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Part-23


"3rd position" Mini said in a low voice that he could hear.

"What? Did you say something?" Neil stopped the bike and asked.
"No..I didn't say anything" said Mini pretending to be serious. "I felt like you said something" Neil started the bike again.


"Mini.. did they hurt you?" Priya asked, coming to Mini who entered the house and examining Mini closely."No.. Priya maa.. I'm fine "Mini replied.
"Why did they arrested you?"Priya asked.


Neil replied before Mini could reply. "did you filed complaint against that rascal"asked Priya.
"We were ready to file a complaint. But Amar uncle didn't agree." Mini said disappointedly.
"Why don't you agree. Otherwise he will treat girls like this again" Priya said to Amar.
"This kind of case will affect our family reputation and the future of Mini" Amar replied.
Neil and Mini doesn't like his answer. Neil went to his room without replying anything. Mini also followed him.


"Neil, I understand that you didn't like what uncle said. Then why didn't you reply to uncle?" Mini asked to Neil. "If I give him reply it will end in a fight" Neil replied.
"Neil..you behaved like a good husband at the police station. Was it acting or not?" Mini asked sitting on the bed.


"Did you think it was acting after seeing that?" Neil asked taking his clothes from the cupboard.
"Answer what I asked without asking another question" Mini asked."It was acting.. because I want a good certificate as a husband "Neil replied angrily and went to the bathroom.
without reply anything Mini lay on the bed.

"Even if I give her my heart this devil will say it's hibiscus . I hate her. She is a devil.A devil who does not understand me" Neil said to himself while taking a shower.


"Neil..." Mini called knocking on the bathroom door."Kya.."Neil asked angrily.

"I.. I have something to say." Mini said. "kya.." Neil asked doubtfully. "Thankyou for your support..if there is any difficult situation in your life, I will be with you..as a piller and as a good mentor.You are a good friend and... husband," Mini said.A smile appeared on Neil's lips when he heard Mini's words.


"Aren't you hungry?" Neil asked her after showering and entering the room.
"I have something to write.Neil, you go and have your dinner " said mini while writing her record book.


"Neil.. where is Mini"Priya asked to Neil when he entered the dining room."She have to write some notes"Neil replied and start to have his dinner.
Priya said, "when you go to room, take her food too" Neil shook his head.


When he went back to his room after dinner, he took some food for Mini.
"Devil kid..have your dinner" Neil said after placing the food in front of her. "No time Neil. There is a lot to write" said Mini looking at him.


"Have your dinner,I'll write it down. " Neil said to Mini. "Nice idea.If sir finds out the difference in handwriting he will cause problem." Mini replied and continued her work.


Using his hands he tear the roti into pieces, dip it in curry and hold it out towards her
"Khao"he said.


Surprised by Niel's action, Mini opened her mouth and he put the piece of roti in her mouth.
He said again to Mini who was staring at Neil with her mouth hanging open in astonishment."khao"


Nodded her head like an obedient child Mini chewed the rotti slice. And he give her the next piece of rotti.
Neil fed her that night. Neil's behavior like this has made her surprised.


"turn off the light before going to bed. I am going to sleep" Neil said after reading the topics taught by Mini earlier.Mini nodded as reply.

While writing, two or three times Mini's gaze fell on Neil lying on the sofa.His eyes are closed but there is a smile on his lips. "Why are you laughing?" Mini asked.


"I laughed thinking what would have happened if I had hit your nose like that,when you kissed me on that day"Neil replied.
"Why didn't you beat me that day? At least you didn't even push.. Why?"Mini asked skeptically.


Neil asked himself why he had kissed her back,instead of pushing her away.


"That was a sudden idea to break your affair, but today I realized that it was wrong.I'm sorry " Mini said to Neil.


"There's no need to apologize. I also responded to that," Neil said to Mini. "By the way, Neil. will you respond like that to any girl who comes and kisses you?" Mini asked to Neil.


"I don't know"Neil said nonchalantly. "If you react like that I will kill you" Mini said rudely.
Neil closed his eyes searching for the answer to the question he asked himself without saying anything.


One month passed.


