Ishq E Laa #3 (HUM) Azaan Sami , Yumna Zaidi , Sajal Ali - Page 42

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: prohelika

"Azlaan:last me heroine ka ex killer hota hai(zain ko imagine kiya tha mene yaha ) wo try karta hai usko maarne ka but hero last me use save kar leta hai and than "

I mentioned Zain for this 😃

And let me finish your new one, will be back.

Ok now I understood 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabmw


Mene socha Itna lamba update hai kuch choot na jaye so me saath saath comments karti gayi 😊I m glad u like it

Oh yes he is very good in real but mene suna hai real me zain bhi accha hai so plzz usko next update me hero Mat bana dena🤣

Tabahi Wali line to Tumne famous kar dee hai 🤣and aisa koi azka ke liye bole to punch to maarega na Azlan 😳

You will have to do that for the next ones too as they are longer than this...I don't know I always try to squeeze them a little but still long updates...I thoroughly enjoyed your comments😊

Zain kuch bhi ho...mere update mei hero nahi ho sakta....Usne Azlan ko attitude diya tha show mei...so no...

Tabaahi wali line hai hi kamaal ki...mujhe bahut pasand hai...although it is creepy as Waleed ne kaha tha...but still I like it.....Azlan ne sahi maara tha ...Husband hai na ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabmw

Ok so here is part 2 😊


Azka apne room me hai and knock hota hai

Azka:aa jaye

Azlaan: wo aapse kuch baat karni thi

Azka:phir se mera mazaq banaye aaye hai

Azlaan smiled and sit on sofa

Azlaan:aapko to mujhe thank u bolna chahiye tha mene to aapko mom ke saamne safe kiya tha

Azka:…..

Azlaan:accha chode mene aapko ye batana tha ke Aaj Shaam ko humne dinner par Jana hai

Azka:dinner magar kyu?

Azlaan:wo mom Bol rahi thi ke..

Azka:aapko batane ki zarurat nahi hai mujhe pata hai aap mem ki wajah se mujhe waha lekar jaa rahe hai otherwise..kitne baje Jana hai?

Azlaan:8 clock

Azlaan Jane lagta hai hai

Azka:sune

Azlaan ekdum se turn

Azka:Thank you Subah ke liye

Azlaan smiled and go

Next scene

In evening Azlaan come from office

Mom:aa Gaye tum meri bahu kab se tumhra wait kar rahi thi,chalo jao jaldi se Ready ho jao.Mene azka se Bol diya tha usne tumhre kapde nikaal diye hai

Azlaan azka ke room me jata hai

Azlaan:Azka ..

She is not in her room Azlaan apne kapde bed par rakhe hue dekhta hai..wo kapde lekar washroom ki taraf jata hai.wo jaise door ke pas jata hai door open hota hai and azka bahar aati hai.and Azlaan ko dekhkar darr jati hai

Azka:aahhh

Azlaan: I m sorry mujhe nahi idea tha ke aap

Azka:it’s ok

Azlaan wahi door par khada hokar Azka ko dekhe jaa raha hai she were beautiful sky blue outfit with silver light jewellery.

Azka:…..Azlaan saab

Azlaan:……

Azka can’t handle his gaze,suddenly Azlaan ko call aati hai.he back to his senses

Azlaan: I m sorry wo mom ki wajah se mujhe yaha

Azka:mem ne mujhe kaha tha aapke kapde choose karne k liye isliye

Azlaan:mom ne bataya mujhe

Azka:aapko kuch aur pasand hai to aap dekh le

Azlaan:Dekh hi raha hu

Azka:kisko?

Azlaan: jo mujhe pasand hai

Azka:,,,,

Azlaan:I mean ye sahi hai jo aapne choose kiye hai..me fresh hokar aata hu

Azka waiting for Azlaan with his mom

Azlaan:ok mom hum jaa rahe hai aap plzz time par dinner kar lena

Mom:meri bahu ne alredy mujhe dinner karwa diya hai ans medicine bhi de di ab bas tum dono jao Aaj pehli baar meri bahu ko bahar lekar ka rahe ho aaram se aana

Azlaan smiled at azka

Next scene

Both are in car

Azlaan:azka aapko khane me kya pasand hai?

Azka turn and see him

Azlaan:wo I mean to say aapko jo pasand hai waise kisi jagah chalte hai

Azka:Azlaan saab dekhe aapko ye sab kuch karne ki zarurat nahi hai,me janti hu ke aapko yaha mere saath aana aur aise Bilkul pasand nahi hai so plz hum thodi der baad chale jayege.

Azlaan:aur dinner?

Azka:aap mere saath dinner kaise kar sakte hai?

Azlaan:kyu nahi kar sakta?

Azka:haisiyat nahi hai meri aapke saath aisi kisi jagah Jane ki.na hi humara class milta hai na hi status aur na hi pasand.

Azlaan:azka plz aap mujhe sharminda kar rahi hai.me sach me aapke saath apni khushi se jaa raha hu mom ki wajah se nahi aur waise bhi mujhe bahot bukh lagi hai plzz me ghar wapas nahi jaa sakta atlist Aaj aapko mujhe bardaast karna hoga

Azka:jaise aap mujhe kar rahe hai apne ghar me.

Azlaan:mera record day one se sahi nahi aapki nazei me mujhe nahi pata aap kab mujh par trust karne lagegi but me koshish karta rahuga ke meri kisi baat se ya harqat se aapki dil Azaari na ho.

Azka don’t say anything and just turn her face to window..Azlaan just smiled to himself and drive

Azlaan ek sea side restaurant par azka ko lekar aata hai.

In the restaurant

Azlaan:yaha Pakistani food ,Chinese continental sab milta hai so aapko jo dil kare order kar le

Dono apne apne menu card padhte hai.waiter come

Waiter:good evening mem and sir ur order plz

Azlaan:azka aap apna order de me ek call kar ke aata hu.

Azka:ek chicken boneless handi,chicken kabab aur rogni naan.

Waiter:anything else mem?

Azka: jee nahi shukriya

Azlaan wapas aata hai

Azlaan:aapne order kar diya apna?

Waiter:yes sir mem ka order ho Gaya

Azlaan:ok than give me chicken kabab with rogni naan and chicken boneless handi.

Waiter smile and wo azka ki side dekhta hai,azka also very shocked

Azlan:what happened?

Waiter:nothing sir mem ne bhi same order kiya thasmiley1aap dono ki choices same hai.

Azka:…..

Both are see each other Azlaan smiles but azka just ignore him.

Azlaan:abhi kuch der pehle aap bol rahi thi hum dono me kuch bhi common nahi hai.dekhe ek cheez to common hai na.

Azka:…

Azlaan:azka kya aap purani sab baato ke liye mujhe maaf nahi kar sakti..kya hum dost nahi ban sakte.I am sorry for everything.aur plz ye jo kuch bhi me bol raha hu wo mera apna opinion hai mom ki khaatir kuch nahi.

Azka:dosti? Azlaan saab aap to mujhpar trust bhi nahi karte phir dosti kaise?

Azlaan:aur agar me kahu ke me karne laga hu

Azka shocked and little bit smile to him

Food came and they start to eat

Next scene

After dinner Both are walking on a beach

Azlaan:yaha ki chicken handi mujhe bahot pasand hai it’s one of my favourite dish of this place

Azka kuch nahi bolti just Azlaan ki side dekhti hai for sec and head hilati hai.Azlaan feel her discomfort ,he think something and again ask

Azlaan:aapka favourite restaurant kaunsa hai?

Azka(lightly smiled) :me kabhi bahar khana khane nahi gayi.

Azlaan:kyu?

Azka:mere abba mujhe Bilkul bhi yaad nahi hai,bahot chote the hum jab wo is dunia se chale Gaye,phir bhai ke sir par hum sab ka bojh aa gaya,hum mulaazimo ke naseeb me aise restaurant nahi the Azlaan saab.Hume do waqt ka khana naseeb ho jaye hum usi me khush ho jate the.mujhe apni Gali ke nukkad ke wo 50 rs wale bandh kabab me hi maza aa jaya karta tha.sultan bhai har itwaar ko mere liye lekar aate the.phir ek din wo bhi chale Gaye.

