POISON Prarish - TS - PT 2 updated pg 1

"Yaad rakhna pratha thumhe mujhe naagmani deni hi padegi. Warna jo yo naya zehar tumhare andar pal raha woh tumhare sath iss desh ko bardbad kardega"

Her fathers voice echoes in her ears.

Pratha stumbles due to the poison that is spreading in her poison after drinking the poison from the river. It's not easy for her to handle this and now after getting to know that her father is the person who poisoned the river yamuna she has lost all hopes on her life.

"Kyun baba kyun kiya aapne aisa.. aap pyar karthe the na mujhe.. "

Cough cough...

" Ye kaisa pyar hai baba jisse aap mujhe aur iss desh ko barbad karne par tule hai.. aur di unhe bhi aapne kaid karke rakha hai.. naagmani paane ke liye aap ithna neeche gir sakthe hai ye kabhi nahi socha maine"

Cough cough..

She walks with no strength to walk and falls on the ground.. before she could hit the ground 2 arms holds her in order to support her..

"Pratha tum theek ho.."

she can only see the face of a guy who seems to be looking like rishab

"Rishab.." she takes deep breath

" pratha thum theek ho.. are you alright ? Bolo pratha"

She gets up using all her strength by holding his arms..

" Pratha chaliye yaha mujhe aapse ek zaroori baath karni hai.. aur mere pass waqt nahi hai.. "

She holds him walks with lot of difficulties..

" Pratha ruko kya baath hai tumhari tabiyath theek nahi lag rahi"

He stops her before they could reach..

Pratha looks around and feels as if she is constantly getting stared.

" Yaha main aapko kuch nahi batha sakthi. Aap desh se pyar karthe hai na"

He nods..

" Desh ke liye kuch bhi kar sakthe hai?"

" jaan bhi de saktha hun" his voice was firm like a mountain..

"Chaliye phir zyada der math keejiye.."

He walks with her without asking any questions.

They go to the room and pratha closes the door.

" ab dhyan se suniye.. asuron ne sare nadiyon main vish milaya hai"

" kaun asur?" He only knows them as desh drohi's

" jinhe aap desh drohi kehthe hai" pratha repeats with her voice which seems like getting lower and lower.

" lekin tumhe ye sab kaise patha" his eyes widens as he never shared these things with her.

" Rishab.. Ye sab bathon ka waqt nahi hai.. meri baath dhyan se suniye.. asuron ne yamuna ke sare paani main vish milaya hai.. logon ki jaan khathre main hai aur iska ek hi upay hai"

Rishab looks at her..

With lots of difficulties she crosses her around her chest to make a X mark.

Rishab is still trying to analyze if she is planning to dance again..

"Dance karna hai" he asks with an innocence on his face.

Suddenly pratha changes herself into shesh naagin..

He can not believe on his eyes what he saw.

" Kaun ho tum" his voice shows his amusement..

"Main naagino ki naagin shesh naagin.. mere iss ghar main aane ka sirf ek hi maksad tha asuron ka anth. Lekin shayad mere andar ithni takat nahi hai ki main ab unse lad saku.."

She prays to lord bholenath.. her mani appears on her hand.

" Ye leejiye.. ye hai naagmani.. aap iss mani ko lejayiye aur yamuna ko agar isse chua jaye toh uska vish nikal saktha hai"

She becomes more and more weak after removing she collapses on ground..

"Pratha" rishab screams as he is more worried for her.

She looks at him

" Meri chinta math keejiye.. jayiye desh ko bachahiye.. apno ko bachayiye.. mujhe kushi hogi agar meri jaan desh ke liye chali bhi jaye toh."

" Jab ye kaam ho jaye toh aap ye mani toh isse meri di ko de dena"

He remember's mayanks words that the mehak is a naagin.. he wanted to seek more clarifications but its not the right time

"Lekin pratha tum? " his concern seems like increasing..

" Aap jayiye please" she pushes him

"Tum naagin ho na.."

She nods..

" toh apna roop badhlo aur chalo mere saath"

"Lekin..."

"Main kuch nahi sununga chalo mere sath abhi"

"Theek hai".. she becomes a snake and crawls and becomes a bracelet on her hand.

