Holi Awakening - An Arylie OS 16+ - Page 3

Aiyoo...

Now whatever Atif has up his sleve is gonna fall short 🤌

Not fair Eeeee... 😸

Made. My. Day

Brilliant piece of writing. You are so talented man! Also why are the writers not taking you on board their team?!?! Literally you can keep suspense and give what the fans want.

They could do with your help. Anything they show now will not match up!

Thank u. I felt all kinda of flutters in my tummy reading this!

OMG I could kiss you for this. This one shot was perfect from the first world till the last. It was just Perfect. The scenario, the set up, the conversation, the thought process, the conundrum and then the kiss. It flowed so beautifully and organically that I could imagine it all playing in front of me like a psychedelic film. The way you used the plot and spoilers to churn out something so perfect is beyond me. God I can't tell you just how much I loved this one. That kiss burned through me. I could fell the intensity of that moment.

Oh ma goooo!! This was so so so goooood!!! I’m in love with your writing! Have been reading Dawn too! This was such a lovely Holi gift! Thank you so much for writing it!!💙💙💙

Happy Holi😘. Ahaaaa kiss was so intense. Lagtha hai shirtless aru se Aap sab ko ache ache ideas aare everybody is going crazy and thinking stuff like this. U guys are Amazing😘😘😘.

Amazing......beautifully written.... Do tag me in your stories..... Love it....... 😊❤️

these absolute dinguses, this was lovely. im glad at least you and other writers are giving us what the show won't, haha.

arpita continues to be the MVP everywhere she goes

yaar kitna fantasies arylie ka holi ke liye but seriously such a heartwarmin os thnk you , and tht line....hw could she fight someone who coloured her as his.. absolutely nailed it cant wait for moreee pls do tag me for ur future storied

Hot hot. Bhagwan ke liye koi in dono ko ek kamre me band kardo. They will iron out their issues, fight with each other, break apart every furniture in the room and end up happy. Or give each other a happy 😊. our holi hopes are high but mot sure what the outcome will be.

You sent me to sleep and WROTE A WHOLE ASS STORY AND DIDNT TELL ME 😱😱😱😱😱

Katti 😑

But like 🤯😭 my hot holi.