Azlaan:I m really sorry azka me samjh sakta hu

Azka:NAHI. aap nahi samjh sakte Azlaan saab,na aap tab samjhe the na ab..hum teen aourte the ghar me aur ek bacchi ,hum gareeb log the aur humare paas Aaj bhi jo dolat hai wo humari izzat hai.Hume ye paisa ye aisho aaram ki chahat nahi hai bas izzat chahiye.

Azlaan don’t say anything just look at azka

Azka:I m sorry

AZlaan:Sorry kyu?

Azka:mene jo bola uske liye

Azlaan:but aapne kuch galat to nahi bola na

Azka ye sunkar Azlaan ki side dekhti hai with shocked

Azlaan:azka hum dono ke beach past me jo kuch bhi hua us me me manta hu ke me galat tha.mene aapke saath jis tarah behave kiya mujhe nahi karna chahiye tha.uske liye me zindagi bhar aapko sorry bolne ke liye ready hu

Azka just stares him

Azlaan:kisi apne ko khona ye bat ka mujhe tab tak idea nahi tha jab tak mene shanaya ko nahi khoya.ha me nahi samajh saka aap sabko jab aap ne court me gawaahi dene se inqaar kar diya but us waqt mujhe aur kuch sochna samjhna nahi tha mujhe shanaya aur apne bacche ke murdered ko saza dilwani thi.

Azka stop

Azka:baccha??

Azlaan:jee shanaya tab pregnant thi.Aur uske mujhe wo batane se pehle hi wo aur humara baccha is dunia se chale Gaye.me jab bhi ye baat sochta hu to lagta hai dunia me mujhse jayada bad naseeb koi nahi hai.me shanaya ko apne bacche ko protect nahi kar saka.

Azka cant say anything

Azlaan:lekin ab mujhe sabar aa Gaya hai,sayad Shanaya aur mera saath Itna hi tha.Allah ne use meri zindagi me bhejha mere liye yahi bahot hai.ab meri zindagi me yahi maqsad hai ke me wo sab kaam karu jo shanaya chahti thi.

Azlaan azka ki side dekhta hai jo ke Azlaan ki baate sunkar ro rahi hai.

Azka:shanaya bibi aur aapka baccha dono jaha bhi hai Allah ke bahot kareeb hai.Aur wo aapko dekhkar khush hogi Inshaallah

Azlaan:Inshaallah

Both are again start walking and Azlaan feels ke azka ko sardi lag rahi hai.he stop and turn to azka

And wo use apni shawl pehnata hai.both are seeing each other with teary eyes and little bit smiles

Loved it❤️

Azlan usko dekhta reh gaya ..attract toh ho raha hai...usko pasand karta hai...

Poor Azka...Usko lagta hai ki Azlan usko mom ki khatir laya hai...but Husband toh time spend karna chahta hai❤️❤️

I love how they bonded emotionally...trying to understand each other's thoughts and emotions..

Azlan repenting for their past, befriending her...trying to make her comfortable...so good ...

Azlan ne shawl dedi apni like a true hero❤️

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabmw

Are me kyu juth bolugi

Aur ye kya heart break wala emoji use kiya Tumne 😆tum meri friend ho ke mere husband ki 🤣sure tum unko team me ho lol

Main kisi ki team mein tab hoon na jab main shock se nikloon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Mazaa aagya .. felt like am watching episode…

Azka and Azlaan beautiful interaction ..

Azka jealousy track very much wanted to see this in the show ..never mind ..

It was just awesome …

Both share the bed .. MIL again she is a doll …

Azlaan regretting thoughts about Azka at the end his smile looking at her not to be missed …knowing that she’s mine ..

Tum bahate paani seho har

shakl mein dhal jaate ho mai reth sahoon

mujhse kacche ghar bhi nahi banthe …


Azlaan missing her and his comfort zone with her with pranks … was treat for the eyes …. batao na miss kiya mujhe....kyunki main toh bahut Miss kar raha hu tumhe.. On the phone convo when bhabhi was listening ...😉

Azlaan and his naughty pranks …

The awkward silence between them on the child topic …

Kanwal Azlaan … nice refreshment in the story … knowing Azka and wanting to know about Azlaan .. is just awesome …

Lehja shikayat ka tha

magar saari mehfil samaj gai

mamla mohabbat ka hai …

Good going .. Jealousy track and Azlaan soo cute ….🤣

By now Bhabhi , mom Waleed knows the pyaar hai wala funda bas

Ye dono paglaits are soo slow …

Zainab and Azka dono ki jealousy wala track …Uff Azlaan too much to Handle …

Abid and the roller coaster ride wasone hell of a ride ..

Parwa toh hai … Azlaan .. possessive and protective for wife …

Ab toh bahut kuch hai .. and phasla bhi tai karna hai … 😃

Beautiful write up … Still keeping the zest of the OS ….

maintaining the fine emotions between the characters and their purpose ..

Azlaan confession and his romantic moves….Ufff …. Was hotttieeeeeeee

He's Jealous for Zain moment again …😳

Uff how one earth Akza gonna handle his madness …. 🤣


Eagerly waiting for the upcoming....❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful ...writeup ...

The silent process of Azlaan falling in love with his Doc wife .... is so damn gorgeous😃

Both Part 1 and 2 .. are just lovely ... ❤️

I wished either U or Kamleshmeha could write FF for reception part with nok joks ....Him taking Azka for shopping .. jewelleries clothing .. a bit possessive for wife...

Since their wedding was quite simple ... 😉 we weren't invited ... 🤔 😲


Eagerly waiting for next part ....😃

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: shridharg

Mazaa aagya .. felt like am watching episode…

Azka and Azlaan beautiful interaction ..

Azka jealousy track very much wanted to see this in the show ..never mind ..

It was just awesome …

Both share the bed .. MIL again she is a doll …

Azlaan regretting thoughts about Azka at the end his smile looking at her not to be missed …knowing that she’s mine ..

Tum bahate paani seho har

shakl mein dhal jaate ho mai reth sahoon

mujhse kacche ghar bhi nahi banthe …


Azlaan missing her and his comfort zone with her with pranks … was treat for the eyes …. batao na miss kiya mujhe....kyunki main toh bahut Miss kar raha hu tumhe.. On the phone convo when bhabhi was listening ...😉

Azlaan and his naughty pranks …

The awkward silence between them on the child topic …

Kanwal Azlaan … nice refreshment in the story … knowing Azka and wanting to know about Azlaan .. is just awesome …

Lehja shikayat ka tha

magar saari mehfil samaj gai

mamla mohabbat ka hai …

Good going .. Jealousy track and Azlaan soo cute ….🤣

By now Bhabhi , mom Waleed knows the pyaar hai wala funda bas

Ye dono paglaits are soo slow …

Zainab and Azka dono ki jealousy wala track …Uff Azlaan too much to Handle …

Abid and the roller coaster ride wasone hell of a ride ..

Parwa toh hai … Azlaan .. possessive and protective for wife …

Ab toh bahut kuch hai .. and phasla bhi tai karna hai … 😃

Beautiful write up … Still keeping the zest of the OS ….

maintaining the fine emotions between the characters and their purpose ..

Azlaan confession and his romantic moves….Ufff …. Was hotttieeeeeeee

He's Jealous for Zain moment again …😳

Uff how one earth Akza gonna handle his madness …. 🤣


Eagerly waiting for the upcoming....❤️

Thank you very much for the lovely comment❤️

You have just given the gist of the entire FF..

Trying to balance with their emotions...still I would say Azlan is way faster than Azka...He understood his feelings before Azka...Azka is like what is going on?...but she is right. They have complicated relationship earlier...contract issue... Azlan's former hatred and all that...Azlan is jealous and Azka also gets zealous even when she does not have that feelings for Azlan...But still she is his wife...both are very cute..

You are a shayar...that's nice..

Azlan is very much in action now...he is gonna do much more than just being romantic...

It is very good that they communicate...well mostly Azlan initiates...otherwise toh aur bhi misunderstandings hoti....Azka will handle the situation...Azlan is just being slightly insecure...

Thank you for your review again😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kamleshmehra

Thank you very much for the lovely comment❤️

You have just given the gist of the entire FF..

Trying to balance with their emotions...still I would say Azlan is way faster than Azka...He understood his feelings before Azka...Azka is like what is going on?...but she is right. They have complicated relationship earlier...contract issue... Azlan's former hatred and all that...Azlan is jealous and Azka also gets zealous even when she does not have that feelings for Azlan...But still she is his wife...both are very cute..

