SAIRAT SS – "I am always there for you" (Updated Pt12 on pg85 on 27/8) - Page 60

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: DevaSingh

I think now in your ff Samrat should come back 🤔

Sai's psychiatrist should advise Virat to take sai for trip and there Samrat should meet them and come back it's just a my opinion and rest😉 depends on you as you wish If liked👍so please take it forward 😊

Otherwise go with the flow as you are going it's amazing

Thank you for the idea....🤗

I have not yet thought of how to take forward from this... till now I was focused on how to convey Sai's turmoil... but haven't thought how to heal her...

I was thinking how to bring Samrat back and what to do with Pakhi's charector....

I will think on your idea, how to incorporate in my story.... it is very good idea... I like the idea...👍

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Posted: 3 years ago

this was definately not over dramatic. i generally find that shows and even fictions always brush over the mental health issues. but this story actually addresses that Sai needs to heal.... she has suffered and gone through so much and she needs time to heal and cannot just be expected to "adjust" as a good bahu


she is young (around 18-19) has been molested and followed, threatened to a forced marriage and watched her father die.


even one these change your life and leave a scar. Furthermore marriage is normal but is a big life changing decision that should not be taken lightly ... she didn't have time to mourn and was married off i mean that has to leave a scar

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Posted: 3 years ago

I like the idea.... I love Samart's character and there is a lot of potential but was ruined... he is also hurt and can help heal Sai and really be the big brother... don't forget he has the experience of loosing his father... although he has family and mother but no one can replace your father and that is why he can be that big brother figure for sai...


he can also call our Pakhi on a lot of things ... would love to read this character being developed properly

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: pari0706

this was definately not over dramatic. i generally find that shows and even fictions always brush over the mental health issues.

Yes.... they don't address this issues which is my I started writing this story, out of frustration...

but this story actually addresses that Sai needs to heal.... she has suffered and gone through so much and she needs time to heal and cannot just be expected to "adjust" as a good bahu

Exactly.... you got my exact intention behind writing this story...

she needs to heal and get over all those bad memories of her past.. she needs to mourn properly for her father's death..... because she still feels she is alone and no one is there for her...


she is young (around 18-19) has been molested and followed, threatened to a forced marriage and watched her father die.


even one these change your life and leave a scar. Furthermore marriage is normal but is a big life changing decision that should not be taken lightly ... she didn't have time to mourn and was married off i mean that has to leave a scar

Yes.. this will definitely leave a scar... Imagine a girl's state of mind after narrowly escaping from getting molested/raped and receiving death threats of her father who is only one she have in this world... then again kidnapped and narrowly escaping from getting married forcefully... then losing her father... the getting married out of convenience and entering in in-laws as burden.... no girl will be able to bear all these and be normal... she would take a lot time to come out of that trauma... usually people just take months to come of depression... this is lot more bigger than that...

Reply in bold...

I feel very good talking to you.... it is some sort of joy talking with people with very similar thought process....

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Posted: 3 years ago

am glad to know its a similar thought process and I agree even one of these trauma will mean a recovery process of months or years and she has had all of it together

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: pari0706

I like the idea.... I love Samart's character and there is a lot of potential but was ruined... he is also hurt and can help heal Sai and really be the big brother... don't forget he has the experience of loosing his father... although he has family and mother but no one can replace your father and that is why he can be that big brother figure for sai...


he can also call our Pakhi on a lot of things ... would love to read this character being developed properly

Yes.. Samrat's charector has a lot of potential and can be explored properly in serial... initially his charector was very good... but as the days went on... sometimes I feel like stupid charector.... he can't even sense his wife intentions...

As you said, he can be big brother to Sai as they share same kind pain and are in a same boat...

I don't have confidence that I can do justice to Samrat's charector because from his entry, I have not watched serial properly... sometimes for weeks I did not watch... and I could not connect to that charector properly.... and also I feel that the actor facial expressions are monotonous just like his co-star pakhi actresses.... may be this is one of the reasons...

I will try my level best to write that charector nicely ofcourse better than the serial... I think I will have to watch few episodes before I start writing again..

I could always connect more to Sai and Virat charectors and understand their point of views even though they are wrong.... don't know why... even I started watching serial because I liked Virat's charector a lot then (before 100 episode)...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Maybe that is the reason you are unable to write the character of Samrat... don't watch the serial but write him as a fun loving person who is a more mature version of Sai but suffered and a soldier... who was hurt and hence as a elder brother and husband left home so Pakhi and Virat can have their happiness


so a sacrificing person with heart of gold who always wants happiness for others but as a diya (lamp) has to burn himself for it and he never shows it...


he is strength of his widowed mother who is in depression so never spoke of his paid.. and his mother due to suffering so much kind of never thought of him...


just my opinion :)

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hii.. sou, sweta here. After a long time I read ur story. It's too heart-wrenching to sai like this. 😭😭💔💔

Glad finally chavanis came to know about the incidents that happened in GC.

Thank u atleast here they r feeling sai's pain n suffering.

Will write about it briefly later.

Once again outstanding. 👏👏🤗🤗

U know what everytime u left me speechless with ur writing skill

I think u should write books

Thank u dear ❤ 😘

Bye TC

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Shyama9090

Hii.. sou, sweta here. After a long time I read ur story. It's too heart-wrenching to sai like this. 😭😭💔💔

Hey sweta.... what a surprise.... haamma.. finally you have read... 🤗🤗

don't worry Sai will be fine in due time... Virat is there for her...


Glad finally chavanis came to know about the incidents that happened in GC.

Thank u atleast here they r feeling sai's pain n suffering.

Yes... they should know what all she has gone through.... they should experience atleast a bit of her pain...actually they never knew anything about her.. they always saw her as revel or bahu or someone Virat brought by marrying her....


Will write about it briefly later.

Eagerly waiting... I love reading your comments.... you don't know how happy I feel... I recently saw your old comment and I was like wah...


Once again outstanding. 👏👏🤗🤗

U know what everytime u left me speechless with ur writing skill

Thank you so much re for your appreciation and kind words ❤ 💕


I think u should write books

Let me see.. First let me complete this book... I discovered my hidden talent when I started writing this book.... before I never knew that I could write.. and I am happy atleast I have some talent other than my studies.... and ofcourse this credit goes to SaiRat...


Thank u dear ❤ 😘

Bye TC

Bye... TC❤

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Posted: 3 years ago

waiting for the next update

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