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Posted: 17 years ago
Kool, cnt wait to read da nxt part!!
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Previously
KK holds his ears and Roshni smiles
R - now do the work
KK - yes miss
The two laugh and get down to doing the work, Aryan watches from outside, he smiles to himself then goes away.
Part 15
Aryan is in the gym working out, he lies on the bench and is about to grab the weight when he sees Ria in front of him smiling at him, he looks puzzled

Ar - what are you doing here?

Ria doesn't say anything but keeps smiling at him, Aryan smiles back at her for two seconds then stops

Ar - ok stop it you're scaring me

Aryan gets confused when Ria doesn't stop smiling, he gets fed up and sits up on the bench and turns around but Ria isn't there anymore, Aryan looks puzzled and turns his head around and jumps when he finds Ria sitting next to him on the bench still smiling away

Ar - ok don't do that again! stop with the freakish smiling and speak
Ri - I don't have a freakish smile!
Ar - yeah sure....now come on tell me what is it?
Ri - ok I'm tired of scaring you now, which was very funny by the way, ok so Tia wants to spend some time alone with Karan
Ar - and what am I supposed to do about it?
Ri - just listen first
Ar - ok carry on
Ri - as I was saying, they want to spend time together but they can't at my house because either mom or dad are there, and they can't at Karan's house because his parents are always there
Ar - I thought Karan was supposed to tell them about him and Tia?
Ri - I don't know anything about that, but yeah so they were hoping to come here

Aryan grins

Ar - yeah because my parents are never home right?

Aryan stops grinning and hits her head

Ar - my mom is always here, if she sees Tia and Karan together she'll tell Kripa aunty and Suhana aunty straight away then as well as them, I'll get in trouble aswell
Ri - I don't care about that, Tia keeps bugging me and I'm fed up so they call you the Godfather right....be the Godfather and do something about it

Ria stands up and folds her arms

Ri - I'm going home now, come up with a good idea...

Ria turns to walk outside but stops and turns back around

Ri - oh...and take a bath, you stink
Ar - do I now?

Aryan stands up in front of her and puts his arms out

Ar - Ria...
Ri - what?
Ar - give me a hug
Ri - hell no

Ria steps back but Aryan steps forward with his arms out, she turns to run and Aryan chases her, both are running around the gym when Kashish comes

Ka - Aryan why are you chasing her for?

Aryan stops, Ria runs and hides behind Kashish

Ar - mom, I was just....giving her a hug
Ka - by chasing her?
Ar - she wouldn't give me a hug
Ri - why should I? you smell
Ka - I'd have to agree with her
Ar - mom!
Ka - now stop behaving like kids

Kashish leaves, Ria stands by the door and sticks her tongue out at Aryan then runs off before he chases her again. Aryan sits on the bench and sighs

Ar - now how am I meant to come up with an idea? they leave me with the hard work so that they can spend time together....not fair, not fair at all

Aryan lies back down and continues his work out. Later that day, Aryan is in his room he paces towards the window while KK paces towards the door then Aryan paces towards the door and KK paces towards the window, as they do this Tia and Karan are sitting on Aryan's bed turning their heads side to side watching both of them pace up and down the room, Ria and Roshni are leaning against the cupboard looking bored. KK stops pacing

KK - ok, how about they stay in this room, we all stand guard outside and they can spend as much time together as they want

Aryan stops in front of KK

Ar - bad idea...no way am I letting them get all...lovey dovey in my room, next idea

KK is about to say something

R - don't even think about mentioning my room

KK closes his mouth and sits on the bed next to Karan

KK - I have no more ideas....Aryan think of something or we'll all be here all day
Ar - I have an idea
KK - what?
Ar - Karan and Tia....tell their parens they're an item....problem solved
Kar - next idea
Ar - ok since I'm very sweet....I'll convince my mum to invite Kripa aunty and Angad chachu over, and while they're here, you five can tell them that you need to study together so you'll be at KK's house, when you get there, you three stay in another room which Karan and Tia spend time together
R - bhai that's a great idea
KK - cool but how will you convince aunty to invite mum and dad round?
Ar - leave it to me

They all leave the room, the others go sit in the living room to watch tv while Aryan heads into the kitchen where Kashish is cutting vegetable, he picks up a carrot and pops it into his mouth

Ar - maa
Kas - what?
Ar - its been a while since Kripa aunty and Angad chachu came here...so why don't you invite them for dinner?
Kas - because they're busy people
Ar - mom....I doubt they're busy enough to spend time with their friends
Kas - why do you want them to come here anyways?
Ar - I needed to speak to chachu
Kas - then call him
Ar - yeah but wouldn't it be better if they came here, that way you can see them too
Kas - ....hmmm ok then
Ar - great