You are a shayar...that's nice..

Azlan is very much in action now...he is gonna do much more than just being romantic...

It is very good that they communicate...well mostly Azlan initiates...otherwise toh aur bhi misunderstandings hoti....Azka will handle the situation...Azlan is just being slightly insecure...

Thank you for your review again😊

Azlaan turned out to be full of fun ... Dono ko ek dusron ki zarurat hai ....

Once Azka joins the hospital ...it's gonna be fun ...

I would like to see some issues with both the professional level at the same time or diff level ..How they deal with it .. ? ..

And no I am not Shayar ... I keep saving the articles poems shayari anything I go through them in free time ... so in dono ki status keliye kuch yaad aagaya .. 😃

Eagerly waiting for your next one ... No pressure take ur own time ... 😉

Aur kanjusi math karna ek do paragraphs extra daal dena ...😳

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabmw

Part 4

Dono ghar aate hai and apne apne rooms me Jane lagte hai.

Azka:sune

Azlaan: jee

Azka:dinner ke liye thank you,Aur

Azlaan:Aur?

Azka:me kal se hospital join karna chahti hu

Azlaan:so?

Azka:aapko koi itraaz to nahi hai na?

Azlaan smiled

Azlaan:Azka I m not ur boss ,aapko kuch bhi karne ke liye mujhse puchne ki zarurat nahi hai.

Azka :Mene aapko pehle bhi kaha tha ke jab tak me yaha aapke ghar me hu me paabandh hu ke me jo bhi karu wo aapko pata ho.

Azlaan:aur me bhi aapko pehle Bol chuka hu ke aap ko meri ijazat ki zarurat nahi hai kuch bhi karne ke liye,aur ye ghar aapka bhi hai.

Azka:…..

Azlaan:me sach keh raha hu !! aap mere nikaah me hai azka ,as a law or as a shariat ye ghar par aapka pura HAQ hai.

Azlaan apne room me Jane lagta hai and azka usko stairs se Dekh rahi hai.and suddenly Azlaan turned

Azlaan:azka thank you mere saath dinner par chalne ke liye khuda hafiz

Azka:khuda hafiz

Next scene

Azka thinking about Azlaan

Azka (POV)

kitni ajeeb hai na ye zindagi har mode par alag jo cheez hum sochte hai hota usse Bilkul alag hai,mene kabhi nahi socha tha ke ek din zindagi mujhe aise Azlaan saab ke saamne laa kar khada kar degi jis insaan ke naam se mujhe chid thi Aaj uska naam mere naam ke saath jud gaya hai.

Jis insaan ke saath me do min nahi khadi reh sakti Aaj Allah ki raza se usi ke ghar me reh rahi hu.zindagi sach me ajeeb hai.

Aur is zindagi se bhi jayada jo ajeeb hai wo hai Azlaan saab mene unki ye side agar na dekhi hoti to me kabhi yaqeen nahi karti ke wo aise bhi ho sakte the.wo shakhs jo muje insaan bhi nahi samjhta tha Aaj meri fiqar kar raha tha mujh se maafi ki talab kar raha tha.

Shanaya ji ke saath unhone apna baccha bhi khoya tha,kya wo ye sab deserve karte the??agar shanaya ji us din waha nahi jati to Aaj wo aur Azlaan saab ek saath apne bacche ke saath khush hote.unki humare liye wo nafrat wo ilzaam galat to nahi the ,agar wo chahte to mujhe us din bata sakte the ke mere medical ki fee wo pay kar rahe hai par unhone kyu nahi bataya.

Azka think for some minutes and than wo room se bahar aati hai.

Next scene

Knock

Azlaan:aa jaye

Azka again knock and this time Azlaan open the door

Azlaan:Azka aap yaha,aapko kuch chahiye tha?

Azka:aapse ek sawaal tha.

Azlaan:come ..aap andar aa jaye pehle

Azka room me aati hai and Azlaan use Bethne ko kehta hai bed par but wo chair ki taraf jakar bethti hai.

Azlaan:jee ab bole kya puchna tha aapne?

Azka:aapne Hume kabhi kyu nahi bataya ke aap meri medical ki fee de rahe hai.

Azlaan:us se kya hona tha?

Azka:aap Humare ghar aaye the gawaahi ke liye bolne aap us time ye bata sakte the phir aapne kyu nahi bataya?

Azlaan:me juth nahi kahuga aapse,aapke college aane ke baad mere mind me ye baat aayi thi phir shanaya ki baat yaad aa gayi wo hamesha kahti thi ke neki ko neki samjh kar karni chahiye.

Azka:agr me us din office nahi aati aapke to aap mujhe kabhi nahi batate ke aap the jisne meri fee dee thi?

Azlaan:haa sayad aapko kabhi pata nahi chalta

Azka kuch nahi bolti khamosh rahti hai

Azlaan:me aapse ek sawaal karu?

Azka:…

Azlaan:agar us waqt me aapko bata deta to aap kya karti?

Azka:me medical nahi karti chod deti apni padhayi.

Azlaan:kyu?

Azka:kyu ke hum gawaahi nahi de sakte the aur …aur..aapse kisi bhi tarah ki madad nahi le sakte the

Azlaan:aur wo kyu?

Azka:wo ..isliye ke

Azka kuch nahi bolti Azlaan use dekhta rehta hai and ek sad si smile karta hai

Azlaan:aapko kuch bolne ki zarurat nahi hai me janta hu aap mujhe pasand nahi karti aur isliye aap kabhi bhi mujhse koi help nahi leti.

Azka:nahi…aahh …aisi koi baat

Azlaan:plz don’t ..mujhe pata hai me kaisa tha,.mene shanaya ki neki ko zaaya kar diya ,aapko us din office me sabke saamne humiliate kar ke.aapko ye jata kar ke mene aap par ehsaan kiya hai,jab ke ye sabkuch shanaya ne kiya tha.Aur aap mere us ehsaan ka badla utaar ne ke liye ye contract ke liye maan gayi.

Azka just looking at Azlaan

Azlaan:aapke saath mene bahot ziyatti ki hai azka aur ye baat ka ehsaas mujhe tab hua jab aapki bhabhi se meri hospital me mulaqat hui.she is right aap masoom thi aur mene aapke saath

Azlaan azka ki side nahi dekhta and turn ho jata hai

Azka:kuch nahi kiya aapne.

Azlaan turn his face to her

Azka:mene jo kiya apni marzi se kiya aapne mujhe force nahi kiya tha.

Azka:har insaan me burai ke saath acchayi zarur hoti hai.

Azlan:mujh me to koi nahi hai aur na thi

Azka:ye aapka khayaal hai.mere khayaal me aapke andar tab bhi acchayi thi.

Azlaan smile

Azlaan:mujhe bura na lage isliye ye sab Bol rahi hai na?

Azka:nahi Bilkul bhi nahi,me juth nahi Bol rahi,me aapko jayada to nahi janti par ha jitni baar aapse mulaqat hui hai mene aapko har baar alag paya hai.

Azlaan:….

Azka:aapse bina mile me bahot mutasir thi aapko lekar jitna kuch suna tha ke aap aise hai waise hai bade aadmi hai.par jab aap aaye aur aapne mujhe daata me bahot royi mujhe bura laga.aapse khof aane lag Gaya tha mujhe,Aur usi khof ki wajah se wajah se mene us din wo tuta hua perfume chupaya tha.me darr gayi thi aapse.

Azlaan:azka sometimes me sochta hu aap mujhse kitni nafarat karti hogi na

Azka:nafarat to aap bhi mujhse karte the

Azlaan:sharminda kar rahi ho mujhe

Azka:Bilkul nahi!! me to aapko ye bata rahi hu ke us nafarat ke bawajud aap mujhe us din beach raste me chodkar nahi Gaye..mere ghar tak chodne aaye the.Aur phir meri book bhi wapas karne aaye.mujhse nafarat ke bawajud aapko meri parwaah meri fiqar thi.Aur rahi baat is contract ki to mene apni marzi se ye kiya hai aapne mere saath koi zor zabardasti nahi ki.Azlaan saab I trust u.