Neil wanted to kick Vikram for misbehaving with Mini but he could not meet him.Mini concentrated more on her studies and teaching Neil. The friendship between Neil and Mini was getting stronger day by day and Neil's attraction towards Mini was also increases.


"ok Neil.. tell me four properties of laser" Mini asked to Neil.
Neil was staring at Mini's lips without blinking his eyes.
"Neil…" Mini called out, realizing the meaning of his stare.
"Kya... why did you call out loud?" Neil asked to Mini.


"Answer what I asked," Mini said seriously. "What did you ask?" Neil asked with a sheepish smile.


"Neil.. control your self.. then listen to what I say. Your exam will probably start next month" Mini said to Neil as an advice.
"Mini seriously I can't control myself. Your lips are like cherry. I really wanna taste it.Can.. can I kiss you?"
Neil asked, unable to control the emotions welling up inside him.


"No... answer the question "Mini said without looking his face.
"at least a lip peck?"Neil asked.


"No.. give me the answer "Mini again replied.
"Ask me the question again , I didn't hear what you asked" Neil said pretending to be angry.
Seeing the look on Neil's face, Mini laughed but controlled it and asked the question again.
"Monochromatic,Coherence,Directionality and
Highly Intense or Brightness"Neil replied.


"Tell me the explanation of everything," Mini said. Neil started to explain and someone's message came on Mini's phone.


Saying "just a minute" Mini took out her phone and looked at it.


Neil noticed Mini's face filled with fear and tension as she read the message. Mini nervously started looking at something on the phone.
"What happened, anything serious?" Neil asked and the tension on Mini's face changed to a smile


"Neil.. My second semester result has been published. I passed in all the subjects." Mini said, unable to control her happiness.
Today, Neil did not feel jealous towards Mini that he used to feel earlier, instead he also felt very happy.


"Congratulations "Neil said.
"Thankyou..Let me tell this to pappa too" Mini picked up her phone and dialed Ashok's number.
"Uncle must have slept. We can inform him tomorrow morning," said Neil.


"It's only 12 o clock. Pappa must be watching news, cricket or some web series," she replied and called Ashok.
Even though the phone rang three times, Ashok did not answer the phone call. "Pappa is not answering the call," Mini said with frustration.
"Didn't I say that uncle must have been asleep," replied Neil.


"Neil.. I feel something wrong.I want to check if he is fine or not.. please come with me"Mini said. "arrey devil, may be uncle is in deep sleep. that's why he didn't attended your phone call"Neil said.
"Please Neil.." Mini said in a pleading tone.
"Okay.. Come"Seeing the fear and worry in Mini's eyes, Neil didn't feel like saying anything.


When ashok didn't open the door despite pressing the calling bell three times, Neil also felt something wrong.
"Neil, why didn't pappa open the door?" Mini asked in fear."Don't be afraid..We can enter only by breaking the lock of this door. Go and call papa and mom. Only with their help can the door be opened," said Neil.Mini quickly went and brought Amar and Priya. All four of them broke the lock of the main door and entered the house. Ashok was lying unconscious inside the house just as Mini had imagined.


They rushed Ashok to a nearby hospital. After checking the doctor said that ashok became unconscious due to high BP and shifted to ICU.
Neil felt a twinge in his heart as he looked at Mini crying in the waiting chair in front of the ICU.
"This bill should be paid as soon as possible. There is no need for so many people to stay here. One or two people are enough."A nurse said to Neil while handover the bill.


"Do you have money to pay the bill?" Amar asked to Neil.
"mm..you both go to home. Me and Mini will stay here "Neil said to Amar.
After Neil pays the bill, Priya and Amar returned to home. "Shouldn't you inform your dadu and biji?" asked Neil after coming near Mini.
"I informed this to lovely bua. Bua said she will inform them" said Mini wiping her tears."Hmm.."Neil replied.


"Neil.. Will something happen to Pappa?" Mini asked in fear.
"Nothing will happen.Pray to God for his health," said Neil patting Mini on the shoulder.