Aryan rushes into the living room and informs the others that Kashish agreed. Meanwhile Kashish calls Kripa and invites them to dinner, soon enough they arrive, th guys get ready to leave

K - where are you going?
KK - mom we have projects to work on for college....so we were going to go to our house and work on them
A - why don't you work on them here?
Kar - because it'll be quieter there
K - ok, but why is Tia going, I mean she's not in your class?
T - yeah aunty I'm not, but I might get bored...so...thats why I'm going
K - ok, see you

The guys head out of the house, KK looks at Karan and grins

KK - lets go

The guys head off to Angad's house. Meanwhile inside Aryan sits by Angad

Ar - chachu....
A - yeah?
Ar - you know we have two weeks break coming up right?
A - yeah
Ar - well I was thinking of taking the others on an outing....like to Goa...
A - thats a great idea....so what's the problem?
Ar - I was hoping you could talk to mom and dad...and Suhana aunty and Prithvi chachu?
A - sure son, anythingfor you kids
Ar - thanks chachu

Aryan heads upstairs while Angad begins to talk to Kashish and Sujal. Meanwhile at Angad's house, Ria, KK and Roshni are sitting in the living room watching tv while Tia and Karan are upstairs in Karan and KK's room.

Ri - I'm so bored!

Ria gets up and calls her friend, she goes back to Roshni

Ri - guys I'm going to go to a friend's house, she lives nearby, will be back in a while
R - ok

Ria leaves, KK and Roshni continue watching tv. Meanwhile upstairs Karan is lying on his bed with his head on Tia's lap, she runs her fingers through his hair

T - so when shall we tell our parents? I hate sneaking around
Kar - me too...but who knows what mom and dad will say....I can just imagine dad getting all angry at me saying I'm taking advantage of you
T - but you aren't
Kar - we know that.....its really scary
T - yeah it is....I'm so happy we're spending some time together....its really hard at home...
Kar - yeah it is, all thanks to Aryan, anyways Tia
T - yeah?
Kar - why are you with me?
T - meaning?

Karan sits up and faces her

Kar - I mean don't you find me boring?
T - come on Karan, I'm not answering that
Kar - no come on....
T - you can be a little boring....but not that much

Karan smiles, he shifts closer and puts his arm around her shoulders, she rests her head on his shoulder

Kar - you know I always thought you would like guys like KK
T - what? as in guys who are full of them selves?
Kar - no like cool guys...good looking

Tia reaches out and touches his cheek

T - you are cool and good looking...at least I think so

Karan smiles and pulls her closer and hugs her and kisses her forehead. Meanwhile downstairs KK is flicking through the channels, he glances at Roshni

KK - want an ice cream?
R - now?
KK - yeah?
R - ok then

KK gets up

KK - come on then
R - where to?
KK - to the cafe, to get some ice cream?
R - don't you have any at home?
KK - yeah but the cafe ice cream is better
R - what about Tia and Karan?
KK - they won't miss us

Roshni agrees and follows KK outside, she glances at him

R - which car?
KK - forget the cars, lets walk
R - ok

The two begin walking together side by side, KK makes small talk on the way, soon enough they arrive to the cafe and Roshni sits down while KK gets their ice creams, he then sits opposite her and both start having their ice creams, KK finishes his then watches Roshni while she has hers

KK - Rosh....
R - yeah?
KK - you like me don't you?

Roshni stops licking her ice cream and looks at him and smiles

R - of course KK, you're my friend
KK - no not like that.....I mean....you like me...more than a friend
R - wh....what makes you think that?
KK - I can tell....
R - how?
KK - from the way you look at me, the way you let me copy your notes, how you know my favourite things
R - KK don't be silly

KK reaches out and touches her hand, Roshni breathes deeply

KK - see, even my slightst touch does wonders to you
R - why are you asking me this?
KK - because if its true then there's things you need to know
R - like?
KK - answer my question first.....

Roshni finishes her ice cream, she looks at KK

R - yes, its true, I do like you...I always have

Roshni goes silent, she looks outside the window, KK breathes deeply and leans back against the seat

KK - Rosh....you need to stop liking me
R - why?

Roshni looks at him, KK leans forward

KK - come on Rosh you know me, I'm a player, a casanova
R - so? just because you're a casanova it means I can't like you?
KK - no...Rosh I may never like you the way you like me....we may never get together....I don't want to see you hurt
R - KK....just because you don't like me doesn't mean I'll stop liking you and it doesn't matter if we don't get together....I'm hapy with us as friends
KK - but Rosh...
R - mama always used to tell me that if something is meant to be then it will happen.....if we are meant to be together then one way or anther it will happen, if not then it was never meant to be

Roshni smiles, KK smiles back, he taks out money for the bill then stans up

R - KK...

