Mineil FF"Shades of love" part -34 date 8-9-2023page:55 - Page 33

Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by Bechain_Bulbul


Fantastic update

Enjoyed reading it. Mineil here are taking forward their relationship very naturally.

Why mini asked how babies are made🤣 was she teasing or she doesn't know really 🤣 dont worry mini, now you are neil's teacher after sometime he will be clearing all your doubts about abc of baby making🤣


Neil will soon put on  teacher hat ☺️🤣 he has already sensed mini devilness and innocence now 🤣 

Edited by N_sharmaa - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by N_sharmaa



Neil will soon put on  teacher hat ☺️🤣 he has already sensed mini devilness and innocence now 🤣 

He will be her practical teacher😜😜

Posted: 1 years ago

Amazing

Love it

Continue soon 

Posted: 1 years ago

Part :26


Neil said with a naughty smile looking at Mini from toe to hair.But Mini didn't hear what he said. Her gaze was on the dairy milk in Neil's hand.

When he saw it, he smiled and handed it to her.


"Khao.."he said."No.. this is bought for you" Mini said."I've had enough"Neil said.Mini took it without replying. He heard his phone beep and picked it up.


"Is it your friends?" Mini asked seeing the smile on Neil's face after reading the message.

"yeah..they are sending birthday wishes "Neil replied.

"Do they post your photo as status on WhatsApp for birthday?"Mini asked.


"Yes, they post my photo as status in whatsapp and instagram.Didn't you do that? "Neil asked.

"yes.. I post it for my friends, pappa, neena didi, priya maa.. but none of them do that for me..No one has ever told me even birthday wishes," Mini's eyes filled with tears.


Neil looked at Minnie suspiciously. "You were the first and last person to wish me a happy birthday.. on my fifth birthday"Mini said.


"All that time I liked you and I considered you as a good friend. But after that I started to feel angry towards you. That's why I didn't say birthday wishes for you. But why didn't the rest of them wish? They all like you a lot, then why?"Neil asked.


"Because of my mom. That day is her death anniversary. On that day, pappa will become a broken soul.. He will not talk to anyone.. The rest will not say birthday wishes towards me, thinking that I will be sad.Mother dying in childbirth is one of God's cruelest jokes.The woman's husband does not even know whether to be happy or sad."Mini said while wiping her tears."Do you miss her?" asked Neil, wiping away mini's tears. 

"Neil,How I miss someone whom I have never met. But there have been many moments when I wished my mother was with me. Many children have seen the bond with their mothers and wished I had a mother too." said Mini in choked voice.


"It doesn't matter if mom or dad is with us for the sake of name, Mini."Neil replied.

She understood that he had given such an answer by taking in his experience. "And I want to say sorry to you. I used to show my love to my mother by putting her in front of you to make you angry,I'm sorry" said Neil and cupped her face.


"Okay Mr Neil Oberoi.. your apology accepted" said Mini trying to laugh.Neil also laughed. "Do you like to celebrate birthday?" Neil asked. "I don't want to cut cake, wear new clothes, expensive gifts but I want to hear birthday wishes from someone's mouth" Mini replied.


"We will celebrate all your birthdays from now on,"said Neil and kissed her forehead.Mini smiled.


Neil looked at her face with a small smile. There was chocolate on one side of her lips. He wiped it away with his fingers."Neil.. you can use your.. your lips" Mini took a deep breath and said.


Neil looked at her eyes with a smile... her cheeks turned red and she lowered her gaze.He pressed his lips against her lips... and they engaged in a passionate kiss.After few moments they parted away. "omg!it was amazing "Mini whispered.


"Kya bola?"Neil asked as he didn't quite hear what she said. "Nothing.. I didn't say anything" Mini replied.


"I felt like you said something" Neil replied.", I didn't say anything.. and good night, I'm getting sleepy."replied Mini and lay down on the bed.


Just a minute Mini.. I want to tell something to you"Neil said. Mini looked him suspiciously.

"Mini, I need progression in our married life. I mean I'm physically very much attracted towards you I'd like to have sex with you, do you feel ready for it?"He asked as he lay down looking at the side where Mini was lying.