"Neil I am the most hated person to God. When I was born, my mom was taken away from me I was made a bad omen in front of everyone.Many relatives are afraid of me. They say that if my shadow falls on them, they will be in danger.You know, it's been years since I saw my cousin Jerry. Biji and dadu say that if he comes near me and talks to me, he will also be in danger..I am hated by all. Even God doesn't like me. If I pray, no god will listen. " she said wiping away tears.

"Mini calm down. Don't blame yourself after listening to people's nonsense.Keep calm nothing will happen to your pappa. "Neil said holding Mini close to himself.


Mini didn't say anything and placed her head on his shoulder. Her tears were falling and his clothes were getting wet."Neil.. I can't live without my pappa"She started crying like a little child.He patted her head without replying. He felt sometimes that a loving caress was better than comforting with words.


Mini and Neil woke up when Priya called "Neil.. Mini" tapped both of their faces.
"Mom.. when did you come" Neil asked rubbing his eyes and face.
"Just now. Both of you go home and freshen up. Amar ji and I will stay here," Priya said.


"Then can we go home and freshen up?" Neil asked looking at her. "I'm not coming" Mini replied.
"Mini, don't worry. We are here. You go and freshen up. You are very tired. If there is any problem, I will call you and let you know."Priya said.
Priya insists and sends Mini back to home.After reaching home and freshening up and having breakfast, Mini and Neil came back to the hospital.


When Mini and Neil come back, Mini's dadu, biji and bua are in the hospital. Mini looked at her grandparents' faces but they ignored Mini.
“When did you come?” Mini asked her bua.
"Atmost 10 minutes . The doctor didn't allow us to enter the ICU," said her bua.


Mini went to priya and leaned on her shoulder. "What really happened Mini? Ashok bhai sahab had BP problem earlier?"Lovely asked to Mini.
"No.. pappa didn't have it" said Mini.


"Lovely, tell this girl to leave here. We know how to guard our son. Is her intention to send my son to Yamaloka too?" Biji said to lovely.
"Maa.. please don't say like this"Lovely advised. Mini didn't replied but tears starts to flow from her eyes.


"Aunty.. tell your mother that the man lying inside is not only her son but also Mini's father. Pray for that man's life and don't talk nonsense. Then people who are over 60 years of age will not be kept as patient's bystander here."Neil said calmly to Lovely.


Ashok was in ICU for four days. When bp became normal level he was shifted to room. Those days spent in the hospital were the most difficult days of Mini's life. Mini's grandparents used to blame her when they came to see Ashok.


While Mini keeps silent to them, Neil gives them a befitting reply and shut their mouth.
"Pappa, have this medicine too" Mini said, handing the medicine to Ashok. "Beta, how did you pay the hospital bill?" Ashok asked after taking the medicine.


"Neil paid some cash. The rest was taken from your account," said Mini.
"Mini beta, I was confused by Neil's behavior before your wedding. Is he not interested in marriage? Will he be able to love you? Will he be able to support you in all situations," Ashok said to Mini. "Now that confusion has changed?" Mini asked with a smile.


"Completely changed.I understood his love for you when I saw his care, trust towards you,and the way he supported you when others taunted you."Ashok replied with a smile.

Mini was awestruck by his words.


"Neil is in love with me?" Mini asked herself
"Mini Betta, aren't you going to Neil's house?" Ashok asked. "No pappa.. I will be here for two days" she said and went to her room.
Mini entered the room seeing Neil lying on his bed looking at something on his phone.
"Hey... why are you sleeping in my room?" Mini asked in surprise when she saw Neil unexpectedly.


"Dear devil kid, it's time to change the phrase 'my room.'yah mere patni ka kamara hai. mere patni ka kamara mera bhee hai"Neil replied with attitude.

"Achha...But your wife doesn't like other people sleeping in this room."Mini replied with the same tone.


"Yes.. Then clean another room for me soon. Your Priya maa and uncle have ordered me to stay here until Ashok uncle is completely cured," Neil said.


"Oh.. so you came because their insist, not because of your own feelings, right?" Asked a little angrily and placed a pillow in the middle of the bed, Mini lay down.


"Off course.. but by the way, there was a sofa in this room. where is it now? Neil asked." It was broken and put in the store room. If you sleep only on the sofa, go to the living room and sleep," Mini said harshly.