KK turns around and sees she's still sitting, he sits back down

R - I love you....that's never going to change....but now what you know that...please don't ruin our friendship

KK nods his head and stands up again, Roshni also stands up, she walks to him and kisses his cheek

R - you're the best friend anyone can ask for...'m happy to know you...Kunal

Roshni walks outside, KK stands there for a while, he shakes his head, he hated people calling him Kunal, but whenever Roshni said it, it was ok. He sighs and leaves the cafe, he stands next to her

KK - lets go

The two walk back to KK's house but this time both are silent, when they get there Roshni simply goes inside like nothing happened but KK waits outside for a second, he breathes deeply then goes inside.

Coming up - Angad tries to convince SK and PS to let the kids go away.

Sorry for the delay and to make up for it...an extraaaa long part....took me ages to type up..anways plz do comment and sorry for any mistakes
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome part! 👏
Loved the first Aryan and Ria bit. 😆
Aww.... so Roshini finally confessed but KK ...
Only Ria and Aryan left now. 😳
Next chapter is probably gonna be about them being goa. 😉
Please update sooner this time.😊
Anjali. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi hun. great part. aww kk really cares for roshni, hpe he realises that he loves her if he does or tht he falls for her 2. tia n karan r made for each other. aryan is hot i love his character in the ff.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome part...i hope kk gets close to roshini now n hopefully falls for her... cnt wait to read da nxt part... im sure wen they go to goa, that will be interestin!
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Posted: 17 years ago
omggg wow it was awesum!!!! 👏 👏 👏
aryan and ria scence was funi as he chased her around and karan and tia gt time to spend wid each other thnx to aryan
but i lovedd kk and roshni scene i mean he even told her that he is not a gd guy and how roshni worded was jus wooow
cnt wait 4 more
continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Iv only just read all of this fanfic and i really luv it. all the characters are sweet and the story is really interesting. please update soon 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey rachu.... is it u? Remember me.... It's Verni... 😛 😛

Read a few parts.... they are really well writtennnnn 👏 👏 👏

Keep up the gud workk 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey guysssss thank u for allll the commments....they mean a lot...apologises once again 4 not updating on time....ive had lots of work but its all done nw so ill b updating some time sooon....thanx for the comments


Verni my jaaan lol course i remember u 😛 yes itsss me...glad u liked da story 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Previously

The two walk back to KK's house but this time both are silent, when they get there Roshni simply goes inside like nothing happened but KK waits outside for a second, he breathes deeply then goes inside.

Part 16
Angad sits in his chair watching as Kripa picks out some clothes from the wardrobe, he scratches his chin and sighs, Kripa hears him sigh and turns around

K - something wrong Angad?
A - no, nothing is wrong
K - then why did you sigh for?
A - its Aryan

Kripa puts the clothes on the bed and goes towards Angad, she sits on the chair opposite him

K - is he ok?
A - yeah he's fine but...
K - but what?
A - he's asked me for a favour
K - what kind of favour?
A - he wants to take the kids away for a while...during their break
K - where to?
A - Goa.....but he wants me to talk to the others
K - well I don't think they should go
A - why not?
K - KK gets up to no good when we're here, who knows what he'll do when we're not
A - hey...I trust my son
K - still...it might not be a good idea....Ria, Roshni and Tia will be with them..
A - so? Its not like they don't know the boys, they have grown up together
K - they're still girls, we might accept the three as our daughters, but at the end of the day they are our friends' daughters....
A - what are you saying? that KK or Karan will take advantage of them while they're there? Kripa are you mad, firstly they have all grown up together, they might as well be a family and secondly if either of them think of doing something like that I'll personally kick their butts

Angad reaches out for Kripa's hand

A - trust me Kripa, nothing will happen like you're thinking and besides Aryan will be there, he'll take care of them all
K - ok if you're so sure then let them go, but I'm not talking to Suhana or Kashish....you have to
A - but I was hoping......
K - no Angad, you're the one who is convinced this trip will be ok so you talk to them, I'm going to have a shower

Kripa gets up and leaves, Angad sits back and sighs wondering how to talk to the others. He gets his phone and rings Sujal

A - hey Sujal...
S - Angad, is everything ok? its almost midnight

Angad glances at the clock

A - oh sorry dude, were you sleeping?
S - no, I was just going over some work, what's up?
A - reckon you can come out for a drink?
S - at this time?
A - yeah its kind of important
S - sure....
A - cool, meet me outside my house in 15 minutes
S - ok

Angad hangs up then calls Prithvi, he answers and mumbles

P - hello
A - hey Prithvi...did I wake you?
P - course not Angad...I was just having a rave at my house.....what do you think?
A - oh...sorry, anyways now that you're awake, meet me outside my house in 10 minutes
P - why?
A - I'll explain when you get here....just come
P - ok sure whatever....

