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Posted: 3 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

I thought ye Anita ka dream hai but no it's Gautam

Ab main kuch nai sochungi, this story is unpredictable and you are increasing my curiosity with every update

Maami ko heart attack par kyuu???

Sab acha ho rha hai na unke according toh.

Thank you so much for liking this story 😇😇😇wi8 bad read whta happens next 😉😉😉😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
#62

So sorry guys for delay actually my nani ama passed away thats y i was in truma to loose her...

Part 5 :

Episode started with mami treated in hospital and gain little conciousness

Fb :

Two days before dhara ivf

Ravi visited mami house to talk with mami about hardik and anita....

Ravi enter in her house and start calling her

Ravi : masi maa ... Kahan ho ap... masi ma...

Mami : aye ravi ... Meri dikri tu a gai ... Hyae mara bhogilal tu n meri bachi ko us sandh k k ghr s sahi salamat ghr la k mere uper ehsan kar dia ...

Ravi : masi ma ap bhi na... Mn ap s yehn buht important bat karnay ai hun ... Anita di r hardik bhai k bare mn ..

Mami confused

Mami : anita r hartik k bare mn ?

Ravi : han masi maa ap ko pata hai anita di hardik bhai s piyar karti hai r un s shadi krana chati hn ... Unhn n mujhe bataya r wo chati the k mn ap s r dhara di s bat karon ... Islye mn n dhara di s to bat kar li ab ap s bat karnay ai hn ... Ap bhi plz man jao na ...

Mami : haye mara bhogilal yeh mn kia sun rahi hn anita r hardik ... ise achi khabar r kia hoge mere liye..... Mn to dhaniye ho jaon ge agr asa ho gaya to....

Ravi happily

Ravi : sach mn mai na masi ma... ap man gai... R kush bhi ho na ..

And hugs her tightly...

Mami : sirf khush .. buht khush hn...

And hugs her back...

mami : Acha ravi beta wo na kal insurance wale aye thay wo na papers de k gaye tere sign krnay k liye wo table p rakahay hn jatay hue tu sign kra dena ...

Ravi: ok mn abhi sign kar deti hn ...

Ravi signs the papers and left the place...

Mami smriks

Fb :

1 day before

Mami went to court for appealing judge to speedup the court proceedings so that ravi got free as soon as possible and lawyer hand over her a paper in which stated that shiva forcefully married ravi and he beat ravi time to time

Back to reality ...

Anita and gombie is about to take last phera suddenly anita got hard slap on her face... Anita turn to saw nad its dhara who slaped her ...

Dhara : how dare you anita... Tmhari himat kesay hui

Anita shout :

Anita : tmhari himat kesay hui mere r gombie k beech any ki

Dhara slaps one more time ..

Fb :

When hardik kidnaps anita he forcefully make her sign on court marrige papers ...and frees her after reaching mami house anita truamatized and start acting wiredly...

Back to reality

Dhara : mere bhai ki bivi honay k bawajood tu mere gombie s shadi kar rahi hai...

Anita: aye dhara kon c bivi mn koi bivi shivi nahi hun hardik ki .. tu ja yehn s meri r gombie ki shadi honay de wesay bhi qb gombie ko teri zarorat nahi hai... Wo ab mera ho raha hai r tu dekhana mn kesya gombie ko apna bana loon ge r tujhe kesya bhool jaye ga wo .

Dhara : ho hi nahi skta mera gombie mujhe bhoolay...

Anita : ek din roye ga tere liye 2sray din tere pichay anay ki koshish kare ga lakin mujhe apna dost paye ga r 3srya din tujhe bhool k mere sath age barh jaye ga .... R tera wajood us ki zindgi s hamesha hmarsha k liye khatam ho jaye ga...

Dhara is about to slap her again but gombie holds her hand to stop her ... Dhara got shocked and gombie smiles on anita and anita smriks...

Anita : dekha dhara tu n gombie ab mera ho chuka hai ... Ab tu kuch nai kar skti ..