Neil moved to the other end of the bed without replying.Being in a bed with her for the first time made him nervous and tense.


"bhagwan ji.. what's happening to me. I can't sleep no matter how hard I try." Neil murmured.
Mini's mind was full of Ashok's words and she too was unable to sleep. "Neil did you sleep?"


"Neil.. did you sleep?" asked Mini as she turned towards his side.
"No.. I can't sleep"Neil replied.
"Neil, I have a few things to ask you. Look here," Mini said.


"Isn't it a question of learning the portion you were given to learn? Learned," replied Neil without looking towards her side.


"It's not that, it's another matter. You lie down looking here," Mini said.


"No.. No.. If I look there,there is a chance that the number of family members will increase" Neil said taking a deep breath.Mini wide mouthed when she hear his reply.She kicked his leg saying "stupid".


"Say what you have to say without hurting me," Neil said.
"Didn't you say at the police station that you trust me? Why did you say that?" Mini asked."because I trust you"Neil replied.
"Reason?"Mini asked.


"Mini.. I know you from childhood. I don't have the power to read your mind but if you say something I can understand the truth and lies from it" Neil said.


"Neil, is it because I have the label of your wife.my dadu, biji.. and when your chotti nani taunts me, you support me against them" Mini asked suspiciously.


"No..What they say is wrong. That is why I speak against them. There's nothing wrong with you, that's why I'm supporting you."Neil replied.
She felt a disappointment because she did not get the answer she expected from him. "Devil, do you have any other questions?" Neil asked to her with a smile.

"What's the difference between love and lust?"Mini asked irritably
"There is love and lust in love but there is no love in lust" Neil replied.


"Is physical attraction and lust the same?" Mini asked skeptically.


Neil didn't know the answer to that question. He asked it to himself. "Neil.. tell me the answer "Mini asked."Pata nahi"Neil replied.
"Does physical attraction turn into love?" Mini asked.

"Devil kid, I'm not Google to answer all your questions. Do one thing, go to Google and search," Neil covered himself with a blanket and closed his eyes.


"Does physical attraction turn into love?" Mini took out her phone and typed in Google.
"Why am I looking for all this? What can I get if I get the answer to all this? I don't need to know this"


Mini put her phone away saying to herself.

She had asked Amar and Priya to come to her house the next night. Accordingly they came at supper time.


"Mini beta,Why did you invite us to dinner today? Do you have something important to say? "Priya asked while eating dinner.


"Yes.. Maa, uncle..you all know about pappa's health issue. I didn't know immediately when pappa fell ill even though I was nearby.None of us know how long pappa lay unconscious on the floor that day.When I get an internship, I will have to stay away from here. Maybe if I get a job far from here, I will have to stay away. May be situation like this should still happen. I can't think of a situation like that."Mini said.

"Mini, if you have something to say, say it directly," Neil said.


"If there is another person in this house with pappa, it is a peace for me." Mini said.


"Mini.. I understand what you are trying to say. But it won't work" Ashok said stopping eating.
"papa you need a companion in your life. you need a life partner.If there was someone with pappa, you could have been taken to the hospital on the time.If Neil and I had not come here at that time, what would have happened to pappa?"Mini asked.


"Mini..whatever you say this thing will not happen"

Ashok said angrily."Ashok..there is a point in what shei s saying. Maybe if you had someone with you, you could have been immediately taken to the hospital that day ," Amar supported Mini.

"Yes.. Similarly, didn't you marry us because you thought that Mini would be alone if something happened to you. Isn't Uncle here alone now? Doesn't Uncle feel lonely. Isn't it good to have someone? " Neil asked.


Neil, Amar and Priya supported Mini's opinion. Ashok resisted it as best he could. Mini decides that if Ashok doesn't think about second marriage, she will not eat anything . Because of it Ashok give up his stubborn.


They engaged a local marriage broker named Neembi to find a bride for Ashok.


"Her name is kammo. Age 40. Divorced due to some mutual disagreement with husband Now she lives with her brother and his family. She has no children," said Neembi, handing a photo to Mini.
"Are they good people?" Priya asked to Neembi.
Neembi replied, "It's a good comment from her native."
"We will go and see her on Sunday. If both of us like it, we can see the further procedure," Mini said.


