MUSICAL YEARNING- 2 (part 2 page 5) - Page 3

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Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

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I had loved the first one♥️....so iam sooooo excited to read this....i hope it wudnt be a tragic one🥲

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So guys after giving you a hint of "MUSICAL YEARNING-2" I have not appeared. So after completing my previous works i am here to give update to this.

Hope you like this guys..........

The story is about,

Raavi Shah:- who is a normal girl lives in somnath with his father.

Aman Shah:- father of raavi

Shiva Pandya:- Rich son of politician suman and darshan pandya. Is running business of his own. Lives in somnaath.

Suman pandya and darshan pandya are politician and parents of shiva pandya.

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Numb.........numb is what she was.........she sat still at her place looking continuously beloved face of his father, who was lying in front of her lifeless his body turning blue due to lack of blood supply and lack of oxygen.......... As her father has gave up on life hours before and had choose suicide. His neck was pricked with the rope he had tied to his gut. Her hand automatically reached the marks of his neck and she winced feeling the roughness and finally she held his hand and said,

"Papa........ "

The words left her mouth people around look at her as from last an hour she haven't said anything and now what see spoke was woth so much love that everyone's eyes teared up but unfortunately her tears didn't escape. She can't digest this feeling. She hold his father's hand and looked at him expectantly and said,

"Papa........Jana jaroori hai papa"

Himmatein Ada Karo Wo Madadgaar Maula

Ali Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula Wo Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula

Ab Hi Hakumatein Parwardigar Maula

Ali Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula

And mumbling this she kept her head on his chest and a lone tear escaped her eye. Which was absorbed by the kurta his father wore.

People around came and said,

"Beta antim vidhi karni hai...... "

O Shaahi Marda Aashir Azda Ja Fida Tumpe Maula

Ali Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula O Maula

She looks at her father and whispers in his father's ear,

" I love you......... Abhi khatam nahi huya haan........ Aaungi apse milne uss duniya mein mera intezaar karna....... Papa.........."

4 men gave chaar kandha to the body and raavi replaced one person and stood giving her shoulder to jis father. With grief in her eyes but no trace of tears.

Himmatein Ada Karo Wo Madadgaar Maula

Ali Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula Wo Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula

Ab Hi Hakumatein Parwardigar Maula

She did gave agni to his corpse did all the last rites.

Ali Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula

O Shaahi Marda Aashir Azda Ja Fida Tumpe Maula

Ali Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula Wo Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula O Maula

She stood looking towards the fire. The flames were going high in the sky. So was her grief she says in almost a whisper which was inaudible,

"You lost the game dad.. . .. . .. Kal apne kaha tha you will fight back.. . .. You beteayed me............"

Ya Ali

Jazbaat Kya Hai Maula Hallat Kya Hai Maula

Ke Shaatir Iske Saare Waar Hai

Ooo Har Saansein Khwaish Sile

Saazish Hai Kuch Hai Gile

Ye Mushilaatein Be-Shumaar

Fire cooled and she came near the ashes of her father and took a fistful look at them and said,

"Himmat haar gaye dad aap........ Aap ne toh kaha tha ki saari duniya ko jawab den tha ki kon hai app..... Aur aise jawab diya apne...... "

O Shaahi Marda Aashir Azda Ja Fida Tumpe Maula

Ali Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula Wo Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula...

She stands up and moves towards her house to seek some presence of her father. Her mind had millions of emotions which were breaking her. The conversation she had with her dad one night before all this. The promise he made what he said what he meant was clear now.