He feels much better now..

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To be continued..

This is really good, thank you. I’m glad Rishab knows about her. Can’t wait to read the next update

I liked prarish encounter.pratha telling rishab that she doesn't have much time left was painful.i wish rishab saves pratha with the naagmani.pratha revealing her naagim form to rishab was surprising. Pratha giving the naagmani to save river yamuna from poison was unexpected. Rishab asked pratha to accompany him.i wonder whats in his mind.

Oooooo. This was sooo exciting! I love when Rishab has a part to contribute in Pratha's missions as well. ❤️👍🏼

And yess, the best thing I felt was the implicit trust that these two had on each other.. Pratha knowing he'll come to her aid because he loves his country and Rishab knowing her real identity but still not pushing her away, instead he's being concerned about her. 😳

Excited for next part now!!! 🤗

Very nice update

Plasss update soooon

Rishab: hum pahunch gaye.. lekin yaha par tumhare guru hai aur unke sath koi khada hai lekin mujhe chehra nahi dikh raha

By listening to guru she understood that its her baba..

She takes human form stands beside rishab..

Pratha: aur di bhi yahin hai..

Rishab: toh ye?

Pratha nods..

They listen to the conversation..

Mehak: ye galath hai baba.. aap pratha ke saath aisa nahi kar sakthe.. aapki nafrath kya aap ke pyar se badkar hai.

Baba: meri nafrath ki seema tum janthi ho kaha.. main apne nafrath ke liye kuch bhi karsaktha hun chahe mujhe iske liye apni beti ka kurbaani kyun na deni padhe.

He holds mehak's neck.. mehak stuggles and tries to use her power.

Baba: hahaha.. tum mera kuch nahi karsakthi he shows bel patra in his hand which he used to make mehak powerless for sometime.

Rishab: main chodunga nahi inhe..

Suddenly pratha sees lal naagin.

Pratha: rukiye.

Rishab: kya?

Pratha: woh ek naagin hai she points at lal naagin. Uska zehar aapki jaan bhi le saktha hai

Rishab: mujhe meri jaan ki parwa nahi hai.. he goes anyway..

He goes and hits baba on his face.. mehak falls down as his clutches loosens.

Mehak: rishab..

Rishab looks at her.

Shangrila(LN) (i dont know her name its lal naagin) 😂 holds rishab in her tails.. rishab tries to escape but he could not..

LN: rishab.. toh tum agaye aaj mehak ko bachane kaha hai woh tumhari shesh naagin.. kya mere zehar ka asar ithna bhari padh gaya uspe ke woh 1 din ke bajaye adhe din main margayi..

She laughs evilishly..

Rishab realizes that pratha is going to die he looks at pratha who is standing near the tree by leaning onto the tree.

Rishab remembers all the good thing that they spent together. The nok jhoks, the banters and the laughters.

Rishab: kya kiya tumne pratha ke saath usse kuch nahi ho saktha.

LN: wohi kiya jo hamesha karthi ayi hun.. shesh naagin ne desh ko bachane ke liye pura zeher ka paani pee liye lekin usse ye nahi patha tha woh desh ke liye balki uske liye ghola gaya tha..

Mehak: kya mathlab hai tumhara..

LN: jiss zeher ko shesh naagin ne piya hai woh zeher koi aam zeher nahi tha woh zeher hamne banaya tha patha hai kinke madath se.

Mehak stays silent..

LN: woh zeher hamne icchadari cheel, mor aur nevlo ke madath se banaya tha. Woh zeher shesh naagin ko marne ke liye kaafi hai.

Rishab: chodo mujhe.. main tumhe chodunga nahi..

He tries moving..

LN: na na na.. tumhe kya lagtha hai ek insaan mujhe hara saktha hai.. aur kaha chupke baithi hai shesh naagin.. aaj apne pati parameshwar aur pyari behan ko bachane nahi ayegi..

She taunts.

Rishab: haan hu main insaan lekin main apne logon ko nuksaan toh nahi pahunchatha. Aur tum ek naagin ho ke dusre naagin ko woh bhi shesh naagin ko marna chahthi ho.. chi..