Here in ravi room :

Ravi is still unconscious and groom rubing her hands continously ... Her face is covered with some dried tears and an hot stream of tears flowing from her eyes time to time...

Dream :

Ravi saw how she slap shiva nad how he pushed her back

Shiva : himat kesay hui teri.... hath kesay lagaya tu n mujhe ..

Ravi wake up with jerk ... and turn her layed position into siting with jerk...

Ravi : shiva ..

start seeing here nad there but find the room empty... and start crying uncontrollable ...

Then ravi stands from her sitting position

Ravi : shiva... Tu n kesay mera sath chor dia .... mn to tujh s kitna piyar....

And collapsed on the floor ... And cries...

Groom run there with glass of water ... he tries to console her bt all in vain he make her drink water which she pushed back bt he insisted and she drank it .. ravi still cries and he side hugs her and tab slowly her head with his hand and ravi agian falls unconscious...

Back to mandap

Ravi comes there and heard and saw everything which anita does and how gombie stops her hand and yells at dhara...

Gombie : teri himat kesya hui dhara anita ko thpaar marnay ki ... Tujhe kia lagta hai k tere ase karanay s mn wapas tere pass a jaon ga.... Tere uper bharosa karnya lagon ga .. tujhe apn manay lagon ga ...tujhe phir se piyar karnay lagon ga ...

And he start laughing hysterically

In hospital

Fb :

Day ravi accident occure when mami met shiva and slaps him

Mami through divorce papers on his face

Mami : aye sandh yeh lay chutkara meri beti se ... Meri beti ko marna chata tha na ... Yeh le divorce papers ... Aj k bad azad hai tu hamesha hamesha k liye...

Shiva shocked ...

Hope you liked the story to unfold ... Virangna tere idea done dona done done ... R odette teri bat bhi try ki part thora lamba kia 😉😉😉😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
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finally confusions durr hue😅😅😅

nice update😊👍👏looking forward for more.....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: virangna2005

finally confusions durr hue😅😅😅

nice update😊👍👏looking forward for more.....

Abhi r buht kuch unfold hona baki hai 😉😉😉😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
#65

My god finaaly confusions are over🥰🥰

Nice update❣️❣️

Waiting for next part.......

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Posted: 3 years ago
#66

Hey Aimmy!

I am sorry for your loss.

And hope you are doing fine now.


Coming to this, glad that things have started getting clear now. So maani tricked Raavi in signing those papers and she even slapped Shiva .

Over all a nice update ❤️

Continue soon and take care ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

My god finaaly confusions are over🥰🥰

Nice update❣️❣️

Waiting for next part.......

Thanks alot ... 😍😍😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Hey Aimmy!

I am sorry for your loss.

And hope you are doing fine now.


Coming to this, glad that things have started getting clear now. So maani tricked Raavi in signing those papers and she even slapped Shiva .

Over all a nice update ❤️

Continue soon and take care ❤️

Thanks alot dear now i m doing perfectly fine... Yeah mami is toxic in this story as she is in serial ...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 6 :

Episode starts with gombie laughing hysterically .. he comes near anita and noticed her expression keenly ...

Anita is on cloud nine ... Gombie holds her from her shoulders and then pushed her little

Anita felt little wired on his behaviour

Fb :

After seeing dhara condition and meeting Anita Gombie sitting at some dark place sadly and drinking wine

Fb :

Gombie meet anita totally broken after dhara failed ivf and anita emotionally support him

Gombie : aj mn puri traha s toot gaya hun anita... Mujhe s dhara ki yeh halat dekhi nahi jati... Mn dhara ko kesay khushian la k doon.. kesay us ki soni goad ko bharon ...

He hold her hand tightly...

Anita cups his face ...

Anita : gautam smbhal apanay ap ko... Ek rasta hai mere pass ..

Gautam : kia ?

Anita : mujh s shadi kar le... R hamari pehli aulad dhara ki gaod mn dal dena ...