Mini and Neil along with Ashok went to Kammo's house on Sunday. kammo's brother invited them inside with great respect.
After talking to them formally for a few moments, he called kammo. Mini looked at Kammo who coming into the living room with tea.
She is wearing a simple patiala suit. She has a shy look on her face so she doesn't look up at anyone.


Mini laughed at the look on her face but she controlled it. Kammo's brother said to kammo, "give tea to the groom" and she handed tea to Neil.


Seeing her action, Mini and Ashok widened their eyes. "I am not the groom. He is," said Neil taking a cup of coffee from the tray.


After shaking her head she gave tea to Ashok and then to Mini.Kammo's brother started talking again. Mini noticed that kammo was looking at Neil from the corner of her eyes.

It pissed Mini off
"Pappa, I don't think this is going to work. Let's go."
Mini said in a voice Ashok could hear. "Yes we can go" Ashok replied. "We want to go now. The decision may be communicated to Neembi" Mini said to them.

To be continued...

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Kammo and ashok🤣🤣 @krithz 🤣 look at this 🤣

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Kammo liked Neil ?🤣 🤣

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Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Kammo liked Neil ?🤣 🤣

love at first sight😜

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Originally posted by: PopyRosid

love at first sight😜

Yes 🤣

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Awesome update

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kammo and neil🤣

loved it

loved how miniel actually taking step towards realising their feelings and liked the direct approach😉😆

so now i think minni will feel jealousy for the first time and meanwhile neil will realize its not just physical attraction he is feeling for minni its more.

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kammo and neil🤣

loved it

loved how miniel actually taking step towards realising their feelings and liked the direct approach😉😆

so now i think minni will feel jealousy for the first time and meanwhile neil will realize its not just physical attraction he is feeling for minni its more.


Kammo fell in love with Neil at first sight😜 Mini will feel a little jealous❤️

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Part-24


"I will inform Neembi today that we do not want this proposal.I still can't control my anger when I remember the way that creepy woman looked at Neil."Mini said to Priya while preparing the dinner.

"Mini, this is the 5th time you are telling me now" Priya said with a smile.


"Oh...Priya maa I can't control my angry towards that crazy lady. that's why I'm saying this again and again.

How dare she had to look him like that. Crazy lady."Mini said.Her anger towards Kammo was evident in her voice and expression.

"My prayer is that I will never see that woman again. If she looks at Neil like that way, I will punch her nose just like I punched on Vikram's nose"Mini said.


"Mini you are really possessive. If you go like this, you won't be able to bear even a stranger girl talk to Neil," Priya said to tease Mini.


No Priya maa.. it's not like that. I don't have any problem that Neil made friendship with another girls.But I don't like anyone looking at Neil the way that woman looked at him."Mini replied.


"Mini calm down. Neil didn't look at her the way that woman looked at him. He is yours. No one can take him away from you. I realized his love for you that day when Ashok bhai sahab was hospitalized . Similarly, Amar ji told me what happened in the police station. I also realized how much he trusts you. Trust me he will not cheat you."priya said to her


Now it is the second person who tells her that Neil is in love with her. Various doubts started to bubble up in her mind.Neil's behavior in the hospital makes them feel this way? she asked to herself. Neil gave a clear answer as to why Neil treated her like that in the hospital.So no more unnecessary doubts.May Priya maa is also misunderstood like Pappa was misunderstood. Neil is not in love with her. Her mind gave her the answer but a question arose within her if she want Neil's love?


"Mini.. which world are you in? What are you thinking?" Priya asked, grabbing Mini's shoulder who was in deep thought.


"Nothing...nothing.Food is ready. can we have dinner Mini asked.

"Sure.."she replied.


"Neil.. the company where our Irfan works is hiring B.Tech EEE graduates. No problem with backlogs. I will give you the mail id. Send your resume tomorrow."

Amar said while eating dinner.

"Pappa.. I.. I am happy in this job. I don't want to look for another job now" said Neil gathering courage.