LN: toh kya hua.. manthi hun woh sheh naagin hai lekin jaise usse uska desh bachana hai mujhe mere desh ke liye kuch karna hai..

Rishabh: naagino main kaunsa desh.. tum sab toh icchdari ho desh toh insaano ke liye hai agar tumhe kuch karna hi hai toh insaano ke liye karo jo tumse kamzor ho. Mujhe bura lagtha hai insaano ke batware ne naagino ko bhi baant diya.

LN: tum kuch zyada hi bol rahe ho.. ab aur mujhse suna nahi jaatha tumhe maarne ka waqt aachuka hai..

She was about to kill him with her poison we see shesh naagin pushing her from back.

Mehak: pratha..

Mehak runs and stands behind her..

Pratha: rishab jayiye.. aur desh ke logon ko bachayiye.

Rishab: lekin

Pratha: maine kaha na.. aap jayiye main dekthi hun aapko kaun roktha hai aaj.

Rishab nods.

He goes near the river banks sardar tries to stop him pratha holds him in her tail kills him with her poison.

Sardar: pratha...

Before he could speak anything his mouth starts vommitting the poison.

LN gets irritated rishab was about to touch river water with naagmani and LN stops him with her tail by holding his waist with her tail..

Pratha holds her tail with her tail.

Pratha: Rishab.. naagmani paani main daaliye..

Rishab throws naagmani into water..

LN fumes more. She leaves rishab and starts fighting with SSN.

LN: desh ko toh bacha liya khudko kaise bachaogi.. agar main chahun toh shayad bacha sakthi hun..

Pratha: meri zindagi bholenath ki marzi se chalegi.tumhara chahne ya na chahne kuch nahi badhal saktha. Agar aaj mera marna likha hai toh koi nahi rok saktha na tum na koi aur. Aur main tumse madath lene ke bajaye marna pasand karungi..

Mehak and rishab: pratha..

LN : Toh maro..

Ln turns and about to leave..

Pratha holds her with her tail.

LN tries to escape but she could not..

Pratha: tune kya socha main tumhe chod dungi. Haan main kamzor hun lekin ithni bhi nahi ki tumhe zinda jaane doon..

Ln : chodo mujhe she tries free her up but failes miserably..

Pratha: kya kaha tumne mere andar jo vish hai woh cheel,mor aur nevlo ki madath se tumne banaya hai na.

Ln nods.

Pratha : ye pahadi dekh rahi hun iske neeche nevlo ki basti hai. Agar main tumhe idhar phek dun toh tum bach nahi sakthi..

Pratha smirks..

Pratha orders mehak to get bel patra.. mehak gets some and ties it around mehak..

Pratha: tum chigistan se ayi ho ya kisi aur stan se.. tum ho toh naagin hi. Ye bel patra tumhe tumhare shaktiyan istemal karne se rokenge aur nevlo ka kaam asaan hoga..

LN: chodo mujhe jaane do.. her face shows her fear of death..

Pratha: nahi kabhi nahi..

Pratha throws LN into the nevlon ki basti and we see all nevla's gathering around her.

LN screams in pain.

Pratha collapses on the ground. Mehak and rishab holds her.

Mehak: pratha tum theek ho..

Mehak voice had a pain she knows she is not.

Pratha nods to say no.

Pratha: di aap jayiye aur naag mani ko nadi se nikaliye isse pehle woh kisi ki haath lag jaye.

Mehak: main tumhe chodkar kahi nahi jaungi..

Pratha: di.. aap sheshnaagin banne ke liye bani hai.. aap apne zimmedari se mooh mod nahi sakthe chache kuch bhi ho jaye.

Rishab: pratha kya ho raha hai.. mujhe kuch samajh nahi araha..

Mehak wipes her tears.

Mehak: pratha marne wali hai..

She sobs more.

Pratha wipes her tears holding her hands. Pratha is still very weak

Pratha: di.. aap ro kyun rahi hai.. shayad mera safar yahin thak tha.. haan bura lag raha hai ki main aapko akele chodkar ja rahi hun.. lekin bhagwan ke marzi ke aage koi kuch bhi nahi karsaktha..

