swing is swinging

End of part 18

Bahut hi accha update hai dear❤️

Shirin is definitely too rude with her..making comments about her profession that she is just a newbie but mom handles it well... Obviously Shirin is upset that Azlan married Azka...

Azka's conversation with Samina and Samra was very good ..they tell her that Azlan now looks very happy with her...and she feels happy to listen that and Shirin again taunts her there...

What to say about Azlan...missing her too much...thinking about their past...and saying ki kya tum mujhe bhi vaise hi miss karti ho...pyar karti ho ...too good...kissing her photo and then wanting to do that in person...He desires her too❤️

Aur fir Azlan ka gussa..he is so much frustrated with Umair and Umair does not forget to irritate him..all the talks about shopping and meeting Azka😆..but Azlan is Azlan ...he knows everything and plans everything in advance...So smart❤️

Azka❤️..flirting with Azlan and Azlan apna sara gussa hi bhul gya...but shirin ne fir usko batein sunadi yar...although Shirin is disturbed but it was harsh...but Shirin ko sach bhi nahi pta ki shaadi kyun hui...

Poor Azka...kya kya soch rahi hai...ki vo Shanaya ki jagah reh Rahi hai wahan...self doubting and feeling extremely lonely...upar se she get to know ki Azlan bhi nahi aa raha...felt bad to see her condition...

Finally Azlan reaches home and seeks for her..finds her on rooftop...and caresses her face ...touches her lips..and she wakes up and seeing him there she hugs him directly...and they are now on the swing together hugging each other...this is my most favourite scene❤️...loved it totally..because at that time she was very down...sad..feeling lonely...wanting him to come back to her...and he did...so yeah that emotion hits differently❤️ and thank you writing it like that...

Overall it was an amazing update leaving me wanting for more...what an amazing write up...

Looking forward for the update ...Azlan is back and Shirin is there..Azka is emotional and sad...Azlan can't see her like that...so he will handle everything..it would be very good to see that...

Take care my friend...lots of love to you and keep writing...It is always a pleasure to read your stuff..bless you❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

U Explain Everything Soo Beautifully And Wonderfully My Friend I Loved Your Explaination Regarding The Fanfiction Update ❤️

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Just To Share Something With My Friends Here I Was Watching The Interview Of Azan and In That Interview The Host Was Introducing Azan's Character Azlan As Quite Bad And She was Like Starting Mein Azlan Ko Dekhke Bahut Gussa Aata Hai and All and She Also Said Azlan's Character Has No Likable Quality In Him In The Beginning Of Drama I was Like What The Hell She Is Talking About I Saw The Drama Recently From The Beginning And i Think


Hate Gosh Trust Me I Love Azlan Since Episode 1 Itself Kya Confidence Open Mindedness and and Most Importantly Honesty And Conviction In Himself Dikhaya Hai Azlan Mein Aur Ye Qualities Azlan Ne Starting Se Hee Mauzud Thi ..

Azlan's Character Has Hella Lot Of Gud Things In The Beginning Of The Drama Also

First Is Azlan's Honestly

Azlan Kabhi Bhi Diplomatic Ya Manipulative Nahi Raha Even Vo Uske Bad Personality Traits Bhi Jahir Kar Deta Tha Chupake Nahi Rakhta Kabhi Bhi

2nd His Conviction In Doing Things Jo Karta Tha Dil Se Karta Tha Chahe Pyar Hoo Ya Business Ya Even Shanaya Ko Justice Dilane Ke Liye Out of the Track Jana Ya Toh Vo Karta Hee Nahi Tha But Karta Tha Toh Pure Dil Se

3rd Azlan's Habits Azlan Mein Ek Bhi Vyasan Ya Bad Habits Nahi Thi No Girlfriends No Extra Marital Affairs

No Smoking No Drinking And All Healthy Lifestyle

4th Azlan's Perfection Towards Doing Things Whatever He Is Doing I Agree We Are Not God We Can't Be 100% Perfect But Atleast Azlan Try To Achieve His Level Of Perfection In Whatever Task He Is Doing And that's A Pretty Gud Thing

Aur Bhi Bahut Achi Qualities Thi Azlan Mein Beginning Mein Bhi

He Was Total Family Guy His Love For His Family Is really Heart Touching And Adorable Even From 1st episode Itself He Love His Mother and Father A Lot...after That Shanaya Added To That List and Lastly Our Favourite Azka Also Added To The List Of People Azlan Really Love..

Edited by cutoaayu - 2 years ago

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