Mineil FF"Shades of love" part -34 date 8-9-2023page:55 - Page 14

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Posted: 3 years ago

Drunk neil was quite funny🤣

First time i realised this minni is really devil kid as neil describes her🤣🤣

Poor neil🤣trapped and now angry, ready for revenge 😈

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

Drunk neil was quite funny🤣

First time i realised this minni is really devil kid as neil describes her🤣🤣

Poor neil🤣trapped and now angry, ready for revenge 😈


Neil is in big trouble now🥰❤

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Part:13


Thanks...and welcome to hell devil kid"he said to himself.


Everyone decided that a simple marriage was enough. They invited close relatives, friends, and even a few neighbors.It was preet who was most shocked to learn that mini and neil had decided to get married.


Neil did not attend in wedding related discussions and wedding shopping .When Neena asked about it he said he was busy with his new job.


"lovely bua... sukhi fufaji" when Ashok's sister and her husband came to mini's house and she happily ran towards them.


when mini touch their feet for blessing sukhi touched her head and said. "Khush raho mini beta"


"where is jerry"mini asked to them.


"He is having his monthly exam, So he didn't come. "Lovely said.


Mini didn't believe what lovely said. Jerry is the son of lovely and sukhi. He is studying in class 5. mini knows the reason why he did not come.


"When will mini's dadu and biji come" asked neena. "They are not well. so they won't come" Sukhi replied.


when Neena start to reply something she received phone call from her husband Abinav.


"Mini...I should go now. See you tomorrow" Neena said to mini and gave a hug.


"Mini.. I want to see your wedding dress and jewelry. Where is it?"Lovely asked with a smile.


"it's in my room... come with me"Mini said casually and went to her room with Lovely.


Mini was standing on the balcony enjoying the cool night breeze and looking at the stars in the sky. Ashok came there.


"Mini.... aren't you sleeping? It's already 12 o clock" Ashok said to Mini.


"I can't sleep pappa"Mini said with smile.


"I also faced the same situation beta.I can't sleep eve of my wedding too" said Ashok standing next to Mini.


Mini just smiled as reply.

"Does pappa know why Jerry didn't come?" Mini asked Ashok.


"Mm i know beta..i know every thing.I know that your dadu and biji are not allowing him to come here and that they are not sick. they are not interested in attending the wedding that's why they said like it”Ashok said.


"Does pappa believe that my birth is the cause of Mom's death like dadu and biji? Did pappa ever feel that I am a bad omen"Mini asked with a sorrowful smile


"Have you ever felt that I believe like that?" ashok asked holding her.



"No... but" when mini start to talk ashok interrupted.


"I decided your marriage now not because of superstition. It was when I had an accident that day that I felt that if I die, you will be alone. Because of superstition, my parents are afraid of you. Your mother's family tried to take your life for wealth.But I think you chose the wrong person... Mini. From his behavior it seems that he is not interested in this marriage.He may have agreed to this marriage because of Amar and Priya's insistence."


Hearing Ashok's words, mini started feeling guilty. Mini starts to feel that his life is being ruin because of her stubbornness .He will also have many dreams about marriage and married life but by getting married he will lose all that. Mini start to have a thought that her decision was wrong and she went to the room feeling guilty.It was a restless night for mini with many thoughts. Mini fell asleep around four in the morning.



"Cream sherwani? I don't like this colour "Neil said angrily to Priya.


"Can't you tell this earlier?"priya asked angrily.


"I am seeing this now. I don't like it. I won't wear this sherwani", said Neil.


"It's been 10 days since we bought this. It's not my fault that you didn't look at it earlier.Don't act like a kid Neil.Wear your dress and come fast "Priya replied and went from there angrily.


"Unliked colour dress and unloved bride" Neil said to himself looking at his sharwani. After getting dressed, he was combing his hair in front of the mirror when he heard someone knocking on the door of his room.


Neil went and opened the door. It was his friends Bobby and Arjun.

After saying "Looking hot man" to Neil, Bobby entered.

"When did you come?" asked Neil.


Arjun said to Neil "5 minutes before ... no one will say that this is a wedding you don't like if they see your face."


"There is no way without acting happy"Neil replied.