Rishab: pratha chup raho tum .. tumhe kuch nahi hoga.. main kuch hone nahi doonga..

Pratha looks at him.

Pratha: main janthi hun aap kisi ke sath bura hothe hue nahi dekh sakthi lekin.. aap isme kuch nahi kar sakthe.. aur aap chinta math keejiye main aapko bhoot bankar nahi daraungi..

She smiles..

Rishab: laughs while crying..

Rishab: phir bhi main tumhe kuch nahi hone doonga..

He gets up and jumps into river.

Pratha and mahek thinks what he is up to..

Rishab comes out holding naagmani..

He holds naagmani in his hand.. closes his eyes.

Rishab: mai nahi jaantha aapke pass kaunsi shaktiya hai lekin jiss naagmani ne pure nadi ka wish 1 minute main khatham kar diya uske pass ya phir uske purvaj ke pass ithne shaktiyan toh honi chahiye jo mere pratha ko theek kar sake..

Pratha and mehak wonders ye mere pratha kaise hua..

He closes his eyes and chants maha mrutyanjay mantra..

"Aum Tryambakam yajaamahe sugandhim pushtivardhanam..

Urvaarukamiva bandhanaan-mrityormuksheeya maamritaat"

He repeats again and again..

The naagmani starts emitting light.. which was strong enough due to which pratha and mehak had to close their eyes.

A 7 headed snake comes out from the yamuna nadi.. stands behind rishab to cover naagmani.

Pratha and mehak looks at shesh naag and bow their head.

Pratha and mehak: pranam shesh naag..

Rishab opens his eyes and looks behind and he is shocked to see shesh naag.

He bows down and offers naagmani..

Sheshnaag: pratha.. tumne shesh naagin ban kar sirf naag kul ki nahi balki manusya kul ki bhi raksha ki hai.. main tumhe jeevandaan detha hun.. tumhara saara vish main apne andar le rahabhun..

Mehak and rishab feels happy.

Pratha bows down again...

Shesh naag takes all the vish and pratha feels alot better.

Sheshnag: rishab tum iss naagmani ko shesh naagin saunp do.

Rishab nods.

Shesh naagin disppears in thin air.

Mehak and rishab hugs pratha tigthly..

Pratha: arre maar dalne ka irada hai kya..

They leaves her.

Mehak: waise jeeju.. pratha se mere pratha kaise ban gayi haan.. bolo..

Rishab blushes..

Pratha smiles..

Rishab: patha nahi kab hua lekin ab jab ho gaya hai toh chodne wala nahi hun..

Mehak side hugs pratha

Mehak: main bahuth kush hun mere behan ke liye. Prath hugs her back.

Rishab: ab chale kaafi tandh hai.. tum dono ko tandh nahi lagtha ..

He is shivering as he is totally wet.

Pratha and mehak laughs and they uses their power and changes into normal human beings.

Rishab : I wish main bhi garam kapdo ka intezaam kar paatha 😂

Pratha closes her eyes and opens it.

His cloths dry automatically.

Rishab: woah.. not bad ye kya tha..

Mehak : pratha ke 1000 shakti main se ye ek hai garmi badhana 😂(kuch toh use ho uska)

Rishab smiles and they all go back to the villa pratha holding rishab and mehak's hand 😀

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The end

Originally posted by: rbb1

This is really good, thank you. I’m glad Rishab knows about her. Can’t wait to read the next update

Wow That Was Beautiful.

First Time Reading A Story On This Forum.

Originally posted by: firewings_diya

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Just read part 2 omg that was sooo sweet ❤️

Pratha-Rishab-Mahek bond is something that I've been wishing to see on the show for sooo long. And this trio working together in your story was just 👏

Rishab's presence of mind about naagmani and saving Pratha with it 👍🏼. Gosh your Rishab is always so smart and alert, like an actual army officer. Unlike the dumber version of Rishab in the show 😆

Oh and Sheshnaag appearing from underneath the sea and blessing Pratha.. this hits so differently after today's epi lol 😆 I much prefer your version of Sheshnaag tbh. 😳

Diyaaaa, ye lo 🤗🤗🤗