Mini was not shocked as it was an expected question."Neil, I'm enjoying your flirting, hugs and kiss.. but I'm not ready for physical relation. please wait few months too."Mini replied after taking a deep breath.


"okay.. I can wait. Let me ask one more question. Do you have any fear of sex? I read in the article that many girls have it."Neil asked.

"There is nothing like that Neil. I am not mentally prepared for it now. That's it." Mini replied.


Neil closed his eyes saying "ok.. so good night devil." I only told you that I am not ready for physical relationship.. I didn't say that I have an infectious disease "said Mini looking at Neil.

Neil looked at her suspiciously. "Why such a distance?There have a place for an elephant to lie down in our midst," said Mini.


"This gap is good for my health.. otherwise I will have to get hit by karate queen in the morning" Neil said in a teasing tone.

"Achha 🙄is he the one who just asked me if I can have sex?" Mini moved towards him and lay down next to him.He closed his eyes with a smile and held her close without answering.


"How is the shirt? Is it a correct fit?" Neena asked Neil who came to the dining room. "Yeah... did you know my favorite color?" Neil asked to her.

"No.. this shirt is selected by your wife "Neena replied."She didn't know my favorite color," Neil said

"omg.. what a match between the minds of both of them" Neena teased them.


A smile appeared on Mini and Neil's lips hearing that. "Neil, can you come from the call center earlier today? If so, we could have dinner tonight from any hotel or restaurant " Priya asked Neil.

"No mom,I took some leave when Ashok uncle was hospitalized, I have to follow the correct schedule in this month. Otherwise I will loss the job ”Neil replied.


"Anyway I won't be here when you three come back. I will go to abhinav's house in the afternoon" said Neena.


"Stay here for a few more days" Mini felt sad when she heard that Neena was returning.


"Tomorrow I have to rejoin the hospital. If not, I will lose my job."Neena said.Neena is now working in a private hospital near Abhinav's house.

Neena returned back to Abinav's home on that afternoon. One and half month has been passed. The number of kisses and hugs between Mini and Neil has increased but neither of them have engaged in physical relations.And there was an intense feeling start to arise in their mind. But the ego of both of them did not allow it to be called love.


"All the best for your exam"

Mini said kissing Neil's forehead as he ready to leave for the exam.

"Thankyou.." His face was tense. "Neil, cool down. There is no need to be so tensed. You have studied well. Then you should attend every question. Don't write in a hurry. Take time to think and write in good handwriting."Mini advised him.


"There are teachers who have taught me. When I remember their teasing in college, I don't want to go there," Neil said.

"Don't mind it.. focus on your exam's "Mini said.

Neil nodded and went to the college.Mini did not go to college as she was on study leave.And started studying for her exams.


Arjun and Bobby were not in Neil's exam hall.The invigilator was a teacher who had taught him in his exam hall. When he saw Neil, he gave a sarcastic smile to him.


"Can you pass the exam at least this time... Many of those who studied with you have joined here as teachers." He said sarcastically to Neil when he gave the question paper.Many regular students in the exam hall laughed at that.


His sarcasm and the laughter of the rest made Neil uncomfortable.Neil felt angry that he was mocked in front of so many people, but at that time Neil remained silent.Neil read the question paper patiently. He knew the answers to most of the questions and without wasting time he started writing the answers.

Neil read the question paper patiently. He knew the answers to most of the questions and without wasting time he started writing the answers.


"How was your exam?" Bobby asked Neil as he came out of the exam hall. "It was fine... yours?" Neil asked.

"I only knew the answers of three questions in total. After writing them, I was sleeping on the desk" Arjun replied."My situation was the same..Neil..Wherever you are going for tuition?, we should have joined there" Bobby said."No... can't be there," Neil said immediately. "why.. what will happen if we join there? But which tuition center did you join that we don't know in this country?" Arjun asked skeptically.


"It is being taught by one of my relatives.. okay I am going. I have to study for the next exam" Neil said and left quickly.

"Neil, how was the exam?" Priya asked Neil who came back after the exam."Fine mom"Neil replied.

"I thought you would go to the call center after the exam," Priya said. "I have taken full day leave. Where is Mini? Is she studying?" Neil asked.

