ShiVi FF - Redemption - Chapter 32 (updated) - Page 115 (9-May-22) - Page 42

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hello,

I wanted to say that this FF is one of the best FF I ever read. It's all the we wanted but never got. The kind of track we were expecting. Thank you for writing this! I thought to comment after each chapter but missed the timing.

I decided to comment after you complete the story but couldn't stop myself. A really really nice story. The way you are developing Shiva and Raavi individually plus their equation is too good.

It is really like a soothing balm for us coz the way the track is shown honestly is bullshit.

Thank you for this❣️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

I am just getting excited eith each update what is next😍😍

Do update soon........


Thank you ❤️
Will do it by tomorrow!
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Kfof

Beautiful update 😍❤❤


Thank you smiley27
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Kristmas

you said this wasnt the best? whatttt.

I loved itt. ❤️
Shiva wasnt expecting a sorry, he actually felt the remorse and then opening upto Krish, I love that you kept this Shiva strong, the one who gets his mistakes.❤️

And Raavi❣️ yes she was right in her way, but she was also a little mean since he’s been really trying and she did say sorry ❤️

their convo and gundi Raavi manaoing Shiva was

awwh hopefully one day she calls him to her fests with full haq, and if she doesnt, he makes her invite him with full haq❤️❤️

cant waittt ❤️❤️


Thank you smiley27
@Bold2 Yeah me too. Hopeful about that. That's the progress I am looking for 😊

@Bold1 I don't know I guess I wasn't fully satisfied with the way this scene turned out in my writing. I thought it wasn't the best of flows amongst the chapters personally.
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Amu2908

Thank you for tagging always but I am not able to comment regularly❤️

Why did you say that this is not a best update !

In each chapter you are adding some new elements to their behaviour, giving us the info about their changing feelings and how each other's words and actions are affecting them👏

It is very organic in nature and keep up this pace..🤗

Their convo as usual changed some things in their mind which is essential and lacking in the show..👍🏼

Excited for the next update


Thank you smiley27
It's not a problem if you aren't able to comment regular. I appreciate the feedback 🤗

@Bold I don't know I guess I wasn't fully satisfied with the way this scene turned out in my writing. I thought it wasn't the best of flows amongst the chapters personally.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey Nolee!! Read the latest chapter on WP and it's actually good, things are getting unfolded, Raavi got to know that Shiva cares so much about her♥️ I'm happy.. this Shiva feels so much pleasing to my heart😘

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mpks1

What a great character Raavi is! She thought she made a mistake and did not hesitate to apologize and didn’t hesitate to resolve it with Shiva. And Shiva himself felt bad for shouting at her and finally realized how he has broken this girl and that has led to the outpouring of her grievances. I am glad to see the gradual change in him-he is working on his anger, now hearing out Raavi and next thing he should do is to understand and trust her for their relationship to work again.

A great update! ❤️Heartwarming to read their conversation and the direction they are taking for their relationship.

Though Raavi did not invite him for the College Fest, I bet Shiva has plans to go😆

Eagerly looking forward to the next update😃


Thank you Prema! ❤️
As much as I wanted Raavi probably not to apologize, I still made her because like you said she isn't someone who holds back in admitting she was wrong or apologizing when she felt like she should. I think the Raavi we've seen growing on the show is the epitome of forgiveness and kindness!

@Bold I suppose you could say that 😆
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Amy_march_02

I can't see him like this 😭😔


Me too! It was really tough to write it also! But it'll get better as the story progresses further!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Okay, First of all, what do you mean it's not the best?😲 I'm offended that you think this was not the best😆 This was an amazing update!! They both apologised face to face. What more can I ask? ShiVi is growing so beautifully.❤️ I can't wait for the next update.😆 Hopefully, the college fest bring them close😳



I don't know I guess I wasn't fully satisfied with the way this scene turned out in my writing. I thought it wasn't the best of flows amongst the chapters personally. Maybe I am overthinking 😆

But thank youu Pooh ❤️ and yes, the fest will definitely bring them closer!
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Ocean_breeze

There is nothing in this update.. that is not best Namratha❤️ It was perfectly awesooomeee.

Raavii... She has my whole heart... What a well written character... She realised her mistake and came to shiva the very next day for apologising❤️

Shiva... Oh he is growing on me nowadays... How perfectly you are going with his redemption track... Him realising his mistakes af all times and apologising to raavi .... So beautiful it was to see shiva wishing for raavi's happiness..even it means staying away from her❤️❤️

Krish is a sweetheart here.. 😆

P. S. -Its been so many days.. No cliffhanger🤣



Thank you so much Neha ❤️🤗
I am glad you liked it 😳
I have not been able to come up with cliffhangers lately, maybe in the upcoming chapters I will try to sneak some! 😆 We'll see!

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