"But your bride has a sad look on her face," Bobby said.


"Did you see her?" Neil asked.


"yeah.... She seems very upset"Arjun said. Neil went to answer something but Priya called them downstairs so they went downstairs.


The marriage took place at the nearby Kali Mandir. They left there. Mini's dress was red bridal suit.


She did not wear much jewelry. Simple makeup was done. She was like an angel in bridal look.


Neil noticed the sad look on her face during the wedding. Neil felt like asking what's the reason of it but he didn't ask because of ego.


During the photo shoot, Neena asked for the reason why her face was dull and Mini told that she miss her mom in this day that's why she is sad.



"Mini, for so long you had been coming to this house under the label of our neighbor and Neil and Neena's friend. From today this house is yours too. Welcome to our home" Priya said to Mini with a smile after finishing the arati.


Mini just give a smile to priya.


"Mini, kick the pot and enter inside the home"Neil's bua Imarti said.


Mini shook her head in yes then kicked the pot and stepped inside the house as their bahu.


Mini did last some rituals absent mindedly. After some time Neena took Mini to Neil's room.


"Mini... you changed your dress and take rest. Your dress is kept in the cupboard. Neil will come after a while" said Neena.Mini shook her head.


After Neena left, Mini took a pair of night dresses from the cupboard and went to the washroom.



After changing her dress and coming to the room, Mini looked at her house through the window.


"It's ten o'clock at night. Will pappa eat anything?" she thought, so she called Ashok's phone. He answered the phone call on the first ring.


"Pappa, have you eaten?" Mini asked


"yes beta. I ate dinner. "ashok replied.


"Have lovely bua and sukhi fufa ji gone?" Mini asked. "Mmm... all the guests have gone.Now I'm alone" said Ashok with a laugh.


Mini said in a serious tone, "If you had got a second marriage, you wouldn't be alone." Ashok didn't like Mini's answer and they started arguing. At the same time, Neil is standing in front of the door of the room thinking whether to enter the room or not.


"Bhaiya... why are you standing here without going inside" asked imarti son Aarav who was going to his room with a bottle of water.


"I thinking whether entering or not," Neil replied.


"Why are you thinking like this to enter your own room?" Arav asked.

"Because a devil is inside the room"Neil replied..


"Devil? There is no devil inside bhaiya, only mini didi"Arav said.

"Mini is devil"Neil murmur.


"Bhaiya,Go inside without wasting time.Mini didi is waiting for you"Arav said shyly.


"Why are you so shy about that" asked Neil seriously.

"Because it's your first night. All the best for your first night," Arav said shyly.


"first night nahi last-night. 7th graders talk like college student."Neil stepped inside the room saying this to himself.


Seeing Neil, Mini disconnected the phone. Neil ignored her and took the dress from the cupboard and went to the washroom.


"Neil I want to talk to you" she said to Neil who came to the room after changing his dress.


"kya?"he asked to her without looking her face.


"Neil, I know... you had a lot of dreams about marriage. Because of me, they all got ruined. I feel so guilty. You shouldn't lose any of your dreams because of me. we can't live like a couples . So divorce is a good option for us." Mini said hesitantly.


"Divorce? I was not interested in this marriage and you all emotionally blackmailed me and now you want a divorce. It won't happen devil kid. I will not give you divorce "Neil said angrily.


"Neil I'm sorry about it. Now I'm saying this for the good of both of us. I thought about it last night" Mini said calmly.



"Then why you didn't say this before the wedding?" Neil asked angrily.


"If I say that in front of all the guests, it will affect both of our families." Mini said guiltily.


"Excuse me... one minute. Are you afraid of me and that's why you told a story like this and mentioned divorce?"Neil asked skeptically


"afraid for what?"mini asked.


"Are you afraid that you will fall in love with me if you live with me?" Neil asked with a wink.


"love myfoot.... that towards you.. good joke" mini said angrily.


"No devil kid... you are afraid about it.. that's why you are saying this now" Neil said jokingly.


"No never.100% sure I will never fall in love with you" Mini said with attitude.


"I am also 100% sure. You are afraid that you will fall in love with me that's why you talked about divorce. Not out of guilt" Neil also said with attitude.