Azlaan:Azka me bahot bura hu me aapka ye trust deserve nahi karta

Azka:Acche bure ka Faisala karne Wali Allah ki zaat hai.agar aap bure hote to kabhi bhi meri fee nahi dete par aapne apni nafarat ko peeche kar ke shanaya ji ki khawaish ko aage rakha!!

Azlan:me aapke trust ke qabil nahi hu

Azka:Agar aap par trust nahi karti to me Aaj raat ke is time me aapke bedroom me aapke saath nahi bethi hoti, aapki nazro me mujhe hamesha gussa,ilzaam nazar aaya hai par badniyati kabhi nazar nahi aayi.mujhe bas yahi puchna tha ke aapne mujhe kyu nahi bataya kabhi ke aapne meri fee dee thi aur uska jawaab dekar aapne mujhe ek aur wajah de di hai aapko trust karne ki.

Azka khadi hoti hai aur Jane lagti hai but wo rukti hai aur turn hoti hai.

Azka:me bed par isliye nahi bethi kyu ke ye meri jagah nahi hai..ye jagah shanaya ji ki thi aur hamesha unki rahegi.aapne mujhe izzat dee meri liye yahi sabkuch hai.

Allah hafiz

Azka chali jati hai and Azlaan door bandh karta hai aur jaha azka bethi hui thi waha dekhkar muskurane lag jata hai.

Azlaan(POV)

Ek me tha jo ke hamesha se azka ko bura samjhta tha aur ek ye hai mere itne bure salook ke bawajud mujhe meri acchayi Gina kar chali gayi.

Azlaan recalled all the moments with azka and after sometimes he fell asleep


Next morning

Azka set the breakfast table

Azka:Asalam o alikum Aunty,aap yaha kyu aa gayi me aapka naashta kamre me laa rahi thi

Mom:Walekum Assalam beta ,Bas Aaj Mera dil kar raha tha apne baccho ke saath nashta karne ka.

Azka:chale aap Bethe me bas do minute me aapka nashta lati hu.

Azka kitchen me jati hai and azlaan dining table par aata hai

Azlaan:Asalam o alikum Mom kaisi hai aap?

Mom:walekum Asalam beta Bilkul thik.

Azlaan apni mom se baat kar raha hai Azka sitwat ke liye nashta laati hai.Azlaan opposite side par betha hai so azka use nahi dekhti

Azka:Aunty chale aap jaldi jaldi nashta kar le phir aapne medicine bhi leni hai.

Mom:thank you beta kitna dyaan rakhti ho tum mera.

Azka:aap bhi to mujhe Itna pyaar karti hai.

Azlaan Yesab dekhkar khush hota hai.Azka sitwat ke saath Wali chair par bethti hai and Uska dyaan saamne Wali chair par jata hai jaha Azlaan betha hua hai

Azlaan:asalam o alikum

Azka:sorry..walekum assalam aap kab aaye?

Azlaan:jab aap mom ke saath busy thi.

Azka: ohh

Mom:beta tum Aaj se join kar rahi ho?

Azka: jee aunty

Mom:chalo ye to acchi baat hai.

Azlaan:Azka aap ready ho jao me aapko hospital drop kar duga

Azka:jee bahot shukriya par me chali jaugi..Aap late ho jayege meri wajah se.

Azlaan:being the gentleman ye mera farz hai ke me aapko office drop karu kyu mom?

Azlaan smile karta hai and juice pee raha hai and Azka tea pot se tea daal rahi hai and Azlaan ko dekhkar smile karti hai ,sitwat dono ko dekhkar khush hoti hai.

Next scene

Azlaan drop her at hospital

Azka:Bahot shukriya aapka

Azlaan:aapka off time kab hai?

Azka:waise to 6 pm hai but agar patient jayada ho to time lag jata hai.don’t worry I can manage aur ha sham ko mene Amma ki taraf Jana hai kuch der ke liye

Azlaan:ok than bye

Azka:Allah hafiz

In the evening

Azka:bhabhi aapne bahot accha kiya aap bhi aa gayi

Kanwal:Kaise nahi aati

Azka:accha bataye khalid bhai kaise hai?

Kanwal:sab acche hai tu bata begam sahiba kaisi hai?

Azka:kafi behtar hai

Kanwal:aur azlan saab unka rawwaiya sahi hai na tere saath

Azka: jee bhabhi wo bahot badal Gaye hai.aapko pata hai kal wo mujhe dinner par le Gaye

Kanwal:Azka Dekh me tujh par ya unpar shaq nahi kar rahi par baccha ye sahi nahi hai,Tumne kuch dino me alag ho Jana hai Tera unke saath yu betaqaluf hona accha nahi hai.

Azka: kya ho Gaya jao bhabhi..aisa kuch nahi hai aap janti hai na me aur wo bas unki mom ki wajah se saath hai.jaise hi wo thik ho jayegi hum alag ho jayege

Kanwal:par azka ye jo rishtey hote hai na inme kab kareeb aa jate hai pata nahi chalta..me nahi chahti tujhe koi gam mile

Azka:uff bhabhi kya aap bhi me aur azlan sab aap bhi na ..meri taraf se aisa kuch nahi hai aur wo to shanaya ji se mohabbat karte hai.chale chode Aur plz mere liye garam garam chai bana de

After some days AZka and azlan ke beach acchi friendship hoti jaa rahi hai.

Azka hospital se nikalti hai and taxi me bethti hai,Texi signal par rukti hai and suddenly azka heard some horns.she turn and see Azlaan.Both are smile to each others

Azlaan bina kuch bole use ishaara karta hai ke wo texi chodkar car me aa jaye.Azka is like no it’s ok!!

Azlaan now ghooring her and again he signal her to come.Azka take a deep breath and again said no.Azlaan window neache kar ke driver ko paise deta hai and said

Azlaan:bhaisaab aap ye le apna karaya aur inko utaare gaadi se

Taxi:Oh bhai saab ye kya khule aam ladki ko ched rahe hai.

Azlaan:kyaaa?? Aap hosh me to hai.

Azka:smiled

Taxi:jao bhai warna me sabko bula luga

Azlaan:aapki information ke liye ye mere saath hai me janta hu inko.

Taxi:bibi jee kya aap janti hai inko?

Azka: jee bhai

Azlaan:look I told u

Azka gaadi se utarti hai aur Azlaan ki car me bethne lagti hai

Taxi:Kaisa zamana aa Gaya hai aajkal ki ladkiyo me sharam hi nahi rahi.khule aam ishq ladaa rahe hai.

Azka and Azlaan heard this,Azka Avoiding eye contact with him.

Azlaan:bhaisaab nikaah kiya hai mene inke saath Biwi hai meri aur me inka shohar.ab hum ishq ladaye ya date par jaye aapko koi Masla nahi hona chahiye

Azka turn to Azlaan and she feel so good to here this.Azlaan start the car.

Azlaan:kamaal ke log hai dunia me ,ab me is Umar me ishq ladauga.wo bhi…

Azka:wo bhi mujh se.

Azlan:are nahi me bol raha tha wo bhi road par.

Azka:haa par mera Matlab tha ishq karne ke liye AAPKO me hi milugi kya?

Azka looking in front and Azlaan looking at her..he think something and said

Azlaan:kyu !! aapse main ishq nahi kar sakta?

Azka:Azlaan saab ishq ye to bahot powerful word hai ,mujhe to koi accha bhi kahe to aap kahoge uska taste bahot bura hai.

Azlaan kuch nahi bolta and drive karne lag jata hai.after sometimes Azlaan car rokta hai

Azlaan:mene mom ke liye kuch medicine leni thi aap wait kare me aata hu

Azka gaadi me hai and suddenly uski window par knock hota hai.

Azka:aap …??

Azka dekhti hai ke wo insaan aur koi nahi Azlaan ka wo friend waleed hai

Azka:Azlaan saab medical store tak Gaye hai aaye hi hoge

Waleed:wo mene Dekh liya par aap mujhe ye bataye aap yaha unki gadi me kya kar rahi hai?

Azka: hum ghar jaa rahe hai?

Waleed:wow Itna bada badlaav ..Azlaan kab se charity karne lag Gaya.lagta hai shanaya ke baad bahot jayada akela ho Gaya hai..par phir bhi aap ke saath??

Azka: kya matlab?

Waleed:Matlab ye ke Badi fast ho aap , us din to bahot masoom lag rahi thi.Aur Aaj Usi ke saath ghum rahi ho.

