ShiVi FF - Redemption - Chapter 32 (updated) - Page 115 (9-May-22) - Page 33

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Posted: 3 years ago

This can be done only by our own shiva pandya... Angry... Nadaa.. We trying to control anger nowadays.... Yet we scare people away🤣

How cute this one was Namratha... Him coming to see raavi along with bahana called dhokla😆

The whole conversation was sweet veeryyy sweeet😊

Shiva cutely cornering her by his talks😆

Kitna pyaara tha aj shiva❤️

Its good to see shiva actually redeeming himself and evolving as a better version of himself. ❤️

Chaiii convo was sweet tooo...

Would be waiting for nxt part🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Yaar, Dil lelo meri🤗❤️ I think I don't need to say it again that this is a wonderful update cuz it's literally screaming wonderful. 😆 You have given me almost everything I want from the show Shiva is controlling himself and is actually making a huge effort to make Raavi comfortable. This was the Shiva I wanted to see in the show. You have done an excellent job in capturing the ShiVi essence. I feel connected to this ShiVi.😆

Waiting for the next update👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

I like this possesive and a mixture of softie shiva😅

And you are writing it beautifully❣️❣️


Thank youu smiley27
Me too! 😆
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Pritha_31

Mujhe to softie lattu Shiva pasand h jo Raavi ko ekdm pyar se dekhte hi rhta h par koi or dekhe to protective ho jata h😁🤪


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Haha yes! 😆
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Lovely update👏, I love ❤️ both your versions of Shiva “the-angry-and-protective-of-Raavi" Shiva and the softie-stuttering Shiva, it’s hard to choose….it’s much better than the Shiva on the show now a days. Can’t wait for your next update 🥰💕


Thank youu smiley27
Yeah it's tough choice, coz we all want different shades of Shiva 😆
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: VNuts

So we got Nervous Shiva, Sassy Shiva, and Protective Shiva. ☺️

The entire sequence was so cute!! From Shiva trying to stay put, to Raavi being nervous about Shiva watching her rehearse, and then getting hurt, and Shiva's ghussel-wala roop coming out, and then his care.

Only, bechaara Sameer dar gaya thoda... 🤣

And Shiva's making masala chai for Raavi! Aww! ❤️

Looking forward to the next one!! ❤️


P.s. This update has no cliffhanger. I like that but it's also weird at the same time. 😆


Haha! Thank youu, Vandana smiley27

I decided I will add cliffhangers, when I feel like I know what's gonna happen in the next chapter, because these days I've been writing one chap at a time, as I have no time. Sometimes I write three chaps at the stretch, so I know what's coming to add cliffhangers accordingly 😆

Shiva's gussa is my favorite, but only when he gets angry for the right things, not like the current one in the show, that's just ridiculous 🤔



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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Amu2908

I have been reading this from the beginning but never commented...I must say if they have shown something like this,it would have gained viewer's interest to this track very much🤔

Within your busy schedule you are being consistent and giving us a fresh take on shivi,with Shiva being the active one to mend their problems ...we have always craved to watch something like this🤗❤️

We are never gonna get something like this in the show which include meaningful convo and turns but,you are successful in giving us the Shiva who is angry-possessive at the same time softie-caring for Raavi...I am really loving this take on Shivi😉👍🏼

Keep writing without taking much stress on being consistent,because the tasks we involve in real-life are much more important..we would wait for the updates but take care of yourself first...lots of love to you❤️


Heyy! Thank you so much for reaching out ❤️🤗
Means a lot!

I had been mad seeing them take Shiva and Raavi's characters and ruining it on the show, which is why I started writing it in the first place. I loved the Shiva pre-divorce, I thought he had so much potential as a character to grow and now I am trying to slowly achieve that here.

I had never thought I will come through this far, writing this story, so! It's been interesting trying to juggle the writing and rest of the things. I will get a better hang of it eventually 😆
For now, thanks for being patient!

Love to you too! ❤️
Take care!
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mpks1

Namratha, what an awesome update!

Though Shiva got angry after Raavi fell and hurt herself, he tried to control, yet managed to scare Sameer that he had to leave😆

Shiva Pandya is truly redeeming in this story, probably the only story where we will get to see this side of Shiva.

So he learnt to make masala chai now and going to make for Raavi as well

Can't wait to read the next part❤️


Thank you Prema ❤️
@Bold1 Trying my best!
@Bold2 Domestic ShiVi is something I always wanted to explore. I feel like Shiva would be someone who'd do that for the girl he loves
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Posted: 3 years ago

Nervous, Stubborn, Softy, Angry, Possessive. We got all shades of Shiva in this update.

and a suspicious, confused yet itta sa khush Raavi ❤️❤️

cute update ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: lostin_dreams

Fabulous update💫💖

Well between Shiva's angry-and-protective-of Raavi and the softie-stuttering avatar, I can't choose any because both are favs ❤️..... continue writing the way you are because this is really beautiful


Ps. I can't write anymore coz I need to study hard for exams so will do that later on :D


Thank youu ❤️
All the best for your exams! Do well 🤗

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