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Posted: 3 years ago

Hello friends,


Sorry for uploading part 4 late.... actually I typed it twice and it got deleted twice....so sorry for the delay!!!


Part 4:- Mission Togetherness!!!


Three days back apurva had fever now she was completely fine...and today it was Friday!! All of them were leaving for the trip to farmhouse!!!


Dada kaka:-" Everything is ready right??"


Kuki:-" Yes dada!! We all are ready to go!!"


Vitthu da:-"Where is Kaushik da??"


Shashank:-" Sir has left his place, he is on the way...i just had a word with him!!"


Mai:-" Chalo!! Bolo ganpati bappa!!"


Everyone together:-" Morya!!"


Amey:-" Chintya....mini bus has come kya??"


Chintya:- "Everything is ready dada!! You just go and njoy the trip!!"


Everyone had settled in their places!!


In car1:- bhaskar, panna kaku, Vidya attya, Mai and dada kaka!!!"


Kuki:- " Bhaskar this car is full....you go ahead..you start the journey...as you have dada kaka and mai with you...you can't speed much...so you leave..rest we shall join you!!"


As soon as car leaves kuki signals it to amey he goes and informs this to apurva


Meanwhile apurva tries stopping deepali!!


Apurva:-" Deepali Tai!! I loved your dress...from where did you get this??"


Deepali:-" Ohh this i got it from America!! It's from the Zara brand!! Beautiful na this is??"


Apurva:-" Very beautiful!! And colour this colour is definitely your colour this suites you so much!!"


Amey signals apurva that work is done!! Same time Shashank was passing by from there!!!


Apurva:-" Khadus!! (Holding his elbow) see na i have loved this dress...get me one dress like this na pls!!"


Shashank:-" Why shall I get you the dress!!"


Apurva:-" Are you are my husband!! Fulfilling your wife's demands are your moral responsibility!!"


Shashank:-" Ok i understand that!! But you seriously have loved this dress so much??"


Apurva:-" Yes!!"


Shashank:-" i am sorry i am not getting you this dress!!!"


Apurva:-" Are but i want it!!"


Shashank:-" Out of my budget sorry!!"


And they start their tom and jerry as usual!!


Deepali:-" Looks like you guyz have again started i shall leave!!"


Apurva after deepali leaves:-" Hhhsssshhhh!!


Shashank:-" Shisht!! Ok if you want i shall get you that dress!!"


Apurva:-" Are you crazy!! That was such a bad dress!! Look at that colour...i dint like it at all!!"


Shashank:-" What??"


Apurva:-" are that was just to stop her, so that she doesn't go in bhaskar kaka's car!!"


Shashank:-" Thank god i seriously thought what was wrong with your choices!! You have a great dressing sense and you look beautiful in that...this dress was shit!!"


Apurva:-" wait what...i look beautiful!! Khadus is actually giving me a compliment??"


Shashank:- "What no i never said that!! You listening to all unwanted things!!" Saying this he goes from there hiding his smile and leaving a smiling apurva there!!!


Deepali was pissed she couldn't go with bhasakar, but now she had no option!!!


Car 2:-" Dr. Kaushik, Sarika attya, vitthu da, deepali, sua aai!!"


Remaining all people were in the bus including netra and deepali's daughter!!


Chintya to amey and Shashank:-" Both the cars have left and rest everyone is settled in the bus, i have informed the driver he will take you to your location and be there with you for two days!!


Amey:-" You are not coming with us??"


Chintu:-" I would love to dada!! But i have work here!! But don't worry...i have had my best driver for you people!!"


Shashank:-" Chalo!! Thank you chintya!!"


Saying this amey and Shashank also enter into the bus!! The bus was 17 seater and they were just 10 people so there was ample of space in the bus!!


Apurva:-" This trip is going to be one of the best trips we shall njoy to the core!!"


Netra:-" Sir come sit here (besides her)!!!"


Apurva listens to this and was waiting for Shashank's reaction!!


Shashank:-" No thank you netra!! This is to much in the front!! I shall go back and sit!!" Saying this he goes and settles besides apurva... Making her smile whole heartedly!!


They embark their journey!!!


Nikhil:-" Chalo let's begin the fun!!"


Sumi:-" What shall we play!!"


Mansi:-" What else rapid fire!!"


Amey:-" So chalo let's make two teams!!"


Kuki:-" What's there to make team!! One team of Shashank and appu and we rest all in one team only!!"


Shashank:-" Are wait what why just we two?? Rather say why just me alone?? When it comes to signing this shisht is of now use!!"


Apurva:-" Excuse me khadus!! What do you mean!! I am learning singing from vittu baba and i have improved a lot!! You just see today....you shall win because of me!!!"