"What? I didn't teach you engineering to work as a telecaller in a call center."Amar said harshly.


"Papa.. every job has its glory. And I don't want to work in technical field" Neil replied calmly.

"If you are not interested in working in the technical field why did you study engineering" Again Amar asked harshly.

That question angered Neil and when he went to answer it, Priya started talking.


"Amar ji.. There is no law that we should do the work of the course we studied. If he is happy in this job, let him continue it. My friend Nimrat's daughter was working in a field she didn't like. Finally , she tried to commit suicide due to stress.I don't want my son to face that situation. So please don't talk about it here anymore."


Mini sees Priya supporting Neil for the first time. Mini likes the way Priya supports him. Amar didn't reply and continued eating his dinner. The other three had their dinner silently.


Mini have a class test tomorrow and after telling Neil to read over the portions taught in the previous days, Mini started studying what she have to study.

"But why is that kammo looked at Neil with so much love? Is he that much attractive?" A thought entered Mini's mind, and her gaze fell on Neil from time to time.


"Sneak peeks are not good," Neil said without taking his eyes off the book.

"Hello mister,I'm not staring at you.I don't need to peer at you. "Mini replied immediately.

"I didn't tell you that you were peeking up on me," Neil teased her.

"Then who are you talking about?" Mini asked.

"About kammo.. I felt shy when I saw her stare" said Neil pretending to be embarrassed.

"You.. stupid.. idiot.. don't you feel ashamed to talk to me like this.. were you enjoying it too"Mini said angrily throwing the pencil, pen, books and phone charger on the study table towards Neil.

"This devil is very violent.. Arre meri devil kid calm down.I was joking. I felt disgusted by the stare of that woman," said Neil with a smile as he picked up the pencil, pen and book lying on the floor.


"sacch?" Mini asked suspiciously, controlling her anger.

"Sacch.. the profession of advocate is better for you than engineering. Has the ability to argue well.I saw you staring on me."Neil replied with a smile.

Mini doesn't reply and looks at Book.


"If you want to look at me, look directly.if you want to kiss me.. do it.My heart is not as hard as yours. So I have no problem with this," Neil said dramatically.


Mini said sarcastically, "I didn't understand that you are asking a kiss."

"How hard is your heart?Now I am asking this for the second time. I am your own husband. No earthquake will happen if you kiss me."Neil replied.


"I'm not in the mood," Mini said.

"When would you be in the mood? It's been three months since the wedding. Nothing has happened yet. I haven't done any oath that I will remain a celibate."Neil said.

Mini's mouth fell open in o shape when she heard what Neil was saying.


"Devil, close your mouth. If you don't, mosquito will enter your mouth," he said, putting her lips together with his hand.

Pushing Neil's hand away, Mini asked "You.. I mean.. what do you want? just a kiss or?"


"If I get a kiss, I'm happy. If I get sex, I'm even happier."Neil replied in husky voice...There was only a few inches difference between their faces.

"Do you love me?" Mini asked looking into Neil's eyes.


Neil moved away from her without replying and sat down on the sofa. "Neil... give me an answer? Do you.. do you love me?" Mini asked again.

"I don't know"Neil said without looking her face.

"So what you feel for me now is lust?" Mini asked.

"I don't know if it's love or lust for you. But I feel an attraction and affection for you that I haven't felt for other girls yet" Neil replied and started to read the book.

Mini also started learning what she had to learn but was unable to fully concentrate. It was almost 12 o'clock when she finished studying. When she folded the book and got up to go to bed, she saw Neil sleeping in the same sitting position on the sofa.


A smile spread across her lips as she saw him sleeping in sitting position. After removing the book from his lap, she laid him down and covered him with a blanket.


"Does he have just lust for me?lust will diminishes with time?which is strong?love or lust?"Mini asked to herself when she lay down on the bed.

"arrey.. what's happening on me god? why I think about it? Does I'm in love with him?"she again asked to herself.

"No.. I am never in love with him. There is a little

emotional connection by living in the same room and he is also my friend. That's all we have."Mini said to herself and closed her eyes tightly.


In next day Neil asked to mini after returning from the job"how was the class test? "

"Not bad"Mini replied while writing the assignment.