Azka kuch nahi bolti and mirror upar kar leti hai..Azlaan waha aata hai and waleed ko dekhta hai.

Waleed:kaisa hai yaar?

Waleed hug him and Azlaan azka ko dekhta hai jo ke ro rahi hai

Azlaan:kya hua?

Waleed:kuch nahi me to bas baat kar raha tha,tu bata kaisi chal rahi hai life? Dekhne me to bahot acchi lag rahi hai

Azlaan:bakwas bandh karo,kya kaha Tumne azka se?

Waleed:relax yaar chill kar me kisi ko nahi batauga..waise ek baat to tujhe manni padegi Mera taste sach me accha tha.ye bacchi to Badi hokar Tabahi ho gayi hai.

Azlaan punch him

Azlaan:ab agar Tumne ek aur lafz bola to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga

Azka ye sab dekhti hai aur gaadi we bahar aakar Azlaan ko awaaz deti hai.

Waleed:Azlaan tu is ladki ke liye mujh par haath utha raha hai?

Azlaan hold her hand

Azlaan:ye ladki meri biwi hai,Teri himmat kaise hui iske saath battmizi karne ki?Kaash ke mene us din apni ego me na aakar tujhe tab hi ek tappad maar diya hota.Azka meri izzat hai aur uske bare me ek lafz bhi galat bola to Jaan se maar duga.

Azlaan azka ko lekar chala jata hai

In the car

Azka silently cry and Azlaan thinking about waleed’s words,suddenly he break the car

Azlaan:AZka plz aap Rona bandh kare.mujhe bataye kya bakwaas ki usne aapke saath?

Azka….

Azlaan hold her face and turn to him

Azlaan:Azka plzz batao mujhe

Azka:wo …samajh raha tha ke …me aur aap,,,Matlab …hhumara Galat realtion

Azka rone lag jati hai..Azlaan ko bahot gussa aata hai.wo azka ko dekhta hai

Azlaan:aapne kyu nahi bataya usko ke mera aapka kya rishta hai?

Azka:….

Azlan:aapne use kyu nahi bataya azka?

Azka:mujhe laga aapko accha nahi lagega,kyu ke us din aapne usko..

Azlan ko bahot bura feel hota hai azka ko aise dekhkar

Azlaan:azka muje maaf kar do Meri galati thi jo mene pehle aapke liye stand nahi liya..par ab nahi plz Rona bandh kare soch uski ghathiya hai aap kyu to rahi hai.

Azka just stare at him Azlan Azka ke aasoo saaf karta hai and Azlaan kiss her forehead

Azlaan:relax kuch nahi hua aap Rona bandh kare warna me gaadi ghuma raha hu aur usko phir se

Azka:nahi koi zarurat nahi hai.

Azlaan: to phir aap Rona bandh kare.

Azlaan give her his handkerchief

Azlaan:aapko pani chahiye?

Azka:nahi

Azlaan:azka me bahot sharminda hu..aap plz peechli baato ke liye mujhe maaf kar de.me na samjh tha jo aapko samjh nahi saka tha tab.

Azka:…,

Azlaan:aap thik hai should I start the car

Azka haa bolti hai and Azlaan start the car

Dono ghar aaye hai and azka bina kuch bole apne room me chali jati hai,Azlaan usko rokta nahi hai aur wo bhi apne room me aa jata hai

Azlaan (to him self)

Me phir se azka ke gam ki wajah ban Gaya..kitni baar meri wajah se wo se wo sharminda hogi..pehle me use beizzat karta tha aur Aaj bhi me hi wajah tha.waleed ko to me nahi choduga uski himmat kaise hui wo sab bakwas karne ki.

Azlaan go to the mirror and see him self

Azlan:he remembered how azka cry and how he console her..suddenly he started thinking how he kissed her,he closed his eyes and sit on the chair

Azka’s room

Azka room me aakar bed par Beth jati hai and jo kuch bhi hua wo sochne lag jati hai.Azlaan ka bola hua ek ek word usko sunai de raha hai

How he angry on him,how he protect her,how he hold her hand and how he kissed her

Azka mirror ke pas jati hai and apne forehead ko touch karti hai.

Azka think of her self:

Azlaan saab ne Aaj jo kuch bhi kaha kya wo sach me wo sab baate dil se Bol rahe the..meri izzat meri khushi mere Aasoo kya in sab se unko sach me faraq padta hai.ya phir ye sab isliye tha kyu ke dunia ki nazro me main unki biwi hu.

Par unke dost ko to nahi pata tha na,,na hi us texi wale ko ,Azlaan saab chahte to khamosh reh sakte the par nahi unhone dono ke saamne mujhe apni biwi kaha mujhe apni izzat banaya..aur wo ..wo kya tha ??

Azka Azlaan ki kiss ko yaad karti hai.

Azka tu bhi kya soch rahi hai? Wo shanaya ji ko pyaar karte hai,wo unka pyaar nahi mere liye unki izzat thi.console kar rahe the mujhe.

Azka smiled and go to washroom for change

Next scene

Azlan apni mom ke room me aata hai and dekhta hai azka unke saath hai

Azlaan:kaisi ho mom?

Mom:Allah ka shukar mere bacche.aao betho

Azlaan:aapne dinner kiya?

Mom:nahi bas ab karne lagi hu..me thak gayi hu ab ye sab kha kar

Azka:aunty bas ek aur week phir aap jo dil kare wo khana

Azlaan:yes mom hum bahar chalega kahi ,aapke favourite restaurant par.

Mom:inshaallah beta kyu nahi.,azka beta jao tum dono bhi dinner kar lo

Azka: jee aunty ,bas aapka dinner aa jaye phir hum bhi kar lete hai

Azlaan: azka me study me hu,mom dinner kar le to mujhe bata dena ok

Azka:jee

Next scene

Azka knock on door

Azlaan: mom ne dinner kar liya?

Azka:Jee bas abhi unhi ke pas se aa rahi hu,chale aaye aap bhi dinner kar le.

Azlaan:azka actually mujhe tumhe kahi lekar Jana hai?

Azka:abhi is waqt?

Azlaan:haa kyu?

Azka:nahi kuch nahi par hum jaa kaha rahe hai?

Azlan:its a surprise

Both are in car

Azka:ye to mere ghar ka raasta hai? Amma thik hai na?

Azlaan: don’t worry she is completely alright

Azka:phir hum is waqt waha kyu ja rahe hai?

Azlan:kisne kaha hum waha jaa rahe hai?

Azka: to phir?

Azlan stop the car

Azlaan:hum yaha ye khane aaye hai

Azka dekhti hai ke azlan use uske favourite Bandh kabab ki shop par laya hai

Azka with smile: aapko is shop ka kaise pata?

Azlan:meri apni source hai madam

Azka: well well aap to bade chupe rustam nikle

Azlan:anything for u,chalo ab batao yaha order kaise karte hai mujhe koi idea nahi hai

Azka hasne lag jati hai

Azka: me order kar deti hu aap ruke

After sometime

Old man came with bandh kabab

Azka unse kabab leti hai and usko kuch paise deti hai.Wo baccha bahot khush hota hai and azka ko duaa dene lag jata hai

Azka:Allah aapko mohtaazi se bachaye

Azlan ye sab dekhta hai

Azka: kitni jaldi hum neki Kama sakte hai na..sirf thode se paise dene par unhone mujhe kitne karodo ki duaa de di.

Azlan:sach me ,ek waqt tha jab me ye sab ko nahi manta tha ,shanaya ka ye sab karna mujhe weird lagta tha.

Azka:aapko pata hai hum paise dekar inse umeed rakhte hai ke ye humare liye duaa kare jab ke sach ye hai ke jisko kheraat sadqa do use saath duaa bhi do..kyu ke duaa ki use hum se jayada zarurat hai.

Azlan azka ki ye baat se bahot impressed hota hai.

Azka:azlan sab aap bhi khana pasand karege?

Azlan:of course tumhe kya lagta hai mene Aaj roza rakhna hai

Azka:nahi aapka pata nahi hai na ..aap aisi jagah jate nahi hai na.

Azlan:ha but now I want to try this.

Azlan bite leta hai

Azlan:wow its taste yummy ,pata hai shanaya ko bhi aisi jagaho par khana bahot pasand tha.