Shashank:-" We shall win rapid fire because of you...was that a joke am i suppose to laugh!!"


Apurva:-" Laugh how much ever loudly you want to laugh...today we will win because of me only!!"


Nikhil:-" Chalo our tom and jerry are in their role means it's a good start to our trip!!"


They all high fi each other on this!!


Netra:-" Sir then I shall join you!! I also like singing a lot!! And i am good at antakshari!!"


Apurva getting angry:-" Do one thing na netra Tai!! You and khadus only form a team....i shall go with rest of the them!!"


Shashank immediately shouts:-" Noooo!!! I mean...now toh it's a challenge...let it be me and you in a team shisht...and let's see because of whom we win!!"


Apurva:-" Challenge accepted!!"


Prachi:-" But dada!! You both are in one team only...if you'll win anywhich ways it would be both of you winning??"


Apurva:-" Praju...this is like our internal challenge!! The khadus and shisht challenge!!"


Shashank:-" And i am sure I will win!!"


Apurva:-" Let's see that khadus!!! Wish you all the best!!"


Shashank:-" All the best to you too!! May the best man win!!"


Apurva:-" One minute!! Why man...may be the best women win...i am women!!"


Shashank:-" Oh is it...i thought you are yet a girl!!"


Apurva:-" Khadussssaa!!!"


Shashank:- "Shishttttttttt!!!"


Kuki:-" Barrrrr!! May the best person win!!"


Apurva:-" Ok this is fine!!"


Sumi:-" Chalo let's begin!!"


They start playing antakshari and they were having great fun!!!


It was shappu's turn and they were stuck!!


Apurva:-" Are khadus that song....!! Which you sung in your award function!!"


Shashank:-" Ohhh Ya!!" And he sings that song...he sings the entire song... mesmerizing everyone as usual!!!


After he completes the song!!!


Prachi:-" Appu!! This time your claps stopped pretty earlier ...last time toh i had to tell you to stop!!!"


Before even apruva could ans netra answer:- "It was a bit high level Marathi na...she must have not understood the lyrics only!!"


Apurva was hurt at her words:-" Ya praju right....it was high level Marathi, i did not understand the lyrics only!!" Saying this she grows silent and sits on her seat!!!


Shashank:-" Chalo kuki...it's your teams turn next!!"


Netra from their team sings the next song:-" Radha hi bawri!!" ( I love this song and dint want netra to sing this...but couldn't think of any other song!!!😔)


Shashank:-" Now our turn!! Apurva suggest something or we will loose!!!"


Apurva:-" Sorry nothing is coming in my mind!!!"


Shashank:-" Wait i have a song!! (Slowly in her ears) and shisht...the inspiration for this song is you and your bindass nature!!"


Shashank starts singing....


Yeh zindagi..... raftaar se chal padi

Jaate hue raahon mein.....Humse abhi keh ke gay


Shashank standing up from his seat...and taking apurva's hand in his makes her twirl!!


Hamara yeh waqt hamara jo....

Ik baar gaya toh aaye na dobara

Samajh lo zara yeh....Hawaon ka ishaara, mere yaaro!!!!


He does some dance step Asking apurva to do the same!!!


Apna har din aise jiyo...

Jaise ki aakhri ho.....


Apurva feeling happy joins him in dancing!!


Jiyo toh iss pal aise jiyo...

Jaise ki aakhri ho!!!!


Prachi sings... Asking Deepali's daughter to sing as well!!


Whenever we know, we are having a blast,

You know it o o

Living every day, like it's your last,

You know it o o

Living for today, letting go of the past,

You know it o o

Give it up, give it up, everybody say o o


Shashank sings...joining hands with others!!


Hum sab jo saath mein rahe....

Khushiyan sab haath mein rahe!!!

Hum se bas faasle rahe yun....

Arrey tu ru tu ru!!!

Chaahe kahin kisi bhi modh par....

Bhigde gi bhi koi baat agar....

Milke ik dujhe se kahe yun!!!?


Kuki sings!!!!


Yeh baatein, hai chhoti moti baatein

Yeh aaye jaaye jaise ki din aur raatein....

Na aankhon se lagana kabhi....

Yeh barsaatein mere yaaro!!!!


All sing together!!!


Apna har din aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho

Jiyo toh iss pal aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho

Apna har din aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho

Jiyo toh iss pal aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho


Living for today, letting go of the past,

You know it o o

Give it up, give it up,

Everybody say o o


Sumi sings going near netra...


Duniya matlab ki yaar hai...

Iski aadat bekaar hai!!!!


Nikhil sings keeping his hand around Shashank's shoulder and warning him!!!


Iss se kum rakhna vaasta tu,

Turu ru tu ru tu!!