"Nahi"mini said angrily.


"Yes devil kid... Your afraid "Neil replied.


"Nahi😡"Mini replied.


"Yes"Neil replied.


"Nahi😡"Mini replied.


"challenge?"Neil asked.


"yes. I will stay here as your wife and prove you that i will never fell in love with you"Mini replied confidently.


"yeah... this is what I want. I won't let you get away like that, I'll make your life hell baby..." he said in his mind.


"Then a piece of advice for you. Don't cross your limit. If you touch me I will kill you" Mini said like a Queen.


"I'm not that kind of person. even i don't want to share bed with you"Neil said angrily and take blanket from the bed and lied in the sofa.


"hey i also want to give an advice for you."Neil said to mini who start to lie in the bed


"what?"mini asked angrily.

"I know I'm handsome and hot... so control yourself too. if you try to cross your boundry.... I will really became your hone wali bacchi ki baap

😉" Neil said to mini.

Hearing that, Mini angrily threw the pillow at him. "Thanks honey😘" he said catching the pillow and lied down in the sofa.


to be continued.....


Please forgive me for my grammar mistakes and give your comments ❤

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Posted: 3 years ago

Neil don't want to give divorce 🤣 very smart 🤣 now devil Mini need to get into action mode 🤣

Edited by N_sharmaa - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Finally yhe love hate relationship gonna start😆

Loved it so much

Cant wait for the update

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Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Neil don't want to give divorce 🤣 very smart 🤣 now devil Mini need to get into action mode 🤣



Neil will be in hell if Mini is in action mood 😇🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago

They are married 🤣 though mini is saying is not going to fall for him but soon devil is going to not just fall for him and on him all over but eat him up also 🤣 Actually Mini mission baccho ke baap have started 🤣

Edited by Krithzz - 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krithzz

They are married 🤣 though mini is saying is not going to fall for him but soon devil is going to not just fall for him and on him all over but eat him up also 🤣 Actually Mini mission baccho ke baap have started 🤣


Neil will fulfill mini's wish😜😇

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update

Love it

Continue soon

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Part:14


"Thanks honey😘" he said catching the pillow and lied down in the sofa.


Mini also lay down on the bed in anger.


At six o'clock in the morning, Mini woke up. After sitting on the bed for a while rubbing her eyes, Mini got up and took her clothes and went to the bathroom.After showering, Mini went downstairs to put the clothes in the washing machine. After putting the clothes in the machine, Mini came back to the room. Neil is still in deep sleep. Mini dried her hair and tied it up. Then went to Neil's side.


"Neil get up... it's eight o'clock," she said.

Neil doesn't respond. Mini called him 4 to 5 times. But he was not aware of it due to the power of sleep.

At last, in anger, Mini took the jug from the table and poured the water on his face.


"Omg!flood....."


Neil woke up screaming loudly.

After wiping the water from his face with the blanket, Neil opened his eyes and looked ahead.


He saw Mini standing with a jug in her hand.

"You... why are you in my room?" Neil asked angrily after getting up from the sofa.


"Pati ji don't say my room... you should say our room" Mini corrected him.

Neil gritted his teeth in anger.


"Why did you pour water on me?" he asked again angrily.


"Because you didn't wake up after calling so many times" Mini replied.


"If I didn't wake up after calling, you will immediately pour water on my body? is this right?Cruel girl" Neil said.


"yes...and I will do it again......If you don't wake up by tomorrow morning, hot water will be poured."Mini said with attitude.


"It's better to go to the original hell than to live with this devil,"Neil said,Then he took the towel and went to the washroom.


When Neil came to the room after showering, Mini was not in the room. He quickly got dressed and went to the dining room..


"Ah, did you get up early today?" Priya asked looking at Neil who came to the dining room.


"Hmm...where is Neena?" Neil asked looking around.

"Neena and mini went to meet Ashok bhai sahab" said priya.


"How many days off do you have Neil?" Neena's husband Abhinav asked Neil while having breakfast.


"I have to go from tomorrow jiju," replied Neil.


"Tomorrow? Take three or four days off, Neil. When we got married, Neena and I took two weeks off," Abhinav said.