"No.. She has headache and temperature. She is bed" Priya replied.Hearing Priya's reply, Neil quickly went to the room. "Mini.. Mini"He sat next to Mini and patted her."How was the exam" Mini asked slowly opening her eyes.



"Fine.. get ready quickly we can go to hospital "Neil said after checking the temperature with his hands on Mini's forehead.

"No Neil, I'm okay. I've got a fever now because of the climate change. I'll recover completely by tomorrow," Mini said lazily.Neil said taking Mini's jeans and top from the cupboard without replying."wear it quickly. otherwise I will make you wear it" Neil said.

Mini quickly took the clothes from Neil's hand and went to the bathroom.They went to the hospital after informing to priya.


"we need to see the physician "Neil said to the receptionist when they reached the hospital."Did you took the appointment? receptionist asked.

"No" Neil replied."Is this the first time to come to this hospital?" the receptionist asked."No..No" Neil replied."Then please tell OP Id" said the receptionist. Neil said her op id.The receptionist asked after entering it in the system. "Please check if the details are correct. Name Mini khurana, age 20. Adress..."

"Yes right.." Neil replied."okay.. Dr Ahuja is the physician. The doctor's fee is 200" said the receptionist.


Neil took the fee from his pocket and gave the receptionist Op ticket and told where the physician's cabin was. Neil went there with Mini.

"The token number is 18.. we will have to wait for a while. If you are hungry, we can go to the canteen and have something to eat" Neil said."No Neil, I'm not hungry"


Neil and Mini sat in the waiting chair in front of the doctor's cabin. "Mini…" Mini and Neil looked back at the familiar voice.She met Poonam,she is sitting behind their chair. "Hi.. good afternoon ma'am. Why here?.. I mean have you come to see the physician?"

"No.. I have come to see the eye specialist. I have a short sight problem. What happened to you?"poonam asked."Fever..maam did you come alone?" Mini asked."yes" Poonam replied."Neil..she is my school teacher..maam this is my husband"

Mini introduced the two to each other. Neil asked her suspiciously. "Aren't you working as a care taker at the old age home here?"


No Neil, She is my teacher.. You must have seen someone else like Maam" Mini replied."Noo.. Mini it's me. I am working there now" Poonam said casually.

"But..." Mini started asking her doubts but the nurse called Poonam to the eye specialist's cabin.

Poonam said "okay.. bye" and left from there. "She was a teacher then why is she working as a care taker? I think her family is a rich family. Her husband is working in an MNC in Canada."Mini said to Neil.

"Maybe something has happened in their life," Neil said.

Mini nodded her head. The nurse from Dr Ahuja's cabin called mini's token number and she and Neil entered the cabin.Mini told the doctor about her illness and the doctor examined her with a stethoscope and the nurse checked her temperature with a thermometer.


The nurse told the doctor Mini's body temperature. "She have high temperature.. she needs an injection," said the doctor.

"No..."Mini said in shock.The doctor, nurse and Neil looked at Mini suspiciously, "I don't need an injection.. Instead, just give it as a tablet. God promise I will take everything properly."When she said that, Mini's face had the innocence and fear of a five-year-old girl.


"If it's an injection, the temperature will drop quickly," Doctor advised."I don't need to get well soon.. I don't need an injection, a tablet is enough" said Mini with a yes face again.Doctor rolled his eyes. He cut out what was written as injection and wrote tablet there.


"Women endure the pain of periods and the pain of delivery.. But why are you women afraid of injections?" Neil asked her with a smile after leaving the doctor's cabin.


"Who told you I'm afraid of injections" Mini asked angrily."And what did I see a while ago?" Neil asked with a smile. "I'm allergic to needles. That's why I said that," Mini answered quickly.


"How can you say such lies so quickly. And I loved the look on your face when you said that to the doctor..innocence on your face and fear in your eyes and lips.Although it's true, at the time I..” Realizing that this is a public place, Neil didn't finish what he wanted to say."You?.. wanted to kiss me right?"Mini asked."More than that.."Neil replied and walked towards pharmacy with Mini.


"The pharmacy is very busy. Go and sit there?" Neil went to buy the medicine.