Apno se rakhna dosti....

Inn se doori har kami....

Inn mein hi dhoondh raasta tu!!!!


Amey sings telling Shashank....


Na jaana, yeh tune na jaana

Yeh manzil teri, inhe tujhe hai paana

Hai maine kaha hai jo,

Uss se mile zamana mere yaaro


Apna har din aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho

Jiyo toh iss pal aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho

Apna har din aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho

Jiyo toh iss pal aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho!!!


Apurva:-" Wow khadus!!! This was such a great song!!!"


Shashank:-" Which means i won our challenge as well!!"


Apurva acting innocent:-" Which challenge??"


Shashank:-" Acha now which challenge!!"


Apurva:-" Are we both were a team na....see our team won!!"


Shashank:-" Acha now we were a team!! Very nice ha shisht!!!"


Appu makes a very cute expression at which Shashank smiles to the fullest!!!


Netra was burning in jealousy seeing all this!!! Shashank and apurva were sharing a cute eye lock...when netra acts as if she is Falling and falls in Shashank's arms!!!


Shashank:-" Careful netra!!"


Netra:-" Thank you sir!! Thank you so much for Saving me...waise i knew you wouldn't let me fall!!"


Mansi:-" Netra you should take care of yourself!! You shouldn't fall so low....you can get hurt you see!!!"


Netra understands her words and gives her a hatred look and goes and sits in her seat!!!


They all were also a bit tired because they had woken up early and hence they all also decide to rest!!!


They all reached their destination by 4 p.m!!!


Sua aai:-" Really kaushik da....this is a beautiful place!! We all really loved it!!!"


Kaushik:-" i am glad you all liked it!!"


Kuki:-" Dada we have done all staying arrangements!! Half will stay here and half in that another farmhouse...but we all will have food and fun over here only...just for sleeping this another farmhouse arrangement is done!!"


Dada kaka:-" Barrrr!! Now let's do one thing... everyone go to your rooms...freshen up and come...we shall meet and 6 again...and then do whatever mischief you want to do!!"


Everyone:-" Done!!"


All couples were in their respective rooms...for singles the arrangement was as follows:-


1. Babi attya-prachi!!

2. Sarika attya- Netra

3. Bhaskar- kaushik da

4. Deepali and her daughter!!!


Everyone retired to their rooms... except kuki gang who as usual came to shappu's room!!


Shashank in his mind:-" Atleast here leave me alone with my wife!! Wait a second!! Why do i want to be alone with her??? Forget it shashank now a days these thoughts don't matter...you have already started falling for your wife!! God knows someday I may actually start loving her...but what will happen when she will go after one year!! Will she actually go??? Will I be able to now live without her madness?? In my calm and simple life...she has come like a havoc and brought her madness along....and now i am habituated to her madness!!! What will happen after a year!! Wait wait Shashank....it's yet a year...as appu says don't think much just enjoy the present!! Let's just do that!!!"


Shashank:-" I was just thinking that how come over here you guyz left us alone!!"


Kuki:- "I know you don't want us here and want to spend time with appu....don't worry we will give you ample of time alone!!"


Shashank:-" By standing outside our room right??"


Amey:-" Ofcourse!! That is giving you privacy!!"


Shashank:-" Excellent!!"


Kuki:-" Anyways we are here for important work!! Babbi tai!! Now how shall we expose deepali Tai??"


Shashank:-" Ok so amey dada and vahini your room is nearest to her room...and i had kept it that way.. because detective Mansi Vahini is best for this job!!!"


Mansi:-" Wahh wahhh!! Thank you thank you!! But what am I suppose to do???"


Shashank:-" See we all know that deepali Tai talks with someone on phone...we need to hear her talks with that person and with proper planning record the same!! As that can be our one proof against her!!!"


Apurva:-" Khadus you are smart!!"


Shashank:-" Thank you!! So vahini this is your job!! Now for others....one person cannot always keep following her as she will doubt then....so we all shall divide our time for keeping a watch on her!!"


Kuki:-" Ya your are right!! During bedroom Mansi will do the job...other times we all shall turn by turn do this job!!"


Sumi:-" But kuki if we need proofs....like more strong proofs...kuch toh karke use bhadkana padega!!"


Apurva:-" Wait time please!!! Khadus...what na???"


Shashank:-" Bhadkana....means...what do I say....ya..... instigate!!"


Apurva:-" Oh acha!! Time please over!! Continue sumi!!"


Shashank smiles at her innocence:-" Sumi is right we need to do something to instigate her!!"


Nikhil:-" So that's simple!!! Make her jealous!!"


Amey:-" And how exactly are we going to do that??"