Himmatein Ada Karo Wo Madadgaar Maula

Ali Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula Wo Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula

Ab Hi Hakumatein Parwardigar Maula

Ali Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula Maula Ali Maula Ali Maula

She reached her doorstep and saw people. Soon the people's whispers became audible,

One said,

"Sharabi tha iska baap jinda kahan rehta....... Sara din pada rehta tha yahan vahan......... "

Other said,

"Karza lekar daru peeta tha....... Mujhse 50k da udhaar hai khud toh marr gaya fanda laga kar........ Par paise toh chahiye na....... "

Another One said,

"Yeh bhi nahi pata ki yeh ladki ki maa kon thi.......... Jaisa baap vaisa acharan hoga.... Dekha nahi ikk aasun nahi nikla iski aakhon se baap ke marne par....... "

Someone said,

"Abb hamare karz kon chukayega....."

Raavi listendd to the mumblings and looked at the sky having a havoc of feeling in her eyes here she has lost her only family and people can't stop gossiping about her. Seriously. Inhumane world.

Comes a voice from behind and said,

"Baatein karni band karo....... Jo faisla hoga abhi hoga...... "

One person says,

"Acha huya amma g app aa gayi........ Abb app hi faisla karwaiye........ Hamara toh kitna paisa doob gaya apko toh pata hi hai kaisa tha iska baap....... "

The lady was none other than suman she was respected amongst all in the whole town. She says,

"Faisla karwane hi aayi hoon.........ae ladki idhar aa........."

Raavi turned around and looked at suman and suman says,

"Afsoos huya sab ke bare mein sun kar..... Bhut bura huya tere saath............... Dukh hai iss baat ka......... Par abb tere baap ne bhut kuch kiya hai.......... Bhut paisa udhar tha uska bhi husab karna hai........ "

Raavi nods. Suman calls the munim and says,

"Lagao hisab....... "

People started putting allegations and debts but one pair of eyes were lost seeing the raaci ovserving her and after 15 minutes they made a balance sheet and declared,

" 15 lakh....... "

Suman says,

"Abb yeh hisab toh karna padega kholo kitne paise hain account mein.... . .. Ladki sare account ki details de de.. . .. . "

All the accounts, FD, insurance were seen and sumed up the total came and munim said,

"8 lakh banta hain.. . .. . . Agar ghar ko mila de toh 15 lakh pura......."

Suman says,

"Karlo sab overtake aur khatam karo kissa....... "

Raavi looked at the house no words left her mouth but the pair of eyes observing her listened the unsaid and said,

"Maa...... Hum ghar nahi le sakte...... Vo akeli hain kahan jayegi..... Kya karegi...... "

Suman looks at his son Shiva pandya who has came with her and suman was about to retort but shiva squeezed ger hand and requested her with his eyes. Suman agreees and said,

"Theek hain ghar nahi laenge par jo bacha huya 8 lakh hai use bharna toh padega.... . . Chaar mahine ka waqt hai tere paas 8 lakh pure kar dena nahi toh ghar hamara.. . .. . . "

Raavi joins her hands and everyone leaves and raavi moves inside unknown to her Shiva never left her sight no it was not sympathy but he was drinking her sight. He can't take his eyes off her she was numb but he wanted to be reason of happiness . She looked so empty but he wanted to fill vacant sapce of her life.. . .. . This was something else... .. . He kept on seeing until she disappeared from his sight.

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I don't know what i wrote guys.... . . Need your honest review please tell me should i continue it or not.

Looking forward for your response.

Yours

ODETTE_DELUSION

Song link....

https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=SRC4xPzsOWY&feature=share

This is an emotional one.

Raavi lost her everything and the song depicts her pain and vulnerability so aptly.

The sad reality is again make it your story, people won't let you even grieve in peace let alone living.

Looks like Suman is going to be negative one here or grey...

Shiva I won't comment on him now let's see if he is going to be any help to her.

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

This is an emotional one.

Raavi lost her everything and the song depicts her pain and vulnerability so aptly.

The sad reality is again make it your story, people won't let you even grieve in peace let alone living.

Looks like Suman is going to be negative one here or grey...

Shiva I won't comment on him now let's see if he is going to be any help to her.

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

This is an emotional one.

Raavi lost her everything and the song depicts her pain and vulnerability so aptly.