"Ours isn't a situation where you got married. You got married loving each other…we got married hating each other," Neil grumbled.


"Yes Neil... take two or three more days off. Then spend some time with mini. Go to the cinema theatre , shopping or park with her" Priya advised him.


"Mom... This is new job so I can't take many days off it will affect my work" said Neil.

"oh ok"priya replied.


"Did Imarti bua and kids go back?" asked Neil to priya.

"yes they left in the morning" replied priya.

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"Guys, what about going to the theater to watch the movie in the evening?" Neena asked coming into Mini and Neil's room. Mini was on her phone chatting with her friends. Neil was folding his clothes and putting them in the closet.


"I can't" neil said in not interested tone.

"which genre" mini asked at the same time.


"Why don't you want to come? It's your favorite actor movie. It's also a romantic movie," Neena said.


"Romantic movie😐.. I don't like romantic movie. I like crime thriller's and horror movies " Mini said.


"Is it a romantic movie? If so, please book the ticket" Neil said that because he understood Mini doesn't like romatic movies.


"Ok Neil...Mini it's a nice movie. You will like it when you start watching it" said Neena..


"But didi.... "Mini tried to say something but Neena interrupted.


"Mini...after few days we will go back to abhinav's house. Before that I want to go outing with you like before. That's why I made a plan like this. You should also come please"neena requested to mini.


"ok didi.. I will come"Mini agreed.

"Thankyou my dear.. get ready fast"Neena said while hugging mini. Mini shook her head in yes.


"Neil... you didn't want to go to see the movie at first. Did you want to go to see the movie because you realized that I don't like romantic movies" Mini asked looking at him.


"offcourse yes baby! I love doing things you don't like and making you to do them"Neil replied while pinching her nose.


Mini angrily slapped his hand away.

Neil said with a smile, "Get ready fast dear devil kid, we have to go watch the movie" and left the room.


"stupid" she muttered looking at Neil walking out of the room.


Everyone was enjoying the movie in the theater. A romantic song played on the movie and Neil notices the couple sitting in front of Neil intertwined their hands and then that girl leaning on her husband's shoulder...It was a melody song. Everyone is in a romantic world after listening to that song. Neil looked at Neena and Abhinav. they are sitting on his right side. Neena was sitting leaning on Abhinav's shoulder In between she eat popcorns and feed him too.Seeing his sister's romantic side, a smile appeared on Neil's lips.


Unknowingly, Neil's gaze drifted to Mini on his left. Neil realized that she was completely bored when he saw her sitting posture.


she was yawning and looking continuously towards her watch.

"unromantic girl"he murmur seeing her actions.


He looked at the screen again and started watching the movie. Another song came. This time it is an emotional song. Neil noticed Neena wiping her eyes with a towel as her eyes fill with tears because of watching the sentimental scenes.


Neil smiled while seeing her action and whispered "emotional girl"... and his gaze again drifted into Mini.


She had fallen asleep on the chair.

"un-emotional girl"he murmured.


The last scene of the movie was the scene where the heroine and the hero come together after overcoming all the difficulties.


Seeing the scene, everyone clapped their hands happily. Mini asked to Neil as she woke up in shock hearing that voice. "Is the movie over?"


"Ah, the movie is over" he got up from the chair saying this.


Mini walked out with them after rubbing her eyes. As it was getting late, they decided to have dinner at a hotel.


"super film... very emotional and heart touching. I have never seen such a good film."Neena said while having the food.


"Isn't this the dialogue Didi said last time when we watched the movie?" Mini asked looking at her.


"vohhh...that movie was good but I like this movie more" Neena replied with a sheepish smile.


"Say this same dialogue next time too" Mini said teasingly to Neena.

"Seem like Mini doesn't like the movie "Abhinav asked to Mini..


"Yes... I didn't like the movie at all.romantic movies always have same concept and same pattern . Most of the scene were predictable. In the end I got bored and fell asleep," said Mini while eating.


"Did you fall asleep? After watching such good movies" Neena asked in dazed.


"good movie nahi cliche movie.. Most of the dialogues are very cheesy too"Mini replied with a wired expression.