Mansi:-" Simple by making babi attya and bhaskar kaka spend more time!!"


Apurva:-" But why are we making her jealous??"


Kuki:-" See appu!! If you love someone na...then you would be jealous of seeing that person with someone else...and in that jealousy you will definitely make some mistake!!"


Shashank:-" But she loves bhasakar kaka is our assumption....what if she doesn't love Bhaskar kaka and is not jealous??"


Mansi:-" So we will come to know if she loves him or not simple...then we can plan accordingly!!!"


Shashank:-" Makes sense!!"


Apurva:-" One doubt!! She is a smart lady!!! How are you so sure...she will do some mistake is jealousy???"


Nikhil:-" Acha see...your khadus is smart right???"


Apurva:-" This is debatable, but to understand your point i would say right??"


Shashank:-" Excuse me, what do you mean i am not smart!!"


Apurva:-"I said it's debatable!!"


Shashank:- "We shall definitely have a debate on this...but currently even i want to know why my reference is given!!! So nikhilrao continue!!"


Nikhil:- "So see your this smart and calm khadus...when you told him you are going out with your boyfriend...he did a mistake na..he switched off his phone, dint contact anyone, stayed in institute...gave us tension...so same way deepali Tai would also do something!!"


Apurva:-" But wait what's the connection!!"


Kuki:-" Simple appu... Shashank also did all that in jealousy and deepali Tai will also do the same!!"


Shashank:-" What rubbish nikhil rao!!"


Apurva:-" Actually nikhil dada khadus is correct??? Whom will be he jealous of??"


Everyone:-" Krish!!!"


Apurva starts laughing loudly!!!


Apurva:-" Sorry but doesn't make sense . Why will khadus be jealous of Krish!!! There is no comparison between the two!! Infact one time if you say that Krish is jealous of khadus...that can be correct also...but khadus being jealous of Krish...na never!!!" She was yet laughing.. and Shashank was happily shocked listening to her!!


Sumi:-" So you mean to say dada is better than Krish!!"


Apurva in flow says:-" ofcourse anytime!!"


Shashank:-" What??" Apurva realises what she spoke!!!


Kuki:-" Chalo time for us to leave gang!!"


Kuki gang leaves Shashank was staring at apurva...apurva was blushing pretty hard!!


Apurva:-" Ufff...it's very hot...i need to bath once!!" Saying this she immediately runs in the washroom to avoid her khadus!!!


Otherside Shashank was on cloud nine after apurva's words... first toh she praised him and secondly she choose him over Krish...he had many reasons to be on cloud nine today!!!!


So here was part 4!!!


How was it??? Awaiting your comments!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: niakush


See since khadus has not seen the dress so he doesn't know how it looks so him dreaming not possible and appu toh dreaming out of questions....so it must be a reality only!!


Where did you see the BTS???

Apni haldi me Mr. Khadus ne kitna cute and beautiful dream dekha tha❤️

To shayad twitter par jo dance practice ki bts hai wo khadus ka dream bhi ho sakta hai.

By the way ye romantic dance sequence dream ho ya real maja to bahut aayega shashank ne dress change nahi kiya hai us dance sequence me bhi .I think Appu ko manane ke liye dance kar raha hoga uske sath Netra dekhegi to kitna achha hoga 🤣

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Maine aaj 3rd and 4th dono parts read kiye dono achhe hai, specially 3rd part to❤️

Jis tarah khadus ne Appu ka hath pakadkar use pull kiya and then hug 😳 ye scene TR me aana hi chahiye!!

Tumhari stories ki jealous Netra is really fun to watch 🤣

Thank you dear 🤗

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Originally posted by: niakush

Hello friends,


Sorry for uploading part 4 late.... actually I typed it twice and it got deleted twice....so sorry for the delay!!!


Part 4:- Mission Togetherness!!!


Three days back apurva had fever now she was completely fine...and today it was Friday!! All of them were leaving for the trip to farmhouse!!!


Dada kaka:-" Everything is ready right??"


Kuki:-" Yes dada!! We all are ready to go!!"


Vitthu da:-"Where is Kaushik da??"


Shashank:-" Sir has left his place, he is on the way...i just had a word with him!!"


Mai:-" Chalo!! Bolo ganpati bappa!!"


Everyone together:-" Morya!!"


Amey:-" Chintya....mini bus has come kya??"


Chintya:- "Everything is ready dada!! You just go and njoy the trip!!"


Everyone had settled in their places!!


In car1:- bhaskar, panna kaku, Vidya attya, Mai and dada kaka!!!"


Kuki:- " Bhaskar this car is full....you go ahead..you start the journey...as you have dada kaka and mai with you...you can't speed much...so you leave..rest we shall join you!!"