The sad reality is again make it your story, people won't let you even grieve in peace let alone living.

Looks like Suman is going to be negative one here or grey...

Shiva I won't comment on him now let's see if he is going to be any help to her.

https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=SRC4xPzsOWY&feature=shareshare

Song link.....

Amazingly written plot looks interesting 😍😍😍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Originally posted by: aimmyangle

Amazingly written plot looks interesting 😍😍😍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

PART-ll

Raavi entered her house. She looked around and the place was eating her up. Her tears which haven't flowed since the morning made their way out.

Le aayi hai beete hue
Lamhon ko phir haan ye zindagi
Yun beraham si ho gayi
Lene chali jaan ye zindagi
Khuda kyun rooth gaya mujhse
Nahi tha bair mera tujhse
Kyun tune chheen liya mujhse
Mera jahaan...

She goes near the living area where she had exchanged last words with her father and here only his father was laying lifeless.

Aye Khuda
Tu bata

She sat down touching the floor and mirage of her father lying down appeared in front of her she caressed his head and it disappeared she kept her forehed on the floor and squealed and cried badly. A bottle rolled towards her she looked at it and it was an alchohal bottle her eyes became red and she looked at bottle and said,

"Apne vada kiya tha dad ki app nahi peenge apne promise kiya tha but you cheated me.......... You cheated on me dad............ "

Le aayi hai beete hue
Lamhon ko phir haan ye zindagi
Yun beraham si ho gayi
Lene chali jaan ye zindagi

She got up from the floor and sat on the couch where she was sitting yesternight and her was sitting in front of her on the same couch and her eyes fell on his father's spectacles and the photo of both of them together. She took the photo frame and looked at it deeply just noticing each and every detail of the photo and her hand felt something bulging on th photo she inspected and got a letter by his father and sadly last letter.

Khuda kyun rooth gaya mujhse
Nahi tha bair mera tujhse
Kyun tune chheen liya mujhse
Mera jahaan...

Aye Khuda (Khuda...)
Tu bata (bata...)

She opens the page and start reading it

"Raavi...... Jab tak tujhe yeh milega main shayad bhut dur jaa chuka hounga......... Aur yeh jo maine kadam uthaya hai na beta yehi mera aanth hai......... Tune bhut koshish kii mujhe ikk insaan banane ki par kya karu nahi ban paya........ Aur toh aur main ikk acha baap bhi nahi ban paya.......... Teri maa ko logon ke taano ne jeene nahi diya aur use maar diya ....... Uske jane ke baad daru peene laga tha aur bhul gaya kii ikk 6 saal ki bachi hai meri........... Pata nahi kal tujhse baat karke pata chala ki teri maa ne mujhe ikk nayi raah dikhayi thi sabse ladkar ikk nayi duniya basayi thi aur uske jaate hi andhera aa gaya tha firse........... par beta tu.... Tu apne baap jaisi nahi banegi tu apni maa ki tarah sab logon se ladegi........... Agge badhegi....... Janta hoon tujhe virasaat mein sirf ikk sharabi ki beti ka khitaab dekar jaa raha hoon par mujhe pata hai tu inn sabse agge niklegi................Aur maaf kar dena mujhe please......apna dhyaan rakhna
I love you beta.......... "

She read the letter and brought it near her chest and cried even more her breathe became uneven.

Bejaan si, hai zindagi
Har saans hai ghamzada

Yeh kya kiya Khuda... haaye!
Yeh kyun kiya Khuda...
Bata mere Khuda...
Thi kya meri khata...

She kept the letter in the frame itself again safely and says,

"Apne theek nahi kiya dad......... Apne kaha tha ki app sabko kuch peeche chod doge aur apne toh mujhe hi chod diya.......... "

Ummeed hai tooti hui
Tanhaiyon ka daur hai
Hai khwaishein bikhri hui
Khamoshiyon ka shor hai
Bula le apne paas mujhe
Naa aaye jeena raas mujhe
Kyun tune chhen liya mujhse
Mera jahaan.