Azka:aap unke saath aate the yaha?

Azlan:not here shanaya ko chaat golgappe ye sab pasand the so wo zabardasti mujhe lekar aati thi.

Both are eating and Azlan Azka ke face par finger rakhta hai.AZka use dekhne lag jati hai

Azlan:face par ketchup laga hua tha.

Azka:ohh Thank you

Dono ekdusre ko dekhkar smile karte hai Azlan car start karta hai and waha se chale jate hai but somebody watching them.none other than ABID 😉


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Part 4

Dono ghar aate hai and apne apne rooms me Jane lagte hai.

Azka:sune

Azlaan: jee

Azka:dinner ke liye thank you,Aur

Azlaan:Aur?

Azka:me kal se hospital join karna chahti hu

Azlaan:so?

Azka:aapko koi itraaz to nahi hai na?

Azlaan smiled

Azlaan:Azka I m not ur boss ,aapko kuch bhi karne ke liye mujhse puchne ki zarurat nahi hai.

Azka :Mene aapko pehle bhi kaha tha ke jab tak me yaha aapke ghar me hu me paabandh hu ke me jo bhi karu wo aapko pata ho.

Azlaan:aur me bhi aapko pehle Bol chuka hu ke aap ko meri ijazat ki zarurat nahi hai kuch bhi karne ke liye,aur ye ghar aapka bhi hai.

Azka:…..

Azlaan:me sach keh raha hu !! aap mere nikaah me hai azka ,as a law or as a shariat ye ghar par aapka pura HAQ hai.

Azlaan apne room me Jane lagta hai and azka usko stairs se Dekh rahi hai.and suddenly Azlaan turned

Azlaan:azka thank you mere saath dinner par chalne ke liye khuda hafiz

Azka:khuda hafiz

Next scene

Azka thinking about Azlaan

Azka (POV)

kitni ajeeb hai na ye zindagi har mode par alag jo cheez hum sochte hai hota usse Bilkul alag hai,mene kabhi nahi socha tha ke ek din zindagi mujhe aise Azlaan saab ke saamne laa kar khada kar degi jis insaan ke naam se mujhe chid thi Aaj uska naam mere naam ke saath jud gaya hai.

Jis insaan ke saath me do min nahi khadi reh sakti Aaj Allah ki raza se usi ke ghar me reh rahi hu.zindagi sach me ajeeb hai.

Aur is zindagi se bhi jayada jo ajeeb hai wo hai Azlaan saab mene unki ye side agar na dekhi hoti to me kabhi yaqeen nahi karti ke wo aise bhi ho sakte the.wo shakhs jo muje insaan bhi nahi samjhta tha Aaj meri fiqar kar raha tha mujh se maafi ki talab kar raha tha.

Shanaya ji ke saath unhone apna baccha bhi khoya tha,kya wo ye sab deserve karte the??agar shanaya ji us din waha nahi jati to Aaj wo aur Azlaan saab ek saath apne bacche ke saath khush hote.unki humare liye wo nafrat wo ilzaam galat to nahi the ,agar wo chahte to mujhe us din bata sakte the ke mere medical ki fee wo pay kar rahe hai par unhone kyu nahi bataya.

Azka think for some minutes and than wo room se bahar aati hai.

Next scene

Knock

Azlaan:aa jaye

Azka again knock and this time Azlaan open the door

Azlaan:Azka aap yaha,aapko kuch chahiye tha?

Azka:aapse ek sawaal tha.

Azlaan:come ..aap andar aa jaye pehle

Azka room me aati hai and Azlaan use Bethne ko kehta hai bed par but wo chair ki taraf jakar bethti hai.

Azlaan:jee ab bole kya puchna tha aapne?

Azka:aapne Hume kabhi kyu nahi bataya ke aap meri medical ki fee de rahe hai.

Azlaan:us se kya hona tha?

Azka:aap Humare ghar aaye the gawaahi ke liye bolne aap us time ye bata sakte the phir aapne kyu nahi bataya?

Azlaan:me juth nahi kahuga aapse,aapke college aane ke baad mere mind me ye baat aayi thi phir shanaya ki baat yaad aa gayi wo hamesha kahti thi ke neki ko neki samjh kar karni chahiye.

Azka:agr me us din office nahi aati aapke to aap mujhe kabhi nahi batate ke aap the jisne meri fee dee thi?

Azlaan:haa sayad aapko kabhi pata nahi chalta

Azka kuch nahi bolti khamosh rahti hai

Azlaan:me aapse ek sawaal karu?

Azka:…

Azlaan:agar us waqt me aapko bata deta to aap kya karti?

Azka:me medical nahi karti chod deti apni padhayi.

Azlaan:kyu?

Azka:kyu ke hum gawaahi nahi de sakte the aur …aur..aapse kisi bhi tarah ki madad nahi le sakte the

Azlaan:aur wo kyu?

Azka:wo ..isliye ke

Azka kuch nahi bolti Azlaan use dekhta rehta hai and ek sad si smile karta hai

Azlaan:aapko kuch bolne ki zarurat nahi hai me janta hu aap mujhe pasand nahi karti aur isliye aap kabhi bhi mujhse koi help nahi leti.

Azka:nahi…aahh …aisi koi baat

Azlaan:plz don’t ..mujhe pata hai me kaisa tha,.mene shanaya ki neki ko zaaya kar diya ,aapko us din office me sabke saamne humiliate kar ke.aapko ye jata kar ke mene aap par ehsaan kiya hai,jab ke ye sabkuch shanaya ne kiya tha.Aur aap mere us ehsaan ka badla utaar ne ke liye ye contract ke liye maan gayi.

Azka just looking at Azlaan

Azlaan:aapke saath mene bahot ziyatti ki hai azka aur ye baat ka ehsaas mujhe tab hua jab aapki bhabhi se meri hospital me mulaqat hui.she is right aap masoom thi aur mene aapke saath

Azlaan azka ki side nahi dekhta and turn ho jata hai

Azka:kuch nahi kiya aapne.

Azlaan turn his face to her

Azka:mene jo kiya apni marzi se kiya aapne mujhe force nahi kiya tha.

Azka:har insaan me burai ke saath acchayi zarur hoti hai.

Azlan:mujh me to koi nahi hai aur na thi

Azka:ye aapka khayaal hai.mere khayaal me aapke andar tab bhi acchayi thi.

Azlaan smile

Azlaan:mujhe bura na lage isliye ye sab Bol rahi hai na?

Azka:nahi Bilkul bhi nahi,me juth nahi Bol rahi,me aapko jayada to nahi janti par ha jitni baar aapse mulaqat hui hai mene aapko har baar alag paya hai.

Azlaan:….

Azka:aapse bina mile me bahot mutasir thi aapko lekar jitna kuch suna tha ke aap aise hai waise hai bade aadmi hai.par jab aap aaye aur aapne mujhe daata me bahot royi mujhe bura laga.aapse khof aane lag Gaya tha mujhe,Aur usi khof ki wajah se wajah se mene us din wo tuta hua perfume chupaya tha.me darr gayi thi aapse.

Azlaan:azka sometimes me sochta hu aap mujhse kitni nafarat karti hogi na

Azka:nafarat to aap bhi mujhse karte the

Azlaan:sharminda kar rahi ho mujhe

Azka:Bilkul nahi!! me to aapko ye bata rahi hu ke us nafarat ke bawajud aap mujhe us din beach raste me chodkar nahi Gaye..mere ghar tak chodne aaye the.Aur phir meri book bhi wapas karne aaye.mujhse nafarat ke bawajud aapko meri parwaah meri fiqar thi.Aur rahi baat is contract ki to mene apni marzi se ye kiya hai aapne mere saath koi zor zabardasti nahi ki.Azlaan saab I trust u.

Azlaan:Azka me bahot bura hu me aapka ye trust deserve nahi karta

Azka:Acche bure ka Faisala karne Wali Allah ki zaat hai.agar aap bure hote to kabhi bhi meri fee nahi dete par aapne apni nafarat ko peeche kar ke shanaya ji ki khawaish ko aage rakha!!

Azlan:me aapke trust ke qabil nahi hu

Azka:Agar aap par trust nahi karti to me Aaj raat ke is time me aapke bedroom me aapke saath nahi bethi hoti, aapki nazro me mujhe hamesha gussa,ilzaam nazar aaya hai par badniyati kabhi nazar nahi aayi.mujhe bas yahi puchna tha ke aapne mujhe kyu nahi bataya kabhi ke aapne meri fee dee thi aur uska jawaab dekar aapne mujhe ek aur wajah de di hai aapko trust karne ki.