As soon as car leaves kuki signals it to amey he goes and informs this to apurva


Meanwhile apurva tries stopping deepali!!


Apurva:-" Deepali Tai!! I loved your dress...from where did you get this??"


Deepali:-" Ohh this i got it from America!! It's from the Zara brand!! Beautiful na this is??"


Apurva:-" Very beautiful!! And colour this colour is definitely your colour this suites you so much!!"


Amey signals apurva that work is done!! Same time Shashank was passing by from there!!!


Apurva:-" Khadus!! (Holding his elbow) see na i have loved this dress...get me one dress like this na pls!!"


Shashank:-" Why shall I get you the dress!!"


Apurva:-" Are you are my husband!! Fulfilling your wife's demands are your moral responsibility!!"


Shashank:-" Ok i understand that!! But you seriously have loved this dress so much??"


Apurva:-" Yes!!"


Shashank:-" i am sorry i am not getting you this dress!!!"


Apurva:-" Are but i want it!!"


Shashank:-" Out of my budget sorry!!"


And they start their tom and jerry as usual!!


Deepali:-" Looks like you guyz have again started i shall leave!!"


Apurva after deepali leaves:-" Hhhsssshhhh!!


Shashank:-" Shisht!! Ok if you want i shall get you that dress!!"


Apurva:-" Are you crazy!! That was such a bad dress!! Look at that colour...i dint like it at all!!"


Shashank:-" What??"


Apurva:-" are that was just to stop her, so that she doesn't go in bhaskar kaka's car!!"


Shashank:-" Thank god i seriously thought what was wrong with your choices!! You have a great dressing sense and you look beautiful in that...this dress was shit!!"


Apurva:-" wait what...i look beautiful!! Khadus is actually giving me a compliment??"


Shashank:- "What no i never said that!! You listening to all unwanted things!!" Saying this he goes from there hiding his smile and leaving a smiling apurva there!!!


Deepali was pissed she couldn't go with bhasakar, but now she had no option!!!


Car 2:-" Dr. Kaushik, Sarika attya, vitthu da, deepali, sua aai!!"


Remaining all people were in the bus including netra and deepali's daughter!!


Chintya to amey and Shashank:-" Both the cars have left and rest everyone is settled in the bus, i have informed the driver he will take you to your location and be there with you for two days!!


Amey:-" You are not coming with us??"


Chintu:-" I would love to dada!! But i have work here!! But don't worry...i have had my best driver for you people!!"


Shashank:-" Chalo!! Thank you chintya!!"


Saying this amey and Shashank also enter into the bus!! The bus was 17 seater and they were just 10 people so there was ample of space in the bus!!


Apurva:-" This trip is going to be one of the best trips we shall njoy to the core!!"


Netra:-" Sir come sit here (besides her)!!!"


Apurva listens to this and was waiting for Shashank's reaction!!


Shashank:-" No thank you netra!! This is to much in the front!! I shall go back and sit!!" Saying this he goes and settles besides apurva... Making her smile whole heartedly!!


They embark their journey!!!


Nikhil:-" Chalo let's begin the fun!!"


Sumi:-" What shall we play!!"


Mansi:-" What else rapid fire!!"


Amey:-" So chalo let's make two teams!!"


Kuki:-" What's there to make team!! One team of Shashank and appu and we rest all in one team only!!"


Shashank:-" Are wait what why just we two?? Rather say why just me alone?? When it comes to signing this shisht is of now use!!"


Apurva:-" Excuse me khadus!! What do you mean!! I am learning singing from vittu baba and i have improved a lot!! You just see today....you shall win because of me!!!"


Shashank:-" We shall win rapid fire because of you...was that a joke am i suppose to laugh!!"


Apurva:-" Laugh how much ever loudly you want to laugh...today we will win because of me only!!"


Nikhil:-" Chalo our tom and jerry are in their role means it's a good start to our trip!!"


They all high fi each other on this!!


Netra:-" Sir then I shall join you!! I also like singing a lot!! And i am good at antakshari!!"


Apurva getting angry:-" Do one thing na netra Tai!! You and khadus only form a team....i shall go with rest of the them!!"


Shashank immediately shouts:-" Noooo!!! I mean...now toh it's a challenge...let it be me and you in a team shisht...and let's see because of whom we win!!"


Apurva:-" Challenge accepted!!"


Prachi:-" But dada!! You both are in one team only...if you'll win anywhich ways it would be both of you winning??"


Apurva:-" Praju...this is like our internal challenge!! The khadus and shisht challenge!!"


Shashank:-" And i am sure I will win!!"


Apurva:-" Let's see that khadus!!! Wish you all the best!!"


Shashank:-" All the best to you too!! May the best man win!!"