She rested her head on the couch head rest and closed her eyes and last night conversation played

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FLASHBACK START

Raavi brought her drunk dad home in an intoxicated state and made him sit on the sofa. She brought a glass of water and through it on his face and he stood up in a jolt and raavi angrily says,

"Dad... . .. . Apne ajj bhi pee rakhi hai.. . .. . . Ajj mera birthday hai yaad bji hai apko.. . .. . "

Her father scratches his hair and says,

"Tera janmdin hai ajj.. . .. . . Mere bache.. . .. . Happy..."

Raavi interrupts and says,

"Rehn dijiye aapko hosh takk nahi hai kisi cheez ka........ Vo toh Rahim chacha ne bataya ki app peekar kaha pade huye the nahin toh main kahan se dhunti apko....... Andaza bhi hai.......... "

His dad says guilty,

"Maaf karde beta...... "

"Maaf kardu maaf kardu......... Bachpan se lekar ajj tak apne kya kiya hai mere liye jo main apko maaf karu.............. 6 saal ki thi jab maa ki death huyi tab se lekar ajj tak apko aise dekhti aayi hoon nashe mein dhuth.......... Kabhi yahan kabhi vahan............ Kabhi ikk baar pucha apne ki main school kaise jaati thi......... Vo sab chodo mere school ka naam hi bata do.......... Yaad hain apko kuch......... "

He looks down and raavi says,

"Kaise yaad ho ga........ Pata bhi hai mere school ki fees rahim chacha bharte the.............Main ajj tak college nahi gayi kio kii mujhe 12th ke baad ghar kharch chalana tha............ Rahim chacha ke paise wapas karne the.................Ikk baar bhi pucha apne.......... Nahi........apko bass yeh sharab peeni hai....... "

His father had tears in his eyes and he says,

"Teri maa ke jaane ke baad ikk yehi sahara dikha mujhe samjh nahi aaya kab itna kho gaya tu tujhe uski akhri nishani ko hi bhul gaya......... "

Raavi also had tears and she says,

"Papavapp baithiye please....... Main nahi bolna chati apko yeh sab gusse mein bol diya....... "

He says,

"Nahi beta galti meri hai.......... Tujhe maine kabhi bataya nahi teri maa ke bare mein....... Sunegi....... "

Raavi nods her head positively and his dad says,

"Aa baith idhar.......... "

Raavi sit with him on the couch and he says,

"Main 24 saal ka tha jab pehli baar teri maa ko dekha tha............ Main khud ikk anath tha galiyon mein palla bada tha kuch nahi aata tha bass ikk factory mein lohar ka kaam karta tha.......
Ikk din main kaam karte huye khud ko chot pauncha baitha toh malik ne chutti de di toh main vaise hi khoon nikalte huye nikal gaya vahan jab park mein pauncha toh ikk jagah baith gaya khoon saaf karne laga par ho nahi raha tha aur uss din maine pehli baar kisi ko meri parwaah karte dekha......... Vo tumhari maa thi vo aayi aur mera haath dekhne lagi fir ussne uss haath par patti kii uss din hum dono ne kuch nahi bola par pata nahi kioo aisa laga jaise vo hut kuch kehna chahti ho...........
Fir main roz uss samay vahan jata aur usse ikk nazar bhar ke dekhta............. Kuch dino mein hamari batein hone lagi......uske saath regta toh lagta kii iss kaale andhere mein jaise koii roshni lae aaya ho vo mujhe hamesha kehti ki main khud ko andhero mein kaid karke rakhta hoon aur vo yeh kaid se mujhe chudana chahti thi............. Vo bhi meri tarah ikk basti mein rehti thi akeli.................. Hamare din ka ahem hissa tha ikk diste se milna sab jagah kaam karke milte ikk disre ko dheere dheere milne ka samay badhta gaya main kabhi kabhi raat ko use uske kamre se bhaga kar lae jata aur dono walk par nikal jate ikk dusre ke pyaar mein doob gaye the.............. Tujhe pata hai raavi maine 6 mahine baad bhi use apne dil ki baat nahi batayi thi par usne ikk din mujhse bola....... Dekho mujhe nahi pata par hamare bachi ke naam main hi rakhungi.... Maine uski taraf hairaani se dekha toh usne mujhe kaha....... Kya tum toh kuch bologe nahi par mujhe ikk chotta sa parivaar basana hai tumhare saath.......... Uss din maine usse izhaar kiya aur tab usne kaha ki agar beti huyi toh Raavi naam rakhengi aur agar beta hua toh ravi......... Tera naam toh 2 saal pehle hi soch liya tha humne...... "