"Love stories are always cliche and cheesy....but the way it is presented makes each story different. Some of the dialogues made this movie boring but the movie had a positive vibe. And the reason why it got such a positive vibe is because of the way this movie is presented. Isn't there a feeling of comfort when the cool breeze touches our body, that's what I got after watching this movie,” said Neil.


Mini rolled her eyes after hearing Neil's reply.

"I got good nap when watching the Movie "she said.


"Only those who have love and kindness in their heart can enjoy romantic movies" said Neil solemnly.


"Is it a new invention?" Mini asked in a sarcastic tone.


"It is not a new invention but an old invention. Have you heard that sometimes love makes us adventurous and sometimes it makes us selfless.... Love is something that can make an old man seventeen years old boy.. Love can make even a demon as a good person " Neil said.


"cheesy lines.... "Mini replied.


"You will think these are rotten lines. Didn't I say earlier that people who don't have love and compassion will think like you"Neil said irritatingly.


Mini did not like Neil's answer. Mini replied to that again in a sarcastic tone. Neil didn't like Mini's sarcasm and he spoke against her again. So both of them started an argument.


Neena and abhinav noticed that many eyes were on Mini and Neil. "Mini... Neil.. what is this? This is a public place. Behave politely" Neena said angrily in a low voice.


"Did I start the fight? Wasn't she the one mocking what I was saying?" asked Neil.


"Neil, don't make lame excuses like kids do. Yesterday was your marraige... but you are behaving like enemies, not like newlyweds. As Neena said, understand that this is a public place and behave" Abhinav said to them.

As Abhinam and Neena said so, Mini and Neil then started eating without fighting each other.


After reaching home Neena pressed the calling bell,Priya opened the door.

"Why so late?" Priya asked looking at the four of them.

"There was a traffic block. Did Pappa sleep?" Neena asked.

"Hmm... Then you go inside the room without making much noise. Chachi ji has come" Priya said in a low voice.


"Chotti nani?" asked Neil and Neena in shock.

"Yes...She arrived at around six o'clock in the evening. She will be here for a week.

"priya said."A week? Then tomorrow morning we will go back to Abhinav's house."Neena replied.


"Tomorrow?Didn't Didi say that you will go back after a week? Then why you change your plan" Mini asked looking at Neena.

"Because I can't stay with chotti nani....mini"Neena replied and gone to her room with abhinav.

Neena has told Mini once about Chotti nanni before. Mini understood from Neena's conversation that day that she is very strict and stubborn lady.

Mini thought that perhaps Neena decided to leave here because she could not adjust to the woman's character.

Priya said "Good night Mini beta" and walked towards their room. "Good night aunty" Mini replied and went towards their room.


Neil had already left to the room.

Mini opened the door and said "Oh shit" and closed her eyes. Because Neil was changing his dress.

While muttering "Omg!yeh devil kid" Neil immediately took the towel from there and tied it around his waist.


"You devil kid.....Don't you know to knock door before entering the room?" Neil asked angrily standing in front of Mini..


"Sor.... sorry.. I... I don't know that you were in the room" Mini replied after opening her eyes.

Mini found it difficult to face Neil, because she entered into the room while he was changing dress. and the second thing is that he is shirtless just only have a towel around his waist.


Mini quickly started walking out of the room.

"devil kid... did you see anything?" Neil asked with an awkward face.

"No... I didn't see anything "Mini replied with embrassment.

"oh... that's good....If you have seen anything, erase it from your mind" Neil told her in an admonishing tone.


Mini left the room without replying.


When mini came out of the room, Neil quickly went and locked the door. After changing his dress he opened the door. Mini entered the room without looking at Neil's face. After taking the night dress from the cupboard, she went to the washroom.


Having to go to work tomorrow morning, Neil set the alarm on his phone for six in the morning and lay down on the sofa.


Mini came to the room after changing her dress and checked her phone. Preet was in online that time so Mini started chatting with her. After ten minutes, her phone received a call from an unknown number.


"Whose call is this? Do you want to answer this call?" she asked herself. "Don't answer a call from an unknown number," she replied herself and disconnected the call.

But calls kept coming from that number again and again. Mini answered the phone call thinking that it might be one of her friends.


To be continued.....


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