Apurva:-" One minute!! Why man...may be the best women win...i am women!!"


Shashank:-" Oh is it...i thought you are yet a girl!!"


Apurva:-" Khadussssaa!!!"


Shashank:- "Shishttttttttt!!!"


Kuki:-" Barrrrr!! May the best person win!!"


Apurva:-" Ok this is fine!!"


Sumi:-" Chalo let's begin!!"


They start playing antakshari and they were having great fun!!!


It was shappu's turn and they were stuck!!


Apurva:-" Are khadus that song....!! Which you sung in your award function!!"


Shashank:-" Ohhh Ya!!" And he sings that song...he sings the entire song... mesmerizing everyone as usual!!!


After he completes the song!!!


Prachi:-" Appu!! This time your claps stopped pretty earlier ...last time toh i had to tell you to stop!!!"


Before even apruva could ans netra answer:- "It was a bit high level Marathi na...she must have not understood the lyrics only!!"


Apurva was hurt at her words:-" Ya praju right....it was high level Marathi, i did not understand the lyrics only!!" Saying this she grows silent and sits on her seat!!!


Shashank:-" Chalo kuki...it's your teams turn next!!"


Netra from their team sings the next song:-" Radha hi bawri!!" ( I love this song and dint want netra to sing this...but couldn't think of any other song!!!😔)


Shashank:-" Now our turn!! Apurva suggest something or we will loose!!!"


Apurva:-" Sorry nothing is coming in my mind!!!"


Shashank:-" Wait i have a song!! (Slowly in her ears) and shisht...the inspiration for this song is you and your bindass nature!!"


Shashank starts singing....


Yeh zindagi..... raftaar se chal padi

Jaate hue raahon mein.....Humse abhi keh ke gay


Shashank standing up from his seat...and taking apurva's hand in his makes her twirl!!


Hamara yeh waqt hamara jo....

Ik baar gaya toh aaye na dobara

Samajh lo zara yeh....Hawaon ka ishaara, mere yaaro!!!!


He does some dance step Asking apurva to do the same!!!


Apna har din aise jiyo...

Jaise ki aakhri ho.....


Apurva feeling happy joins him in dancing!!


Jiyo toh iss pal aise jiyo...

Jaise ki aakhri ho!!!!


Prachi sings... Asking Deepali's daughter to sing as well!!


Whenever we know, we are having a blast,

You know it o o

Living every day, like it's your last,

You know it o o

Living for today, letting go of the past,

You know it o o

Give it up, give it up, everybody say o o


Shashank sings...joining hands with others!!


Hum sab jo saath mein rahe....

Khushiyan sab haath mein rahe!!!

Hum se bas faasle rahe yun....

Arrey tu ru tu ru!!!

Chaahe kahin kisi bhi modh par....

Bhigde gi bhi koi baat agar....

Milke ik dujhe se kahe yun!!!?


Kuki sings!!!!


Yeh baatein, hai chhoti moti baatein

Yeh aaye jaaye jaise ki din aur raatein....

Na aankhon se lagana kabhi....

Yeh barsaatein mere yaaro!!!!


All sing together!!!


Apna har din aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho

Jiyo toh iss pal aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho

Apna har din aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho

Jiyo toh iss pal aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho


Living for today, letting go of the past,

You know it o o

Give it up, give it up,

Everybody say o o


Sumi sings going near netra...


Duniya matlab ki yaar hai...

Iski aadat bekaar hai!!!!


Nikhil sings keeping his hand around Shashank's shoulder and warning him!!!


Iss se kum rakhna vaasta tu,

Turu ru tu ru tu!!

Apno se rakhna dosti....

Inn se doori har kami....

Inn mein hi dhoondh raasta tu!!!!


Amey sings telling Shashank....


Na jaana, yeh tune na jaana

Yeh manzil teri, inhe tujhe hai paana

Hai maine kaha hai jo,

Uss se mile zamana mere yaaro


Apna har din aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho

Jiyo toh iss pal aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho

Apna har din aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho

Jiyo toh iss pal aise jiyo,

Jaise ki aakhri ho!!!


Apurva:-" Wow khadus!!! This was such a great song!!!"


Shashank:-" Which means i won our challenge as well!!"


Apurva acting innocent:-" Which challenge??"


Shashank:-" Acha now which challenge!!"


Apurva:-" Are we both were a team na....see our team won!!"


Shashank:-" Acha now we were a team!! Very nice ha shisht!!!"


Appu makes a very cute expression at which Shashank smiles to the fullest!!!


Netra was burning in jealousy seeing all this!!! Shashank and apurva were sharing a cute eye lock...when netra acts as if she is Falling and falls in Shashank's arms!!!