"That means it was cool," Neil said to himself. "Get fresh soon. Let's have dinner," Mini said.

"You can go to the dining room. I will come" Neil took his clothes and entered the bathroom.


When they got back to their room after dinner, an idea came to Mini's mind.

"Neil.. we studied all the modules in physics . Have I give you a test paper tomorrow?Mini asked.

"Test paper?.. No. We can study another subject till tomorrow" said Neil.

"Do you have exam fear?" Mini asked."hmm.. little bit"Neil replied.

"Exam fear is one of the reasons for low marks in the exam. We should never fear the exam but love the exam," Mini said.

"Exam is not my mother or girlfriend to love," Neil replied.

Mini laughed at Neil's reply. She said with that smile. "Neil.. you have exam tomorrow. so study well"

"If that's the case, I'm sure I'll have a fever tomorrow," Neil said, "exam fever?"Mini asked raising an eyebrow.

Neil started scrolling on his phone without answering.

"Neil.. probably your exam will next month. We have studied only one subject yet."


Neil interrupted Mini and said"yes..that's why I am saying that we can study the next subject without wasting time by taking exam"


"Neil.. If you want to change your exam fear, you should write test papers" Mini said.

"When I was studying in school and college, I wrote a lot of test papers. Then it didn't change?" Neil said.

"Maybe it's because teachers, friends and family mocked and quarreled because of low marks," Mini replied.


"Hmm.. might be "Neil replied.

Mini said after suddenly thinking about something. "Neil.. I have an idea in my mind to change your exam fear" Mini said with a smile.


"Kya? Do you mean to give me a kiss if I write the exam?" Neil asked while rising his eyebrow. "Yes.. How did you understand?"Mini asked.

"Is it?"Neil asked in excitement.


"No need for over excitement..the exam will be of 30 marks, if you get at least fifteen marks out of it..we can..we can kiss"Mini said.

"okay.. I will write exam and try to get 15 marks"Neil replied.

"Okay.. then study" Mini said with a smile and sat down to study what she had to study.

"Arre.. why is there so much tension? It's not UPSC exam. So calm down"

Mini said looking at Neil who was sweating in front of her."You can say the question" Neil said wiping his face.

"first close your eyes and took a deep breath "Mini said."for what?"Neil asked."it's good to calm your mind. Do what I said"Mini replied.


After doing what she said for three or four times, Neil's mind calmed down.


"okay.. so let's start"said mini and gave him questions.After writing the answers to the questions given by her, he gave the paper to her.

Mini said after evaluating his answer paper.

"Neil you got only 14 and half"Mini said with disappointment.


"14 and half?.. After a long time I get double digit marks in my paper and usually get single digit" said Neil with a smile.

"very funny 🤐.. by the way kiss is cancelled "Mini said.


"Why?You didn't say that I can kiss you if I get 15 marks. 14 and half is count as 15. "Neil said the same ll not consider 14 half marks as 15. I will give you one more chance. Tomorrow I will conduct the exam again with the same question. If you get more than 15 marks for that, you can kiss me" Mini said.

"sach mein devil hai"Neil murmured looking at Mini.


"I heard what you said" said Mini and went to bed.


The next day, after looking at Neil's answer sheet, Mini's face got a cheeky smile.

"Didn't I get fifteen marks today too?" Neil asked seeing the look on Mini's face.

"No.. I mean yes.. you got 21 marks"Mini said.

"what? that's mean I can kiss you?"Neil asked.

"yeah.. but one condition" said Mini pushing Neil who was coming near to her.

"What?"Neil asked.


"Don't bite my lip and tongue. You bit that day when you kissed me, so I couldn't eat spicy food for three days."Mini said.

"okay.. I won't "said Neil and leaned towards her.

"On minute" said Mini again pushing him "Now what?" Neil asked irritatingly.

"Don't roam your hand on by back. I have seen in Hollywood movies when two people are kissing, their hands are caressing behind their back."Mini said.

"Arre devil.. I won't do it"Neil said and leaned towards her.