"Mini went to sat on the waiting chair and Poonam was also sitting next to Mini."Ma'am, what did the doctor tell you?" Mini asked Poonam."Specks are prescribed..what about you?" Poonam asked.


"The medicines have been prescribed.Neil went to the pharmacy to buy them."Mini replied.Mini asked after a moment of silence. "Maam, can I ask you something?"


"Mini, I know what are you going to ask"Poonam said realizing what Mini was going to ask.Mini asked taking a deep breath.

"What happened to you.. You are highly educated then why you are working as a care taker in an old age home . If you can tell me, please tell me.. If it's a secret, don't.""It's not a secret Mini.. everyone know my life it just like an open book now "Poonam said.Listening to her talk, Mini felt that she was sad for some reason. "What happened ma'am" Mini asked again.


"I am unable to bear a child.uterus has problem. My husband has doesn't want a woman who is incapable of giving birth. So we are divorced now.My brother's wife doesn't like me staying at their house. Every day she will create problems. I searched a lot for a job as a teacher but I didn't get it. So this works. And now I lives in a working women's hostel near here."Poonam said in one breath. Her voice was choked.


Hearing that, Mini also felt sad. "Mini, we can go now,got the medicines" Neil said coming to her.


"Maam.. we are going. How will you go back?" Mini asked." Roommate is there. She has gone to see the surgeon and will come soon" Poonam replied.Mini nodded and went with Neil.


"How much medical science has advanced. If you want a baby, there is a method called adoption. If you want a baby with your own blood, there are so many ways like Ivf and surrogacy.. But why did he leave his wife? Are all men like this?including Neil "On the way back home, many Thoughts also began to form in Mini's mind.


"Neil, Can I ask something to you?"Mini asked looking at Neil who was sleeping for the night. "What?" Neil asked."That is... In future..if my uterus has any problem i.e. if I can't bear a child, will you divorce me?" Mini asked hesitantly.

"what kind of stupid question is this.. sleep yaar"Neil said and closed his eyes."Answer the question Neil" Mini said again."You are my present and you are my future..till death Neil has one girl in his life that is Mini" said Neil hugging her to his chest.

Mini hugged him tightly. "Why a question like this now" Neil asked. Mini tells him about Poonam.

"If I have any problem, will you leave me?" Neil asked.

"No Never"said Mini and she peck his lips.

Then she closed her eyes and lay down. Neil said caressing her hair and kissing her forehead.

"I love you Mini"


"What😳😳"Mini asked, getting up with a shock. "Oh my God, isn't this devil asleep?" Neil muttered.


To be continued.....


Please forgive me for my grammar mistakes and give your comments ❤️

Edited by PopyRosid - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago

These two devils❤️

This mineil is so entertaining to read. Their antics, mannerisms and conversation are so....i dont know i dont have words 😆 i can just continue to read them for long hours❤️😆

So miya biwi are on kissing and hugging and already in love☺️

I loved that moment when they discussed about poonam and how easily they told each other about not leaving each other ever but those three letters words takes forever to come out of mouth 🤣 but neil pakda gaya🤣 devil ne sun liya uska i love you😆

Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by Bechain_Bulbul


These two devils❤️

This mineil is so entertaining to read. Their antics, mannerisms and conversation are so....i dont know i dont have words 😆 i can just continue to read them for long hours❤️😆

So miya biwi are on kissing and hugging and already in love☺️

I loved that moment when they discussed about poonam and how easily they told each other about not leaving each other ever but those three letters words takes forever to come out of mouth 🤣 but neil pakda gaya🤣 devil ne sun liya uska i love you😆

Thank you for such a lovely comment ❤. Waiting for Dark Paradise.Hope you will post it soon.❤

Posted: 1 years ago

This mineil 🤣  loving their natural progression n how they have become comfortable with each other now and finally devil got to know Neil loves her but will he divert it in next update ?🤣

Posted: 1 years ago
Originally posted by N_sharmaa


This mineil 🤣  loving their natural progression n how they have become comfortable with each other now and finally devil got to know Neil loves her but will he divert it in next update ?🤣

Mini heard what he said❤️

might be he will divert the topic❤



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