Shashank:-" Careful netra!!"


Netra:-" Thank you sir!! Thank you so much for Saving me...waise i knew you wouldn't let me fall!!"


Mansi:-" Netra you should take care of yourself!! You shouldn't fall so low....you can get hurt you see!!!"


Netra understands her words and gives her a hatred look and goes and sits in her seat!!!


They all were also a bit tired because they had woken up early and hence they all also decide to rest!!!


They all reached their destination by 4 p.m!!!


Sua aai:-" Really kaushik da....this is a beautiful place!! We all really loved it!!!"


Kaushik:-" i am glad you all liked it!!"


Kuki:-" Dada we have done all staying arrangements!! Half will stay here and half in that another farmhouse...but we all will have food and fun over here only...just for sleeping this another farmhouse arrangement is done!!"


Dada kaka:-" Barrrr!! Now let's do one thing... everyone go to your rooms...freshen up and come...we shall meet and 6 again...and then do whatever mischief you want to do!!"


Everyone:-" Done!!"


All couples were in their respective rooms...for singles the arrangement was as follows:-


1. Babi attya-prachi!!

2. Sarika attya- Netra

3. Bhaskar- kaushik da

4. Deepali and her daughter!!!


Everyone retired to their rooms... except kuki gang who as usual came to shappu's room!!


Shashank in his mind:-" Atleast here leave me alone with my wife!! Wait a second!! Why do i want to be alone with her??? Forget it shashank now a days these thoughts don't matter...you have already started falling for your wife!! God knows someday I may actually start loving her...but what will happen when she will go after one year!! Will she actually go??? Will I be able to now live without her madness?? In my calm and simple life...she has come like a havoc and brought her madness along....and now i am habituated to her madness!!! What will happen after a year!! Wait wait Shashank....it's yet a year...as appu says don't think much just enjoy the present!! Let's just do that!!!"


Shashank:-" I was just thinking that how come over here you guyz left us alone!!"


Kuki:- "I know you don't want us here and want to spend time with appu....don't worry we will give you ample of time alone!!"


Shashank:-" By standing outside our room right??"


Amey:-" Ofcourse!! That is giving you privacy!!"


Shashank:-" Excellent!!"


Kuki:-" Anyways we are here for important work!! Babbi tai!! Now how shall we expose deepali Tai??"


Shashank:-" Ok so amey dada and vahini your room is nearest to her room...and i had kept it that way.. because detective Mansi Vahini is best for this job!!!"


Mansi:-" Wahh wahhh!! Thank you thank you!! But what am I suppose to do???"


Shashank:-" See we all know that deepali Tai talks with someone on phone...we need to hear her talks with that person and with proper planning record the same!! As that can be our one proof against her!!!"


Apurva:-" Khadus you are smart!!"


Shashank:-" Thank you!! So vahini this is your job!! Now for others....one person cannot always keep following her as she will doubt then....so we all shall divide our time for keeping a watch on her!!"


Kuki:-" Ya your are right!! During bedroom Mansi will do the job...other times we all shall turn by turn do this job!!"


Sumi:-" But kuki if we need proofs....like more strong proofs...kuch toh karke use bhadkana padega!!"


Apurva:-" Wait time please!!! Khadus...what na???"


Shashank:-" Bhadkana....means...what do I say....ya..... instigate!!"


Apurva:-" Oh acha!! Time please over!! Continue sumi!!"


Shashank smiles at her innocence:-" Sumi is right we need to do something to instigate her!!"


Nikhil:-" So that's simple!!! Make her jealous!!"


Amey:-" And how exactly are we going to do that??"


Mansi:-" Simple by making babi attya and bhaskar kaka spend more time!!"


Apurva:-" But why are we making her jealous??"


Kuki:-" See appu!! If you love someone na...then you would be jealous of seeing that person with someone else...and in that jealousy you will definitely make some mistake!!"


Shashank:-" But she loves bhasakar kaka is our assumption....what if she doesn't love Bhaskar kaka and is not jealous??"


Mansi:-" So we will come to know if she loves him or not simple...then we can plan accordingly!!!"


Shashank:-" Makes sense!!"


Apurva:-" One doubt!! She is a smart lady!!! How are you so sure...she will do some mistake is jealousy???"


Nikhil:-" Acha see...your khadus is smart right???"


Apurva:-" This is debatable, but to understand your point i would say right??"


Shashank:-" Excuse me, what do you mean i am not smart!!"


Apurva:-"I said it's debatable!!"


Shashank:- "We shall definitely have a debate on this...but currently even i want to know why my reference is given!!! So nikhilrao continue!!"