Azka khadi hoti hai aur Jane lagti hai but wo rukti hai aur turn hoti hai.

Azka:me bed par isliye nahi bethi kyu ke ye meri jagah nahi hai..ye jagah shanaya ji ki thi aur hamesha unki rahegi.aapne mujhe izzat dee meri liye yahi sabkuch hai.

Allah hafiz

Azka chali jati hai and Azlaan door bandh karta hai aur jaha azka bethi hui thi waha dekhkar muskurane lag jata hai.

Azlaan(POV)

Ek me tha jo ke hamesha se azka ko bura samjhta tha aur ek ye hai mere itne bure salook ke bawajud mujhe meri acchayi Gina kar chali gayi.

Azlaan recalled all the moments with azka and after sometimes he fell asleep


Next morning

Azka set the breakfast table

Azka:Asalam o alikum Aunty,aap yaha kyu aa gayi me aapka naashta kamre me laa rahi thi

Mom:Walekum Assalam beta ,Bas Aaj Mera dil kar raha tha apne baccho ke saath nashta karne ka.

Azka:chale aap Bethe me bas do minute me aapka nashta lati hu.

Azka kitchen me jati hai and azlaan dining table par aata hai

Azlaan:Asalam o alikum Mom kaisi hai aap?

Mom:walekum Asalam beta Bilkul thik.

Azlaan apni mom se baat kar raha hai Azka sitwat ke liye nashta laati hai.Azlaan opposite side par betha hai so azka use nahi dekhti

Azka:Aunty chale aap jaldi jaldi nashta kar le phir aapne medicine bhi leni hai.

Mom:thank you beta kitna dyaan rakhti ho tum mera.

Azka:aap bhi to mujhe Itna pyaar karti hai.

Azlaan Yesab dekhkar khush hota hai.Azka sitwat ke saath Wali chair par bethti hai and Uska dyaan saamne Wali chair par jata hai jaha Azlaan betha hua hai

Azlaan:asalam o alikum

Azka:sorry..walekum assalam aap kab aaye?

Azlaan:jab aap mom ke saath busy thi.

Azka: ohh

Mom:beta tum Aaj se join kar rahi ho?

Azka: jee aunty

Mom:chalo ye to acchi baat hai.

Azlaan:Azka aap ready ho jao me aapko hospital drop kar duga

Azka:jee bahot shukriya par me chali jaugi..Aap late ho jayege meri wajah se.

Azlaan:being the gentleman ye mera farz hai ke me aapko office drop karu kyu mom?

Azlaan smile karta hai and juice pee raha hai and Azka tea pot se tea daal rahi hai and Azlaan ko dekhkar smile karti hai ,sitwat dono ko dekhkar khush hoti hai.

Next scene

Azlaan drop her at hospital

Azka:Bahot shukriya aapka

Azlaan:aapka off time kab hai?

Azka:waise to 6 pm hai but agar patient jayada ho to time lag jata hai.don’t worry I can manage aur ha sham ko mene Amma ki taraf Jana hai kuch der ke liye

Azlaan:ok than bye

Azka:Allah hafiz

In the evening

Azka:bhabhi aapne bahot accha kiya aap bhi aa gayi

Kanwal:Kaise nahi aati

Azka:accha bataye khalid bhai kaise hai?

Kanwal:sab acche hai tu bata begam sahiba kaisi hai?

Azka:kafi behtar hai

Kanwal:aur azlan saab unka rawwaiya sahi hai na tere saath

Azka: jee bhabhi wo bahot badal Gaye hai.aapko pata hai kal wo mujhe dinner par le Gaye

Kanwal:Azka Dekh me tujh par ya unpar shaq nahi kar rahi par baccha ye sahi nahi hai,Tumne kuch dino me alag ho Jana hai Tera unke saath yu betaqaluf hona accha nahi hai.

Azka: kya ho Gaya jao bhabhi..aisa kuch nahi hai aap janti hai na me aur wo bas unki mom ki wajah se saath hai.jaise hi wo thik ho jayegi hum alag ho jayege

Kanwal:par azka ye jo rishtey hote hai na inme kab kareeb aa jate hai pata nahi chalta..me nahi chahti tujhe koi gam mile

Azka:uff bhabhi kya aap bhi me aur azlan sab aap bhi na ..meri taraf se aisa kuch nahi hai aur wo to shanaya ji se mohabbat karte hai.chale chode Aur plz mere liye garam garam chai bana de

After some days AZka and azlan ke beach acchi friendship hoti jaa rahi hai.

Azka hospital se nikalti hai and taxi me bethti hai,Texi signal par rukti hai and suddenly azka heard some horns.she turn and see Azlaan.Both are smile to each others

Azlaan bina kuch bole use ishaara karta hai ke wo texi chodkar car me aa jaye.Azka is like no it’s ok!!

Azlaan now ghooring her and again he signal her to come.Azka take a deep breath and again said no.Azlaan window neache kar ke driver ko paise deta hai and said

Azlaan:bhaisaab aap ye le apna karaya aur inko utaare gaadi se

Taxi:Oh bhai saab ye kya khule aam ladki ko ched rahe hai.

Azlaan:kyaaa?? Aap hosh me to hai.

Azka:smiled

Taxi:jao bhai warna me sabko bula luga

Azlaan:aapki information ke liye ye mere saath hai me janta hu inko.

Taxi:bibi jee kya aap janti hai inko?

Azka: jee bhai

Azlaan:look I told u

Azka gaadi se utarti hai aur Azlaan ki car me bethne lagti hai

Taxi:Kaisa zamana aa Gaya hai aajkal ki ladkiyo me sharam hi nahi rahi.khule aam ishq ladaa rahe hai.

Azka and Azlaan heard this,Azka Avoiding eye contact with him.

Azlaan:bhaisaab nikaah kiya hai mene inke saath Biwi hai meri aur me inka shohar.ab hum ishq ladaye ya date par jaye aapko koi Masla nahi hona chahiye

Azka turn to Azlaan and she feel so good to here this.Azlaan start the car.

Azlaan:kamaal ke log hai dunia me ,ab me is Umar me ishq ladauga.wo bhi…

Azka:wo bhi mujh se.

Azlan:are nahi me bol raha tha wo bhi road par.

Azka:haa par mera Matlab tha ishq karne ke liye AAPKO me hi milugi kya?

Azka looking in front and Azlaan looking at her..he think something and said

Azlaan:kyu !! aapse main ishq nahi kar sakta?

Azka:Azlaan saab ishq ye to bahot powerful word hai ,mujhe to koi accha bhi kahe to aap kahoge uska taste bahot bura hai.

Azlaan kuch nahi bolta and drive karne lag jata hai.after sometimes Azlaan car rokta hai

Azlaan:mene mom ke liye kuch medicine leni thi aap wait kare me aata hu

Azka gaadi me hai and suddenly uski window par knock hota hai.

Azka:aap …??

Azka dekhti hai ke wo insaan aur koi nahi Azlaan ka wo friend waleed hai

Azka:Azlaan saab medical store tak Gaye hai aaye hi hoge

Waleed:wo mene Dekh liya par aap mujhe ye bataye aap yaha unki gadi me kya kar rahi hai?

Azka: hum ghar jaa rahe hai?

Waleed:wow Itna bada badlaav ..Azlaan kab se charity karne lag Gaya.lagta hai shanaya ke baad bahot jayada akela ho Gaya hai..par phir bhi aap ke saath??

Azka: kya matlab?

Waleed:Matlab ye ke Badi fast ho aap , us din to bahot masoom lag rahi thi.Aur Aaj Usi ke saath ghum rahi ho.

Azka kuch nahi bolti and mirror upar kar leti hai..Azlaan waha aata hai and waleed ko dekhta hai.

Waleed:kaisa hai yaar?

Waleed hug him and Azlaan azka ko dekhta hai jo ke ro rahi hai

Azlaan:kya hua?

Waleed:kuch nahi me to bas baat kar raha tha,tu bata kaisi chal rahi hai life? Dekhne me to bahot acchi lag rahi hai

Azlaan:bakwas bandh karo,kya kaha Tumne azka se?