Both chuckle and he says,

"Par hume nahi pata tha kii sab kuch itn aasan nahi hota........ Ikk din uss basti mein kuch log aaye aur basti ke malik ne meri jiya ko bech diya........ Main usse milne gaya toh vo nahi aayi uske ghar mein dekha tala tha tab mujhe logon ne bataye kii vo log usse le gaye.......... Mujhe bechani hone lagi main paunch gaya shehar ke sabse badnaam mohalle mein jahan vo log meri jiya ko lae gaye the............... Vahan ikk grahak bankar gaya aur jiya ko dhundne laga aur jab vo mili uski halat mujhe ajj tak bhin nahi bhulti unn janwaro ne usse noch kahaya tha......... Ikk adhmari laash ki tarah baithi thi.......... Main uske paas gaya toh usne mujhe dekha uske chehre par jaise jindagi vapas aa gayi ho................. Toh main use vahna se bhaga laya hum bhut dur le aya.......... Ikk duniya banayi jahan main aur jiya bhut khush the par hum yeh bhul gaya ki jiya ki kalai par unn logon ne uss mohalle ka naam likha tha jo ki bhut jald yahan ke logon ne dekh liya aur taane dene shuru kar diya......... Jiya bhut strong thi sabse lad jaati thi......... Daat kar khadi rehti thi........ Aise hi jindagi chalti rahi aur tu hamari jindagi mein aayi......... Sab kuch bhut acha chal raha tha log taane dete par hum gaur na karte aur phir ikk din vo log vapas aaye aur unhone jiya ko sabke saamne usko maar diya main jab aaya tab tak vo log chale chuke the. ......... Tujhe rahim bhai ne chupa diya tha nahi toh vo tujhe bhi maar dete............ Tab ka din tha aur ajj ka din main phir se andheron mein chala gaya.......... Bhul gaya tujhe aur sab kuch kharab kar diya........ "

Raavi cries and says,

"Dad ajj se apko maa ke liye jina hai vo bhut khush hongi apko dubara jinsagi jeete huye dekhkar...... "

He nods and she says,

"Pehle app ikk promise kare ki aap sharab nahi peeyenge....... "

He replies seeiously,

"Main sab kuch chod dunga beta............. Abb sukoon chahta hoon.......... Tu bass mujhe samjhna haan........sabka samna karunga.............."

Raavi nods happily and hugs him and lesser did she know it is last time they are meeting.

FLASH BACK ENDS
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Raavi curls up into fortal position as now his father's words made sense to her.

Aye Khuda (Khuda...)
Tu bata (bata...)

She looks at photo of a mother with garland and places her dad's photo with it and puts they garland.

Yeh kya kiya Khuda... haaye!
Yeh kyun kiya Khuda...
Bata mere Khuda...
Thi kya meri khata...

She than cries on her fate and ger losss till she sleeps.

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Hey guys...... It was indeed a long chapter booe you all like it do tell your views and help me to improve and do tell your suggestion too.

YOURS
ODETTE_DELUSION

Song link

https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=pDuzlsKOsT4&feature=share