Nikhil:- "So see your this smart and calm khadus...when you told him you are going out with your boyfriend...he did a mistake na..he switched off his phone, dint contact anyone, stayed in institute...gave us tension...so same way deepali Tai would also do something!!"


Apurva:-" But wait what's the connection!!"


Kuki:-" Simple appu... Shashank also did all that in jealousy and deepali Tai will also do the same!!"


Shashank:-" What rubbish nikhil rao!!"


Apurva:-" Actually nikhil dada khadus is correct??? Whom will be he jealous of??"


Everyone:-" Krish!!!"


Apurva starts laughing loudly!!!


Apurva:-" Sorry but doesn't make sense . Why will khadus be jealous of Krish!!! There is no comparison between the two!! Infact one time if you say that Krish is jealous of khadus...that can be correct also...but khadus being jealous of Krish...na never!!!" She was yet laughing.. and Shashank was happily shocked listening to her!!


Sumi:-" So you mean to say dada is better than Krish!!"


Apurva in flow says:-" ofcourse anytime!!"


Shashank:-" What??" Apurva realises what she spoke!!!


Kuki:-" Chalo time for us to leave gang!!"


Kuki gang leaves Shashank was staring at apurva...apurva was blushing pretty hard!!


Apurva:-" Ufff...it's very hot...i need to bath once!!" Saying this she immediately runs in the washroom to avoid her khadus!!!


Otherside Shashank was on cloud nine after apurva's words... first toh she praised him and secondly she choose him over Krish...he had many reasons to be on cloud nine today!!!!


So here was part 4!!!


How was it??? Awaiting your comments!!!

wow! looks like you are on fire these days

great going

keep them coming please

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Aaj ka epi 💔❤️

Ye khadus rude + cute combo hai is liye hum confused rehte hai iske bare me

I really don't like Deepali and chhoti Deepali 👎🏼

Khadus ki kismat hi kharab hai aur kya 😂 ab maro Appu chhodegi nahi khadus ko

Sirf Kadhus nahi iss bar Apu ne Netra ko sunna chahiye har baar sunke lete hai usse woh

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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh my God part 4❤️

so sabse pehle toh I love reading your stories, they alwayas make me laugh and smile and it is so fun to read. I haven't really thanked you for tagging me so thank you so much please always do.

I love how you write Shapu, their banters are so on point, I can actually imagine both of them saying those things and picture their expressions👏

Humare thoughts kuch jyada hi milte hai coz jaise hi meine read kiya ke Netra radha hi bawre gaa rahi hai turant meine socha nahi yaar yeh mera one of the fav hai isko kyu gawaya and next line mein tumne wohi same likha tha🤣

And that song apna har din, oh god meine itne time baad discover kiya phirse woh song mein pura bhul hi gayi thi, thanks for it, meine next kaam usko playlist mein add karne ka rahi rahi hu

and last but not the least i know ke tum mere requests padh ke tang aa gayi hogi but ek chiz man mein aayi issliye likh rahi hu jab Shashank ne Netra ko pakda na toh itna gussa aaya mujhe, can you please write a scene jisme Netra phir aise girne ke acting karti ahi and Shashank usko pakdne ke jagah pehche hat jata hai, Oh god soch ke hi maza aa raha hai, its just an idea which I felt like sharing, its totally upto you to write it or not.

Thanks once gain for the story

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey guys so since people have started writing stories for the regional version can we make a seperate thread for it, I mean agar koi purane stories padhne ka man karta hai toh dhund na mushkil ho jata hai. And mujhe nahi KKIS wale logo ko koi prob hogi coz characters are essentially the same and sirf naam alag hai so we can maybe just mention the names and their Hindi counterparts at the start.

I am tagging a bunch of regular people in this thread please tell me what you guys think about it

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: jollyismyname

i reallyy really dont want kuku gang outside when shahu is expressing his feelings....

I dont think yeh kabhi band hoga coz I saw this clip of Khorkuto jisme confession ke baad tha mostly coz dono kafi romantic the I guess koi hotel mein bed pe the dono and puri gang sunn rahi thi bahar and literally woh jab kiss karne wale the tab gaye yeh log

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: aaniya305

Hey guys so since people have started writing stories for the regional version can we make a seperate thread for it, I mean agar koi purane stories padhne ka man karta hai toh dhund na mushkil ho jata hai. And mujhe nahi KKIS wale logo ko koi prob hogi coz characters are essentially the same and sirf naam alag hai so we can maybe just mention the names and their Hindi counterparts at the start.

I am tagging a bunch of regular people in this thread please tell me what you guys think about it

idea to achhi hai tumhari stories ke liye seperate thread hona hi chahiye 👍🏼

Par koi problem to nahi hogi na, KKIS fans ko?

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