Waleed:relax yaar chill kar me kisi ko nahi batauga..waise ek baat to tujhe manni padegi Mera taste sach me accha tha.ye bacchi to Badi hokar Tabahi ho gayi hai.

Azlaan punch him

Azlaan:ab agar Tumne ek aur lafz bola to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga

Azka ye sab dekhti hai aur gaadi we bahar aakar Azlaan ko awaaz deti hai.

Waleed:Azlaan tu is ladki ke liye mujh par haath utha raha hai?

Azlaan hold her hand

Azlaan:ye ladki meri biwi hai,Teri himmat kaise hui iske saath battmizi karne ki?Kaash ke mene us din apni ego me na aakar tujhe tab hi ek tappad maar diya hota.Azka meri izzat hai aur uske bare me ek lafz bhi galat bola to Jaan se maar duga.

Azlaan azka ko lekar chala jata hai

In the car

Azka silently cry and Azlaan thinking about waleed’s words,suddenly he break the car

Azlaan:AZka plz aap Rona bandh kare.mujhe bataye kya bakwaas ki usne aapke saath?

Azka….

Azlaan hold her face and turn to him

Azlaan:Azka plzz batao mujhe

Azka:wo …samajh raha tha ke …me aur aap,,,Matlab …hhumara Galat realtion

Azka rone lag jati hai..Azlaan ko bahot gussa aata hai.wo azka ko dekhta hai

Azlaan:aapne kyu nahi bataya usko ke mera aapka kya rishta hai?

Azka:….

Azlan:aapne use kyu nahi bataya azka?

Azka:mujhe laga aapko accha nahi lagega,kyu ke us din aapne usko..

Azlan ko bahot bura feel hota hai azka ko aise dekhkar

Azlaan:azka muje maaf kar do Meri galati thi jo mene pehle aapke liye stand nahi liya..par ab nahi plz Rona bandh kare soch uski ghathiya hai aap kyu to rahi hai.

Azka just stare at him Azlan Azka ke aasoo saaf karta hai and Azlaan kiss her forehead

Azlaan:relax kuch nahi hua aap Rona bandh kare warna me gaadi ghuma raha hu aur usko phir se

Azka:nahi koi zarurat nahi hai.

Azlaan: to phir aap Rona bandh kare.

Azlaan give her his handkerchief

Azlaan:aapko pani chahiye?

Azka:nahi

Azlaan:azka me bahot sharminda hu..aap plz peechli baato ke liye mujhe maaf kar de.me na samjh tha jo aapko samjh nahi saka tha tab.

Azka:…,

Azlaan:aap thik hai should I start the car

Azka haa bolti hai and Azlaan start the car

Dono ghar aaye hai and azka bina kuch bole apne room me chali jati hai,Azlaan usko rokta nahi hai aur wo bhi apne room me aa jata hai

Azlaan (to him self)

Me phir se azka ke gam ki wajah ban Gaya..kitni baar meri wajah se wo se wo sharminda hogi..pehle me use beizzat karta tha aur Aaj bhi me hi wajah tha.waleed ko to me nahi choduga uski himmat kaise hui wo sab bakwas karne ki.

Azlaan go to the mirror and see him self

Azlan:he remembered how azka cry and how he console her..suddenly he started thinking how he kissed her,he closed his eyes and sit on the chair

Azka’s room

Azka room me aakar bed par Beth jati hai and jo kuch bhi hua wo sochne lag jati hai.Azlaan ka bola hua ek ek word usko sunai de raha hai

How he angry on him,how he protect her,how he hold her hand and how he kissed her

Azka mirror ke pas jati hai and apne forehead ko touch karti hai.

Azka think of her self:

Azlaan saab ne Aaj jo kuch bhi kaha kya wo sach me wo sab baate dil se Bol rahe the..meri izzat meri khushi mere Aasoo kya in sab se unko sach me faraq padta hai.ya phir ye sab isliye tha kyu ke dunia ki nazro me main unki biwi hu.

Par unke dost ko to nahi pata tha na,,na hi us texi wale ko ,Azlaan saab chahte to khamosh reh sakte the par nahi unhone dono ke saamne mujhe apni biwi kaha mujhe apni izzat banaya..aur wo ..wo kya tha ??

Azka Azlaan ki kiss ko yaad karti hai.

Azka tu bhi kya soch rahi hai? Wo shanaya ji ko pyaar karte hai,wo unka pyaar nahi mere liye unki izzat thi.console kar rahe the mujhe.

Azka smiled and go to washroom for change

Next scene

Azlan apni mom ke room me aata hai and dekhta hai azka unke saath hai

Azlaan:kaisi ho mom?

Mom:Allah ka shukar mere bacche.aao betho

Azlaan:aapne dinner kiya?

Mom:nahi bas ab karne lagi hu..me thak gayi hu ab ye sab kha kar

Azka:aunty bas ek aur week phir aap jo dil kare wo khana

Azlaan:yes mom hum bahar chalega kahi ,aapke favourite restaurant par.

Mom:inshaallah beta kyu nahi.,azka beta jao tum dono bhi dinner kar lo

Azka: jee aunty ,bas aapka dinner aa jaye phir hum bhi kar lete hai

Azlaan: azka me study me hu,mom dinner kar le to mujhe bata dena ok

Azka:jee

Next scene

Azka knock on door

Azlaan: mom ne dinner kar liya?

Azka:Jee bas abhi unhi ke pas se aa rahi hu,chale aaye aap bhi dinner kar le.

Azlaan:azka actually mujhe tumhe kahi lekar Jana hai?

Azka:abhi is waqt?

Azlaan:haa kyu?

Azka:nahi kuch nahi par hum jaa kaha rahe hai?

Azlan:its a surprise

Both are in car

Azka:ye to mere ghar ka raasta hai? Amma thik hai na?

Azlaan: don’t worry she is completely alright

Azka:phir hum is waqt waha kyu ja rahe hai?

Azlan:kisne kaha hum waha jaa rahe hai?

Azka: to phir?

Azlan stop the car

Azlaan:hum yaha ye khane aaye hai

Azka dekhti hai ke azlan use uske favourite Bandh kabab ki shop par laya hai

Azka with smile: aapko is shop ka kaise pata?

Azlan:meri apni source hai madam

Azka: well well aap to bade chupe rustam nikle

Azlan:anything for u,chalo ab batao yaha order kaise karte hai mujhe koi idea nahi hai

Azka hasne lag jati hai

Azka: me order kar deti hu aap ruke

After sometime

Old man came with bandh kabab

Azka unse kabab leti hai and usko kuch paise deti hai.Wo baccha bahot khush hota hai and azka ko duaa dene lag jata hai

Azka:Allah aapko mohtaazi se bachaye

Azlan ye sab dekhta hai

Azka: kitni jaldi hum neki Kama sakte hai na..sirf thode se paise dene par unhone mujhe kitne karodo ki duaa de di.

Azlan:sach me ,ek waqt tha jab me ye sab ko nahi manta tha ,shanaya ka ye sab karna mujhe weird lagta tha.

Azka:aapko pata hai hum paise dekar inse umeed rakhte hai ke ye humare liye duaa kare jab ke sach ye hai ke jisko kheraat sadqa do use saath duaa bhi do..kyu ke duaa ki use hum se jayada zarurat hai.

Azlan azka ki ye baat se bahot impressed hota hai.

Azka:azlan sab aap bhi khana pasand karege?

Azlan:of course tumhe kya lagta hai mene Aaj roza rakhna hai

Azka:nahi aapka pata nahi hai na ..aap aisi jagah jate nahi hai na.

Azlan:ha but now I want to try this.

Azlan bite leta hai

Azlan:wow its taste yummy ,pata hai shanaya ko bhi aisi jagaho par khana bahot pasand tha.

Azka:aap unke saath aate the yaha?

Azlan:not here shanaya ko chaat golgappe ye sab pasand the so wo zabardasti mujhe lekar aati thi.

Both are eating and Azlan Azka ke face par finger rakhta hai.AZka use dekhne lag jati hai

Azlan:face par ketchup laga hua tha.

Azka:ohh Thank you

Dono ekdusre ko dekhkar smile karte hai Azlan car start karta hai and waha se chale jate hai but somebody watching them.none other than ABID 😉


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