Prithvi hangs up, Angad gets up and grabs his jacket, he goes to the bathroom and knocks on the door

A - Kripa, I'm going out with Sujal and Prithvi....I'll be back soon, call me if you need me

Angad heads downstairs, he picks up his car keys and waits in the living room until he hears a car stop, he looks out of the window and sees Sujal, he heads outside, Sujal gets out of his car

S - so what's the problem?
A - wait....

Sujal shrugs his shoulders and waits, a few minutes later Prithvi's car pulls up, he gets out and joins Angad and Sujal

P - ok so care to tell me why you spoilt my sleep?
A - I will...just get in the car

Angad heads to his car while Prithvi looks at Sujal who shrugs his shoulders, they both follow Angad and get into his car, Angad drives them to a nearby club, they go inside and take some seats near the bar, Angad orders some drinks for them then sits down

S - come on Angad tell us...
P - are the boys ok?
A - yeah they're cool....you know the kids are getting the mid-semester break in a few weeks right?
P - yeah so?
A - well Aryan was hoping that instead of them lounging around the house for two weeks that they could go somewhere
S - where exactly?
A - Goa...
P - what? Goa for two weeks....that to unsupervised....no way
S - I agree with Prithvi......we can't let them go
A - am I the only one out of us who thinks its not a big deal?
P - Angad you don't understand....you don't have daughters, if anything happens in Goa then it will be us who lose our respect
A - right...I have no daughters.....I make sure Ria, Tia and Roshni don't lack in anything, I make sure they're safe....I make sure they're happy yet I have no daughters....gee thanks
S - Angad, Prithvi didn't mean that, we both know how much you love the girls...
P - but the fact is they're still kids....if anything happens...
A - look Aryan will be there...he's not a kid...he'll make sure everyone is safe...and besides we all know how much KK and Karan care for the girls...they'll be ok
P - I dunno....I haven't sent my girls anywhere alone
S - Angad has a point....if Aryan's there then I know Roshni will be safe, so will Ria and Tia...he'll rather risk his life than see anything happen to the girls
P - yeah.....
A - so you agree? they can go?
P - ok sure....but if anything happens Angad....I'm holding you responsible
A - of course
S - ok but who will talk to Kashish?
P - and Suhana?
A - I will don't worry

The guys finish their drinks then head back to Angad's house from where Prithvi and Sujal go back to theirs. Angad breathes deeply

A - so the easy bit is done...now how to convince Kashish and Suhana...

Angad thinks as he goes to his room, he lies down and continues to think then has an idea and smiles and falls asleep. In the morning Kashish is making breakfast when she hears the doorbell ring, she goes to open it and finds Angad standing there holding a box of chocolates

A - hey Kashish bhabhi.....how are you?
Ka - good....come in

Kashish moves out of the way and Angad comes in, they both go to the kitchen, Kashish continues to make breakfast while Angad sits at the table

Ka - the chocolates?
A - for you bhabhi

Kashish takes the chocolates and puts them aside, she then puts her hands on her waist

Ka - come on tell me, what do you want?

Angad laughs nervously

A - what makes you think I want something?
Ka - because you don't call me bhabhi unless you do
A - ok fair enough.....don't get angry though

Angad informs her of Aryan's decision to take the gang away for the break.

Ka - what? I'll kill him....
A - come on Kashish....it'll be good for them

After much persuasion Kashish agrees, Angad then heads to Suhana's house and something similar takes place there, but all in all each of them give their consent for the break. Angad grins and calls Aryan

Ar - hey chachu...
A - hey, so I did what you asked me
Ar - what's that?
A - I spoke to your mum and dad, and to Prithvi and Suhana and they've all agreed to let you go to Goa
Ar - what? thats great chachu! thanks!
A - yeah so I'm leaving you in charge....remember if something goes wrong, I'm being held responsible...don't let me down
Ar - sure thing chachu

Aryan hangs up and grins and rushes to inform the others.

Coming up - Road trip to Goa!!!!

Sorry for the long delay....plz comment
Edited by ~*~Rachu~*~ - 17 years ago

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