Gautam : tu pagal ho gai hai anita... Nahi mn dhara s bewafai nai kar skta... Tera dimagh kharab hai ... Mera nahi hai...

Anita : gautam thanday dimagh s soch ... Is taraha dhara ko apni khushina bhi mil jain ge r mn apnay kiye ka prashchit bhi kar loon ge... Mana k wo ifv ka jra ghalti s toota tha magar mn bhi shamil to the na... Dekh gautam mn aj bhi sirf r sirf tujh s piyar karti hn ... Tu bs ek dafa soch k dekh r mn tere jawab ka intzr karon ge...

Gombie shocked on her perposal and left from there without uttering a word ...

Fb ends..

Back to Gombie drinking fb :

Hardik after taking sign on wedding papers comes to gombie and hand over him papers ...

Gombie : yeh kis cheez k papers hn ...

Hardik : mn n anita s shdai kar li hai .. yeh hm dono k wedding papers hn ...

Gombie shocked...

Gombie : kia

Hardik : han ...

Gombie : per kab r kesay...

Hardik tell everything to Gombie

How he kidnap anita after ivf kand and forcefully make her sign ...

Hardik : ab anita legally meri bivi hai...

Per ek problem hai..

Gombie : kesi problem...

Hardik : wo anita hai na buht pagalon ki traha behave kar rahi hai sign karnay k bad .. ase dikha rahi jesay mn n zabardasti shadi ki use ... R court bhi is shadi ko nahi manay ga kun k judge jb ise is halat mn dekha ise to wo is shadi rad kar dain gaye... Is shadi ko judge sahab k samnay accept karwanay k liye is ka apnay hosh o hawas mn hona lazmi hai...

Gombie : wo sb to theek hai magar kesay ...

Hardik : ek plan hai mere pass ... Tujhe mera sath dena hoga us k liye ...

Gombie : han tu bol na... Mn zaroor tera sath doon ga ...

Hardik tell him all the plan ..

Back to reality :

Anita heard their plan and shocked ... And falls on ground and cries ...

Ravi who is standing nad seeing everything runs toward anita... Anita hugs ravi and cries... Ravi tried to console her...bt she cries uncontrolled her all dreams to marry gautam shattered ..

Ravi run to took glass of water...

Anita gathered the courage and stand and goes to gautam holds his collar...

Anita : how dare you... Tmhare himat kesay hui .. mujhe dhoka denay ki.... Kesay soch lia tm n k tm mere sath khilwar karo gaye... Mera r mere piyar ka mazak banao gaye... Mera piyar koi mazak nahi hai... Toot k mohubat ki hai mn n tum s ... Lakin tm ... Tm shayad mere is piyar k kabil nahi thay... Kesay socha tm n k tm mujhe beech mandap mn choro gaye...

R mn chup chap tamasha dekhon ge... Yeh shadi to ho k rahe ge .. tmhn mujh s shadi karni parege gautam .... Warna mn ... Warna mn ....

Gombie yell at her ..

Gombie : warna kia ? Han kia

Anita took out revolver and pulls dhara and put the pistol on her head...

Anita : warna is dhara ko apni jan s hath dhona parega.... Buht piyar karta hai na tu gombie is dhara s ab dekh kesay mn ise hamre beech mn s bal ki trha nikla phenkti hn ...

R tu hardik... Bara smart bn raha tha na shadi k papers p mujhe s sign le liye na kidnap kar k ... Apni behn ko protect karnay k liye ... Ab tu dekh kese teri ek ghalti ki waja s teri behn ko apni jan s hath dhona pare ga... Is bhai behn ko jodie p kesay mn grahan lagati hn... Mujhe dhoka dia tm sb n mil k ab anjam bhoktanay k liye tm sb tyar ho jao...

And anita start laughing evilly...

Edited by aimmyangle - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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It was beautiful aimmy♥️♥️

this part was a treat to read have a lot of different layers🥰🥰

Update soon........

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