Originally posted by: Viswasruti
Round 2 : Nano Tale
Assessing 104 tales at once is both a joy and a laborious task.
However, I must admit that the enthusiasm and depth of knowledge displayed by our authors in such a creative manner truly astounded me.❤️
● BrhannadaArmour ●
for the Nano Tale
"Can't ... get ... out!" Pariksit whined, inside the snugly tucked deerskin.
Remembering Abhimanyu, Subhadra hugged Uttara.
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Mahabharat highlighted human relationships and bondings till the end, which was highlighted in this Nano tale. Good one.
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● metacrisis ●
for the Nano Tale
At the gate of Indraprastha rejoiced the five elephants, with the sixth, their queen, approaching.
*****
The regal tradition was underlined in this Nano story with a delicate and unique grandeur for the queen. A well written one.
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● So-So ●
for the Nano Tale
Bhima was entrapped! Yudhishthir answered Dharma-related questions, cursed Nahusha was redeemed, Bhima saved from death.
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This abridged Nano tale beautifully recounted the prominent Vana / Aranya Parva story.
The succinctness with all the details garnered praise for this entry.
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● RainOfDew ●
for the Nano Tale
"Lakshmi", said Krishna. Rukmini smiled as she felt her Krishna calling her name.
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An etheric moment at the abode of a Divine couple!
clever way of presenting the empyrean feeling.
That is what makes this Nano story distinct.
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● Physics_girl ●
for the Nano Tale
Lasting merely 18 days, Kurukshetra battle carries lessons for many more than 18 centuries after.
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Captured the essence of the Epic and presented it in a succinct and lovely manner. An excellent one.
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● missFiesty_69 ●
for the Nano Tale
The criminals and the silent witness will pay a price for your tears, dear Draupadi.
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In this brilliant Nano tale, Krishna gave Draupadi the assurance that both the sinners and the mute witnesses would face punishment, which was a prophecy of an impending war.
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● Moonks ●
for the Nano Tale
"Who are you Madhav?"
"I am what you want me to be Parth", Krishna smiled.
*****
Feelings, not many words, flow in a nano story. The grandeur of this tale is the ability to communicate the full story without the use of any narration. An excellent one.
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● DelusionsOfNeha ●
for the Nano Tale
Krishnaa, Yagyaseni, Draupadi. A multifaceted personality and she's mostly known for her five husbands.
*****
What a terrific way you explained how Draupadi was sidelined despite being the prime character of this Epic.
This single line is an outcry of anguish about her diminutive portrayal.
Very well written one Neha.
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● HereAsMyself ●
for the Nano Tale
Arjuna tells no one he saw Krishna weeping with Abhimanyu’s first bow in his hands.
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The essence of this Nano tale was based on how the Mahabharat highlighted numerous human flaws and deep thoughts of a prophecy and philosophical conundrums. Great writing.
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● MaDiee●
for the Nano Tale
Story glorifying values.
Story fighting rights.
Story enlightening knowledge.
Story establishing dharma.
It's epic - Mahabharat!
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This caught people's attention because the writer did such an excellent job of condensing the entire epic into very few words!
One of the best entries in this whole Mahabharata contest!
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● Bee222 ●
for the Nano Tales
Draupadi clasped her saree tighter. Long after the ordeal was over, she still felt naked.
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Motherly love drowned by fear. Kunti just hoped her child would stay afloat.
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I realised when I read these entries that they were not written by an average writer, but rather by a writer who has the ability to look into a woman's heart and understand the deepest suffering and anguish.
The first one was scored more than 95%. As I said, all these entries in the 2nd Round are praiseworthy ones.
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● oye_nakhrewaali ●
for the Nano Tales
Her baby wasn't just Bharatvansh's future, he was Abhimanyu's last memory for Uttara.
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The duality in a royal queen's life is underlined in this Nano tale as she gains motherhood after losing her husband.
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Satyavati wasn't greedy, but she was ambitious. Only the ambitious can achieve greatness.
The writer emphasised through this Nano story that,Satyawati is the one who defined and initiated the Kuru Pandava's birth of conflict, which ultimately has disastrous catastrophe, one of the top scored entries in this contest.
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● Loving2Missing2 ●
for the Nano Tales
Devyani loved Kacha but married Yayati. Her revenge against Sharmishtha became her bane in marriage.
*****
The love triangle and it's consequences described in brief in an excellent way.
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Kindama’s curse to Pandu brought powers of nature to incarnate as humans to accompany Krishna!
The emergence of five natural forces to aid God is a novel perspective on the entire process. An innovative concept delivered with precision
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● vaidharbhi95 ●
for the Nano Tales
Babruvahana unleashes lethal arrow ... Arjuna Collapses ...
Slayer of grandfather Bhishma lies slain by own son !!!
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The scene's backdrop was conveyed in a very powerful way by using word play with an author's authority.
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Sweat trickled down Bhima's forehead , each drop dissolving his pride. The monkey's tail didn't move.
A well written one on Bhima and Hanuman's combat.
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Blood oozing from Barbarika's slayed head washed Krishna's feet.
May you be worshipped as KhatuShyam !!
All these three entries are exhibiting the writer's in-depth knowledge, which is truly impressive.
● The.Lannister ●
for the Nano Tales
“Couldn’t you have stopped the war?” “Not when you couldn’t even stop your son, mother!”
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Truth battled injustice & emerged victorious from the smoke of the undying pyres on Kurukshetra.
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Mathura sacrificed. Gokul delighted. Gokul sacrificed. Bharat delighted. No good thing happens without a sacrifice.
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Even though, there's no scope to narrate, build characters, or create setting but these lines still has a deep meaning. That is the beauty of these nano tales, it is clearly visible in these well written stories.
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Best wishes to all authors.
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