Mini closed her eyes. Neil pressed his lips to hers.Mini felt butterflies in her stomach when his lips touched her lips.Her arms tightened around his shoulders.Neil's heart begin to pound. Many unknown desires start to rise in his heart. He grabbed her hair tightly.Neil starts to suck her lower lips.After few second mini start to nibble his upper lips.Forgetting Mini's words, Neil bit her lower lip.. Slowly she opened her mouth immediately he pushed his tongue inside her mouth and start to taste her mouth passionately.

Mini also started responding with equal vigour.

After few moments they parted away.

Neil opened his eyes and looked at Mini's face...she still hasn't opened her eyes yet..her cheeks are red.

Neil give a soft kiss on her forehead then her cheeks too.


"Devil kid, how is it..."Neil asked while rubbing his nose with her nose.

Mini slowly opened her eyes and her eyes met his.

"how is it..."Neil again asked.


"That was ama..."Suddenly something came to her mind and she pushed Neil away without finishing what she wanted to say."I mean it was bad.. and you are a bad kisser"mini said.

"What? but seem like you enjoyed it very much"Neil asked suspiciously.


"That... that's because of my magnanimity.No other girl will like this kiss..so I will give you an advice don't go to kiss any other girl they will beat you because they don't like this kiss."

Mini said wiping her lips.

"Achha... now I understood what is your problem I mean why I'm not a good kisser?"Neil said with a wink.

"Why?" asked Mini raising an eyebrow. "It's because of lack of practice. Practice makes man perfect. So come here." Neil grabbed her hand and pulled her close to him.


"Neil.. Choddo mujhe..I need to slee.."Neil captured her lips before she could finish.

again they engage in a passionate kiss.


Calling "Mini..."Neena opened the door and entered to their room and saw their kissing.

Hearing Neena's voice, Mini and Neil moved away with a shock.

"omg!sorry" said Neena and left the room immediately.


"why she is here?"Neil asked panting heavily

"This is her house too," Mini said taking a deep breath. "That's not what I meant, she was at Jiju's house. When did she come here?"Neil asked.


"I don't know "Mini replied.

"Can I come in?"Neena asked from outside the room

"We will come there," said Mini, after wiping her face with her hands, she went out of the room.Neil followed her.

Neena felt embarrassment to face them. Neil's also had that embarrassment but Mini was cool.


"Sorry I don't know that you were..." Neena couldn't finish saying due to embarrassment. "No problem didi...When did didi come? Where is Abhinav Jiju? Mini asked casually.


"Abhi went to my room. It's been 20 minutes since we came" Neena said taking a deep breath.

"Why a suprize entry? Anything important ?" asked Neil.

"yeah.. came to tell a good news" Neena said with a blush."what?Are Neil and I going to be mama ji and mami? Mini asked seeing the blush on Neena's face.

"Yeah..Actually we found out it in this morning. First I told abhi's parents. Then I felt that I should come here and tell them directly."Neena replied.

"Oh my god...congratulations didi" Mini couldn't control her happiness.She gave a tight hug to Neena.Neena also reciprocate the hug.


"Congratulations Neena"Neil said with a smile.

"Neena, the fan in that room is not working" abhinav said coming towards them.

"Its not working.. then we will clean another room for you" Neil said.

"You are an electrical engineering graduate don't you know what the problem is and how to fix it?" Abhinav asked Neil.


"If he should try to fix it the entire circuit will destroy. Teaching him b.tech was like pouring water on a waste tree. My prayer is that our baby will not be like him, abhi"

Neena said teasing Neil. Mini noticed that the smile that had been on Neil's face for so long disappeared.

"Good night... I'm sleepy," Neil said casually and entered the room.

"dekho dekho.. he is trying to escape from here"Neena said with a laugh.

"He was sad to hear what Didi said and that's why he left," Mini said. "I was joking. Doesn't he have the sense to enjoy even a joke?"Neena asked.

"What is funny to the speaker is not funny to the listener. The fan in the room used by chotti nani is working. That room is clean. You can use that room. I am also sleepy. Good night."Mini said and went to the room.


To be continued....


Please forgive me for my grammar mistakes and give your comments

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Mini is devil🤣 🤣 just pure devil . Love her for this 🤣

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